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短文改错记叙文——
< br>2020
年高考英语专题训练与练习系列
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同
桌写的以下作文。文中共有
10
处语言错
误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号
(
∧
)
,并在其下面写出该加的词。
< br>删除:把多余的词用斜线
()
划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.
只允许修改
10
处,多者
(
从第
11
处起
)
不计分。
(
一
)
During May Day, I went to the zoo to
see
lovely animals and went
to the sea world to see beautiful fishes.
That was very
much
interesting. I also went with my
parents to visit my grandparents and to eat
minority
foods.
We rode
horses
on
the
grassland
and
had
fun
local
children.
It was
very
excited.
After
that,
I
hold
a
party
and
invited
some of my best
friend
to
visit my house.
His
mother
bought a lot of tasty foods for us,
so
we also took
many
photos
on
the
party.
We
played
very
happy.
I
also
watched
lots
of
cartoon
films
at
home,
that
were
wonderful.
(
二
)
Last year my brother and I went to
Beijing
for vacation
. After
our plane
landing
, we went
to the hotel. We had
made our
reservation six
month
earlier, but the woman at the service counter said
they
had been a mistake. We
are
told that our
rooms hadn’t been reserved for that week, but for
the week after. I didn’t understand
what
this
would
happen and my credit card had already been charged
with
the
reservation. What’s
bad
, the
hotel had been
fully booked. When we
were wondering what to do
with
, the manager came out.
She apologized and gave
them
a
spare VIP room on the top floor.
(
三
)
Mary
has
been
award
the
title
of
“Star
Student
of
the
Week”
for
what
she
did
for
our
class.
In
the
hot
afternoon
of last Saturday, Mary went downtown and walked
from one store to another,
looked
for the costumes
we
would
wear
in
the
singing
contest.
While
the
rest
of
us
were
enjoying
our
leisure
times
in
comfortable
classrooms, she
spent the whole afternoon searching
for
and selecting. Finally,
she
finds
the right clothes.
Deep
moved by her
efforts, we tried our best and won
first
prize in the contest.
Mary is warm-hearted
so
cares about
the class. She deserves the
honor and we should learn from
him
.
(
四
)
Today is my father’s birthday. I got
o
n the subway train after I
have
bought the present. And
when I was on
the subway train, I
imagined the situation
which
I gave the present to my father, and my father
would be very
happily
.
On the next station, there
is
a lady who had no seat in
the front of me. She also had two heavy
bag
. After a
minute, I
stood
and offered the seat to
him
.
She was quite happy and grateful
to
my help. She
said “Thank you!’’
to me, which made me
to
feel proud.
Today is best. I felt
a
fun to help other people.
(
五
)
I
wanted to visit Hangzhou before returning
back
to London. One of my
tasks
were
to decide where
to go. I
took out my guidebook
which
there was lots of
informations
about the city’s famous sights. At that
moment,
the
attractive young lady came up to me and
introduced
himself
. She
offered to show
me the
city.
She suggested we
first
go
to
the
West
Lake
and
walk
along
the
Broken
Bridge.
I
liked
the
idea.
Therefore
,
I
was
worried
about
crossing
the
Broken
Bridge.
If
it
were
broken,
I
would fell
in
and
drown.
It
was
probable
not
a
good
idea,
so
I
politely refused her invitation,
closing
my book and walked
away.
(
六
)
I
still remember one of my
experience
of hiking on the
Mount Tai. Before the trip, I
think
it a piece of cake to
get the
top of the mountain.
However, after
reached
the
middle of it, I started to feel tired
from
. I was thirsty and
my legs
was
so
painful. Although I faced such a great difficulty,
but
I was determined to
finish the trip as I was
full
convinced that nothing is impossible.
So I must
moved
on! Finally,
I reached the top of the mountain. How happy I
was and
how
a
beautiful view I could enjoy on the mountain!
(
七
)
Today is Mother’s Day. We
wake
up very early in the
morning. My sister Jane and I planned to do
anything
for
our
mother to give
her surprise
.
First, I put a bunch of
flower
on her desk and Jane
went to the kitchen to
made
breakfast.
After
mother
got
up,
she
was
surprising
to
see
the
beautiful
flowers.
Then,
we
said
to
her,
“Happy
Mother’s Day, Mum!
Thank you
to
everything that
you have done for
me
. We
love you forever.”
Heard
this, mother
was moved to tears.
Finally, we served her breakfast. She was proud of
what her daughters had
been
done for her.
(
八
)
One day a guide dog and a blind man got
on
the
bus together. The bus
was
full people
and there
were no spare
seats. One man, however,
soon got up and left. The dog took the blind man
to the seat
and
there was
a
little space.
The dog
begin
to
push the people on each side with his nose. He
pushed and pushed
when
the
people moved down
and finally there
were
enough space for two.
The blind man then sat down and the dog got on the
seat beside the
blind man. He lay and
soon
fallen
asleep. Everyone on the bus smiled at
the dog’s
clever
in making
space for the
blind man and for
herself.
(
九
)
About 9 o
’clock
last night, I
am
doing my
homework.
Sudden
I heard my
neighbor
shout
and laughing
loudly. He
was watching
the
football game on TV. I
couldn’t go on studying and
become
impatient. I covered
my
ear
, trying to
keep the noise out,
and
it was no use. So
I had to go to my neighbor’s
house.
I knocked at
door
and said,
“Good evening, Mr Yang! Could you please turn down
your TV a bit? I am doing
my
homework.”
“Oh, I’m really
sorry to have disturbed
with
you. We’ll do
like
you say.” My
neighbor said po
litely.
“Thank you very much.” I said and went
back to continue my study.
(
十
)
A
few months after
returning
the
US from Germany, I took part in a
college course in French. Since I
have
learned
to
say
German well in Germany,
I thought it might be
interested
to begin studying
other
language. At the
first class, the teacher asked us to do
a pronunciation exercise in
it
he would say a word or
two in French, and each
student would
do
their
best to copy. When
he got to me, he kept having me
to
say more words, and I
finally asked
him why. “I find it great
fun”,
she
explained
it
. “In 25 years of teaching
at school, it’s the first time I’ve heard an
American speak French with a German
accent.”
参考答案
(
一
)
本文讲述作者如何庆祝五一假期。
1.
去掉
interesting<
/p>
前的
much
此处
very
是副词,可修饰
int
eresting
,因此
much
显然
是多余的。
2. minority→minority’s
此处指的是
“
少数民族的
”
,故要用其所有格形式。
3.
在
fun
< br>后加
with
由固定短语
have fun with
意为
“
和
……
玩得开心
”
可知,
fun
是不可数名词。
4.
excited→exciting
因
“
物
”
作主语要用
-ing
。类似的词有很多,如:
surprise,
embarrass, amaze
等。
5. hold→held
这是一篇记叙文,主体时态要用一般过去时。
6. friend→friends
因
some of
< br>后应用可数名词的复数形式,表示
“
一些好朋友
”
。
7.
His→My
根据上一句文意可知,此处理应是指
“
我的妈妈
”
。
8. so→and
< br>表
“
联合
”
关系要用并列连词
and
。
9. happy→happily
修饰动词
played
要用副词。
10. that→which
非
限制行定语从句不能用
that
引导。
(
二
)
本文讲
述去年我和哥哥去北京度假的时候在旅馆发生的一个误会,最后旅馆经理出面解决了误会。
1.
在
vacation
前加
a
由固定搭配
for a vacation
意为
“
度假
”
可知,且
vacation
是可数名词,故要加
a
。
2.
landing→landed
此处
land(
着陆
)
作谓语,根据全文
语境可知要用过去式。
3. month→months
由前面的
six
可知要用复数形式。
4. they→there
此处是
there
be
句型。
5. are→were
本文是记叙文,主体时态是一般过去时。
6. what→why
引导宾语
从句,
由语境逻辑可知,
此处应该是指
“
为什么会发生这种事
”
。
故用
why
合适。
7. with→for
由固定短语
charge sb. for sth.
意为
“
因某事向某人收费
”
可知。
8.
bad→worse
由常用连接性词语
What’s worse
< br>意为
“
更糟糕的是
”
可知。
9.
去掉
what to
do
后的
with
此处
what to do
作宾语,意
为
“
该怎么办
”
,
with
显然是多余的。
10. them→us
由文意可
知,
gave
的对象应该是我们,而不是他们。
(
三
)
本文报道了玛丽成为班级
“
每周之星
”
的事迹。
1.
award→awarded
此处显然是
< br>Mary
被授予每周之星的头衔,故要用被动。
2. In→On
在
“
具体的某一天上下午
”
要
用介词
on
。
3. looked→looking
此处
look
是非谓语,与逻辑主语
Mary
存在主动关系,故要用现在分词,作伴随状
语。
p>