2021年1月23日发(作者：appreciated)
一、品读这篇文章，构思写作思路。（可以动手写个草稿，对比一下所给范文）

阅 读下面短文
,
根据所给情节进行续写
,
使之构成一个完整的故事。





















高二英语读后续写（
5.13
）




I was touched through experiences, memories, books, stories, animals, angels, and most of all
other people. People have moved me and molded
（对
……
影响重大）
me with moments of love
and examples of kindness.




One time on the day before Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill
（工
厂）
worker, I found myself with very little money and very little time to buy my small children a
few simple toys. I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would
like them. I hated not having enough to give them more. I hated being poor. And I hated feeling
bad at Christmas rather than happy.




I pulled into a store parking lot and counted my mon
ey again. It wasn’t much but maybe I
could get something small with it. As I was getting out of the car I noticed the Salvation Army
（救
世军）
bell ringer
at the entrance. I felt bad again because I didn’t feel I could spare anything to
give him. I started walking towards the entrance when two cars pulled into empty parking spots in
front
of
me.
The
first
was
a
shiny,
new
Cadillac
and
I
felt
a
twinge
of
jealousy
when
I
saw
it.
“How nice,” I thought, “Would it be to have enough money to buy a car like that.” The s
econd car,
though, was an ancient sedan
（轿车）
more beat-up and rusty than the one I was driving.
A man hopped
（冲）
out of the Cadillac and hurried into the store right past the bell ringer
without a second glance. Out of the old sedan came a young mother with three small children in
tow
（紧随着）
. Her clothes looked as worn out as her car, yet she stopped in front of the bell ringer,
smiled, opened her purse, and dropped a bill in his red kettle
（钱罐）
.
注意
:
1.
所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右
;
2.
应使用
5
个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语
;
3.
续写部分分为两段
,
每段的开头语已为你写好
;
4.
续写完成后
,
请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。


Paragraph 1:

I stood there for a minute in astonishment.
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Paragraph 2:
In that second a warmth touched me, my jealousy and hatred
（憎恨）
left me, and all the love
and joy that are Christmas filled me.
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文本解读：

本文为夹叙夹议文。
作者是一位收入很低的母亲，
当圣 诞节来临时，
她很为孩子们的礼
物犯愁。在商店外面时，她看到两辆对比鲜明的轿车，一辆是凯 迪拉克豪车
(Cadillac)
，另一
辆是破旧的轿车。
可是让她惊讶的是 ，
豪车车主对救世军撞钟人的募捐活动熟视无睹，
倒是
那位旧车车主慷慨解囊。

续写提示：

由续写第一段出现的关键词
in astonishmen t
可知，续写此段时需注意作者的内心变化，
下文应试着向令作者感到惊讶的方面写。
在作者的描述中，
从羡慕豪车的主人到最后看到他