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雅思考试的作文分
task1
和
task2
，也是我们俗称的小作文和大作文
.
相比较而言，
task
1
常
考的四类图表以及流程
,
地
图题有一定的模式和套路可走。为时
60
分钟，毕竟时间有限，
要
写出惊天地泣鬼神的文章几乎是
mission impos
sible
，
但是作文的评分标准中又有一项是词汇
和句式的多样化，所以我们也要思考尽量
diversify
我们常用的句型。
一提
起句型，我们可能会想到虚拟句、倒装句、强调句、或分词短语开头的句式等等，但是
这
种语法化的东西也可以用更为简洁的思维模式来组织句子，
使得我们免于语法的羁绊。<
/p>
为
了在有限的时间内尽量提高作文的质量，在此对常用句型进行一
个小结。
(
一
)Introduction:
1
、常见结构：
“图表显示??”
。图表做主语，直接引出图中的信息。这是一个背景信息的
描述，要与题目的词汇避免撞车，就是要同义替换或者
paraphr
ase
。
The
chart
/
graph
/
diagram
shows
/
demonstrates
/
displays
/
reveals
/
informs
/
illustrates
/describes
that
……
2
、
使句式多样化，有时候只需要进行单词的变位，我们对于动词提前，
“基于??”
Based on the
chart/graph (above)……
Seen from this chart/graph……
3
、介词提前。
From the
chart/graph……
As
seen/revealed in the chart/graph……
4
、还有一种方式，省略句形式的提
前的很好用的句式。无删节版的中文就是，
“你瞧这个图
一眼，
就可以看出??”
A
glance at the……we can perceive/ see/ realize that
…
“看一眼我们就知道”
5,
如果遇到同类别的两个或者两个以上
,
例如两根线
,
三个柱
,
或者四个饼等等
,
我们
还可以用
一个词
,
这就是
compare...
这幅图比较了
...
和
...
The line charts compare the
carbon emissions and global temperature in 2010
and 2100.
此上全是
ta
sk1
的开头段。
虽说句式相对
tas
k2
而言比较固定，
但使用
“词性提前
”
的办法，
顺着补全句子来
diver
sify
我们的句型。
(
二
)body
：
上升：
There is an increase /
growth / boom / rise / mount / climb
in population of the 1960s
, which
ended/stopped in the following decade.
→名词提前：
The period of 1960s sees / witnesses an
increase in population and then a recovery
in the next / following decade.
这个年份
看
到
或者
见证<
/p>
什么情况的发生是非常形象生动的
.
要比直接说某事发生于某一
年份来得
viv
id,
同时也使得句型复杂话
.
在一篇
文章中
,
通过变动年份或者其他句子成分
,
我们
可以避免通篇套用
这样的句型
,
达到雅思写作评分标准的
的要求
.
→动词提前：
Increasing / growing
in the 1960s, the population reaches its summit /
peak
in the
following ten-year period.
→形容词提前：
Sharp increase as the
population makes , it turns downward at the
following ten
years.
下降：
There is a dip / decline / fall /
decrease / slump / shrink ……
→名词提前：
Income
sees / witnesses a dip / decline / fall / decrease
/ slump
??
→动词提前：
declining / falling in
the
??
，
the number
fluctuates / changes
??
激增：
Surge / skyrocket / soar / jump /
record-breaking growth
Mark
the culmination of ....
The
number surges / skyrockets / jumps at the point of
……
Or
：增加的
v.
+
副词（
dramatically
/
drastically
/
tremendously
/
sharply
/
substantially
/
considerably / steeply / markedly /
precipitously
）
急降：
Plummet / plunge / precipitate
Or
：减少的
v.
+
副词（
dramatically
/
drastically
/
tremendously
/
sharply
/
substantially
/
considerably / steeply / markedly /
precipitously
）
比较句型
The chart / graph compares A with B
（
C / D
??）
The chart / graph shows / demonstrates
/ illustrates / reveals / displays the differences
between A
and B
（
C /
D
??）
A decreases in the first three decades
, with its counterpart B making a sharp turn
downward.
A 's
plunge is accompanied / mirrored
by the boom of
B .
There is an
obvious / clear / sharp contrast between A and
B
．
→名词提前：
A
overshadows
/outweighs
/
overtakes
/
surpasses
/
outpaces
/
outnumbers
/
overwhelms B in
??
→短语提前：
Compared with B ,
A
is
outstandingly gains more
??
比例句型：
A holds for / accounts for / makes up /
occupies / consists of / comp
rises of
……
→介词提前：
Of the total
population , A accounts for 70%, with B's
proportion as low as 10%.
（二）
task 2
与
task 1
不同的是，
task 2
的句型和词
汇可以灵活多样，
变幻莫测。
这个积累的过程是艰巨
而漫长的。
积累的文本可以是外刊或者原版小说等等。
同义替换和句型的转换在这一任务中
极为明显。
同义替换不
是说哪一个优于另外一个，
只是在写作中保持一种新鲜感，
避免
重复。
文中列出的“换一种说法”也只是一种借鉴。这是我们最常用，也用得最多的句型
。在日常
积累中我们应该多留一个心眼，
想想能否用更为地道、
更加形象的方式去表达。
这需要我们
自
己不断积累和完善。
有些单词非常简单
,
只要学过英语的都认识
,
但是组合在一起
,
就可以让
人眼前一亮
.
比如奥巴马在演讲中说到的
有些人很没有运气<
/p>
不是用是
而是<
/p>
on their luck
给人一种<
/p>
luck
的
下降
状态
.
又如<
/p>
帮助他们进入中产阶级
< br>不是说
而是
也就是给他们一个通向
...
的梯子
,
这都是非常形象的
表达
,
是值得学习的
.
下
面就说一些雅思大作文中常用的句型
,
以及同样一个意思怎么用
名词
,
动词等去转换
.
1
“不可否认的是”
There is no denying that ...
→代词提前：
What makes
it undeniable is that .....
→形容词提前：
True as it is that,
......
→副词提前：
Undeniably,.......
2
“既有优点也有缺点”
There are both advantages and
disadvantages in this
(policy/institution/trend...).
→名词提前：
Any
(policy/institution/trend) , produces both winners
and losers.
→动词提前：
Providing / offering
both boons and banes , this
(policy/institution/trend...)
→介词提前：
With both positive and
negative effect, the (policy/institution/trend...)
Or: In sustaining our
(society/country/environment/world...),this
(policy/institution/trend...)
3.
“我们现在分析一下双方”
Let's analyse both sides of
the issue
→介词提前：
In analysing this
issue, we come to the conclusion that ....
Through bench-marking the
parameters of either side, we draw the conclusion
that...
4.
“因此
A
比
B
好”
Consequently , A
gains the upper hand of B.
→换一种说法：
A will come to
prominence
A will be widely
copied/advocated/imitated
5.
“问题会出现”
There will be problems
that....
→换：
Such
problems will surface...
6.
“问题在于”
The problem lies in that ....
→换：
The question-
mark that.....
7.
“问题之严重，要求我们
.....
”
The problem is so severe
that we are bound/up/required/requsted to....
→换：
The magnitude
of this crisis requires a response from us that
.....
8.
“应该把??放在首位”
??
should be made a priority
→换：??
should take
precedence over everything else
??
should be put at the
forefront
9.
“这样的话，就会进展迅速”
In this way , it will develop rapidly .
→换：
following
this path , it will leapfrog on the developing
ladder .
10.
“有许多好处，如”
There are many advantages , like
→换：
There are
numerous / a multitude of / a considerable number
of / quite some catalysts for .....,
ranging from ......
11.
“这将变得更加明显”
This will become more
obvious/apparent that.....
→换：
This will turn all the
more conspicuous in ......
12.
“这个问题已经十分严峻”
This issue is already quite
serious .
→换：
Its
fate hangs by a thread that....
It's on the verge of (destruction) .
It borders (destruction) .
13.
“尽全力做”
do one's utmost to ....
→换：
leave no stone unturned
14.
“优秀”
Excellent / wonderful / magnificent /
grand
→换：
cream
of the top / selling point / shining component /
have an edge in .....
15.
“这之所以好，是因为”
It is beneficial because / for the
reason that.....
→换：
what makes it beneficial
is that .....
16.
“既可以
A
，又可以
B
”
It
exerts positive influence on both A and
B
．
→换：
It can accomplish A
without compromising / sacrificing / hurting /
damaging B .
17.
“没有什么能够与
A
相媲美”
Nothing can compare with
A
．
→换：
Everything pales in the
face of A.
18.
“这样做是不（容易、对、方便）
”
It is not (easy / correct /
convenient) to .....
→换：
Doing this is anything
but (easy / correct / convenient )
Doing this is by no means (easy /
correct / convenient )
19.
“??的原因是”
The reason is that
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