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2020-2021
年中考英语书面表达
复习（
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一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
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．
近日，某中学
“iPad
进课堂
”
的消
息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的
English
N
ewsletter
正在以
iPads, coming
into the classrooms
为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提
示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
1.
不需要背沉重的书包去上学
学生们认为
2.
很新鲜，学习更感兴趣
3.……
家长们认为
1.
影响孩子视力
2.
增加家庭负担
1.……
2.……
你的观点
注意：
1
）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2
）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥；
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3
）词数：
90
词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4
）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
iPads, coming into the
classrooms
Can you use an
iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes!
Recently, students and parents are
arguing about the new teaching
method.
____________________
__________________________________________________
_________
______________________________
_________________________________________________<
/p>
________________________________________
_________________________________
【答案】
iPads, coming into the
classrooms
Can you use an
iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes!
Recently, students and parents are
arguing about the new teaching
method.
The students don’t
think they have to carry heavy bags any more. It’s
cool to have lessons over
iPads
. It’s very interesting
to study like that. They believe that they will
learn more and better.
However,parents think using ipads for
too long will influence children’s eyesight. And
some poor
families can’t afford to buy
iPads.
I think in some ways
iPads are good for us. We can search for
information on the Internet at any
time. It’s easy for us to chat with our
classmates and teachers about our
lessons.
【解析】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论
文，探讨
iPad
进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此
的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格
式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描
述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使
文章增色。
点睛：对立观点式
第一段：提出现象。
第二段：
Some people are in favor
of the idea of doing X.
They point out the fact that
_______________________
支持
X
的第一个原
因。
They also
argue that _____________________________
支持
X
的另一个原因。
第三段：
However, other people
stand on a different ground.
They consider it harmful to do X.
They firmly point out that
________________________
反对
X
的第一个理
由。
An
example can give the details of this argument:
________________
一个例子。
第四段：
There is some truth in
both arguments.
But I
think the advantages of X overweigh the
disadvantages.
In addition
to the abovementioned negative effects it might
bring about, X also may X
的有一个
坏处。
2
．
亲爱的
同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触
.
假如你是
Tony,
名城中学九
（
1
）班的学生。请以
My junior
high school life
为题
,
写一篇
80
词左右的短文。
提示：
1.
个人基本情况介绍
2.
校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人<
/p>
,
经常鼓励）；同
学（和睦相处，互相学
习，共同进步）。
3.
对学校、老师
、同学表达感谢和祝福。
要求：
1.
文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。
2.
文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
【答案】
My junior high school
life
My name is Tony. I am
studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful
junior middle school life is
coming to
an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my
school life.
Our campus is
clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of
activities. Our teachers teach us rich
knowledge and how to behave ourselves.
They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on
well
with our classmates. Besides, we
learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my
teachers and my classmates. Wish them
better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主
要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意
主谓一致问题，句子结构主
要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：
My name
is……
，
I’m glad
to……
，
Our campus
is……
，
Our teachers teach us……
等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。
开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同
学，最后对学校、老师、同
学表达感谢和祝福。此处
go by, come to an end, tell
sb about sth,
all kinds of, behave
oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with,
learn from, make progress
等这
些
词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3
．
书面表达
假设你是某英文报纸
“Teenag
ers”
栏目的编辑
Betty
，日前
收到了
Lucy
的来信。她在信中诉
说
了她的烦恼，请你根据
Lucy
的来信，用英语写一封
90
词左右的回信。要求内容合理
,
信
的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I’m
sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read
eBooks.
____________________
___________________
All the
best!
Betty
【答案】
Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t
allowed to read eBooks.
In
recent years, electronic books, as a product of
information technology, have gained more and
more popularity. It is no doubt
electronic books bring many benefits. For one
thing, they are so
convenient that we
can read them anywhere and anytime. For another,
their appearance will
make paper-waste
less.
However, as every coin
has two sides, electronic books also have some
disadvantages. For
example, long time
of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And
there are more radiation
which is
harmful to people's body.
In
my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of
traditional book, but it's an useful product. I
think
that e-books are beneficial if we
read correctly and properly instead of reading
over.
All the
best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定
句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如
in recent
years
，
as a product
of
，
live
in
，
more and more
，
so…that
，
for
example
，
do harm
to
，
be harmful
to
，
in my
opinion
，
take the
place of
，
instead
of
等。同时
For one thing, / For
another,/ However,
等使短
文的叙述很有条
理，而
It is no doubt electronic books
bring many benefits./ they are so
convenient that we can read them
anywhere and anytime. / And there are more
radiation which
is harmful to people's
body.
/ I think that e-books
are beneficial if we read correctly and properly
instead of reading over.
等复
杂从
句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意
总结
牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富
有条
理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理
后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要
尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。
4
．
写作
假定你是李华，在一位名叫
Tiger
Mom
的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。
请你根据
博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I’m t
he
mother of a fourteen-year
–
old . I have a rule for my
daughter :be among the top of 5
students or get punished in one way or
another . She has been doing very well in school
,but
some of my friends keep telling me
that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点：
1.
表明自己的看法。
2.
陈述自己的理由。
3.
提出至少
2
条建议。
【答案】
Hi,TigerMom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle
for many parents in idea is that it is not
quite
right for you to do
so.
Although high grades are
an important factor in evaluating students and for
their future
university
admission,development in
wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should
never be ignored.
There are
many examples around us. Some all-A
students in school have turned out not to be as
successful
in
society as they were expected. The
reason is often that the pressure from their
parents allows
them almost no time for
other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no
means a wise choice
to help them grow
up
mentally and
physically.
So I suggest
that you take your friends' advice. More
importantly,let her live like a lovely
girl
；
let
her
have more
friends and social
activities
；
and let her make
mistakes of her own as the teenagers
often do.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，对学
生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一
般现在时态，人称为第一，
三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾
结构，注意一些常见句式的
应用，比如：
My idea is
that……
，
There
are……
，
Some all-A
students in school
have…….
，
The reason
is……
，
So I suggest that……
等句式的应用。写作中注
意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注
意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练
。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介
绍自己的建议。此处
turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make
mistakes, of
one’s own
等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
5
．
“
美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她
”
。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的
改观，人人积极
参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写
一篇短文号召大
家加入到双创活动中来。
要求：
1.
语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.
必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；
3.
行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.
词数
80
左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the
civilized and healthy city, our living environment
has improved
a lot. Everyone plays an
important role in building our city, so good
behaviors can be seen
everywhere.
As
junior high students,
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__________________________________________________
_______________________
________________
__________________________________________________
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__________________________
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