技术支持英语往年高考英语作文的10种类型

2021年1月26日发(作者：oju)
高考英语作文的
10
种类型

高考作文分为实用文和应用文。

实用文包括：
1.
提纲作文；
2.
图表作文；

3.
图画作文；

4.
开放作
文；

应用文包括：
5.
书信；

6.
通知；

7
简历；

8.
日记；

9.
便条；
10.
电子邮件。

1.
提纲作文： 在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，
还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学 生发表看
法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In
English only, or in both Eng
lish and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给
要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一：只用英语





优点：有助于提高听说能力等





缺憾：不易听懂等






结论：……

授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用





优点：易于理解等





缺憾：英语氛围不浓等






结论：……

注意：
1.
词数

100~120
，短文开头已给出
(
不计词数
)
。




2.
参考词汇：
atmosphere
氛围



满分文
(
一
)

I
prefer
my
English
classes
to
be
taught
in
both
English
and
Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the
teacher talks about. The teacher first
teaches the class in English, and
then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get
a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.

However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English
atmosphere
not
so
strong.
Some
students
who
wish
to
be
taught
in
English will be disappointed.

Except
for
the
disadvantage,
I
think
it
is
really
good
to
hear
two
languages
in
classes.
It
can
make
us
more
familiar
with
the
foreign
culture.

名师指导：



审题是作文的第一要素，本文的审题准确无误。无 论是要点
的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。
本文运用多种复杂句式，
整体看来是 不错的。
文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。
其他出彩短语的使用也很地道，可以参看 好句中的分析。

背诵内容：





age
n.
优点



familiar
with
对某人熟悉


3.
应背好词：
1.
immerse
v.
沉浸


2.
explanation
n.
解释


3.
make
progress
取得进步

atmosphere n.
气氛

满分文
(
二
)


I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is
helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very
short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture,
so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere
of English so that
I
can
quickly
make
progress.
That’s
why
I
prefer
total

English.
However,
since
we
are
all
English
beginners,
it’s
really
hard
to

understand
all
that
the
teacher
says.
Sometimes
we
need
Chinese
explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English
but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to
understand.

名师指导：



本文 写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中
词汇的使用，将作者的意思表达得完整而准确，从 而映衬了词汇
的重要性；其次，本文的句式以复杂句为主，表语、定语和状语
从句的使用都十分 到位。

2.
图表作文：今年寒假，你参加了社会实践活动，去某旅行社当
业 余导游。请根据该旅行社提供的数据和你的所见所闻，用英语
写一篇短文，作为寒假作业交给你的英语老 师。


Number of people in City X travelling abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006

要求：
1.
简析表格，说明产生这种现象的原因；




2.
结合漫画，谈谈境外旅游出现的问题；




3.
针对所出现的问题阐述你自己的看法（至少两点）；




4.
词数
120
左右；





5.
参考词汇：吐痰
spit
v.


When
people’s
life
is
getting
better
and
better,more
and
more
people
choose
to
spend
their
holidays
abroad.
The
year
2006
sees
a
sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared with the
year2001,
when
the
number
was
already
much
larger
than
that
of
the
year 1996. It’s
a good thing that Chinese tourism is developing very
fast. However, reports
about people’s ba
d manners flood in. Some are
even asked if all Chinese spit and litter everywhere. The poor behavior
汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分， 使全文结构紧凑，达到了预
期的写作目的。属于很不错的高分范文！

3.
图画作文
:
根据以下图画，
写一篇英语短文，
描述今 昔通讯方式
的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。

has done great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful.

China
has
long
been
regarded
as
a
country
with
good
manners.
Everybody should keep som
e do’s and don’ts in their mind to guide
their behavior in public, home and abroad. Win respect for yourself and
our country!

内容要点

1.
简析表格内容；

2.
出境旅游人数快速增长的原因，如：生活水平的提高（学生需
自己发挥）

3.
漫画中的问题
:
随地吐痰，乱扔垃圾

4.
个人的看法，指出这些行为是不文明的；要提倡社会公德（学
生需自己发挥至少两点）

该篇文章完全完成了试题规定的任务。

准确、
清楚地表达了图表、
漫画和要求中的内容，要点无遗漏，应用了较多的语法结构和词

注意：
1
．词数：
100
左右





2
．生词：通讯：
communicate

互联网：
the Internet

Great
changes
have
taken
place
in
the
way
of
communication
in
people’s life.

In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing
letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his
own mobile phone. People can communicate with each other almost at
any place
and at a
ny time. What’s
more, people have easy access to
the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails when ever
they like. With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened

and
people’s
work
has
been
made
more
efficient.
It
used
to
take
several
days
to
hear
from
each
other,
but
now
it
takes
only
several
he …;besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more…

结尾：总结

in short; in a word; as a result

minutes, even if they are in two different countries.

In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.

名师点评：

此类文章首先要构思文章结构

开头：总起即说什么


常用句型
:

1. In short, things have begun to improve since
…

2. Great changes have taken place in …

the growing popularity of Internet surfing in China, the quality
of our lives is improving.
4. There are some three major values of owning a car, To begin with …
Next…
last...
There
are,
on
the
other
hand,
m
ore
reasons
against
it.
First…
,
Second…, Finally…

主体：即怎么说？可用举例、对比、分析、数字、描写等。

列举过去的情况
Take … for example, in the past she …. / she
used
to do besides…, what’s more.

列
举
现
在
的
情
况

but
now,
not
only
do/
can
he
…
but
also
4.
开放
作文：< br>你
班将组队
参加
学校组织
的集
体舞比赛
(group
dancing competition)
，
班长希望大家积极参与。
对此谈谈你的想法。

A
group
dancing
competition
will
be
held
in
our
school
and
the
monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of
my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes
to our monitor with great pleasure.

Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is
a
good
opportunity
for
me
to
relax
myself,
which
will
enable
me
to
study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so
goes
the
saying,
which
clearly
shows
us
the
importance
of
relaxation.
Besides,I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than
five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to
show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.

For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have
such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.

你的文章必须包括以下内容：
1
）你是否会参加比赛；














2
）你做出该决定的具体理由。

所谓开放“作文”，是相对于我们过去一直沿用的“ 书面表达”
这种指导性写作
(Guided
Writing)
而言的。它是 一种比传统的“书
面表达”限制较少的、留给考生自由发挥空间更多的考查学生书
面表达能力的 一种题型。开放作文属于命题作文，考生要根据所
给命题，独立进行构思，并必须做适当的发挥。它在一 定程度上
考查了考生的写作能力，即要求考生根据写作动机选择相应的写
作策略，并根据自己已 经具备的相应知识完成写作。以下是开放
作文常用句型

描述部分

1. A
s can be seen from the picture, a boy is doing …

As
we
can
see
in
the
picture,
there
are
two
people
staring
at
a
plant
growing in a pot.

In the picture, we can see a bucket made of wooden board in different
length.

2. There be … doing

有四只小鸟翱翔在高高的天空上
.

There are four young birds flying high in the sky.

3. See … doing

我们能看到一只大鸟在巢中休息

In the picture, we can see a big bird resting in a nest.

4. … while … (对比
)

在风中
,
大树折断了，而小草则依然挺立
.

In the wind, the tall tree breaks into two halves, while the short grass
remains standing straight.

In the eyes of the man on the left, the plants will grow thick and tall,
while in the other’s view, the plants will be dying pretty
soon.

5.
地点状语放句首
,
主句全部倒装
.

地点状语
+live / fly / sit/ stand / grow /be +
名词
+
非限定性定语从
句
.

在蜘蛛网的中间
,
坐着一个小孩
,
他整日坐在电脑前面和别人聊
天和打游戏
.

In the middle of the spider web sits a child, who is occupied in chatting
with others and playing online games in front of the computer all day
long.

In
the
wind
stands
a
big
tree,
which
is
blown
to
one
side
and
almost
broken into two halves.

On the surface of the big clock are two people, one of whom is an old
man and the other a young boy.

In the middle of the picture is a man dressed in old fashioned clothes
8.
It
is
obvious
that
the
picture
has
a
profound
/hidden
/
irony
who is cutting the bushes into the same shape.

6. It is obvious that… / obviously (逻辑引领
,
承上启下
)

显而易见
,
这个孩子已经因为迷上网络而忽略学习
.

It’s obvious that the child is so addicted to the
Internet that he forgets
what he should do.

解释部分

1.
This
picture
sets
us
thinking
and
we
may
gain
enlightenment
from
what the picture really means.

2.
What
the
picture
conveys
goes
far
beyond
only
a
picture
itself.
It
carries deeper meanings.

3. My understanding of the picture is that…

4. Seeing the picture, I think that…

5. We can often see this similar phenomenon in our daily life.

It is very common in our society……

This phenomenon is not unusual in our society

This reflects a common phenomenon in our society

6. The picture reminds me of the fact that…

7. The picture sets us thinking a lot.

meaning.

9. The picture arouses our interest of guessing what the artist wants to
tell us and at the same time we can learn something from it.

10. While the picture looks very funny, it really has a profound meaning
for us to take into consideration.

11. The purpose of the artist who draws the cartoon picture is clear and
instructive as well.

12.
Obviously,
we
can
learn
a
lot
from
the
cartoon
picture.
What
the
picture tries to tell us is that…

结尾部分

1. In my view, no matter where we are working, we ought to cooperate
with
our
colleagues
well.
And
only
in
this
way
can
we
create
a
harmonious working atmosphere and work more efficiently.

2. From my perspective, weak as the grass is, it can stand strongly in the
big
wind
when
the
big
tree
breaks
in
half.
In
other
words,
the
grass
appears weak, but it has a strong mind. The tree looks stronger, but it
cannot conquer difficulties and
even
gives up hope in the end. So we
can learn a lesson from the picture-
a person’s inner strength is much
powerful than physical strength.

3. We ought to hold a positive attitude towards our life. Only by this
means can we live happily and healthily.

4. The picture tells us that we ought
to help someone
in our team to
complete

by
this
means
can
our
team
work
better
and
achieve success in the end.

5. Only
when we see others’ advantages can we learn from them and
make greater progress day by day.

6. Only by choosing the most suitable methods for our studies can we
gain as much as possible in the end.

The picture arouses our interest of guessing what the artist wants to tell
us and at the same time we can learn something from it.

10. While the picture looks very funny, it really has a profound meaning
for us to take into consideration.

11. The purpose of the artist who draws the cartoon picture is clear and
instructive as well.

12.
Obviously,
we
can
learn
a
lot
from
the
cartoon
picture.
What
the
picture tries to tell us is that…

5.
书信：下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的 一封信，仔细阅读
并就信的内容以编辑的名义给此中学生回一封信。

Dear editor.


I am an active girl, and I speak and laugh loudly in
the classroom,
like
a
boy.
I
don’t
care
about
small
matters.
On
the
contrary,
my
neighbor, the girl who sits next to me, speaks quietly and dare not do
the things I often do. I can understand this.


What I
can’t stand is that she often gets angry with m
e about small
things. How can I get along with her?






































Yours
















































Sunny

注意：
1)
书信格式要规范；




2)
回信需就原信内容给出至少三条建议（如谈心，相互理
解，
参加他们的 生日等活动，
谈论共同话题，
分享快乐等等）
；





3)
字数：
120
左右。

范文：

Dear Sunny,