高考英语 书面表达值得注意的几个方法

2021年1月26日发(作者：broken)

书面表达值得注意的几个方法


近年来
,
随着 高考英语书面表达的命题标准及答题要求的提高
,
以及题材的多样化
,
不少高考英语考生对书面表达不相适应的情形愈发突出。实际阅卷发现
,
相当多约书
面表达水准较低
,
考生缺乏写作的基本常识和训练。汁对这一现象
,
本文提出 高考英
语书面表达值得注意的几个写作方法
‘

L.
以有形或无形的三段式写作

以有形或无形的二段式写作是指写任何文章
,
都要有开头
,
正文
.
以及结尾。有形则指
文章呈 明显的三段式
,
而无形则指文章呈显一大段
,
但细读则可感到三段。具体并< br>:
文
章开头段则用开门见山的方法
,
比如讲明什么时闭
,谁十了或要干什么
,
目的是什么
;
文章正文段则是写乍的关键部分
,
要用到较多的技巧和手段
;
结尾段可考虑汉抒发内
心活动或感想为特征。 请看例题
:
Dear Bob,
开头
: I'm so glad to learn that you're coming in September. I've found a place for you.
正
文
: It's a small tat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the
bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The
flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus
No. 11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, it's only one stop.]
结尾
:[Do you think you'd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let
me know.]
Yours,
Li Hua
2.
用尽可能多样的句式丰富文章的表现力

高考英语书面表达对具有较强的 语言运用能力文章的评价标准是
,
语法结构或词汇
方面虽有些许错误
,
但应能尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇
,
此点应引起考生的极
大关注。现举实例如 下
:
①
I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the
park on the other side of the street.
句式
:be doing something when…
正在做某事就在这时
……

表达法
:make a right turn
朝右转弯

②
The car didn't stop but drove off at great speed heading west.
表达法
:drive off heading west
高速向西开去

③
On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new building--
-our library.
一该句含一个由
where引导的非限定性的定语从句
,
在此处插人
,
令人感到自然、得
体
,
其中还使用了表达法
`used to be',
准确、地道。该句的后半 部由一个倒装句组成
,
在对主语作进一步说明时
,
使用了破折号
,< br>语言既利落
,
结构义紧凑。

④
After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories.
句式
:have fun (in doing sth
⑤
The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
使用
before
译成
:“
还未来得及
……,
就
”
。

⑥
My brother was riding [with] me sitting on the seat behind.
该句使用
with
结构
,
其结构为
: with+
宾语
+
宾语补足语。

该结构的情景描述功能十分突出。 此外
,behind
一词用作
seat
定语的用法也十分轻
巧。
⑦
There is [sure] to be a lot of fun.
在
There is
句式中加入
be sure to
等表达是十分有用的写作技巧
,
又如
:There happened
to be... There seems to be…

3.
补述的写作手法

补述技巧是高考英语写作最重要的技巧之一
,
值得重视。补述分并列补述和后位补
述两种。补述的特点是既可以使语言连贯
,
又可以收到简练、生动的效果
,
有时又能
适时地表现当事人内心的思想活动
,
常用于事实表述后的情感感受
,
引发的感想或对
事实细节补充的场合
,
一般会收到好的效果。

并列补述常用并列连词
and,
后位补 述常用分词短语作状语
,which
引出非限定性定语
从句
,
以及由
“with +
宾语
+
宾语补足语
”
等。

i.
并列补述

(1
要点
1
上午
:
学校活动要点
2
下午
:
游览市区

I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the
afternoon, I'll show you around and take you to some places of interest.
(2
要点
:
大约
4
点离开

Around four o'clock, we said goodbye to one another, and felt very happy on the way
home.
(3
要点
:
昨天我和李明参加了野外生存训练。

Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one
of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.
ii.
后位补述
—
分词短语作状语用分词短语作状语
,
文字 较为精练

要点
:
晚上
:
看电视
,
玩游戏
,
聊天

We'll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting
people.
iii.
后位补述
—
非限定性定语从句

(1 The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese
School.
(2 It was quite an experience for us both, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.
(3 At 8 o'clock in the morning, we arrived at the 712 bus station, where we were warmly
welcomed by the drivers and conductors.
(4 Staff members of the bus station and our classmates then took part in a general
knowledge quiz on the Olympic Games in the afternoon, which was great fun for both
sides.
iv.
后位补述一
with
复合结构

要点
:住房面积为
25
平方米
,
月租
500
元。
(< br>注
:
图例含卧室一间
,
浴室一间
,
以及厨房
一个。

It's a small flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.
4.
注意使用连词
and