-
2015
年
6
月
6
日雅思写作
(一)
题目类别
考试题目
Some people
prefer to provide help and support directly to
those in their local community who need
it.
Others,
however
prefer
to
give
money
to
national
and
international
charitable
organizations.
Discuss both
views and give your opinion.
有人认为给需要救助的
人自己的帮助更加可取,有人认为给有需求的国家或国际援助组织提供经济援助更加重要,
讨论两种观点,给出你的意见。
Although
people
in
industrialized
countries
lead
a high
standard
of
living,
it
is
undeniable
that
there
are
still
1.2
billion
people
living
below
the
poverty
line.
In
order
to
solve
poverty-
related
problems,
I
feel
that
all
kinds
of
help
should
be
encouraged and respected.
Giving a helping hand to those who are
in need in the local community seems reasonable.
It is because even in the richest
countries, there are still a lot of
people, such as disabled people and orphanages,
suffering from famine and extreme poverty.
For this reason, it is easy and
convenient for us to help our fellow citizens,
such as donating food or clothing to them, so that
we can see the result of our actions
immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult
to track expenditure of international aids,
which might result in corruption in
some cases.
Those
who
donate
money
to
domestic
and
international
charities
believe
that
the
collection
of
money
has
a
tremendous
effect
on
the
poor
countries
compared
with
other
forms
of
help.
This
is
because
few
people
are
able
to
donate
a
large
amount of money to
construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor
areas. Instead, governments and charities can
achieve
this. International
aids can also purchase vaccines which are
available in developed countries by using the
money raised
worldwide and save
millions children
’
s life.
In my view, minor proportion of donated
money and other sorts of help should be
appreciated equally as long as the money
reaches to those who need it
desperately. The government could run campaign and
encourage door-to door help. At the same
time, charitable organizations should
make every penny count for donors.(word
count
:
274)
society
提问方式
Discussion
1
201
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年
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月
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/p>
日雅思写作
Developing
countries
require
help
offered
by
international
organizations
to
ensure
healthy
and
sustainable
development. Some people think that
financial aid is important. Others believe that
practical aid and advice is
more
important. Discuss both these views and give your
own opinion.
有人认为经济援助之重要的,有
人认为实际的帮助和建议重要,你的观点是什么
?
解析题目:
2015
年
6
月
6
日雅思考题中向有需要的国家提供帮助指的是一些国家在遭
遇自然灾害,
经济危机的时候,
应该给他们提供直接的援助,例
如医疗队,救援组织或者志愿者。对立方观点经济援助指的是直接的捐助。本题为
旧题重
新,考察的是国家援助的方式。
作家立场:发达国家应该承担
对于发展中国家援助的责任。对比经济援助,直接的帮助更加可取可行。
首段
;
背景介绍
+
争议焦点
+
作家立场
二段:反方观点的展开:
三段:正方观点的展开:
It
is
not
rare
to
see
that
some
well-to-do
countries
like
to
give
financial
aid
or
other
forms
of
assistance
to
poor
ones.
Conflicting ideas clash in whether or
not economic donation is the best effective means
of assistance. Speaking for myself,
those developed countries should assume
the responsibility of helping those countries,
which are still suffering
from
the
agonies
of
popular
disease,
poor
education
and
undeveloped
trade.
However,
financial
aids
have
both
its
merits
and
demerits
,
other suitable ways of assistance
should be considered.
Indeed,
some
arguments
could
be
explored
to
justify
that
those
well-off
countries
ought
to
give
a
financial
aid
to
the
poverty-stricken
nations
’
charities. For a start, it is out of
the reason of humanism and could benefit the
straitened nations
directly.
More
precisely,
financial
beneficence
from
the
developed
countries
could
help
to
accelerate
the
construction
of
infrastructure and establishing more
houses. Also, when some rich countries donate
large sums of money to those needy
countries, more job opportunities could
be created and thus living standards of the poor
countries could be enhanced.
Nonetheless, we should be alert to the
possible risks of economic assistance. For one
thing, it might make needy countries
become over-dependent on the donors.
For another, international aid might bright about
possible political interference and
economic
exploitation.
Apart
from
financial
aids,
there
are
still
many
other
options
available
to
assist
the
undeveloped
nations. One way
is by opening up trade barriers, which enables the
poor countries to sell their goods. Another way is
to
forgive economic debts so that the
self-supporting ability of the poor nations could
be promoted. Eventually, the teams of
volunteer
teachers
and
doctors
from
rich
countries
could
be
dispatched
to
the
impoverished
countries
to
take
the
responsibilities of educational and
medical assistance.
2
解析:
It is not rare to see
that
??
这一点很常见
解析:
Conflicting ideas clash
in whether or not
关于是否应该??,人们持有不同意见
解析:
Financial aids have both
its merits and demerits
经济援助有利有弊
解析:
Indeed, some arguments
could be explored to justify that
的确,
p>
为证明??是合理的,
我们是可以找到一些理由
的
解析:??
could
benefit the straitened nations directly
v
可以使贫困国家直接受益
解析:
Living standards of the
poor countries could be enhanced
贫困国家的生活水平可以被提高
解析:
It might make needy
countries become over-dependent on the donors.
经济援助也许会使贫困国家对于援助国更
加依赖
解析:
International aid might
bright about possible political interference and
economic exploitation.
国际援助也许会带来
政治干预和经济掠夺
解析:
open up trade barriers
v
开发贸易壁垒
解析:
forgive economic debts
v
免除经济债务
解析:
The teams of volunteer
teachers and doctors from rich countries could be
dispatched to the impoverished countries
可以向贫困国家派驻教师和医生。
3
201
5
年
5
月
30
日雅思写作(二)
题目类别
考试题目
全球化,旅行
提问方式
Report
In some countries, people believe that
international tourism is a bad thing for their
country. What are the
reasons for this? How to change their
views.
范文主体思路分析:原因一:外来游客的行为会激怒当地人,
因为他们不遵守当地的习俗
对策一:政府可以在当地做引导,设置文化小贴士
原因二:外来游客的旅行本身也会带来他们的国家文化特征,对于种族意识的强烈的国家是一种伤害
对策二:政府可以引导当地人改变想法,对这种行为持宽容态
度。旅行更多的只是文化交流
Travelling
abroad
has
become
a
new
lifestyle
nowadays.
However,
complaints
about
the
potential
negative
effects
of
international travel have
been sparked among the public in recent years.
This essay will outline two main reasons for these
complaints and provide certain measures
to change the opinion.
First
of
all,
it
is
a
widespread
phenomenon
that
foreign
travellers
might
repel
the
local
community
because
of
their
inappropriate
languages
and
behaviour
in
some
resorts.
Due
to
the
cultural
differences,
visitors
’
behavior
may
break
traditional rules in
travel destinations sometimes. For example, a
visitor will annoy an Indian when he passes food
by his
left hand. For this reason, the
local government can take actions to provide more
specific travelling tips in popular scene
spots for foreign travellers.
In addition, more and more
transnational travels will cause damage to the
unique nature of a culture. Foreign visitors will
bring not only tangible matters like
food and clothes but also something intangible,
such as their festivals or customs. In
other words, these visitors are
assimilating their country
’
s
culture while they are travelling abroad, which
will be bound to
cause antipathy in
racist society. Germany is a case in point. For
this reason, the government can encourage locals
to hold a
tolerant attitude toward
foreign arrivals as they have no common knowledge
of local conventions in most times. Travelling
is for cultural communication instead
of invasion.
In
conclusion,
breaking
conventions
and
cultural
uniqueness
are
the
two
main
factors
leading
to
the
bias
regarding
international tourism. Both governments
and individuals should make an effort to change
this phenomenon.
4
201
5
年
5
月
30
日雅思写作
Some people
believe that international tourism have harmful
effects. Why do they think so? How to
change their views?
有人认为,国际游的影响是有害的,他们为何持有这种观点,如何改变他们的的观点
?
点评:题目指令为分析原因和解决问题。本文为旧题改写,需要完成的任务是分
析国家发展旅游业带来的弊端以及
提出解决策略,帮助人们改变对于旅游业的消极态度。
全文布局图:
首段:背景介绍
+
作家立场
二段:原因的展开:谈及为何一些人对于旅游业持有消极的的态度
三段:策略的展开:谈及国际
旅游业的利好去说服一些人对于旅游业的消极态度
尾段:作家立场:支持旅游业,总结旅游业对于游客和相关国
家的利好。
首段:背景介绍
+
写作目的
International
tourism
has
been
encouraged
in
many
nations
around
the
globe
because
it
produces
positive
effects
on
economic growth and local government.
However
,
some problem
inevitably ensue
,
which
accounts for why some people
hold
negative
attitudes
toward
international
tourism.
This
essay
aims
to
explore
the
reasons
why
some
people
are
not
supportive of tourism and then present
some recommendations.
二段:
原因的展开:
(
游客为何对于旅游业持有消极的态度
)
The reasons why some
people hold indifferent attitudes toward
international tourism are manifold. Here, some of
them will
be
explored.
First,
a
large
flowing
population
many
cause
serious
destruction
of
the
natural
environment
in
those
areas
owing
rich
tourism
resources.
Further,
some
visitors
unconscious
behaviors
might
be
considered
as
disrespectable
and
unfriendly due to the cultural
differences. For
instance
,
questions about
religious beliefs
,
marriage
,
personal
income are
considered as taboo for some
westerners. Eventually, even though sightseers
might make the locals
’
purse heavy, they, at
the
same time, interfere with the peaceful current
life in some areas
5
1.
It produces positive effects on economic growth
and local government
国际旅游对经济发展和地方政府有积极作用
2.
However
,
some
problem
inevitably
ensue
,
which
accounts
for
why
some
people
hold
negative
attitude
towards
international touris
m.
然而,
一些问题不可避免地随着发生,
这就解释了为何一些人对于国际旅游业持有消极的态度。
3.
This
essay
aims
to
explore
the
reasons
why
some
people
are
not
supportive
of
??
and
then
present
some
recommendations.
本文的写作目的是探究下
为何一些人不支持??,再提出相关的建议。
4. A large flowing
population many cause serious destruction of the
natural environment in those areas owing rich
tourism
resources.
大批游客的涌入会对那
些拥有旅游资源地区的自然环境造成严重的破坏
5. Some
visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered
as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the
cultural differences.
由于文化的差异,一些游客的行为也许
会认作是不值得尊敬的,不够友善的。
6. For
instance
,
questions about
religious beliefs
,
marriage
,
personal
income are considered as taboo for some
westerners.
例如,有些西方人很忌讳别人打听他们的宗教信仰,婚姻状况
,个人收入。
7. Even though sightseers
might make the locals
’
purse heavy, they, at the same time,
interfere with the peaceful current
life in some areas.
尽管游客会增加地
方人的收入,同时,他们也许会打扰一些地区一向平静的生活。
6
p>
2015
年
5
月<
/p>
16
日雅思写作(三)
To improve the quality of education,
people think that we should encourage our students
题目
to evaluate
and criticise their teachers. Others believe that
it will result in a loss of respect
and
discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views
and give your own opinion.
话题
Nowadays, whether evaluating and
criticising teachers should be supported in the
classroom has become a controversial
issue. From my perspective, evaluation
and criticism of teachers are necessary for the
improvement of education if they are
objective and reasonable.
On the one hand, proposing changes to
teachers
’
lesson
content contributes to the improvement of teaching
quality. Usually,
it
is
difficult
for
teachers
to
realise
the
mistakes
and
slips
in
their
teaching
unless
students
remind
them.
Additionally,
teachers may not clearly know what
students have known and want to know when planning
their lessons. If students can put
forward their ideas and suggestions
towards the lesson, it will be of great help for
teachers to upgrade the teaching projects.
Moreover, trying to evaluate
teachers
’
lesson
is particularly beneficial for
students
’
academic and career development in
the future. The modern education
emphasises criticism and innovation. Undoubtedly,
it is an effective way for students to
debate or discuss with teachers.
On
the other hand, the disruptive students will
probably disturb the class and negatively affect
both teaching and learning
outcomes.
When students voice their opinions in the
classroom, it will be hard to maintain the order
and discipline and the
teachers may
feel disrespected. Also, students will suffer a
loss in terms of knowledge and other learning
content. This is
because teachers
always devote much to delivering knowledge and
explaining theories. If they are disrupted, the
teaching
plan may not be able to be
fulfilled. As a result, both teachers and students
have to face a loss in the quality of education.
To
sum up, it can be recommended that students
evaluate and criticise teachers in the classroom
on the premise that they
have
decent
manners
without
disturbing
the
learning
atmosphere.
Only
in
this
way
will
teachers
and
students
achieve
a
win-win outcome in
education.
教育
题型
双边讨论
7
2015
年
5
月
16
日雅思写作
< br>
Some
people
think
that
in
order
to
improve
the
quality
of
education,
schools
should
encourage
students
to
evaluate and criticize their teachers.
Other people, however, feel that will result in a
loss of respect and discipline
in the
classroom. Discuss both sides and give your own
opinion.
点评:两种观点讨论,考察教育方式。经典题目,原题重现。
作家立场:学生评价老师是一场教育的革命,利大于弊。
支持学生评价老师的理由:
1.
学
生反馈是对老师的教学评估,
是检验教学的重要标准。
学生评价
老师使教育者可以及时地了解学生的需求,
进而及时地调整和改善教学方法。同时,学生
的鼓励可激发老师的教学热情,可以想象,学生的点赞会激励老师们
专业上更加优秀。<
/p>
2. <
/p>
从学生成长角度而言,鼓励学生评价老师也有利好。换言之,这可以培养成学生们的批判思
维,鼓励学生们
的独立表达。
3.
对于校方面而言,
周期性地鼓励学生评估老师的教学可以淘汰那些不思进取,
不受欢迎的教育
者。
老师们有
了危机意识,才会不断地精进教学。
反对学习评价老师的理由:
1.
学生没有成熟到可以对老师和
他们的教学作出理性的判断的程度。
同时,
有些学生可能会因为
曾经被老师批
评过对老师做出不负责任的评价。
2.
鼓励学生评价老师,学生们可能会变得傲慢自大和目无尊长。
首段:背景介绍
+
争议焦点
+
作家立场
二段:
正方观点展开:支持学生评价老师的理由
三段:反方观点展开:反对学生评价老师的理由
尾段:再次亮明观点
+
(
总结理由
)
8
Traditionally,
to
respect
educators
and
value
education
is
considered
as
a
kind
of
virtue
of
the
students,
however,
many
educationalists currently encourage
learners to evaluate and criticize their teachers.
This essay aims to prove that students
should be allowed and motivated to
comment on their teachers
’
performance.
Indeed, it is commendable for students
to make comments on their
teachers
’
performance. Firstly, it will exert a
beneficial
influence on enhancing the
quality of teaching by eliminating those less
competent and less popular teachers. Meanwhile,
the encouragement from students will
greatly conduce to teachers
’
passion. Hence, the desire to gain the
praise of students
could stimulate
teachers
’
motivation to excel professionally.
Secondly, it is easy for teachers to timely
receive students
’
feedback so that they could adjust and
optimize their teaching methods. Lastly, it can
perfect the quality of education and
pave a new way for achieving equality
between teachers and students.
Although the practice of evaluation of
teachers is embraced by many people, still others
remain suspicious of it merits. First,
students may be not mature enough to
make sound judgment upon their
teachers
’
academic performance. Conversely, some
negative comments might be randomly
made only because teachers
’
hairstyle, appearance or clothes are
not their favorite.
Further, some
students are more likely to make irresponsible
comments on their teachers simply because they are
blamed by
their
teachers,
therefore,
teachers
will
be
hurt
innocently.
Eventually,
youngsters
may
become
more
disrespectful
and
arrogant if they are encouraged to
criticize and evaluate their teachers.
In
closing
,
evaluation
of
the
teachers
by
high
school
students,
whatever
its
merits
and
demerits
would
amount
to
a
revolution in educational practice.
However, the merits of this practice outweigh its
downsides.
解析:
excel
professionally v
教学上变得更加精通
解析:
optimize their teaching
method v
改善他们的教学方法
解析:
make sound judgment upon
sth
对于??做出理性判断
解析:
may become more
disrespectful and arrogant
也许会变得目无尊长和傲慢自大
解析:
amount to a revolution in
educational practice
v
等同于教育的革命
解析:
the merits of this
practice outweigh its downsides
这种做法的利大于弊
9
学生评价老师基础语料库:
1. teachers = educators=
instructors n
老师
2. students = learners
n
学生
3. evaluate and criticize teachers
v
评价和批评老师
4. inspire sb to do sth =
motivate sb to do sth = encourage sb to do sth v
鼓励某人做
??
5. comment on sth = make comment on
v
对??做出评论
6. make judgment on
??
v
对于??
做出判断
7. the academic performance of
educators n
教育者的学术表现
8. the
evaluation of the performance of teachers
n
对于老师的教学评估
9. timely feedback from
students n
来自学生们的及时反馈
10. make
evaluation on teachers
’
performance periodically v
周期性地对于老师的教学做出评估
学生评价老师经典句式:
1. Students ought to be
encouraged to evaluate their
teachers
’
performance.
我们应该鼓励学生评价老师的教学表现。
2. Traditionally, to
respect educators and value
education
,
as for
students
,
is
considered as a kind of virtue, however,
many educationalists now encourage
learners to evaluate and criticize their teachers.
传统上,
尊师重教被当做学生的一种
美
德,但是,现在很多教育家鼓励学生们评价和批评老师。
3.
Evaluation of educators by students, whatever its
merits and demerits, would amount to a progress in
educational practice.
学生评价老师的教学,无论利弊,都是教育实践的进步。
解析:
amount to = equal to
v
等同于??
4.
Evaluation from students deserves more praises.
来自学生的评价更加值得赞美。
5.
It
will
have
a
positive
impact
on
enhancing
the
quality
of
teaching
by
eliminating
those
incompetent
or
unpopular
teachers.
< br>这可以淘汰不合格以及不受欢迎的老师,因此,有利于教学的改善。
解析:
incompetent adj
没有能力的
6. The
encouragement from students will greatly spur
teachers
’
passion
of teaching. Hence, the desire to gain more
praises
from students could greatly
stimulate teachers
’
motivation to excel professionally.
学生的鼓励激发老师的教学热情,
因
此,获得
学生的点赞激励老师专业上更加优秀。
解析:
spur
v
鞭策
解析:
to excel professionally
v
专业上更加优秀
7. It is
easy for teachers to timely receive
students
’
feedback so that they could adjust and
optimize their teaching methods.
老师们可以及
时地获得学生的反馈,因此,他们可以及时地调整和改善教学方法。
解析:
teaching methods =
teaching methodologies n
教学方法
解析:
better = perfect =
optimize v
完善
8.
Hence
,
timely feedback from
students is beneficial to the perfection of
education and the harmonious relationship of two
10
parties.
因此,来自学生们的及时反馈有助于教学的
完善以及师生关系的和谐。
9. Teachers are
in the best position to evaluate the performance
of their colleagues.
最好由老师来评价他们同事的教学表
p>
现。
10. Encouraging
comments from students can give a boost to
educators
’
performance.
学生们令人鼓舞的评价可帮助教<
/p>
育者表现优异。
11.
Teachers can make active adjustment of their
teaching.
老师们可以对于教学做出积极的调整。
12. Evaluation from students
can
,
in a larger
extent
,
contribute to the mutual understanding
between teachers and students.
在更大程度上
,
来自学生的评估可以有助于师生之间的互相理解。
13. I am not willing to deny the
benefits brought about by co-
workers
’
remarks
on teachers
’
performance.
我不想否认
由同事评价老师带来的利好。
14. Teachers might provide more
professional suggestions on how to better the
quality of education
,
after
all
,
most
teachers
have accumulated a pool of teaching experiences
and thus clearly know how to effectively establish
a harmonious
teacher-student
relationship.
老师们也许会对于如何提高教学提出更加专业的建议,毕
竟,大多数老师积累了丰富的
教学经验也了解如何去和学生们建立和谐的师生关系。
p>
15.
For example
,
an experienced
teacher can help green hand to manage their class
activities effectively.
例如,
一个
经
验丰富的老师可以帮助新教师学习如何有效地管理课堂。
16. Some proble
ms
,
however
,
might inevitably ensue. Some teachers may
give negative comments on their co-workers
simply because they have career
competition with them.
然而,有些问题不可避免,有些老师
可能会因为事业方面的竞
争对同事做出负面的评价。
解析:
Some problems
,
however
,
might
inevitably ensue
一些问题不可避免地发生
17. Students
should be allowed and encouraged to make comments
on their teachers
’
performance
我们应该允许和
鼓励学生们对于老
师的教学做出评估。
18. It can perfect the quality of
education and pave a new way for achieving
equality between teachers and students.
这可以提高教学质量,同时,为实现师生的平等开辟了一条新的道路。
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2015
年
5
月
9
日雅思写作(四)
题目类别
Environment
提问方式
Discussion
考试题目
Developments of technology are causing
environmental problems. Some people think the
solution is that
everyone
accepts
a
simpler
life,
while
others
believe
that
technology
can
solve
these
problems.
Discuss
both views and give your opinion.
分析:
题目难在拓展,容易跑题。不需要提解决方法,需要你解释个人为何能解决环境问题,以
及科技如何解
决环境问题。
There is no doubt that modern
technology has caused a variety of environmental
issues, both in cities and towns. Ironically,
I feel that technology can address some
of these problems but at the same time, personal
effort is a must.
Theoretically, addressing
some environmental issues by adopting simple
lifestyles is
sensible. According to
the statistics,
during
the
last
100
years,
the
earth's
surface
temperature
has
risen
dramatically
because
of
human
activities.
Therefore,
some people feel that the changes in
our lifestyles can reverse this worrying trend.
For example, the growing number of
vehicles on the road emits a large
quantity of green house gases, such as carbon
dioxide, which will worsen the air quality.
If
residents
chose
other
modes
of
transport,
like
buses
or
subways,
this
serious
condition
would
be
alleviated
to
a
large
extent.
However,
in
my
opinion,
this
policy
would
be
very
unpopular
with
some
people,
especially
those
living
in
the
suburb, who do need to travel on roads.
While it is undeniable that
an individual's behaviour has a profound effect on
the environment, other people argue that the
improvement in technology can tackle
some problems in turn. For example, the technology
today is available to produce
electric
cars
that
would
be
both
quieter
and
cleaner
to
use.
Persuading
manufacturers
and
travellers
to
adopt
this
new
technology
would
be
a
more
effective
strategy
for
improving
air
quality
own
view
is
that
apart
from
individual
effort
and
environmental
friendly
technologies,
we
need
to
do
more,
such
as
introducing
related
laws
and
regulations. Environmental problems are
so complex that each effort should be combined
together to win the battle.
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15
年
5
月
9
日雅思写作
环保类:
Development in
technology leads to environmental problems and
some people think that the solution to
these problems is for everyone to lead
a simpler way of life, while others say that
technology can solve these
problems.
Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.
高科技发展导致环境污染,保护环
境是要人们过简单生活还是依赖科技
?
环保话题基本表达法:
1. environmental protection
= environmental preservation = environmental
conservation = greenism
n
环境保护
解析:
greenism n. <
/p>
绿色保护
;
环境保护
2.
environmentally friendly = eco-friendly adj
环保的??
3. environmental protection
awareness n
环保意识
4. ruin / damage / hurt the
environment v
破坏环境
5. raise /
enhance / boost environmental protection awareness
amongst the general public v
提高全民环保意识
词汇:
amongst the
general public
在公众之间
6.
environmental pollution = environmental
contamination
环境污染
环境恶化的危害和原因分析:
1. traffic congestion =
traffic jam n
交通拥堵
2. over-industrialization
n
过度工业化
3. deforestation n
森林砍伐
4. air and noise contamination /
pollution n
空气和噪音污染
5. the
deterioration of air quality n
日益恶化的空气质量
词汇:
deteriorate v
使得恶化
6. threaten public health and safety
v
威胁公共健康与安全
环境污染解决途径:
1. to utilize
the natural resources properly
v
合理利用自然资源
2. adopt environmentally
friendly policy v
采取环保政策
3. exploit and
popularize the use of eco-friendly power source v
研发和推广环保能源
词汇:
exploit v
开发
;
利用
;
剥削
4. Carrying out environmental publicity
and education to enhance the whole nation's
awareness of the environment.
开
< br>展环境宣传教育,提高全民族的环境意识
5.
To
produce
and
popularize
low-carbon
and
eco-friendly
vehicles
aiming
to
reduce
contamination
caused
by
the
emission
of exhaust gas.
生产和普及环保汽车,减少由于尾气释放带来的污染。
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作家立场:环保即要依赖高科技,还应该提倡人们过简单生活。
首段:背景介绍
+
争议焦点
+
作家立场
二段:我的口吻支持正方观点:
三段:我的口吻支持反方观点:
尾段:再次亮明观点:
Ironically, we, human
beings
,
are now
facing with a series of environment-related issues
such as global warming or the
depletion
of resources. People differ greatly in their views
as to how to protect the environment, to resort to
the high-tech or
to opt for a simpler
lifestyle. To voice my opinion, the perfect
combination of the two approaches will be the
ideal way to
resolve environment-
related problems.
Indeed,
plenty
of
evidence
could
be
explored
to
justify
that
it
works
to
safeguard
our
surroundings
via
high-tech.
First,
efforts should be made to explore and
popularize new environmentally friendly energy
sources to substitute those highly
polluted fossil fuels. To illustrate,
it is highly recommended to produce and popularize
low-carbon and eco-friendly vehicles
aiming to reduce contamination caused
by the emission of exhaust gas. The use of fuel-
cell-driven cars will pose less threat
to the environment. Also, natural
resources such as solar energy, sea energy, wind
energy and tidal power could and should
be applied to our normal life and
production. Eventually, the effective recycle of
resources could be realized if we can rely
on the high-tech to classify and handle
various rubbishes.
Yet,
in
addition
to
relying
on
high-
tech,
it
is
still
feasible
to
call
on
people
to
live
a
simple
and
eco-friendly
life.
First,
environmental pollution will be eased
if less high-tech products are utilized in our
life. For example, the public should be
advocated to avoid driving private cars
and take public transit, in this sense, it will
diminish the waste of natural resources
and
minimize
the
use
of
fossil
fuels.
Further,
people
’
s
environmental
protection
awareness
should
be
strengthened. To
foster
water-wise
lifestyle,
to
economize
electricity
and
to
diminish
the
use
of
plastic
bags
could
all
serve
as
perfect
examples. Last, people can also be
encouraged to visit the beautiful places that are
close to home, rather than traveling for
long distance on holidays.
Overall, I re-affirm my conviction that
both living a simple life and relying on high-tech
could play an indispensable part in
the
process of environmental preservation. Therefore,
the combination of both methods is highly
recommended.
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<
/p>
2015
年
4
月
30
日雅思写作(五)
In some countries, more and more adults
are continuing to live with their parents even
after they have
题目
completed education and found jobs. Do
the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
话题
社会类
题型
双边讨论
分析:新题,但是题目中涉及的话题的确是我们这个社会中真实存在的问题,所以大家在生活中还是要养成思考<
/p>
的习惯。可以平时多看一些评论类的报刊杂志,也可以针对感兴趣的事情用英语来阐述一下
自己的观点。
Nowadays, an
increasing number of adults choose to live with
their parents after finishing their academic tasks
and finding
jobs.
The
overall
effect
of
this
phenomenon
is
negative,
although
the
younger
generation
can
get
much
help
from
their
parents.
It is
widely acknowledged that living with parents
contributes to relieve young
adults
’
strains
and stresses. They bear great
pressure
from their work and study, and are not willing to
adapt to an independent life. The parents,
especially the retired
adults, are
always ready to
prepare everything for
their children, helping them to concentrate on
their work. In addition,
young
people
can
learn
much
experience
from
their
parents
who
are
more
experienced
in
dealing
with
interpersonal
relationships
and career development. As a new comer in the
working arena, the young generation are too
na?
ve to manage
their
various challenges. Undoubtedly, it is of great
value for them to live with their parents.
On the other hand,
continuing to live with parents will unavoidably
cause some conflicts. Growing up in two different
times,
the views and lifestyles between
these two generations are less likely to be the
same. With the passage of time, the family
bond will be alienated.
What
’
s worse, if the adults
lead a life with parents for a long time, they are
particularly likely to
have a
sentimental attachment to their parents
excessively. It will be increasingly difficult for
them to start a new life when
their
parents cannot provide help any longer. It is
detrimental for forming a new family in the
future.
When
considering
the
effects
of
living
with
parents
on
young
generation,
we
can
conclude
that
this
lifestyle
is
not
universally suitable for every
individual. As to most young people, they had
better to live independently in order to keep a
harmonious relation with parents and a
balance between work and life.
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