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【英语】中考英语书面表达知识点总结经典
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1
.
书面表达
“
小手拉大手
,
同做文明人。
”
自创建文明城市文明乡村以来
,
淄博人民万众一心
,
众
p>
志成城
,
让
p>
人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生
,
我们
也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所
给要点
< br>,
写
一篇
100
词左右的英语短文。
1.
种植花草树木;
2.
遵守交通规则;
3.
公共场合不大声喧哗;
4.
公交车上主动给有需要的人让座;(自主发挥
,
至少两点)
参考词汇
: civilized
文明的
make joint efforts
共同努力
obey
遵守
【答案】
Since
creating the civilized city and countryside, all
the people in Zibo have made joint
efforts
(共同努力)
.
Their good behavior can be seen
everywhere.
As junior
students, we have also made some contributions to
the civilized Zibo. For
e
xample, to protect our
environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for
our own and others’
safety, we obey the
traffic rules and never run red light. In
addition
(此外)
, we no longer
talk
or laugh loudly in 's more, when
on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people
in
need.
Besides,
we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish
into a dustbin, never littering
anywhere.
Furthermore
(而且)
, we are
accustomed to
(习惯于)
queuing
up
(排队)
for a
ticket or something else. All in all,
we will try our best to do what we can to make
ourselves and
Zibo city more
civilized
【解析】亮点说明:这篇习作的层次清晰
,内容饱满,表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短
语,例如
mak
e joint efforts
,
as junior
students
,
for
example
,
obey the traffic
rules
,
run red
light
,
in
addition
,
no
longer
,
in
public
,
and so
on
,
what's
more
,
on a
bus
,
in
need
,
be
accustomed
to
,
queue
up
,
all in
all
等。而
to protect our
environment, we plant flowers and
trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we
actively give our seats to the people in need./
All in all,
we will try our best to do
what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more c
ivilized.
等插入语
的运用,丰富了短文内容,使语言
表达多样化,是本文的最大亮点。
点睛:书面表达题既不是汉
译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容
经整理后展开思维,考查运
用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要
点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的
单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构
以便得到较高的分数。
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亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开,你的印度朋友
Danny
收
看了大会相关报道,对华
夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣,来信向你了解中国文化。假设你是李
华,请根据以下内容提示
用英语写一封回信给
Danny
。
要点
历史文化
文明行为
身边文明
内容
历史悠久,文化各异;传统节日,多彩习俗(举一例)
相互尊重,以礼相待;互学共鉴,共同成长(或自拟)
校园文明(自拟一点)
注意:
1.
词数
90
词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
2.
回复必须包括所以要点,可是当发挥,是短文连贯,通顺。
3.
文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇
:
civilized
文明的
Dear Danny,
I’m
gla
d to receive your letter. Since you
are interested in
civilization
(文明)
of China, I
would
like to share something with
you.
I hope you can come to
China someday to experience the ancient culture of
China. Look forward
to hear from you
soon.
All the
best,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since
you are interested in
civilization
(文明)
of China, I
would
like to share something with
you.
Chinese civilization is
one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the
world. China is a country of
56
nationalities. Different nations have difficult
cultures. In my country, we have many traditional
festivals, such as, the Spring
Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat
Festival . They are
also called “three
major Chinese holidays” in China. Here
ar
e the customs of eating Zongzi and
racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat
Festival.
China is a nation
of etiquette
(礼仪)
. Chinese
people can respect, trust and help each other.
We all learn and grow together.
Everyone in my school should protect the whole
public
environment. Climbing the trees,
picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random
are not
allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to
experience the ancient culture of China. Look
forward
to hearing from you
soon.
All the
best.
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友<
/p>
Danny
写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。
【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化
。表格中列举了三个要点,写作时注意不要漏写。平时注意多
多积累句型、短语。细心检
查避免疏漏。以图表展示的作文要以
“
读
”
为主,首先要认真读
懂图表中的要求,对所给信息加以分析
、推断、筛选、概括,去粗取精;在写作时目的要
明确,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。
【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系,上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。如
but,
so, then
等。可以适当使用高分句子。本篇文章写的好的句子有:
Chinese civilization is one of the
oldest and longest civilizations in the
world
.中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。
C
hina is a nation of
etiquette
(礼仪),中国是一个礼仪之邦。
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.
假如你是李华
,
你的美国笔友
Bill
给你发了一封电子邮件
,
想了解你的梦想职业。请认
真阅读下面的邮件
,
根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。
To: lihua@ china. com
From: bill006@ america. com
Subject: Your dream job
Dear Li Hua,
Our
teacher told us China is developing fast. You are
lucky enough to live in China.
Would you please tell me about your
dream job in the future?
◆
What is your dream
job?
◆
Why do you
like the job?
◆
Do you think your personality is suitable for the
job? Why or why not?
◆
What do you need to do for
your dream job?
Drop a few
lines if you have time.
Best
wishes,
Bill
要求
:1.
参考提示语
,
可适当发挥;
2.
语句通顺
,
意思连贯
,
书写工整;
3.
文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.
词数
:
不少于
70
词(开头已给出
,
但不计入总词数)。
Dear
Bill,
Thank you for your
letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job.
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Yours,
Li
Hua
【答案】例文
Thank
you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about
my dream job. Teaching is my
dream job
because I would like to share my knowledge with my
students and help them solve
problems.
I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with
children. Besides, the school's
environment appeals to me and staying
with students helps to keep me young and alive. To
realize my dream, I have to make full
use of spare time to acquire the essential
knowledge and
enter a good university.
What efforts are you making for your
dream?
Tell me about your
ideal job!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本题通过描写梦想中的职业
,让学生对未来有憧憬,给一部分提示词,让学生有话可说。
【详解】
首先回答职业是教师。然后
解释为什么喜欢该工作,因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子
们,并且喜欢学校的环境。为
了实现自己的梦想,正在为此作出努力。最后向
Bill
提出问
题,结束全文。
【点睛】
本文首先开篇功能句
Thank you for your
letter.
然后开始主要内容,运用多种连接词,比如
be
cause
,
Besides
,
To realize my dream,
等使文章连贯性强,长
短句结合,读起来朗朗上
口,不失为一篇佳作。
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临近毕
业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是
Moonlight
小
组
的组长,请根据下面表格中的信息和提示,为你的组员
Tommy
进行综合素质的评价,
写一
份素质报告.
Name
Characteristics
Hobbies
Honour
Problems
Your
Tommy
聪明、大方(各举一例)
喜欢看书,认为看书有很多好处(请列举
2
个好处)
他在家帮助做家务。在学校
和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则
(举
一例)。今年,学校授予了他优秀学生奖(
Award for
Best Student
)
面临考试,遭受压力痛苦,他没有充足的睡眠.
(根据实际情况提
2
点建议)
…
suggestions
要求:
1
、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯;
2
、要点必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当
发挥;
3
、词数:
100
词左右;
4
、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名
等
Tommy is a member of my
team called Moonlight.
【答案】
Tommy is a member of my
team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good
at all his
lessons. He is so generous
that he shares everything with his likes reading
because he
thinks he can get much
knowledge and learn more about the world by
reading. And reading has a
good effect
on children
’s growth. At home, he can
help his parents do some housework. At school,
he gets on well with his classmates. On
the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He
crosses
the road when the light is
green. Our school presented him with Award for
Best Student this year.
However, Tommy
is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t
have enough sleep.
I think
he should go over what he has learned before
exams. It’s better for him to manage his
time wisely so that he can have enough
time to rest.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们按照表格
里的内容介绍一下
Tommy
的情况,为
Tommy
写一篇综合素质
的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细
的关于
Tommy
各方面的内容,我们需要用正确的英语把
p>
这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多,写作时要注意表达的条理性。这篇
p>
作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给
Tommy
提一些建议,这一部分应该用第一人
称。同时注意表达的准确性,尤其是表格
中的第五项和第六项内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的
范文。这篇作文内容完整,包含了表格中的所有内容,
没有遗漏要点。表达准确,注意了
被动形式的使用,如
He was rewarded by our school
this
year.
。写作时注意了条理性,使文章具有层次
感,条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结
合,并恰当的使用了一些连词,使文章表达的连
贯。如
He is always ready to help
others.
、
He not only likes
reading detective novels but also likes watching
programs about sports
news.
、
He is good at running.
He won the first place in our school sports
meeting this year.
等。
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书面表达
初中即将毕业,同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题,老师要求你在英语课上做一个以
p>
“Less
Pressure Makes Life Bett
er”
为题的报告,谈谈你的做法,与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求
< br>写一份发言稿,内容包括:
1.
普遍存在的压力:同学关系;考试
2.
我过去的压力:父母的期望;学习
3.
我成功缓解压力的办法及效果;
……
要求:
1.
文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.
词数
80
左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Less
Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, everyone!
Pressure is a serious problem in
today’s world. Most students in our class are
under too much
pressure.
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【答案】
Hello, my
classmates!
Pressure is a
serious problem in today's world. Most students in
our class are under too much
pressure.
Some students can't get on well with their
classmates, while others may worry about
their exams too much.
I was always under pressure, too. My
parents wanted me to be the top student in my
class. They
always sent me to all kinds
of after-classes on weekends.
I had a talk with my parents and told
them I had done my best. Finally, they understood
me. In
this way, I feel less stressed
out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.
Less pressure makes better
life. Thank you.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们针对现在
同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象,以
Less Pressure Makes
Life
Better
为题,谈谈自己的看法,和同学们分享
一下自己的经验。审题可知,文章中应主要
包括以下几个内容:首先介绍同学们普遍感到
压力这种现象;然后讲述自己过去曾面对的
压力;最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目
中只给出了大概的提纲,其中具体的内容应
由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充,并用正确的
英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和
体会出发,选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。
文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时,注意
根据表达的需要使用正确的时态,并变化谓语
动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构
为主,这样的句式表达简洁、明了,易于掌握
。但为提升作文档次,应穿插使用并列句和
复合句,或使用一些复杂结构,如非谓语动词
、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成
分,使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文
作者根据题目要求,谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现
象的看法,并分享了自己的
经历。短文有如下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含了题目
中要求的所有信息,且层次
清晰,文章分成了四段,每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短
文中使用了正确的时态和人
称,文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时,谓语动词形式
准确。句式结构以简单句为
主,叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构,如宾
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