audio是什么(英语)中考必备英语英语书面表达汇编技巧全解及练习题(含答案)

2021年1月26日发(作者：embassy)
（英语）中考必备英语英语书面表达汇编技巧全解及练习题
(
含答案
)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编

1
．
（
·
北京中考模拟）交流可以化解矛盾
,
增进友谊。当今交流方式很多，但人们之间的情
感 似乎越来越淡。

学校英语专栏征文，主题是
“Ways of Communication Today”
。假如你是李华，你对此很感兴
趣，准备投稿，谈 谈你日常的交流方式及你的感受。

提示词语：
face to face
，
chatting on line
，
discuss
，
appear

How many ways do you know to communicate with others?

提示问题：
·
How do you usually communicate with your friends?

Which is the best way and why?


【答案】
There are some ways to communicate with others, such as talking face to face, singing
songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages.

My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send
text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes
we make phone calls.

I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most welcome and
useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, communication becomes easier and rapider. With
the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place.
（
118
）


【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如
communic ate with others
，
such as
，
face to face
，
body and sign language
，
chatting on line
，
have a talk
，
each other
，
text messages
，
talk about
，
the best way
，
one of the most welcome
and useful inventions
，
easier and rapider
，
with the help of
，
keep in touch with
，
at any time
and in any place
等。而
My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near
each other./ I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone.
等多种复杂从句结构的运
用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示 内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示的内容逐词翻译并
拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可。


2
．
（
·
山东中考模拟）为了宣传和弘扬中华 优秀传统文化
,
某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介
绍中国的经典故事
, “
程门立雪（
Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully
）
”
是
其中一个选题。请你根据下面 的内容提示
,
用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：

1.
杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口

2.
通过介绍这个故事
,
发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：

1.
可以适当增加细节
,
以使行文连贯：词数：
100
左右
.

2.
不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】
Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher,
Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He d
idn’t wake up the teacher. So
he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it
was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher
woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the
teacher was moved deeply.

After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事
, “
程门立雪（
Stand in the snow to wait for
Master Cheng respectfully
）
”
。目的是宣传和 弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，
灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通 过介绍这个故事，发表看法或
者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如
:There was/
were...
注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。


3
．
（
·
山东中考模拟）书面表达

下面的图片描 述了昨天下午发生在四年级三班教室里的情景。小林和小刚之间的对话，让
你

想到了什么？请根据你对图片的理解，用英语写一篇
100
词左右的短文。

内容包括：
1.
完整描述图片内容；
2.
简要阐述你的观点和看法。

写作要求：
1.
可以根据图
片信息，进行适当的发挥；

2.
短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

提示词：

手提电脑
laptop


【答案】
Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They
showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad
bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I
think it is not proper to compare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their
attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday,
but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries
and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to
primary school students, just distracting them.

【解析】

【详解】
这篇短文要求我们观察图片，将图片中发生的场景用英语表达出来，是一篇看图作文。首
先学生们应 仔细观察图片，了解图片中发生的场景，弄清楚它主要想传达的意思，然后用
英语将这些内容表达出来。 审题可知，这篇短文的内容应主要包括两个部分：首先要描述
图片中发生的事情；其次对该事情阐述自己 的观点和看法。短文应主要使用一般现在时和
一般过去时，第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。 写作时应注意：首先短文内容
应符合图片表达的意思，不能会错意，写偏、写错；可以根据图片信息适当 发挥，使文章
更加充实、完整。其次要注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据汉语思维逐词< br>翻译，写汉语式的英语。用从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。句式结构可以简单句
为基础， 穿插并列句或复合句结构。为提升作文水平，应注意应用高级词汇和复杂结构。
同时语句之间使用恰当的 衔接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者 根据题目要求以及图片信息，介绍了图片中发生的事情，
并对这件事发表了自己的看法。短文有以下几个 优点：首先短文内容符合题目要求，作者
通过观察图片，正确了解了图片传达的信息，确定了文章的中心 。文章内容完整、充实，
叙述清晰、有层次。作者观点明确，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和 人称，文
章以一般过去时和一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，正确使用了谓语动词的形式，注意了过
去式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，语法规范，用词准确。最后短文中句式结构文
章，符合英语的 表达习惯，简单句、并列句、复合句交替应用，文章富有节奏的变化。短
文中还使用了丰富的句型，如< br>Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad
bought a laptop for him.
、

But I think it is not proper to compare with each other.
、
Of course their parents can buy some
gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school
things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.
、
Things like cell phones and laptops are
of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.
等。


4
．
（
·
广西中考模 拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（
interest classes
）或特色课
（
special classes
）
,
诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。你校校园网就你们学校开
设此类课程的必要性广泛 征求同学们的意见。以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。请就此并
结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发 表在校园网的英语论坛上。


一些学生

另一些学生

你

观点

有必要

没有必要

…

理由

1.
培养兴趣
,
并获得更多的知识；
2.
提高生活技能

1.
浪费时间，对学习没有帮助；
2.
给学生带来很多压力

…


提示语：
develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste

of time; cause a lot of stress

要求：
1.
短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；

2.
文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

3.
词数
80
左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as
cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.

_______________________ __________________________________________________ ______
________________________________________ _______________________________________
_______ __________________________________________________ ______________________
________________________ _______________________________________________

Thank you!

【答案】
Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such
as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.

Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students
think it’s
really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can
make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life
skills. These skills are useful for young students.

However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste
of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for
children.

In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer t
hese classes. They are not only good for our study but
also for our growing.

Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给 内容提示展
开。


根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时
;
在表达观点时通常会用到例如：
I think,
in one’s opinion
等引出观点的词语。另外，可以用到
first, second, third, finally
等一一列出观
点，使文章更有条理，次序。

【点睛】

这是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别 人的的观点，
最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。

短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，
例如
such as
，
and so on
，
However
等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：
Second,
these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and
i
t’s not helpful for their study
等。


5
．
（
·
海林市朝鲜 族中学中考模拟）（
B
）

如今，许多学生课下热衷于在手机上聊天，请根< br>据下列提示写一篇短文，针对这种现象谈谈你的看法与建议。短文要包括所给要点，并补
充第二点 建议，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
80
～
100
词。

提示：原因：想放松一下，打发时间。

结果：对运动不感兴趣，不愿面对面交流。

建议：
1.
禁止学生把手机带到学校；

2. ……


参考词汇：
chat
v.

聊天；
kill the time
打发时间；
face to face
面对面

【答案】
Nowadays, many students love chatting on their mobile phones after class. They think
it is a good way to relax themselves and kill the boring time. However, many of them show no
interest in sports and some even dislike talking with their friends face to face. I think they
shouldn’t be allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Or they have to turn off their mobile
phones when they are in the school. And they should spend more time on some sports, because
playing sports is good for their body and mind.

【解析】

【详解】

本文属于话题 作文，针对许多学生课下热衷于在手机上聊天这一现象谈谈你的看法和建
议。根据要表达的内容确定并准 确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内
容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优 秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习
惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用 一些亮点词句，如
love doing, it
作形式主语，
however, face to face, be allowed to do, spend
时间
+on sth
以及
be good for
。增强逻辑关系，
增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是 写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符
合要求。

构思提 纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给
出的话题是开放的，而 具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中
心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确
性、连贯性 以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意
使用恰当的连词，使句子衔 接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外 ，还
要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词
数 是否符合要求等。


6
．
（
·
云南中考模拟）书面表达

提示：转眼间 三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人
或事物。请以
“ An Unforgettable …”
为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你
的感受。

要求：
1.
请先将题目补充完整后再作答；

2.
语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于
60
个；

3.
文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

4.
将短文写在答题卡上。写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】
Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.

when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room,
mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all
these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy
birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an
unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how
tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even
cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.

【解析】

【详解】

本文是一篇话题作文。根据以
“ An Unforgettable …”
为题，写 一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的
人或事物以及你的感受。文章时态用一般过去式时，人称主要为第一人称。 本文所给材料
比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，< br>不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点
分明，中 心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达
习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉 的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写
的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富 多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检
查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出 写作要点及每
个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、< br>段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构
是否合理 ，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。


7
．
（
·
山东中考模拟）

写作

假定你是李华，在一位名叫
Tiger Mom
的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。

请你根据
博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。


I’m the mother of a fourteen
-year
–
old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5
students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but
some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?

写作要点：
1.
表明自己的看法。


2.
陈述自己的理由。

3.
提出至少
2
条建议。

【答案】
Hi,TigerMom,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quite

right for you to do so.

Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future
university

admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.
There are

many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful
in

society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows
them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice
to help them grow up

mentally and physically.

So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl
；
let
her

have more friends and social activities
；
and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers
often do.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本 文主要考查一
般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾< br>结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：
My idea is that……
，
There are……
，
Some all-A
students in school have…….
，
The reason is……
，
So I suggest that……
等句式的应用。写作中注
意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结 构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介
绍自己的建议。此处
turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make
mistakes, of one’s own
等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。


8
．
（
·
山东中考模拟）

如今，很多城市 出现了一种绿色出行方式
――
共享单车（
bike-
sharing
），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以＂
Bike- sharing
＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。

要点提示：

Be convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure
（减缓交通压力）

Take exercise…

Advantages

Problems

Advice

Throw away, damage
（毁损）
, be stolen…

Civilized
（文明的）
, follow the rules, take good care of…


注意：

1.
短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

2.
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；

3.
词数：
80-100
（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular
in many cities.
____ __________________________________________________ _________________________
_____________________ __________________________________________________ ________
______________________________________ _________________________________________
_____ __________________________________________________ ________________________
______________________ __________________________________________________ _______
_______________________________________ ________________________________________
______ __________________________________________________ ______________________

【答案】
Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more
popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people.

First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.
【高分句型一】
Also, it helps to
reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-
sharing helps people take more this way, it's helpful to people's health.
（优势）

However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using
bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.
（难题）


In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as
we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be
more beautiful.
【高分句型二】（建议）

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表 达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在短文中使
用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色 不少，
.
如
: It's known that it
has many advantages.
，
First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.
，
Also,
Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,
等。

【点睛】

本文要求以
“Bike
-
sharing”
为题，根据表格的内容提示，写 一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车
的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述 共享单车的优
点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。


9
．
（
·
山东中考模拟）紧张而又忙碌的初中生活即将结束，在装载 你收获的行囊
----
成长记
录袋中还应增添一份你自己满意的答案。


根据上述提示，请以
“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”
为题写一篇文章，记录你难忘
的校园生活。首句已给出。

注意：
. 1.
语言通顺，句子连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

2.
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名或能够透露你个人身份的相关信息。

3.
词数
80
左右，信件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My Unforgettable Junior High School Life

How time flies!





【答案】
How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think
of about myself.

In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my
classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am
interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books,
playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.

In the future, I’ll try

my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and
more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文要求我们以
My Unforgettable Junior High School Life
为题，回想一下自己 即将过去
的初中，讲述难忘的初中生活。题目中用思维导图，列出了一些文章中会用到的关键词，
供学生们参考使用。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时、第一人称为主来叙述。题目中
并没有给出具 体的写作内容，学生们应发挥自己的想象力，可以从自己的学习、爱好、与
同学的交往、与老师的相处以 及自己的感受等方面进行详细阐述。写作时应注意：首先要
展开合理想象，补充文章细节内容，注意各部 分内容之间的层次，内容要完整、充实，结
构要清晰。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能 逐词翻译。句子的结构要完
整，可以简单句结构为主，如主谓宾或主系表结构。为提升作文档次，应穿插 使用并列
句、复合句及其他复杂句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，回忆了自己的初中生活，并 描述了自己的
感受。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容充实、完整，符合题目要求。短文中作者从自< br>己的学习情况、与同学的交往、爱好、特长等方面进行了总结，在最后提出了对未来的希
望。层次 清晰，结构合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章第一段引出主题，
使用了一般现在时；第二 段回忆过去的生活，主要使用了一般过去时；最后对未来提出希
望，用到了一般将来时。语法规范，用词 准确，注意了名词、动词、形容词等的正确形
式。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语 从句、状语从句等复合句句
型，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文档次。短文中较好的句型有：
In the past, I was busy
learning my subjects and worked hard at them
、
But now I am interested in history, because it is
very interesting
、
In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.
、
I’ll make it more
and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success
等等。


10
．
（
·
江苏中考模拟）书面表达

常州市政府 发文，从年
2
月
1
日起，市区禁止燃放烟花爆竹。你们班级的同学们就春节是
否能燃放烟花进行了讨论。请根据表格所提供的信息
,
给市长写一封信介绍大家的观点 ，同
时谈谈自己的想法。

注意：
1.
所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；

2.
文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

3.
表达，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；

4.
词数不少于
90
。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。


AGREE

1
．减少空气和噪音污染，保护环境
……

DISAGREE

1
．千百年来已经习惯燃放烟花

2
．没有烟花，过春节更无趣

3
．
……

原

因

2
．可能引起安全问题。如，火灾
……

3
．
……
（发挥至少一点）

你的观点

……
（自拟至少两个观点）


Dear Major,

We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in
our class give the ideas.





【答案】
Most of the students don’t agree to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think
fireworks produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people
like lettin
g them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well.
Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some children like playing with
fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to
clean up so much rubbish everywhere.

On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to
letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing.