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说明文:
在四级作文中,实际上细化为
原因类
作文,最明显的原因类
作文,如
My Favorite Programme, My Ideal Job, The Career I Pursue,
再就是
Why I T
ake the College English Test Band 6
。
模板一:
Why Are There so Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?
1.
近来来越来越多的民工涌入大城市。
2.
产生这一社会现象的原因。
For
a
number
of
years,
there
has
been
a
steady
rise
in
the
number of
rural
laborers who flood into big cities. Many men work on
construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants
or
babysitters
for
city
dwellers.
Three
reasons,
in
my
mind,
can
account for this social phenomenon.
First and Foremost,
the limited land can no longer produce enough
crops for an ever-increasing rural population.
In the second place,
there
are far more opportunities in big cities----rural laborers dream of earning
money
through
hard
work.
Last
but
by
no
means
the
least,
many
of
them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way
of living there, and wish their children to receive good education.
I
firmly
believe
that
if we
try
our
best
to
create
a
healthy
social
atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.
结构点评
这篇作文谈论的是一种社会现象。第一段分三句,首句引入大量
农 民工进入大城市这一现象,
第二句举例子进行说明,
第三句是个过
渡,引起解释原因的 段落。第二段分三个方面来解释原因。第三段是
乘法的结束语。这是我们大家熟悉的结构。
妙笔生花
第一段首句是个经典句型,大家应熟记。第二句是举例说明,
construction site
表示
“建筑工地”
,
babysitter
表示
“帮人看孩子的人”
。
第三句使用了插入语,强调了句子主语。
第二段分三个方面来解释这一社会现象。第一点中
no
longer
和
ever-increasing
的使用突显了矛盾,其中
rural指“乡村的”
。第二点
中的
far more
亦可用
much more
,
后使用破折号,
引出进一步的说明。
第三点中
perma nently
和
admire
分别指“永久地”和“羡慕”
,接受
教育是“
receive education
”
。
第三段非常简洁,是宾语从句嵌套条件状语从句的 情形。条件状
语从句的语气平和舒缓,显得非常客观。
模板二:
还有些题目也是原因类题型,像
It Pays to Be Honest, Harmfulness
of Fake Commodities,
Don’t
Hesitate to Say
“
NO
”
.
这些都是从写现象
-----
原因
------
后果的三段论式。
今天我们练习写,主题句已经给出:
It Pays to Be Honest
1
当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象
2
诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实
Nowadays,
every
one
of
us
has
been confronted with
too
many
instances
of
dishonesty
either
through
the
mass
media
or
in
daily
life
…………
.
We can
’
t help asking ourselves:
What is wrong with our
society? Is honesty going out of style?
Honest should and would never go out of style.
For any individual,
honesty
……
All that has been discussed above points out an undeniable fact
that it pays to be
honest. Honesty
……
..
模板三
Video Games
The
recent
years
have
witnessed
表明,目击
an
unfavorable
social phenomenon
—
more and more college students become indulged
迷恋
in video games. Some of them play video games overnight, which
will
inevitably hinder
妨碍
their study. Others even play truant
逃避
to
enjoy themselves.
After contemplating
沉思
and meditation
沉思
, we can find three
possible reasons to account for this trend. First of all,
the information
technology
is
developing
at
a
fantastic
speed
and
video
games become
more
and
more
advanced
and
attractive.
What
’
s
more,
many
students
lack self-control to such an extent that
they play
for long hours even
if
they know
it is harmful to both their mental
and physical health.
In the
third place,
the university authority and the teachers are too lenient
仁慈
with
the
students
—
they
attach
great
importance
to
imparting
传递
knowledge and more or less overlook students
’
personality development.
The
solutions
to
this
problem
seem
more
than
clear
on
this
occasion.
By creating a favorable environment, university authority can
help
students
enjoy
learning
in
and
after
class.
Moreover
,
university
teachers
should
teach students
how
to
make
best
use
of
their
time
and
energy
to
realize
their
dreams.
Last
but
by
no
means
least,
the
mass
media should also play a positive role in conveying the message that it is
not
wise
at
all
for
college
students
to play
video
games,
especially
for
long hours.
It
is
quite
natural
that
we
meet
such
problems
among
college
students.
As long as the government, universities and students make
joint efforts, a sound solution is not far away.
第一段引入了越来越多的学生沉迷于电子游戏这一社会现象。
第二段从三个方面阐述了此现象的原因。
(注意三个方面的英语表
达)
第三段从学校、老师和媒体三个角度(注意另外三种英语表达)
来阐述解决问题的办法。未段包含两 句,第一句说问题常见,第二句
说只要大家同心协力,必能找到解决问题的办法。
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模板四:
Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus
1.
大学生了解社会的必要性
2.
了解社会的途径(大众媒体、社会服务等)
3.
我打算怎么做
It
is
necessary
that
university
students
get
to
know
the world
outside
the
campus.
(为什么)
On
the
one
hand,
only
when
they
combine
book
knowledge
with
real
social
life
can
university
education makes sense.
On the other hand,
the society is developing
at
a
fantastic
speed
and
university
students
should
acquaint
themselves with it, otherwise they can hardly keep pace with it after
graduation.
There are many ways
to know the outside world better
, among
which
the
mass
media
is
the
easiest one.
By
listening
to
the
radio,
watching
TV
news
and
reading
newspapers
college
students
can
know daily happenings at home and abroad.
In addition,
voluntary
social
service
is also a good
choice. Through
various activities,
the
students
will
not
only
learn
to
perform
different
tasks
but
also
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