9496高考英语作文的10种类型

2021年1月26日发(作者：fastback)
高考英语作文的
10
种类型
高考作文分为实用文和应用文。

实用文包括：
1.
提纲作文；
2.
图表作文；

3.
图画作文；

4.
开放作文；

应用文包括：
5.
书信；

6.
通知；

7
简历；

8.
日记；

9.
便条；
10.
电子邮件。

1.
提纲作文< br>：
在英语课堂上，
你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，
还是英语、
汉语兼 用？
某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕
“How
do
you
prefer
your
English
classes to be taught? In English only,
or in both English and Chinese?”
这个问题，参考所给
要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一：只用英语





优点：有助于提高听说能力等





缺憾：不易听懂等






结论：
……

授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用





优点：易于理解等





缺憾：英语氛围不浓等






结论：
……

注意：
1.
词数

100~120
，短文开头已给出
(
不计词数
)
。




2.
参考词汇：
atmosphere
氛围



满分文
(
一
)
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is
that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the
class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a
better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.

However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so
strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It
can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
名师指导：



审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无 论是要点的把握还是结构的组
织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式，整体看来是不错的。文中的一 个复合句
式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看好句中的分析。

背诵内容：





age n.
优点


familiar with
对某人熟悉


3. atmosphere n.
气氛

满分文
(
二
)

I
prefer
my
English
classes
to
be
taught
only
in
English
because
it
is
helpful
for
us
to
improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in
English
study
and
foreign culture, so
I’d like to
be totally immersed in
the
atmosphere of
English
so
that
I
can
quickly
make
progress.
That’s
why
I
prefer
total

English.
However,
since
we
are
all
English
beginners,
it’s
really
hard
to

understand
all
that
the
teacher
says.
Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in
English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.
名师指导：



本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点 。好词中词汇的使用，将作者
的意思表达得完整而准确，从而映衬了词汇的重要性；其次，本文的句式以 复杂句为
主，表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。

应背好词：
1. immerse v.
沉浸


2. explanation n.
解释


3. make progress
取得进步

2.
图表作文
：今年寒假，你参加了社会实践活动，去某 旅行社当业余导游。请根据该旅
行社提供的数据和你的所见所闻，用英语写一篇短文，作为寒假作业交给 你的英语老
师。


Number of people in City X travelling abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006
要求：
1.
简析表格，说明产生这种现象的原因；




2.
结合漫画，谈谈境外旅游出现的问题；




3.
针对所出现的问题阐述你自己的看法（至少两点）；




4.
词数
120
左右；





5.
参考词汇：吐痰
spit
v.


When
people’s
life
is
getting
better
and
better,more
and
more
people
choose
to
spend
their
holidays
abroad.
The
year
2006
sees
a
sharp
increase
in
the
number
of
overseas
travelers compared with the year2001, when the number was already much larger than that
of the year 1996. It’s
a good thing that Chinese tourism is developing very fast. However,
reports
about
people’s
bad
manners
flood
in.
Some
are
even
asked
if
all
Chinese
spit

and
litter everywhere. The poor behavior has done great harm to the image of China, which is
really shameful.
China has long been regarded as a country with good manners. Everybody should keep
some do’s and don’ts in their mind to guide
their behavior in public, home and abroad. Win
respect for yourself and our country!
内容要点

1.
简析表格内容；

2.
出境旅游人数快速增长的原因，如：生活水平的提高（学生需自己发挥）

3.
漫画中的问题
:
随地吐痰，乱扔垃圾

4.
个人的看法，指出这些行为是不文明的；要提倡社会公德（学生需自己发挥至少两
点）

该篇文章完全完成了试题规定的任务。

准确、清楚地表达了图表、漫画和要求中的内
容，要点无遗漏，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使
全文结构紧 凑，达到了预期的写作目的。属于很不错的高分范文！

3.
图画作文
: < br>根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变
化给人们生活带来的影响 。


注意：
1
．词数：
100
左右





2
．生词：通讯：
communicate

互联网：
the Internet

Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life.

In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the
public
telephone.
But
now
almost
everyone
has
his
own
mobile
phone.
People
can
communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have
easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails when ever they
like. With these changes, people’s
pace of life has been quickened and
people’s
work has
been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it
takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different countries.

In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
名师点评：

此类文章首先要构思文章结构

开头：总起即说什么


常用句型
:

1.
In short, things have begun to improve since …

2. Great changes have taken place in …


the
growing
popularity
of
Internet
surfing
in
China,
the
quality
of
our
lives
is
improving.
4. There are some three major values of owning a car, To begin with … Next… last... There
are, on the other hand, more reasons against it. First…
,
Second…, Finally…

主体：即怎么说？可用举例、对比、分析、数字、描写等。

列举过去的情况
Take … for example, in the past she …. / she

used to do besides…, what’s
more.

列举现在的情况

but
now,
not
only
do/
can
he
…
but
also
he
…;besides,
in
addition,
moreover, what’s more…

结尾：总结

in short; in a word; as a result
4.
开放作文
：你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛
(group dancing competition)
，班长
希望大家积极参与。对此谈谈你的想法。

A
group
dancing
competition
will
be
held
in
our
school
and
the
monitor
calls
on
everybody
to
take
an
active
part
in
it.
While
most
of
my
classmates
are
still
hesitating
whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity
for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play
makes
Jack
a
dull
boy,
so
goes
the
saying,
which
clearly
shows
us
the
importance
of
relaxation. Besides,I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years.
Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and
make some contributions to the class.
For
the
two
reasons
mentioned
above,
it
is
no
surprise
that
I
have
such
a
strong
enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
你的文章必须包括以下内容：
1
）你是否会参加比赛；














2
）你做出该决定的具体理由。

所谓开放
“
作文
”
，是相对于我们过去一直沿用的
“
书面表达
”
这种指导性写作
(G uided
Writing)
而言的。它是一种比传统的
“
书面表达
”
限制较少的、留给考生自由发挥空间更
多的考查学生书面表达能力的一种题型。开放作文属 于命题作文，考生要根据所给命
题，独立进行构思，并必须做适当的发挥。它在一定程度上考查了考生的 写作能力，
即要求考生根据写作动机选择相应的写作策略，并根据自己已经具备的相应知识完成
写作。以下是开放作文常用句型

描述部分

1. As can be seen from the picture, a boy is doing …

As we can see in the picture, there are two people staring at a plant growing in a pot.
In the picture, we can see a bucket made of wooden board in different length.
2. There be … doing

有四只小鸟翱翔在高高的天空上
.
There are four young birds flying high in the sky.
3. See … doing

我们能看到一只大鸟在巢中休息

In the picture, we can see a big bird resting in a nest.
4. … while … (
对比
)
在风中
,
大树折断了，而小草则依然挺立
.
In
the
wind,
the
tall
tree
breaks
into
two
halves,
while
the
short
grass
remains
standing
straight.
In the eyes of the man on the left, the plants will
grow thick and tall, while in the other’s
view, the plants will be dying pretty soon.
5.
地点状语放句首
,
主句全部倒装
.
地点状语
+live / fly / sit/ stand / grow /be +
名词
+
非限定性定语从句
.
在蜘蛛网的中间
,
坐着一个小孩
,
他整日坐在电脑前面和别人聊天和打游戏
.
In
the
middle
of
the
spider
web
sits
a
child,
who
is
occupied
in
chatting
with
others
and
7. The picture sets us thinking a lot.
8. It is obvious that the picture has a profound /hidden / irony meaning.
9. The picture arouses our interest of guessing what the artist wants to tell us and at the same
time we can learn something from it.
10. While the picture looks very funny, it really has a profound meaning for us to take into
consideration.
playing online games in front of the computer all day long.
In the wind stands a big tree, which is blown to one side and almost broken into two halves.
On the surface of the big clock are two people, one of whom is an old man and the other a
young boy.
In
the
middle
of
the
picture
is
a
man
dressed
in
old
fashioned
clothes
who
is
cutting
the
bushes into the same shape.
6. It is obvious that… / obviously (
逻辑引领
,
承上启下
)
显而易见
,
这个孩子已经因为迷上网络而忽略学习
.
It’s obvious that the child is so ad
dicted to the Internet that he forgets what he should do.
解释部分

1. This picture sets us thinking and we may gain enlightenment from what the picture really
means.
2. What the picture conveys goes far beyond only a picture itself. It carries deeper meanings.
3. My understanding of the picture is that…

4. Seeing the picture, I think that…

5. We can often see this similar phenomenon in our daily life.
It is very common in our society……

This phenomenon is not unusual in our society
This reflects a common phenomenon in our society
6. The picture reminds me of the fact that…

11. The purpose of the artist who draws the cartoon picture is clear and instructive as well.
12. Obviously, we can learn a lot from the cartoon picture. What the picture tries to tell us is
that…

结尾部分

1. In my view, no matter where we are working, we ought to cooperate with our colleagues
well. And only in this way can we create a harmonious working atmosphere and work more
efficiently.
2. From my perspective, weak as the grass is, it can stand strongly in the big wind when the
big tree breaks in half. In other words, the grass appears weak, but it has a strong mind. The
tree looks stronger, but it cannot conquer difficulties and even gives up hope in the end. So
we
can
learn
a
lesson
from
the
picture-
a
person’s
inner
strength
is
much
powerful
than
physical strength.
3.
We
ought
to
hold
a
positive
attitude
towards
our
life.
Only
by
this
means
can
we
live
happily and healthily.
4. The picture tells us that we ought to help someone in our team to complete
by this means can our team work better and achieve success in the end.
5. Only
when we see others’ advantages can we learn from them an
d make greater progress
day by day.
6.
Only
by
choosing
the
most
suitable
methods
for
our
studies
can
we
gain
as
much
as
possible in the end.