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读后续写之故事的逻辑性
< br>高考中读后续写的文体主要为记叙文。因此需要用到许多的细节描写以使文章生动，言
之有物。目前，很多学生读后续写得不了高分，其中一个重要原因即是细节描写的缺乏。我
< br>们应该做到兼顾概括描述和细节描述，而且要多用细节描述。所谓概括描述是指对一个事件
的总体描述，而细节描述则是对事件的具体描述，来对之前的总体描述进一步解释说明，这
样能够使得描述更加生动，有画面感。
举例：
表达人的疲累时，可用概括描述：
she felt
exhausted.
同时辅以细节描述
She felt exhausted
and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet.
如果大家注意这些细节的描述，一定会为你的记叙文续写增色！
1.
“
感
到害怕
”
的细节描述
当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。
参考答案：
the sight of the
fierce
wolf, I felt very
scared.
2.
1
）
At the sight of
the
fierce
wolf, I felt so
scared that
my throat tightened and my
knees
felt
weak.
(
嗓子发紧，膝盖发软
)
2
）
At the sight of
the
fierce
wolf,
I
froze with terror, too scared to move
an inch
.
(
吓呆了，
不敢动弹
)
3
）
At the sight of
the
fierce
wolf, I
was seized by a strong sense of horror
and my palms
were sweating.
(
被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗
)
1
2.
“感到兴奋”
的细节描写
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。
参考答案：
the host announced that she won the
prize, she felt thrilled.
2.
1) When the host
announced that she
won
the
prize,
her eyes twinkled
with
excitement.
（激动得两眼放光）
2)
When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
her
heart
was
thumping
with
excitement.
(
激动得心砰砰跳
)
3) When the host announced that she won
the prize,
a wide excitement took hold
of her.
(
兴
奋不能自已
)
3.
“感到悲伤
< br>”
的细节描述
一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。
参考答案：
1. Upon
hearing the bad news, she felt extremely
sad.
2.
1
）
Upon
hearing
the
bad
news,
her
heart
ached,
with
tears
streaming
down
her
cheeks.
(
心痛，眼泪直流
)
2
）
Upon hearing
the bad news, she,
numb with grief, had
trouble speaking.
(
悲伤到失去知
觉，不能开口说话
)
3
）
Upon hearing
the bad news, she
felt seized by a
burst of sadness
and couldn’t help
c
rying
bitterly.
(
被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣
)
2
4.
“
感到开心
”
的细节描述
当妈妈亲吻他时，小
ba
by
开心极了。
参考答案：
his mother
kissed him on the cheek, the baby was
happy/delighted/full of joy.
2.1) When his mother kissed him on the
cheek, it seemed as if the baby
were on
top of the
world.
(
非常开心
)
2) When the
mother kissed the baby on the cheek,
his face beamed and his bright smile lit
up the room.
(
眉开眼
笑；笑容照亮房间
)
3) When
the
mother
kissed
the
baby
on
the
cheek,
his
eyes
danced
with
joy
and
sweetness.
(
欢欣雀跃
)
5.
感到羞愧
的细节描述
她感到非常羞愧。
参考答案：
Key 1: She
felt ashamed.
Key 2:
1) She
felt so ashamed that she could
feel her
face
burning
.(
脸上滚烫
)
2) So ashamed was she that she could
feel the blood rush to her
face
.
(
血液涌上脸颊
)
3) So
ashamed did she feel that she
was close to
tears
.
(
快哭了
)
6.
“
感到生气
”
< br>的细节描述
3
Sheldon
感到非常生气。
参考答案：
Key 1:
Sheldon felt very angry.
Key
2:
1)
Sheldon
felt
so
angry
that
he
stormed
out
of
the
room,
slamming
the
door
furiously
behind
him
.
(
冲出房间；狠狠摔门
)
2)
Boiling with
rage
, Sheldon
shook his fist
at me
.
(
怒火中烧；挥舞拳头<
/p>
)
3)
Filled with fury
, Sheldon was
unable to utter a single
word
.
(
充满愤怒；说不出话
)
7.
“
感到绝望
”
的细节描述
Tony
感到很绝望。
参考答案：
Key 1: Tony
felt hopeless/desperate.
Key
2:
1) As
the
result
of
an
accident, Tony
was
suddenly
thrown
into
a
world
of
darkness
and
sank
into hopelessness
.
(
< br>被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望
)
2) Tony
felt left out
and was getting desperate with
loneliness.
(
感觉被遗忘、忽视
)
3) Tony's beliefs in looking forward
and seeing the positive in everything
deserted
him.
8.
“
人的行走之态
”
的细节描述
1
、踉踉跄跄
2
、悄悄地走
4