登高中英语 高考读后续写 ：一次难忘的远足

2021年1月24日发(作者：department什么意思)

读后续写：一次难忘的远足

Mr. Taylor checked again: water, food, bandage, medicines, a compass, and a map wrapped in plastic… Bingo!
He put all that he prepared for the coming hiking into his backpack.

Mr. Taylor was fond of hiking, this time in particular, for it was the first time for him to hike with his two sons,
Harry and Joel. Joel liked reading books about explorers and Harry joined the hiking club in his school this term.
will be an unforgettable experience, definitely.” he whispered to himself, unconsciously a smile spreading over his
face.




Harry
and
Joel,
however,
argued
for
the
first
three
miles
of
their
hiking
trip.
Harry
accused
Joel
of
wearing
smelly old shoes. Joel blamed Harry for using all of the bug spray(
喷雾防虫剂
). Harry told Joel he smelled terrible
，
Joel called Harry a coward(
懦夫
).




“Will the two of you just quiet down and enjoy our hike together?
beautiful scenery!”

It was true. Neither Joel nor Harry had taken notice of the bear their father had spied at the start of their trip.
They hadn't looked up at the eagle he pointed out overhead. Worst of all, they hadn't paid any attention to the turns
and twists along the way while they continued their argument.




“Joel threw a stick at me!




“That’s not true!




Mr. Taylor could no longer contain his anger.
to face them, his left foot caught on a root. He slipped backward and down muddy bank, falling into the river that
ran alongside the path.




Harry and Joel raced to their father's assistance. They helped him up out of the water, and then dragged his wet
backpack up onto land.

Fortunately, their wet
-
through father found himself just slightly injured.

Paragraph 1:

But his glasses came off when he fell in the water. ________________________________________

Paragraph 2: “Just calm down.” Mr. Taylor shouted,
way.”________________________________ __________________________________________________ ______


写作指导：
paragraph 1: his glasses came off
----
Mr. Taylor: couldn’t see clearly
----
no one guided the way.


根据第二段句首：
calm down
---
Joel & Harry: couldn’t calm down
---
panicked?


Argued again?

Fortunately, their wet
-
through father found himself just slightly injured. But his glasses came off when he fell in the
water.
---
dried the clothes; dealt with the injury; realized no one guided the way; panicked; blamed/argued again.

Realized no one guided the way:

thoug ht/reflected/imagined/realized/wondered…

whispered /murmured/said to himself…

There was a voice inside that…






心底的声音

She heard a whispering voice from her heart…

An idea hit /struck/occurred to him that…





突然想到


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