英文朋友作文写不好给建议

2021年1月26日发(作者：女高跟鞋)
英文朋友作文写不好给建议
【篇一：英语作文
1
：建议信】




一、建议信
letter of advice


建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。建议信不同
于投诉信，所以写 信人一定要注意礼貌当先。建议信一般包括以下
内容：首先说明写信的目的，其次，在肯定优点的基础上 提出自己
的建议或看法（否则别人以为你在投诉，而不是在提建议），最后
表达希望


采纳建议。


写作
“
三步走
”
：


自我介绍、说明目 的
—
委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告
—
礼貌地总结或期盼回


复


二、书面表达之建议信


三、典范文背诵


假设你是小明的好朋友李华，小明参加了一个英语演讲比 赛，他对
比赛非常担心，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。

[
写作内容
]

1.
说明回信的意图；
2.
向小明提出建议；
3.
预祝小明比赛成功。


参考词汇：


充分准备：
well prepared
充分准备

2. a brief and

concise language
简


洁精练的语言

3.

leave/make a

deep

impression on
给某人留下深刻的印象

dear xiaoming
，

...

[
参考范文
]

dear xiaoming,


i’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on
how to prepare the english speech contest. here are a few
suggestions.


first of all, it’s important to get well prepared before the
speech contest by practicing before a mirror. besides, you had
better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that
you can leave a deep impression on the judges. when you are
giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you
forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your
speech, because no onewill notice it. wish you success in the
speech!

yours
，

li hua


四、课后练习


为了帮助中学生健康成长，某 中学英文报开辟了
“heart
-to-
heart”
专
栏。假设你 是该栏目的编辑
jamie
，收到一封署名为
worried
的求助
信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常
的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给 该同学写一封回信。


内容要点如下：

1
．表示理解并给予安慰；

2
．提出建议并说明理由。


注意：

1
．词数
120
左右；

2
．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3
．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。


参考词汇：
temper n.
脾气，情绪

hi worried.:


i’m sorry to know that you’re having such a ba
d time at the
moment.

yours,

jamie


参考范文：

hi worried,

im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the
moment. the truth is that everyone will have one of those
periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont
have to worry much. the important thing is to learn to control
your temper so that
you may not do or say anything you’ll
regret. here are three useful tips:

first, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. this is a
good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or
yourself. second, go outdoors and play team games with your
friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of
anger. and third, keep optimistic about your future. such a
positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your
spirits.

i hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

【篇二：
2015
英语作文常用句型及建议信的模板】


1.
重点句型


1). it’s adj for sb to do
做
…
对某人来说


2). … so … that …
如此
…
以至于
…


… too … to do
太
…
而不能
…


such … that …
如此
…
以至于
…


3). not…until…
直到
…
才
…
例
: i didn’t go to bed until my
mother came back.

4).the reason why +
句子
is that +
句子
…
的原因是
…


例：
the reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie.

5). that is why +
句子

那是
…
的原因

6). that is because +
句子那是因为
…

7). it is said that +
句子

据说
…
例：
it is reported that +
句子

据
报道
…

8). there is no doubt that +
句子

毫无疑问
…

9). it goes without saying that +
句子

不言而喻，毫无疑问

10). there is no need to do
没必要做
…

11). there is no point in doing
做某事毫无意义

12
）
.as is known to all, +
句子

众所周知

as we all know, +
句子据我们所知

it is generally/ publicly known / considered that…,
众所周知

13)
find it + adj to do…
觉得
/
发现做
…
是
…
的。


例︰
i find it necessary to take down notes while listening.


14) not only…but also
不但
…
而且
.....


例︰
in just three years, she had not only finished all the
lessons, but also received her doctor’s degree.

15)in order to
为了
....
例︰
he worked very hard in order to
realize his dream.19)
就我的看法
……
；我认为
……in my opinion,
as far as i’m concerned

20)
随着人口的增加
…… with the increase/growth of the
population, …


随着科技的进步
…… with the advance of science and
technology, …


例：
with the rapid development of taiwans economy, a lot of
social problems have come to pass.

21). since + s +
过去式
, s +
现在完成式
.


例：
since he went to senior high school, he has worked very
hard.

2.
提建议

better (not) do
最好
(
不
)
做


about / what about doing …
怎么样
?

3.i think you should do
我认为你应该
…

4.i suggest / advice that you should do
我建议你做
…


i were you, i would do…
我要是你的话，我会做
…

’s best to do
最好做
…


not do / why don’t you do…?
为什么不
…

3.
表示喜欢和感兴趣

/ love doing doing

fond of doing
喜欢做
… keen on n/doing
喜欢做
…

to do a rather than do b
宁愿做
a
也不愿做
b

interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing

4.
努力做
…

to do
努力做
… to do
努力做
…


one’s best to do = do one’s best to do
竭尽全力做
…

efforts to do = make every effort to do
尽力做
…

what sb can (do ) to do
尽力做
…

no effort to do
不遗余力的做
…

what / everything sb. can to do
尽某人全力做
…

5.
打算做
… /
计划做
…

/ plan to do
打算做
… going to do
打算做
…

to do
决定做
… ine to do
决定做
…

determined to do
决定做
… up one’s mind to do
下
定决心做
…

6.
表示想
/
希望

to do= would like to do
想做
… to do
希望做
…