july是什么意思人教版新目标英语九年级Unit 11 单元话题写作教学案

2021年1月26日发(作者：菌落)
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2014
年科研课题《初中英语写作教学的创新体验研究》最终成果

九年级
Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.
写作教学案

（教师使用）

【话题】
情感（
Feelings
）


【写作目 标】
了解一些表达感情的词，能正确的表达自己的感情，用英语描述事情对自己感情的影响，
并 培养学生正确处理事情，特别是不好的事情对自己的正面影响。


【课前任务】

一、写出下列短语。




1
、许多
2
、流行英文歌曲

3
、其他国家的文化
4
、总之

5
、一点儿




























6
、一周两次





参考答案：

1. a lot of /lots of

2. popular English songs

3. the culture of other countries

4. in a word

5.
a little bit

6. twice a week


二、
根据汉语意思完成下列句子。





1
、我们能提高英语方面听和说的能力。








We can improve our





























in English.




2
、从你的节目中，我们能学到许多生词和用语。






































we can learn many new words and expressions.




3
、也很遗憾，我们一周只能看两次你的节目。















































that we can only watch your program twice a week.




4
、谢谢你给我们许多欢乐！








Thank you



















us a lot of fun.




5
、我祝愿你的节目有一个美好的未来。








I





























a bright future.




参考答案：
1. listening and speaking


2. From your program


3. It
’
s also a pity


4. for giving



5.
wish your program


三、写出与本话题有关的词汇和句型。
（课前任务）

常用词汇：

popular, improve, learn from, in a word, a bright future

经典句型：

I
’
d rather do
…
than do
…

That kind of music makes me feel
…

I often have fun doing
…

The more
…
the more
…

It was so sad that
…

How do you feel about
…


【课中任务】读写结合

一、
A.
信息归纳


阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息
。




Happiness is for everyone. You don’t need to care about those people who have beautiful houses with large
gardens and swimming pools or those who have nice cars and a lot of money and so on. Why? Because those who
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have big houses may often feel lonely and those who have cars may want to walk on the country roads at their free
time.



In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. When you are in trouble at school, your
friends will help you; when you study hard at your lessons, your parents are always taking good care of your life
and
your
health;
when
you
get
success,
your
friends
will
say
congratulations
to
you;
when
you
do
something
wrong, people around you will help you to correct it. And when you do something good to others, you will feel
happy, too. All these are your happiness. If you notice them, you can see that happiness is always around you.



Happiness is not the same as money. It is a feeling of your heart. When you are poor, you can also say you are
very happy, because you have something else that can’t be bought with money.




When you meet with difficulties, you can say loudly you are very happy, because you have more chances to
challenge
（挑战）
yourself. So you cannot always say you are poor and you have bad luck. As the saying goes, life
is like a revolving (
旋转
) door. When it closes, it also opens. If you take every chance you get, you can be a happy
and lucky person.
Information Card

Who can have happiness?
When you do something wrong people around you
Your friends will say congratulations to you when you get
Even if you are poor you can
You can see that happiness is always around you if you

参考答案：
ne

2 correct

s

happy

them

（
1
）










（
2
）
will help you to









it.
（
3
）










（
4
）










（
5
）










B
．赏析

找出上面材料中的好词好句。

Useful words:

happiness ,challenge, feeling ,saying
Useful phrases
:

care about, in fact, say congratulations to ,taking good care of

Useful sentences:
Happiness is not the same as money.


If you take every chance you get, you can be a happy and lucky person.

As the saying goes, life is like a revolving (
旋转
) door. When it closes, it also opens.

二、书面表达

假设你是王萍，
是某电台的英语频道
School English
栏目的忠实观众。
请根据下列信息，
给主持人
Cathy
写一封信，表达你对该栏目的良好祝愿。

（
1
）
、优点： 内容丰富（有故事、游戏、英文歌曲第）
，有利于观众提高英语水平，能了解更多的外
国文化；

（
2
）
、不足：语速有点儿快，每周只播两次。


1
、写作引导：

A.

重点短语

写出下列短语。






1
、使……失望






























2
、而不是























3
、停止做某事






























4
、与……交流






5
、向……学习


























参考答案：
1. let...down

2. rather than

3. stop doing

4. communicate with

5. learn from


B.
重点句型

根据汉语意思完成下列句子。

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单元话题写作指导

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1
、他父亲为了赚钱，从早忙到晚。

His father is busy all day in order to









.

2
、看足球赛使我疯狂。










makes me crazy.
3
、他和我对唱歌跳舞都不感兴趣。












he









I interested in singing and dancing.

4
、我宁愿去登山，也不愿意呆在家里看电视。


I’d rather go










than









TV at home
.
参考答案：
1. make money 2. Watching football game

3. Neither; nor

4. climbing watch



C.
写作技能指导

本单元的写作任务是描述某个事件 给人们的生活或人类带来的影响。写这类文章时，可以先简单介绍
事物自身的特点，然后分两个方面介绍 它给人们带来的好处和不好的影响。


D.

写作思路点拨


Ⅰ、称呼

→
Dear…


Ⅱ、正文

→①优点：
stories ,games, songs
…


→②缺点：
speak fast, twice a week…


→③结尾语：
Thank you
…
I wish
…


Ⅲ、署名→
Yours…


2
、实践写作（含小组讨论、改评修正、赏析作品）


【我的草稿】




【我的作品】



















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【我的订正】










3
、参考范文

Dear Cathy,



I like your program very much. It has lots of interesting stories, attractive games and popular English songs.
From your program we can learn many new words and expressions. We can improve our listening and speaking in
English .We can also know more about the culture of other countries in the world. In a word, we learn a lot from
your program.




I’m sorry to tell you that
①
I can’t follow you easily sometimes because you speak little bit fast. It’s also a pit
y
that we can only watch your program twice a week.



Thank you for giving us a lot of fun! I wish your program a bright future!
②


































































Yours sincerely,

































































Wang Ping


点评：本篇范文符合书信的写作要求，作者 对
Cath
y
主持的节目做出了评价，并表达了自己的观点，
文中分别阐述了 节目的优点以及存在的不足。开头直接引入正题，使文章内容清楚明了。

句①
I’m sorry to tell you that…
起到了很好的连接作用，使文章连贯自然。

句②结尾段使文章的内容更加丰富，增加了文章的艺术感。


【课后任务】读写结合

一、
A.
信息归纳


阅读下面短文，然后按照项目要求填写所缺信息。

How to beat sadness
We all have days when we are down, tired and unhappy. That’s OK. You need days like this, or how would
you know you are happy? You’ll enjoy your good days even more when you have a few bad days. Even if sadness
is a part of life, let’s try to make
it small. Here are a few simple ways to help you feel better when you are feeling
sad.
1. Stand up straight and this helps your energy flow (
流动
). When your energy is flowing freely, you can
flow too.
2. Smile! It’s easy to do and have good results. This w
ay can not only leave you in a good mood but also
bring others a good mood.
3. Listen to music. It can be your favourite music. Some kinds of music work better than others, so try and
find out what kind of music works the best for you.
4. Take some “me” ti
me. You can find pleasure in reading a book, watching a sunrise or having a hot bath, or
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