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2021年2月26日发(作者:stagefright)


【英语】中考英语书面表达知识点总结经典




一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)



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书面表达




小手拉大手


,


同做文明人。



自创建文明城市文明乡村以来


,


淄博人民万众一心


,




志成城


,



人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生


,


我们 也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所



给要点

< br>,



一篇


100


词左右的英语短文。



1.


种植花草树木;



2.


遵守交通规则;



3.


公共场合不大声喧哗;



4.


公交车上主动给有需要的人让座;(自主发挥


,


至少两点)



参考词汇


: civilized


文明的


make joint efforts


共同努力


obey


遵守






【答案】


Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint


efforts


(共同努力)


. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.



As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For



e


xample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’


safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition


(此外)


, we no longer talk


or laugh loudly in 's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in


need.



Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering


anywhere. Furthermore


(而且)


, we are accustomed to


(习惯于)


queuing up


(排队)


for a


ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and


Zibo city more civilized



【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰 ,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短


语,例如


mak e joint efforts



as junior students



for example



obey the traffic rules



run red


light



in addition



no longer



in public



and so on



what's more



on a bus



in need



be


accustomed to



queue up



all in all


等。而


to protect our environment, we plant flowers and


trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all,


we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more c ivilized.


等插入语


的运用,丰富了短文内容,使语言 表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。



点睛:书面表达题既不是汉 译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容


经整理后展开思维,考查运 用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要


点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的 单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构


以便得到较高的分数。





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亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开,你的印度朋友


Danny


收 看了大会相关报道,对华


夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李 华,请根据以下内容提示


用英语写一封回信给


Danny




要点



历史文化



文明行为



身边文明



内容



历史悠久,文化各异;传统节日,多彩习俗(举一例)



相互尊重,以礼相待;互学共鉴,共同成长(或自拟)



校园文明(自拟一点)




注意:


1.


词数

90


词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。



2.


回复必须包括所以要点,可是当发挥,是短文连贯,通顺。



3.


文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。




参考词汇


: civilized


文明的



Dear Danny,



I’m gla


d to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization


(文明)


of China, I would


like to share something with you.











I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward


to hear from you soon.



All the best,



Li Hua



【答案】


Dear Danny,



I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization


(文明)


of China, I would


like to share something with you.



Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of


56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional


festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are


also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here ar


e the customs of eating Zongzi and


racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.



China is a nation of etiquette


(礼仪)


. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other.


We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public


environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not


allowed there.



I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward


to hearing from you soon.



All the best.



Li Hua



【解析】



【分析】



本文要求给你的印度朋友< /p>


Danny


写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。



【详解】



文章需要介绍下中国的文化 。表格中列举了三个要点,写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多


多积累句型、短语。细心检 查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以





为主,首先要认真读


懂图表中的要求,对所给信息加以分析 、推断、筛选、概括,去粗取精;在写作时目的要


明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。



【点睛】



写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如


but, so, then


等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有:


Chinese civilization is one of the


oldest and longest civilizations in the world


.中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。


C hina is a nation of etiquette


(礼仪),中国是一个礼仪之邦。




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假如你是李华


,


你的美国笔友


Bill


给你发了一封电子邮件


,


想了解你的梦想职业。请认


真阅读下面的邮件


,


根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。



To: lihua@ china. com



From: bill006@ america. com



Subject: Your dream job



Dear Li Hua,



Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.



Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?




What is your dream job?




Why do you like the job?




Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?




What do you need to do for your dream job?



Drop a few lines if you have time.



Best wishes,



Bill





要求


:1.


参考提示语


,


可适当发挥;



2.


语句通顺


,


意思连贯


,


书写工整;



3.


文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);



4.


词数


:


不少于


70


词(开头已给出


,


但不计入总词数)。



Dear Bill,



Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________



_______ __________________________________________________ ______________________


_________________ __________________________________________________ ____________


___________________________ __________________________________________________ __


_____________________________________ __________________________________________

< br>_______________________________________________ ________________________________



Yours,



Li Hua



【答案】例文


Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my


dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve


problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's


environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To


realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and


enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?



Tell me about your ideal job!



Yours,



Li Hua



【解析】



【分析】



本题通过描写梦想中的职业 ,让学生对未来有憧憬,给一部分提示词,让学生有话可说。



【详解】



首先回答职业是教师。然后 解释为什么喜欢该工作,因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子


们,并且喜欢学校的环境。为 了实现自己的梦想,正在为此作出努力。最后向


Bill


提出问


题,结束全文。



【点睛】



本文首先开篇功能句


Thank you for your letter.


然后开始主要内容,运用多种连接词,比如


be cause



Besides



To realize my dream,


等使文章连贯性强,长 短句结合,读起来朗朗上


口,不失为一篇佳作。




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临近毕 业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是


Moonlight





的组长,请根据下面表格中的信息和提示,为你的组员


Tommy


进行综合素质的评价,


写一



份素质报告.



Name



Characteristics



Hobbies



Honour



Problems



Your


Tommy



聪明、大方(各举一例)



喜欢看书,认为看书有很多好处(请列举


2


个好处)



他在家帮助做家务。在学校 和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则


(举



一例)。今年,学校授予了他优秀学生奖(


Award for Best Student




面临考试,遭受压力痛苦,他没有充足的睡眠.



(根据实际情况提


2


点建议)




suggestions




要求:


1


、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;


2


、要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当

发挥;


3


、词数:


100


词左右;


4


、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名 等



Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.



【答案】


Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his


lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he


thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a


good effect on children


’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school,


he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses


the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.


However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.



I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his


time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.



【解析】



这篇作文要求我们按照表格 里的内容介绍一下


Tommy


的情况,为


Tommy


写一篇综合素质


的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细 的关于


Tommy


各方面的内容,我们需要用正确的英语把


这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多,写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇


作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给


Tommy


提一些建议,这一部分应该用第一人


称。同时注意表达的准确性,尤其是表格 中的第五项和第六项内容。



【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的 范文。这篇作文内容完整,包含了表格中的所有内容,


没有遗漏要点。表达准确,注意了 被动形式的使用,如


He was rewarded by our school this


year.


。写作时注意了条理性,使文章具有层次 感,条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结


合,并恰当的使用了一些连词,使文章表达的连 贯。如


He is always ready to help others.



He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.



He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.


等。





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书面表达



初中即将毕业,同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题,老师要求你在英语课上做一个以


“Less


Pressure Makes Life Bett er”


为题的报告,谈谈你的做法,与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求

< br>写一份发言稿,内容包括:



1.


普遍存在的压力:同学关系;考试



2.


我过去的压力:父母的期望;学习



3.


我成功缓解压力的办法及效果;


……



要求:


1.


文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;



2.


词数


80


左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。



Less Pressure Makes Better Life



Hello, everyone!



Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much


pressure. _____



______________________ __________________________________________________ _______


_____________



_____________________________________________ __________________________________


_____ ________



___________________ __________________________________________________ __________


_____________



___________________________________________ ____________________________________


___ __________



_________________ __________________________________________________ ____________


_____________



_________________________________________ ______________________________________


_ ____________



【答案】


Hello, my classmates!



Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much


pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about


their exams too much.



I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They


always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.



I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In


this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.



Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.



【解析】



【详解】



这篇作文要求我们针对现在 同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象,以


Less Pressure Makes Life


Better


为题,谈谈自己的看法,和同学们分享 一下自己的经验。审题可知,文章中应主要


包括以下几个内容:首先介绍同学们普遍感到 压力这种现象;然后讲述自己过去曾面对的


压力;最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目 中只给出了大概的提纲,其中具体的内容应


由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充,并用正确的 英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和


体会出发,选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。 文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时,注意


根据表达的需要使用正确的时态,并变化谓语 动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构


为主,这样的句式表达简洁、明了,易于掌握 。但为提升作文档次,应穿插使用并列句和


复合句,或使用一些复杂结构,如非谓语动词 、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成


分,使文意连贯。



【点睛】



这是一篇优秀的作文,短文 作者根据题目要求,谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现


象的看法,并分享了自己的 经历。短文有如下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含了题目


中要求的所有信息,且层次 清晰,文章分成了四段,每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短


文中使用了正确的时态和人 称,文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时,谓语动词形式


准确。句式结构以简单句为 主,叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构,如宾

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