英语招聘广告现代大学英语四级写作资料(1)

大学英语四级写作资料

一、大学英语四级考试大纲（

2006

修订版）对写作的要求

写作选用考生所熟悉的题材。考 生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等，写出一篇

不少于

120

词的短文。写作要求是思想表达准确、意义连贯、无严重语法错误。考试时间

分钟。

写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作 ，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。写作部分考核

的技能是：

A.

思想表达

1.

表达中心思想

2.

表达重要或特定信息

3.

表达观点、态度等

B.

篇章组织

4.

围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点

5.

连贯地组句成段，组段成篇

C.

语言运用

6.

运用恰当的词汇

7.

运用正确的语法

8.

运用合适的句子结构

9.

使用正确的标点符号

10.

运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等）

D.

写作格式

11.

运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式

大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到《教学要求》中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性 写作任务，

能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般 性话题或提纲在半小时内写

出至少

120

词的短文，内容 基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。

”

二、四级考试写作评分标准

（

1

）本题满分为

15

分。

（

2

）阅卷标准共分四等：

2

分、

5

分、

8

分、

11

分及

14

分。各有标准样卷

1-2

份。

（

3

）阅卷人根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数 （如

8

分）相似，即定为该分数（即

8

分）

；

若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可以加一分（即

9

7

分）

。但不得加或减半分。

（

4

）评分标准

?

?

?

?

?

?

2

分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5

分：基本切题。思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严 重语法错误。

8

分：基本切题。思想表达清楚，文章尚 连贯，但语法错误较多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11

分：切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语法错误。

14

分：切题。思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语法错误。仅有个别小错误。

注：白卷、所写内容与题目毫不相关或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给

0

分。

（

5

）字数不足应酌情扣分。

题目中给出主题句、起始句和结束句，均不得记入所写字数。

只写一段者：

0-4

分；只写两段者，

0-9

分（指规定三段的作文）

（

6

）各档作文相当于百分制的得分， 列表如下，称为得分率。其中

9

分的得分率为

60

分（相当于百分制

的

60

分）

。

作文分

得分率

1

7

2

14

3

20

4

27

5

34

6

40

7

47

8

54

9

60

10

67

11

74

12

80

13

87

14

94

15

100

三、四级考试作文最低分规定

教育部高等教育 司及全国大学英语四、六级考试委员会，于

1996

年

11

月作出了“大学英语作文将要

从

1997

年

6

月开始实行英语作文最低分”的若干规定。具体记分方法如下：

1.

根据目前考生的作文均值，将作文分的最低分定为

6

分。

2.

作文分为

0

分，总分若高于

60

分，报分时一律作为

59< /p>

分不及格处理；若低于

60

分，报分时一律再减

6< /p>

分；

3.

作文分大于

0

分，小于

6

分，则按下式计算成绩：

< /p>

例（

1

）原计算总分为

63

分，实得作文分为

2

分，最后报分：

63-6+2=59

分

例（

2

）原计算总分为

80

分，实得作文分为

4

分，最后报分：

63-6+4=78

分

例（

3

）原计算总分为

55

分，实得作文分为

3

分 ，最后报分：

55-6+3=52

分

四、本期训练重点题型（期末考试题型）

体裁：论说文

模式：

1

、现象分析型

现象分析型作 文主要是以当前社会上存在的热门现象为话题，如

98

年

1

月的“

My

View

on

Fake

Commodities

”

，

03

年

1

月的“

It Pays to Be Honest

”

，

05

年

6

月的 “

Say No to Pirated Products

”等等。由此

可见，标题的核心大都是当今社会存在的某种问题，如“假冒伪劣产品”

、

“盗版”等。面对此种作文，在

描述现象之后，则可能具体分析该现象产生的 根源（原因）

、影响（正面影响和

/

或负面影响）

、解决方案或

发展方向等。那么，具体从哪一方面入手，如何组织文章的内容，详略如何 布局等问题，则需要根据具体

的提纲而定。

例如：

2002

年

6

月四级作文

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of

Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given

below:

1.

上图所示为某校大学生平均每周使用计算机的时间

: 1990

年（

2 hours

）

、

1995

年

(4 hours)

、

2002

年

(14

hours)

，请描述其变化；

2.

请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展 等方面加以说明）

；

3.

你认为目

前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

[

参考范文

] Student Use of Computers

Students tend to use computers more and more nowadays.

Reading this chart, we can find that the average

number

of

hours

a

student

spends

on

the

computer

per

week

has

increased

sharply.

In

1990,

it

was

less than

2

hours; and in 1995, it increased to almost 4 hours; while in 2000, the number soared to 20 hours.

Obviously

computers

are

becoming

more

and

more

popular.

There

are

several

reasons

for

this.

First

,

computers facilitate us in more aspects of life.

Also

, the fast development of the Internet enlarges our demands for

using computers. We can easily contact with friends in remote places through the Internet.

Besides

, the prices of

computers are getting lower and lower, which enables more students to purchase them.

Along

with

the

time

spent

on

computers,

there

arise

some

problems.

The

most

serious

one

is

that

many

students

are

spending

so

much

time

playing

PC

games

so

that

they

ignore

their

studies.

It

is

urgent

to

let

the

students use computers in a proper way.

2003

年

1

月四级作文

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.

You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1

．

当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象

2

．

诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实

[

参考范文

] It Pays to Be Honest

Honesty is a cherished Chinese traditional virtue. But nowadays there are many dishonest cases in society.

Some businessmen cheat their customers for higher profits.

Some employees cheat their bosses for higher

positions. Some people cheat their friends for more money. Even some government officials cheat their people for

more interests. These phenomena anger every person of integrity. Then, why do they come into being?

This may be because these people believe that nobody will find out their dishonesty. However, eventually

their customers will come to purchase their products no more,

their bosses will dismiss them,

their friends no

longer help them in case of their crisis,

and their people will remove them from office.

They pay the price for

their own behavior. Therefore, everyone should be honest, which benefits not only himself but also others.

2004

年

1

月六级作文

1

．有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重

2

．浪费的危害

3

．杜绝浪费，从我做起

Reduce Waste on Campus

Nowadays, there is an increasingly serious phenomenon on campus-waste. Rows of lights glare in studentless

classrooms, residue of rice and dishes jam in the waste buckets, taps of water weep with nobody doing washing

around...

Such sights are so common yet so serious that it is high time that they were eliminated, because now we are

living in a world short of fresh water and it is not exaggerating to say that every drop of water is precious. And

although many of us don't have to worry about lack of

food any more, there are still

millions who are starving

somewhere in the world.

If we do not cherish things we have today, sooner or later we will be short of them,

since many resources cannot be recycled.

To reduce waste on campus, everyone should discipline himself:

Turn off the light when you are the last to

leave the classroom.

Use metal or plastic chopsticks instead of disposable ones--and eat up!

Keep a teacup in

your school bag rather than throw each bottle away after it becomes empty!

2005

年

6

月六级作文

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.

You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

1.

目前盗版的现象比较严重

2.

造成这种现象的原因及其危害

3.

我们应该怎么做

Say No to Pirated Products

At present, piracy is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China. Any products, like tapes, CDs and hi-tech

devices, can be copied, not to mention books. Shortly after a newly-published book hits the shelves, people will

unsurprisingly find its pirated counterparts in the stores.

It has been widely believed that piracy has caused a great loss to legitimate producers, inventors and authors

in many ways. To start with, pirated products often cost much less than the original ones, so they enjoy unbeatable

advantage in price in spite of their relatively poor quality. The original ones, on the contrary, sell badly. As far as

pirated books are concerned, they do great' harm to the authors' reputation due to their misprints. In the long run,

pirated products may also have a negative impact on customers since those legitimate producers' enthusiasm may

be greatly hurt by the fact that some customers are more inclined to purchase pirated products.

In my opinion,

it's high time that the government called on everyone to start the battle against piracy.

Besides, as customers, we should develop our consciousness to resist pirated products. And laws should be strictly

carried out to ban piracy from spreading any further.

Only in this way can we put an end to piracy and create a

healthy environment for both customers and producers.

2006

年

6

月六级作文

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Traveling Abroad. You should

write at least 150 words based on the chart and outline given below:

Number of people in City X traveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005

1

．近十年来

X

市有 越来越多的人选择出境旅游

2

．出现这种现象的原因

3

．这种现象可能产生的影响

Travelling Abroad

The diagram shows the numbers of people in City X traveling abroad in 1995, 2000 and 2005. As indicated in

the table, in 1995, about 10,000 people in the city went sightseeing abroad. Five years later, in the year of 2000, the

number increased greatly to 40,000. Another five years later, in 2005, the number dramatically tripled, reaching a

surprising peak of more than 120,000. We can see clearly more and more people traveling abroad in the last ten

years.

One

reason

for

this

drastic

increase

can

be

attributed

to

the

booming

of

Chinese

economy

in

these

years,

which

has

significantly

raised

the

income

of

the

people.

With

more

savings

in

their

bank

accounts,

people

no

longer regard traveling abroad as a luxury which they could hardly afford before. This may also be due to the rapid

development in the social culture in China, which have greatly broaded the horizons of the Chinese people and

have

made

them

more

interested

in

the

outside

world.

Indeed,

few

people

now

can

resist

the

temptation

of

the

sunlight in Thailand, the mysteries in Egypt and the beaches in Australia.

This

rapid

development

in

traveling

abroad

is

very

rewarding.

More

Chinese

tourists traveling

abroad

will

surely promote China's economic and cultural exchange with other countries. And also, with increased contacts,

there will be better mutual understanding between people of these countries. But the greatest benefit travel brings

about is that it has greatly improved the quality of cultural life of the Chinese people.

2008

年

1

月六级作文

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Digital Age.

You should

write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1.

如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如……

2.

数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和辞海产生的影响

The Digital Age

分析：

< /p>

由上可见，此种模式的作文的第一段一般都是某一社会现象的描述。在描述时不妨使用主题 句加例子的模

式，

且略写较佳。

第二

（三 ）

段详写，

一般都是分析现象背后的原因

（

cau ses

）

或者该现象产生的影响

（

effects

）

。

有时，

这一现象可能是一坏现象—— 问题时，

则可能要求分析解决这一问题的手段或方式（如

2005

年

6

月

六级作文）

。

这时 ，

现象分析型作文与下边的问题解决型作文则融合在一起

（作文的例子参见历年真 题范文）

。

2

、问题解决型

问题解决型作 文的特点是：作文题目中一般就直截了当地给出了文章应该说明的主要内容——问题解

决 的办法，如“

How to Solve the Housing Problems in Big Cities

”

，

“

How I Finance My Education

”

，

“

How to

Succeed in a Job Interview

”等等。此类 作文在谋篇布局时，一般按照一个提纲一个段落来布局；但是到底

哪个（些）段落详写， 哪个（些）段落略写，则视具体情况而定。以

2000

年

1

月四级作文为例，作文给了

两个提纲，这时，不妨两个提纲都详写。提纲

1

可以采用“主题句

+how1

（方式一）

+how2+how3

”的方式，

提纲

2

则可以采取“主题句（问题的解决方案）

+why1

（原因一）

+why2+why3

”的方式。而对于

2001

年

1

月四级作文，同样可以两段布局且都详写。其中，第一段采用“主题句（作用）

+waht1

（什么作用）

+waht2+what3

”的方式，第二段则可以采用如下图示的复合模式来写作，从而避免简单例举各种解决方案

的单调（作文的例子参见历年真题范文）

。

How1

why

主题句

How2

why

How3

why

例如：

2000

年

1

月四级作文

Directions:

For this part ,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my

College

Education.9

You

should

write

at

least

100

words

,and

base

your

composition

on

the

outline

(given

in

Chinese) below:

1.

上大学的费用（

tuition and fees

）可以通过多种途径解决

2.

哪种途径适合我（说明理由）

[

参考范文

] How I Finance My College Education

College

education

plays

a

very

important

role

in

people's

life.

With

more

and

more

people

entering

the

university, how to finance the college education has been an issue in debate. In fact, the problem can be dealt with

in many ways.

The easiest way

is to get all the money from parents. If that is impossible, students can apply for a

loan from the bank.

Or

, making money by doing a full-time job in summer and winter holidays is another solution.

Maybe,

the

most

possible

way

is

to

ask

parents

for

the

greater

part

of

tuitions

and

fees

with

the

rest

paid

by

students themselves by doing a part- time job.

From my point of view, I will choose the last way to pay my tuitions and fees. If my parents provide most of

tuitions and fees for my college education, I can be absorbed in my study and don't worry too much about my life.

Meanwhile

, a part-time job in my spare time can supply me with some working experience, and make me know

more about the society.

Therefore

, this way is the best one for me.

2001

年

1

月四级作文

Directions:

For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a

Job Interview? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese

below:

1

面试在求职过程中的作用

2

取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……

[

参考范文

] How to Succeed in a Job Interview?

Nowadays, students must seek jobs by themselves. Job interview is the only way to have access to the doom

of the employers.

So

succeeding in a job interview is very important.

But

how can one succeed in a job interview?

Firstly

, you should be very well prepared. Bring along as much

information

about

yourself

as

possible:

your

diploma

certification,

your

credit

records,

certification

about

your

awards,

your

publications,

and

the

most

important

of

all,

an

excellently-designed

resume,

in

both

Chinese

and

English.

Secondly,

you must pay much attention to your appearance. In order to prove yourself a well-educated

person, you must first of all be dressed properly. While talking with the interviewer, you should look at the one you

are talking to with understanding eyes. While standing, you should stand firm, never making big gestures. While

sitting, you should never sit cross- legged. Always remember to listen attentively to the person talking. A slight nod

of

your head is always timely to show your willingness to communicate.

Thirdly,

you must be confident about

yourself. Never be nervous. Let your smiling face show friendliness first. While talking about your strong points,

be honest, never beast or even tell a lie.

Are you sure you are well prepared? You can go now, and you will succeed, without doubt.

五、现象分析型作文的可套用句式

开头：

?

1 Nowadays, we often hear that

(

提出现象

). 2 This phenomenon is not accidental, and

there is social and individual background.

正文：

?

3

A

number

of

factors,

both

physical

and

psychological

affect/both

individual

and

social

contribute

to

.4 For one thing,

(

原因

1). 5 For another,

(

原因

2).

6

For

instance,

(

举例说明

).

7

From

that,

8

we

.

结尾：

?

9 As far as I am concerned, I agree that

. 10 I think that

(

作者本人的

观点

).

11

.

(

措施

2). 11 Finally,

(

措施

3).

六、问题解决型作文的可套用句式

开头：

?

1 Today, with

, a serious social problem has arisen

—

.(

目前的现象及存在

的问题

).

2

Many

ways

can

contribute

to

(

要解决的问题

),

but

the

following

ones

may be effective.

正文：

?

3 How can we solve this problem? I think there are three approaches. First of all,

(

方

法

1). 4 At first thought, the problem seems far too involved (

复杂的

),

but it can certainly be solved

when seriously dealt with. Besides,

(

方法

2). 5 Finally,

(

方

法

3).

结尾：

?

6

In

conclusion/

To

sum

up,

the

ways I

have

mentioned

above should never

be

separated

from

each

other. 7

(

希望

).

（备注：

1

、

2

、

3

表示文章句子的序号）

提示

：在审题时，

首先

必须考虑本文写几个段落比较恰当，哪个（些）段落 应该详写，哪个（些）段落应

该略写（一般情况下，根据文章的标题和具体的提纲来确定 文章的详略。

）

；

其次

，考虑每个段落具体应该< /p>

写些什么内容（

what, why

还是

how;

有时可能是其中两个的综合，比如，凡是“我的看 法”之类，我们必

须先给出明确的答案

——

我的看法是什 么，然后简介理由

——

我为什么这么认为；

因此，

“我的看法”就

是“

what + why

”

的融合）

；

再次

，注意段落之间和段落内部的衔接（灵活运用各种连接词）

；

最后

，注意

做到语言顺畅，书写美观。

审视作文优劣的标准为

：

1

、

结构（段落布局正确否，详略得当否，段落之间和段落内部衔接自然否）

2

、内容（内容是否简洁精

当、紧扣提纲）

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、语言（语句顺畅否）

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、书写（书写美观否）

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结尾或为：

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. 10 First,

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措施

1). Second,