朋友作文之朋友生病给建议英语作文

2021年1月26日发(作者：英勇无畏)
朋友生病给建议英语作文


【篇一：高中英语作文

建议信
(
如何学英语
)
】


写作


假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里< br>向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1.
上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习；

2.
词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文；

3.
课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力；

4.
每天坚持写日记。


注意：
1.
词数
120—
150
词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不
计入总数；

2.
内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

dear wang mei,


i’m very glad to have received your e
-mail.

best wishes!

yours,

li hua

dear wang mei,


i’m very glad to have received your e
-
i’m writing to
give you some advice on how to learn english well in high
school. first of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and
take notes in class so that
众所周知
),vocabulary is of great
importance / should spend half an hour in the
morning reciting words and reading texts ’s
more,try to your classmates in english out of this way
you can improve your listening and spoken english
but not least,you should keeping a diary,which
helps improve your written english and helps you go
over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

i hope these suggestions will be of use to
er:where there is a will,there is a way.
有志者事竟
成
/the man who has made up his mind to win will never say
“impossible”.
一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说
“
不可能的
”
。

best wishes!

yours, li hua

【篇二：八年级英语
unit1 -unit4
作文指导】



八年级下册英语作文指导

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9.
表总结：
in short(
总之
)
，
in a word(
总之
)
，


文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如 ：宾语从句、状语从句、不定式
或动名词放在句首做主语，
there be
句型等。


宾语从句举例：
i believe shenzhen will be more and more
beautiful.

we talk about how to make the city beautiful.


状语从句
---
常用状语从句句型：

1)
时间
when
，
not…until(
直到
…
才
…)
，
as soon as ,since,

2)
目的
so that+
句子
; in order to (
为了
)

3)
结果

so…that+
句子（如此
…
以致于
…
）

，
too…to do(
太
……
而
不能
……)

4)
条件
if
，
unless(
除非
)
，
as long as(
只要
) 5)
让步
though
，
although
，
even though
（即使），
even if
（即使

）

6)
比较
as…as…
，
not so…as…
，
than


不定式做主语：
to read books in the sun is bad for our eyes.


动名词做主语：
reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.


用好
it is+ adj for sb to do sth. it is bad for our eyes to read
books in the sun.

it is necessary for us to improve our english.


用好
there be
句型：
there is going to be an english
competition in our school.

there will be more and more robots in 10 years.

there must be someone else on the island.

there have been great changes in our country since 1992.


五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子
结构是否清晰，
< br>短语使用、词拼写是否准确等。检查后，将草稿誊
写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。

下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：

live more and more comfortable.


改正：
comfortably(
副词修饰动词
)

can get many information by reading newspapers.


改正：
much information(
不可数名词由
much
修饰
)

has many programs in tv.


改正：
there are many programs on tv.(there be
句型和介词短语
)

4.i think ride a bike can keep our health.


改正：
i think riding a bike can keep us healthy.(
动名词作主语
)


六，段落的写作要求


一般来说，一个段落由三个部分组成；主题句，扩展句和结论句。


步骤：

1
）

在动笔之前，花
3-5
分钟把自己的思路梳理一下，围绕主题思
想考可能用到的素材。

2
）

筛选最重要的素材，把与主题关系不大的剔除，最好列各提纲，
这样利于动笔。

3
）

确定人称及主要时态。


要写好描述清楚，结构严谨，表达流畅要注意以下几点：

1
）

写一件事，讲清该事的事实；

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单

2
）

用具体的细节支撑你的看法。

3
）

按逻辑顺序安排句子；

4
）

思路清晰语言连贯。

5
）

段落长短要恰当。

6
）


建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结 和吸取范
文中好的结构与表达方法，适当运用于自己的文章中。


书面表达实战演练

unit1
对生病的人的建议


假设你是
mary
的朋友
tina
，

在得知她生病的消息后，你很着急。

请你给她发一封
e-mail,
给她提出建议。


内容包括：
1.
得知其病情后表示担心；
2.
给她提出一些建议（至少
3
个）；
3.
祝愿其早日康复
dear mary, i am very sorry to hear
that you have a bad cold. here i would like to give you some
advice. first, you should take some medicine and rest for a few
days. second, you had better drink lots of water. you can drink
some orange juice, it will be good for your health. also, open
the door and let the fresh air full of your room. finally, it’s best
to put on more warm clothes when you have to go outside. i
hope you can get well soon.

yourstina
交通事故报告

2013
年
3
月
10
日下午
3
：
20
在胜利街发生了一起交通事故。

一个
在街上玩耍的男孩被汽车撞伤，司机及时将男孩送到医院，男孩获
救。

at about 3:20 p.m. in shengli street on march 10th,2013, a little
boy, about ten years old, was playing on the street. he was so
happy that he didn’t see the car coming toward him. when the
driver saw the boy, he wanted to slow down, but it was too late.
then the car hit the boy and they boy was badly hurt. the driver
took the boy to the hospital at once. luckily, with the help of
the doctor, the boy was saved finally.


动动手，写一写：

假如你是李华，你的同学 小叶昨天下午回家时候
撞到头了。请你给他发一封邮件，表示担心，以及给他提出建议。
建议至 少三点。
80
词


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招聘志愿者广告
are you looking for something fun
to do? do you like to help other people in your free time? then
join us and be a volunteer!

we are a group of people who like helping others. we have
volunteer jobs for people of different ages. you can help
people in many ways. schools need help to teach children after
school. the old people’s home needs volunteers to help them
with housework. hospital need help to cheer up the sick kids.
when you see the look of joy on their faces after helping them,
you will be happy, too.

do not hesitate(
犹豫
) to contact (
联系
)us. call mr, brown at 452-
4646, or send an e-mail to .


应聘志愿者


假设你是
laura
。你在看到上面的广告 后，对志愿者工作非常感兴趣。
请你写一封邮件给
mr. brown,
向他介绍你的个人情况和意愿。


内容包括：
1.
你看到广告后的感受和意愿

2.
你的兴趣爱好及你能做的志愿者工作（至少
3
个）
3.
期望收到回
复

dear ,

i read your advertisement(
广告
) this morning. i am very excited
about the volunteering job you offered. being a volunteer is a
dream job for me. i would get a strong feeling of satisfaction
when i see the animals get better and the look of joy on their
faces. also, i never feel bored when staying with children. so i
think i can help out with the following things: first, i can help to
take good care of the animals. when they are sick, i’ll send the
animal doctors and provide the food. second, i want to
volunteer as a teacher in an after-school study program. i
could teach kids english and tell stories to them. third, i could
visit the sick kids in the hospital to cheer them up. i’m free to
help on weekends. please write me back as soon as possible.

yours truly,

laura


动动手，写一写，根据上述要求，你也写一封邮件去应聘志愿者吧！
80
词


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孩子该不该做家务
should kids do
chores at home?

some people think there is no need for kids to do chores at
home. they should spend time on schoolwork in order to get
good grades and get into a good university. while i think it is
important for kids to help with chores. first, doing chores can
help to de
velop children’s independence and teach them how
to take care of themselves. because they are going to grow up,
they will leave home and no one will be there to cook for them,
do the dishes or fold the clothes. second, a family is a team,
we should do our part in keeping a clean and comfortable
environment. our parents work all day, it is unfair for them to
do chores after work. also, it is not enough to get good grades
at school. at last, it’s good for our health to do chores, we
don’t have enough time to
exercise at school, so doing chores
is a good way to keep us strong. all in all, the earlier kids learn
to be independent, the better it is for their future.


动动手，写一写，请你写一篇支持孩子们应该做家务的文章，
80
词


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孩子该不该参加
课外兴趣班


现在，社会上课后辅导机构火爆。请你结合你的亲身体验，根据提
示写一篇题为
“is going to after
-
school classes necessary?”
的短
文。


内容包括：

1.
你是否也参加了课后辅导班？
2.
你参加了什么课后辅导班？

3.
你认为参加课后辅导班是否有必要，并陈述至少
3
个理由。