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The Sea’s Surprise
Jim and Andy walked along the beach,
looking for an adventure. They joked
that some day they would find a talking
fish or a mermaid or a bottle with a
treasure map inside. So far they had
only found shells and rocks and seaweed.
Today though was different. The boys
felt excited.
Sea crabs scampered on
the rocks. Up one side and down the other. They
were quick and lively. The tide didn’t
seem to ever wash them away. Then Jim
saw a fish. It was stranded on the
beach, just flopping around.
“Can it
talk?” Andy
asked.
“It looks
like any other fish,” Jim said. He picked it up
gently and carried it
to the water.
“Do you think it will grant us any
wishes?” Andy laughed.
The
boys watched as the silver
fish sped
off through the water. “No.
Maybe next
time.” Jim grinne
d.
As the
two friends walked farther down the beach they
came upon a bottle.
It was green with a
cork in the mouth.
“Our luck will
change. Does it have a map inside or a genie?”
joked Andy.
Andy reached
down and picked up the bottle. He rubbed it.
Nothing happened.
He pulled on the
cork. Nothing happened. He shook it. Nothing
happened.
“
Try the cork
again. I bet the genie is waiting for
us to release him. Or we’ll
find a treasure map and have a real
adventure,” Jim exclaimed.
Andy tugged again on the cork. He
wiggled it back and forth. He twisted it
around and around. Finally it popped
out without breaking. Andy shook the
bottle
. Nothing came out.
Looking inside he couldn’t see anything. Jim
looked
too and shook his head. Empty.
“It’s just an old wine bottle,” Jim
complained. He grabbed the bottle
and tossed it back onto the sand.
注意:
1.
所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右;
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至少使用
5
个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.
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续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para.1: The bottle hit a rock and
shattered into many pieces...
Para.2:
Two boys ran after it...
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