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2009
年
6
月
--2011
年
6
月英语四级作文
真题及解析
（包含
2009
年
6
月至
12
月）
（包含
2010
年
6
月至
12
月）
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201 1
年
6
月至
12
月）
2009
年
6
< p>月英语四级真题及解析
Part I
Writing
（
30 minutes
）
注意：此部分试题在答题卡
1
上。
Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
short
essay
on
the
topic
of
Free
Admission
to
Museums.
You
should
write
at
least
120
words following the outline given below:
1.
越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么？
2.
也会带来一些问题
3.
你的看法
答案详解
Part
I Writing
Free Admission to
Museums
（满分版）
Nowadays,
an
increasing
number
of
museums
are
admission-free
to
visitors
home
and
abroad.
The
hidden
reason
behind
this
is
not
hard
to
analyze
as
there
’
s a growing awareness for the authorities regarding the urgency
of popularization of culture,
knowledge and history with every average
person in our society. Only with free
access to this live
‘
database
’
,
can most people fully enjoy what
museums could offer to them.
However,
free
admission
to
museums
might
lead
to
some
social
problems
as
well.
The
most
obvious
problem
is
that
it
might
give
museums
a
very
heavy
economic burden which directly impedes
the sustainable development of
these
organizations. As a result, our government has to
work out other
ways to collect funds
from different channels, which might be difficult
to
operate
or
control.
On
the
other
hand,
free
admission
attracts
too
many
visitors,
some
of
which
might
not
be
well-purposed
and
do
some
conscious
or
unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which
used to be
well-preserved in the
museums.
As
a
university
student,
I
am
in
favor
of
the
free- admission
conduct.
Yet
it
is
proposed
that
some
measures
should
be
taken
to
solve
the
potential
problems
caused
by
it.
For
example,
museums
can
make
some
regulations
to
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guide the behavior of visitors or set
some
‘
closed
’
days for museums
for regular maintenance. Only
in this way can free-admission to museums
become a long-lasting phenomenon and
have sustainable development.
2009
年
12
月英语四级试题及解析
Part
Ⅰ
Writing (30 minutes)
注意：此部分试题在答题卡
1
上。
Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
short
essay on the topic of
Creating
a
Green
Campus.
You
should
write
at
least
120
words
following
the
outline given below:
1.
建设绿色校园很重要
2.
绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境……
3.
为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……
Creating a Green Campus
答案详解
Part
Ⅰ
Writing
审题谋篇
本次四级作文主题为?绿色校园?
，这是一个看似简单普通的话题，写起来
却不是那么容易。因为很多考生对于?绿色校园?所表达的内涵感觉比较生僻。
假如对
?绿色校园?
这一主题感到难以把握，
考生可以从作文提 纲入手进行分析
以获取对?绿色校园?这一概念的相关信息。
根据作文提示
2
，可 以看出此处的?绿色校园?指的决不仅仅是青青的草地
和
高
大
的
树
木
构
成
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校园绿色风景，也不仅仅指对校园环境的珍视和爱
护，
而是指一种环境保护的文化氛围和师生具有的环境素养，
以及由此带来的和
谐的人文环境和社会绩效。
在深入理解概念的基础上，
考生还应对
?绿色校园?
的重要性进行
剖析，
这时，
考生可以从多个角度组织素材，
比如从校园的环境问
题出发，
进而扩展到师生的环境意识对
?绿色校园?
所产生的长远意义以及为未
来环境改善所做的贡献。最后是阐述建设?绿色校
园?所要采取的措施。
需要注意的 就是作文给分的重点在于考生如何用恰当的语言词汇表达自己
的思想观点。
而不是写得越多，
得分就越高。
一般分成三个自然段，
大概十句 话，
基本的分布为首段、
末段合起来五句或六句，
中间段 五句或四句，
做到结构清楚，
重点突出，就可以了。
参考范文
Creating a Green Campus
2
Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining
?
a green earth
?
being the focus of the society,
?
green campus
?
has become a more and
more popular concept
in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly,
will
bring
us
an
ever-lasting
benefit
to
both
our
campus
and
our
society.
The
concept
of
?
green
campus
?
does
not
only
mean
a
green
environment
but
also
refers
to
an
environmental
sense
in
people
’
s
mind.
Campus
plays
a crucial
role in educating the young generation and the
consciousness
of
?
green
campus
?
will
definitely
produce
a
profound
effect
on
students
’
various
environmental
protection
activities
after
their
graduation.
What
’
s
more,
the
young
generation
is
under
the
burden
of
severe
environmental pollution and there are
many problems waiting for them to
solve.
To
make
?
green
campus
?
come
true,
firstly,
it
is
necessary
to
work
out
effective
principles
for
the
development
of
sustainable
and
recyclable campus. Secondly, it calls
for people
’
s awareness of the
serious pollution around us and actual
action to reduce the waste. Last
but
not
least,
it
is
necessary
to
strengthen
the
ties
between
campus
and
society,
so
as
to
ensure
that
?
green
campus
?
can
work
smoothly
with
the
co-effort of the whole society.
建设绿色校园
近来 ，随着建设并保持?绿色地球?的观念成为社会关注的焦点，
?绿色校
园
?也成为校园里流行的话题。这无疑会给我们的校园和社会带来长远的利益。
?绿色校园?
不仅仅指绿色的环境，
还包括人们头脑中的环境意识。
学校在
培养年轻一代上起
着关键作用，
?绿色校园?的意识必定会对学生毕业后的环境
保护意识产
生长远影响。
更为重要的是，
年轻一代面临着严重的环境污染，
有 太
多问题等待他们去解决。
为使
?绿色校园?
成为现实，
首先应该制定出可持 续发展、
可长远发展的有
效政策。
其次，
还需要人们对环境污染的严肃性有正确认识并采取实际行动切实
减少污染。
最后但同样重要的是，
有必要加强学校和社会的联系以便在全社会的
共
同努力下使?绿色校园?顺利实施。
【生动的用词】
maintain
保持
;concept
概念
;profound< /p>
长远的
;sustainable
可持续的
;recyclable
可循环的。
【丰富的短语】
bring benefit to
带来利益
;play a crucial role in
发挥
关键作用
;under the burden of
在……重负下
;come true
实现
;call for
要求。
【多变的句式】
范文中长句、短句、简单句、复杂句交叉使用。不同 句型之间的转换，能让
阅卷老师更好地了解考生对句子结构的掌握运用，从而获得高分。
避错指导
本次作文在题材上，
虽然仍然延续了 我们所熟悉的校园类话题，
但与社会背
景有很大关系。刚刚闭幕的哥本哈
根世界气候大会使环保减排这个主题成为焦
点，在全世界都提倡可持续发展、和谐发展这
一背景下的?绿色校园?
，同时也
是一个社会热点话题，
这是我们审题时所必须考虑的。
另外开篇时，
切忌拖泥带
3
水，应直截了当，使阅卷老师对文章主题一目了然。
除正确审题之外，
考生还应注意语言 的准确运用，
不落俗套。
不同句型之间
转换时，考生应对
句子结构全面掌握，避免句式错误造成扣分。
2010
年
6
月英语四级真题及详解
Part I Writing (30
minutes)
注意：此部分试题在答题卡
1
上。
Directions:
For
this
part,
you
are
allowed
30
minutes
to
write
a
short
essay
on
the
topic
of
Due
Attention
Should
Be
Given
To
Spelling.
You
should
write at least 120 words following the
outline given below:
1.
如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2.
出现这种情况的原因
3.
为了改变这种状况，我认为…
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
___________________________
______________________________________________
答案详解
Due
Attention Should Be Given to
Spelling
）
Nowadays
fewer
and
fewer students
pay
attention
to
their
word-spelling.
According
to
a
recent
survey,
there
is
a
dramatic
increase
in
the
number
of students who can only imitate the
pronunciation of a word but be
incapable
of
spelling
it.
In
this
essay
I
will
discuss
the
factors
of
this
phenomenon and offer my own view on it.
There
are
a
number
of
factors
can
be
accountable
for
this
situation.
One
of
the
most
common
factors
is
that
fewer
and
fewer
students
need
to
write
English essays. Besides, the goal of
most students to learn English is
to
speak
it
and
pass
the
examination
which
means
they
just
need
to
select
the similar
words according to the listening materials and
passages.
Perhaps
the
most
contributing
factor
is
the
wide
use
of
electronic
devices
such as e-dictionaries and computers
and students no longer need to
correct
the words by themselves.
As far as
I
’
m concerned, I firmly argue that we need to attach great
importance
to
word-spelling.
To
the
students,
they
should
write
English
as much as they can. Meanwhile, to the
teachers, the dictations should
be
reinforced in the class.
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2010
年
12
月英语四级真题及详解
家长是否应该帮助孩子走向独立
有些家长替孩子包揽一切
为了帮孩子自立，家长应该
…
答案解析
Part
Ⅰ
Writing
How
Should Parents Help Children to be Independent
Nowadays,
there
is
a
growing
concern
over
such
a
phenomenon,
that
is,
some
parents take care of almost everything
concerned with their children,
including
study,
work,
marriage.
Some
parents
believe
that
this
is
love,
however, it is only to
destroy children
’
s independence thoroughly.
For the future of the next
generation, more efforts should be made by
parents
to
help
their
children
to
be
independent.
The
fundamental
one
is
to
cultivate
the
awareness,
namely,
the
importance
and
necessity
of
being
independent,
which
is
supposed
to
begin
from
childhood.
Children
should
be taught that no one can be stronger
and more helpful than themselves
in
this world.
The quality of independence
is so indispensable for us that parents had
better
act
as
a
tutor,
not
a
dictator.
And
only
with
parents
’
trust,
can
the next generation accumulate
confidence step by step.
从具体操作的角度来说，
对于基础较为薄弱的考生，
这次的考试题目是比较容易
套用模板
的，
第一段，
把现实状况描述清楚；
第二段，
写清 楚父母亲帮助子女独
立的策略；第三段，呼吁父母亲多给自己一些自由。怎样解决
(
解决方案的优缺
点类似的结构：
In recent days, we have to face a
problem-----A, which is becoming more
and more serious.--------(
说明
A
的现状
)
．
Confronted
with
A,
we
should
take
a series
of
effective
measures
to
cope
with the
situation. For one thing,
---------------(
解决方法一
). For
another
-------------(
解决方法二
).
Finally, --------------(
解决方法三
).
Personally,
I
believe
that
-------------(
我的解决方法
).
Consequently,
I
’
m
confident
that
a
bright
future
is
awaiting
us
because
-- ------------(
带
来的好处
).
像这样子的模板能够帮助无话可说，
或者说英语表达能力比较弱的同学迅速找到< /p>
思路，只需要填入关键的字词就可以完成作文。
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但是对于能够用流畅的英语表达自己的思路的同学来说，
高的分数，
则需要注意语言必须尽可能简洁才 能够在规定字数以内说清楚自己的
论点，
而句子的表达要求，
< p>也从有话可说，上升到言之有理，
甚至上升到语言精
致优美，内在逻辑严密的高度了。
在我们给出大家的这篇范文里面，<
/p>
三段文字结构清晰，
语言简明优美又没有落入
模板的窠臼，
属于在临场作文中的优秀之作。
In our modern and
contemporary society, whether parents should offer
a
helping
hand
to
making
their
children
independence
has
become
a
hot
button.
In
other
words,
we
cannot
afford
to
lose
sight
of
the
trend
that
the
kids
’
independence has become a social focus,
which triggers wide concerns
across the
nation, especially the parents. This tide does
exist in our
society.
In
our
society,
a
sizable
portion
of
parents,
especially
the
young
parents,
spoil their kids from
all aspects. Spefically speaking, they help their
children pile and clear up their school
bags, wash their clothes, even
socks.
Besides, they also talk to their children
?
if only you succeed
in
your study, please leave anything to
me
?
.
This prevalent tide
sparks our deep thought. From my viewpoint, in an
effort
to
reverse
and
eliminate
this
unfavorable
trend
mentioned
above,
considering the
seriousness of this headache, Parents are supposed
to
teach their kids how to cope with a
variety of complex siuations. In
addition,
parents
also
should
take
every
opportunity
to
equip
themselves
with
advanced
educative
knowledge
and
keep
pace
with
the
times
and
communicate
with
other
parents
who
enjoys
a
wealth
of
educative
experiences.
In
a
word,
We
all
hope
that
these
children
have
less
reliance
on their parents and
become independent economically and mentally.
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