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一、真题小作文
2011
[
张剑 老师文章
]
Dear
Xiao
Ping,
How
are
things
with p>
you?
I
watched
the
fi lm
“2012”
on
DVD
yesterday
and
found
it
a
wonderful
film.
I
strongly
recommend
it
to
you.
The
film
is
about
an
ancient
prophesy
which
forecast s
the
end
of
the
wor ld
in
the
year
2012.
Several
ancient
civilizations,
such
as
Jewish
and
May an,
have
foretold
the
disa ster
and
therefore
made
story
look
rather
be lievable
.
But
the
film
is
less
an
adaptation
of
the
prophesy
than
a
story
of
escape
from
< p>thedisaster.
The
film
e xplores
the
complicated
behavior s
of
people
confronted
with
death
and
asks
a
soul-searching
question
about
human
nature:
Is
there
al truism
or
complete
selflessn ess
when
people
face
the p>
final
moment
of
one’s
life?
I
find
the
film
one
of
the
best
mov ies
produced
by
Hollywood
in
recent
years.
I
wis h
you
would
not
work
too
hard
in
your
study
and
would
find
time
to
relax
and
enjoy
films
from
time
to
time.
Sincerely
yours
Li
Ming< /p>
[
语言亮点
]
ful
a.
精彩的
st/foretold
v.
预言
able
a.
可信的
p>
A
than
B
不是
A
而 是
B
tion
n.
改编
< br>e
v.
探究
-searching
a.
令人深思的
[
思路解析
]
< p>第一段:首先用
How
are
things
with
you?
寒暄,接着写明写信的目的:看了一部很好的电
影,推荐给对方。
第二段:本段从剧情(
1-2
句)和电影的深刻意义即对人性的拷问(
3-4
句,其中第
3
句为
过渡句)两方面入手介绍该电影值得推荐的主要理由。最后一句对
该片进行总体评价。
第三段:
以学业和休闲平衡为理由,
建议对方观看电影,
回应主题并且再次与对方进行寒暄。
[
万能模板
]
Dear
Xiao
Ping ,
I’m
writing
to
recom mend
you
a
wonderful
film< /p>
“2012”.
I
watched
this
film
yesterday
and
fo
und
it
one
of
the
be st
movies
produced
by
Holl ywood
in
recent
years.
This
film
is
recommendable
< p>firstbecause
of
its
int eresting
plots.
It
is
about
an
ancient
prophesy
which
forecasts
the
end
< p>ofthe
world
in
the
< p>year2012.
Several
ancient
civilizations,
such
as
Je wish
and
Mayan,
have
foret old
the
disaster
and
there fore
made
the
story
look p>
rather
believable.
This
film
is
appealing
also
be cause
it
explores
the
complicated
behaviors
of
people< /p>
confronted
with
death
and
asks
a
soul-searching
question
about
human
nature:
Is
there
complete
sel
flessness
when
people
face
the
final
moment
of
one’s
life?
I
am
sure
you
will
love
this
film.< /p>
Hope
to
discuss
it
w ith
you
later.
Sincerely
yours
Li
Ming
参考译文
亲爱的小平:
我写信向你推荐一个精彩的电影
—201 2
。
我昨天看了这部电影,
发现它是好莱坞这几年
出品的最好的电影之一。
这个电影值得推荐首先在于它精彩的故事情节。
它关于一个古代预言,
其预见世界将于
2012
年毁灭。一些古代文明,比如犹太和玛雅都预言了这场灾难,因此使这个故事显得非
常可
信。
这个电影吸引人还在于它探索了人们面对死亡的复杂行为,
询问了一个有关人 性的
令人深思的问题:当人们面临生命尽头时,会彻底的无私吗?
我相信你会喜欢这部电影。希望今后和你讨论它。
诚挚的,
李
明
2010
[
张剑老师文章
]< /p>
V
olunteers
for
Intern ational
Conference
The
Postg raduates’
Association
is
invitin g
applications
from
students
who
are
willing
to
be p>
volunteers
for
an
inter national
conference
on
globaliza tion.
A
group
of
ten
volunteers
will
be
recruite
d
to
provide
secretarial
s upport
for
the
conference
organization.
They
are
required< /p>
to
work
an
average
of
8
hours
per
week
from
10
June
to
10
< p>October2010.
Candidates
shoul d
be
second-year
graduate
students
of
this
university< /p>
and
should
speak
fairly
good
English,
preferably
with
TEM
4
certificate.
A pplications,
containing
CVs
of p>
the
applicants,
should
be p>
sent
to
Postgraduates’Associa
tion,
15
University
Avenue,
< p>before1
May
2010.
P
ostgraduates’Association
[
语言亮点
]
v.
征求,邀请
te
v.
招聘
e
secretarial p>
support
提供秘书工作服务
requi red
to
do
被要求做……
of
平均
[
思路解析
]
整篇启事显得比较正式,
第
1
句开门见山提出研究生会正在招聘国际会议志愿者;
第
2-3
句
具体介绍招聘职位相关事宜包括招聘人数、应聘者所需从事的基本工作性质和时间;
第
4
句规定应聘者的条件;第
5
句介绍如 何应聘。
[
万能模板
]
Recr
uitment
Announcement
The
Pos tgraduates’
Association
is
invit ing
applications
from
students p>
who
are
willing
to
provide
secretarial
support
fo r
an
international
conference
on
globalization.
Ten
volunt eers
will
be
recruited
and
they
are
required
to< /p>
work
an
average
of
8
hours
per
week
from
10
June
to
10
October
2010.
Candidates
should
b e
second-year
graduate
stude nts
of
this
university
and
should
be
able
to
speak
fairly
good
English,
preferably
with
TEM
4
certificate.
Whoever
is
inte rested
should
send
his
app lication
to
Postgraduates’
Assoc iation,
15
University
Avenue ,
before
1
May
2010.
Postgraduates’
Association
参考
译文
招聘启事
研究生会正邀请愿意为全球化国际会议提供秘书工
作服务的同学进行工作申请。
我们将
招募
10
< p>名志愿者,他们将在2010
年
6
月
10
日至
2010
年
10
月
10
日期间平均每周工作
8
小时。
申请人应该是该校研究生二年级学生,
且应该能够说流利的英语,
最好有 专业四级证
书。感兴趣的人可以将申请于
2010
年 p>
5
月
1
日前送到大学路
15
< p>号研究生会。
研究生会
2009
[
张剑老师文章
]
Dear
editor,
The
ban
on
the
free
use
of
plastic
bags p>
has
come
into
effect
since
last
year,
but
I
am
afraid
the
situation p>
in
this
city
does
not
give
us
any
reason
for
celebration
.
We
still
face
a
lot
of
white
pollution
around
the
streets,
in
the
trees,
and
on
the
lakes.
People
< p>donot
seem
to
care
< p>whether
their
actions
have
damaged
the
environment.
Urgent
actions
should
be
taken
to
deal
with
this
problem.
I
suggest
that p>
publicity
pamphlets
be
printed
and
delivered
to
h omes
in
the
city
to
raise
people’s
awareness
of
< p>the
environmental
crisis.
Laws
should
be
made
to
impose
heavier
punishment
on< /p>
supermarkets,
department
sto res
or
any
businesses
that
are
still
offering
free p>
plastic
bags
to
customers.< /p>
We
can
also
encourage< /p>
people
to
use
re-usable
bags,
such
as
cloth
or
paper
bags,
and
subsidise
the
manufacturers
of
these
bags.
If
these
actio ns
are
put
into
place
< p>,I
believe
we
shall
see
enormous
changes
a
year
from
now.
Yours
sincerely
Li
Ming
[
p>
语言亮点
]
ban
on
对……的禁令
2.
come
into
< p>effect生效
3.
does
no t
give
us
any
reason
for
celebration
没有理由庆祝
4.
p>
urgent
actions
立即行动
5.<
/p>
publicity
pamphlets
宣传册
6.
raise
people’s
awareness
of
提高人的……意识
7.
impose
heavier
punishment
on
对……实施更 重的处罚
8.
be
put
into
place
实施
[
思路解析
]< /p>
第一段:第
1-2
句介绍限塑令不成功的客观情形:第 p>
1
句总述情形不容乐观;第
2
句举例说
明白色污染的表现。
第
3
句指出限塑令不成功的主观情形 :
人们似乎不在乎其行为对环境造
成的危害。
第
二段:第
1
句总述,提出应该采取措施。第
2-4
句提出减少塑料袋使用的具体措施:第
2
句提出应该印刷、
分发传单提高人们对环境危机的意识;
第
3
句提出应该严肃惩罚 免费提供
塑料袋的商家;
第
4
句提出应该 鼓励人们使用可重复使用的袋子,
并补助生产可重复使用的
袋子的厂家。
第
5
句指出建议实施的效果。
[
万能模板
]
Dear
editor,
I’
m
writing
to
express
my
deep
concern
about
the
ineffectiveness
of
the
ban< /p>
on
the
free
use
of p>
plastic
bags.
Although
the
ban
has
come
into< /p>
effect
since
last
year,
serious
white
pollution
stil l
exists
around
the
st reets,
in
the
trees,
and p>
on
the
lakes.
What's
more
worrisome,
people
do
not
seem
to
care
wheth er
using
plastic
bags
has< /p>
damaged
the
environment.
< br>To
deal
with
this
probl em,
more
actions
should
be
taken.
Publicity
pamphlets< /p>
should
be
printed
and< /p>
delivered
to
raise
people< /p>
’
s
awareness
of
thi s
environment
crisis.
Laws
should
be
made
to
imp ose
heavier
punishment
on
supermarkets,
department
stores
or
any
businesses
that
are
still
offering
free
p lastic
bags
to
customers.
People
should
be
encouraged
< p>to
use
re-usable
bags,
such
as
cloth
or
pa per
bags,
and
the
manu facturers
of
these
bags
sh ould
be
subsidized.
If
the se
actions
are
put
int o
place,
a
desirable
chang e
can
be
gradually
achieve d.
Yours
sincerely
Li
Ming
参考译文
亲爱的编辑:
我写信来倾述我对限塑令没有取得相应成效的担忧。
虽然从去年开始,
限塑令开 始实施,
街道、树木、湖面上仍然存在严重的白色污染。更糟糕的是,人们似乎不在意使
用塑料袋是
否会损害环境。
解决这个问题,
应该 采取更多的行动。
应该印刷和分发宣传册以提高人们的对环境危机
的意识
。
应该制定法律对仍然向顾客提供免费塑料袋的超市、
商场和其它企业实施更重的 处
罚。
应该鼓励人们使用可重复利用的袋子,
比如布袋或 纸袋。
生产这些袋子的厂家应该有补
贴。如果这些行动能得到落实,所期
望的改变会逐渐实现。
诚挚的,
李明
2
008
[
张剑老师文章
]
Dea
r
Bob,
After
a
pleasan t
journey
I
have
arrived p>
safely
in
Beijing.
In
my
luggage,
however,
I
discovered
with
great
surprise
the
CD
which
you
ha d
kindly
lent
me
earlier p>
on.
I
do
not
know
how
it
ended
up
in< /p>
my
bag,
but
it
must< /p>
be
by
a
mistake.
I
am
sincerely
sorry
for< /p>
this,
but
I
have
alr eady
put
the
CD
into
a
parcel
and
sent
it
< p>backto
you
by
regis tered
mail.
If
everything
goes
smoothly
,
the
post p>
office
told
me,
you
s hall
get
the
parcel
in
a
week’s
time.
My
study
in
Canada
was
a p>
happy
time
and
your
w onderful
accommodation
added
muc h
to
the
pleasure
of p>
my
stay.
I
believe
th is
experience
will
remain
in
my
memory
the
rest
< p>ofmy
life
.
If
you
have
a
chance p>
to
come
to
China,
I p>
shall
be
here
to
welc ome
you.
Yours
sincerely
Li
Ming
[
语言亮点
]
1.
have
arrived
safe ly
已安全抵达
2.
with
great
surprise
十分惊奇
3.
end< /p>
up
最终
4.
everything
goes
smoothly
事情进展顺利
5.<
/p>
accommodation
n.
提供食宿
6.
add
much
to
the
p leasure
增加了愉悦之情
7.
remain
in
my
memory
the
rest< /p>
of
my
life
在今后的岁月里我将一直记得 p>
[
思路解析
]
第一段:第
句交代写信的原因
—
在抵达北京后发现借的
< p>CD没有归还;第
3
句提出此错
误是
次意外。
第二段:第
1
句表示歉意并提出弥补措施
—
已经将
CD
寄回去。第
2
句补充说明邮寄的
CD
的抵达日期。
第三段:
第
1
句回顾在加拿大的美好时光以及对方对自己的照顾;
第
2
句在第
1
句的基础上
< br>提出永远不会忘记加拿大的经历;第
3
句表示期望有机会能回报对方。 p>
[
万能模板
]
Dear
Bob,
After
a
pleasant
journey
I
have
arrived
sa fely
in
Beijing.
As
I
< p>wasunpacking
my
luggage,
< p>I
discovered
with
great
surprise
the
CD
which
you
had
kindly
lent
me.
I
am
sorry
I
have
< p>forgotten
to
return
the
CD.
To
make
up
for
my
carelessness,
I
have
already
mailed
the
CD
to< /p>
you
by
registered
mail .
If
everything
goes
smoot hly,
you
will
get
it p>
in
a
week’s
time.
My
study
in
Canada
was
a
happy
experience
and
your
wonderful
accommodation
ad ded
much
to
the
pleasu re
of
my
stay.
I
bel ieve
this
experience
will
remain
in
my
memory
the
rest
of
my
life
an d
hope
I
will
have
a
chance
to
repay
you
for
your
kindly
help.
Yours
sincerely
Li
Ming
参考译文
亲爱的鲍勃:
愉快的旅行之后,
我已经安全抵达北京。
当我收拾行李时,
我吃惊地发现你好心借给我 p>
的
CD
。
抱歉,
我忘记归还< /p>
CD
了。
为了弥补我的粗心,
我已经将CD通过挂号 信寄给你了。
如果事情顺利,你会在一星期后收到它。
在加拿大
的求学是愉快的经历,
你的热情接待大大增加了我的愉悦之情。
我相信在今后 p>
的日子里,我将一直记得这个经历,希望有机会回报你的好心帮助。
诚挚的,
李明
2007
[
张剑老师文章
]
Dear
Sir
or< /p>
Madam,
I
am
a
st udent
from
Computer
Science
< p>Departmentof
this
university.
I
am
a
frequent
use r
of
the
university
li brary.
I
have
benefited
a< /p>
great
deal
from
the
books
which
I
borrow
there .
However,
I
find
that
we
do
not
have
many
new
books
on
Computer
Science.
Especially
small
is
the
collection
of
book s
from
foreign
publishers.
Therefore,
I
suggest
that
more
recent
books
on
Computer
Science
and
more
foreign
books
be
purchased
by
your
library,
so
that< /p>
students
like
me
shall
be
able
to
keep
up< /p>
with
new
developments
in p>
the
IT
field.
Thank
you
very
much
for
givin g
attention
to
my
letter.< /p>
Yours
sincerely
Li
Ming
[
语言亮点
]
1.<
/p>
frequent
user
常客
2.
benefit
a
great
deal
f rom
受益匪浅
tion
n.
收藏品 p>
se
v.
购买
5.
k eep
up
with
new
developmen ts
跟上……的发展
[
思路解析
]
第一段:第
1
句介绍自己的身份。第
2-3 p>
句开始引入主题,介绍自己与图书馆的关系,第
2
句说自己是
常客,第
3
句表明自己从借书中获益良多。
第二段:
p>
第
1-2
句转折指出图书馆服务的不足:
计算机科学领 域新书少以及外国出版的书更
少。
第
3
句 提出相应建议(购买计算机科学领域新书、购买外国书籍)以及建议的积极意
义(学生能
跟上
IT
发展)
。
第三段:为客套语,感
谢对方阅读自己的信。
[
万能模板
]
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
I
am
a
student
from
< br>Computer
Science
Department
o f
this
university
and
also
a
frequent
user
of
the
university
library.
I
have
benefited
a
great
deal
from
the
books
I
borrow
there.
To
further
< p>improve
the
service
there,
I
would
like
to
put
forward
two
suggestions.
Firstly,
I
suggest
that
< p>morerecent
books
on
Com puter
Science,
especially
foreig n
books,
be
purchased
by
your
library,
since
I p>
find
that
there
are
f ew
new
books
on
Computer p>
Science
in
library
and< /p>
rather
smaller
collection
of
books
from
foreign
publ ishers.
Secondly,
I
hope
< br>the
opening
time
of
the
library
can
be
adjust ed,
so
that
students
can p>
borrow
books
on
Saturday
as
well.
I
will
< p>beappreciative,
if
those
< p>improvementscan
be
achieved.< /p>
Thank
you
very
much
for
giving
attention
to
< p>myletter.
Yours
sincerely
Li
Ming
参考译文
亲爱的先生或女士:
我是本校计算机科学院的一名学生,
同时也是大学图 书馆的一名常客。
我从图书馆借的
图书中获益颇多。为了进一步改善图书
馆的服务,我想提两点建议。
第一,
我建议图书馆多买一些计算机科学领 域的新书,
尤其是外文图书,
因为我发现图
书馆里很少计
算机领域的新书,
外国出版的新书就更少了。
第二,
我希望图书馆 的开放时间
能做出调整,因此学生在周六也能借书。
如果实现上
述改善,我将很感激。谢谢你对来信的关注。
诚挚的,
李明
p>
2006
[
张剑老师文章
]
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
I
am
a
university
stud ent
from
Beijing.
I
would< /p>
like
to
offer
my
lim ited
financial
help
to
support
a
school
pupil
in
West
China.
Although
I
am
not
rich,
I
am< /p>
living
a
better
life
than
many
children
in
the
west.
I
know
some
< br>of
them
are
dropping
ou t
of
school
because
of
financial
problems
.
This
is
most
regretful
because
if
they
grow
up
wit hout
education,
they
will
have
little
chance
of
chan ging
their
life
and
will p>
probably
remain
in
pove rty
all
the
time.
Ther
efore,
I
would
like
to
give
up
some
entertainment
and
use
the
200
Yuan p>
which
is
saved
each
month
to
support
a
girl
in
Sichuan
Province
to
finish
her
primary
school. p>
She
should
be
7
or
8
years
old
and
sh ould
be
very
keen
to
go
to
school.
Can
you
find
a
candidate
for
me ?
Your
kind
reply
will
be
deeply
appreciated.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Ming p>
[
语言亮点
]
1.
f inancial
help
经济援助
2.
financial
problems
经济困难
3.
p>
regretful
a.
惋惜
4.
up
some
entertainment
放弃娱乐
keen
to
do
迫切想要做
[
思路解析
]
第一段:自我介绍并且说明写信的目的
—
愿意捐助西部小学生。
第二段:论述愿意捐助的理由。第
1
句论述理由
1
:自己自身比西部人更富裕;
第
2-3
句
论述理由
2
:一些人因为经济紧张而辍学,而他们可能因缺乏教育而永远 不能改变贫穷的命
运。
第三段:介绍资助具体细节。第
1
句介绍资助计划,提出每个月捐助
200
元,以帮助完成 小
学学业。第
2
句指明受助者的条件,提出受助者年龄要
7
、
8
岁并对学习非常渴望。第
3
句
回应写信的目的,希望对方找到合适的受助者。
第四段:为客套语,指出对对方回复的感激。
[
万能模板
]
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,< /p>
I’m
writing
to
ask
if
you
can
recommend
a< /p>
child
as
the
recipient
of
my
financial
assistanc e.
I
am
a
university p>
student
from
Beijing
an d
would
like
to
financiall y
support
a
girl
in
Sichuan
Province
to
finish p>
her
primary
school.
The
proper
candidate
should
be
7
or
8
years
old p>
and
should
be
very
< p>keento
go
to
school.
I
choose
to
help
a
girl,
because
girls
a re
more
likely
to
drop
out
of
school
because
o f
financial
stress.
Those
girls
without
education
will
have
little
chance
to
grow
out
of
poverty
tra p.
Therefore,
although
I
am
not
rich,
I
would
like
to
offer
my
help.
I
will
give
up
some
entertainment
and
use
the
200
Yuan
which
is
saved
each
month
to
pay
her
tuition.
Your
kind
reply
will
be
deeply
appreciated.
Yours
sincerel y,
Li
Ming
参考译文
亲爱的先生或女士:
我写信来询问您是否可以推荐一个孩子作为我经济援助的对象。
我是一名来自北京的大学生,
希望资助一名四川的女孩完成小学学业。< /p>
合适的人选应该
7
、
8
岁, 并且应该很期望上学。
我选择帮助女生,
是因为女孩更有可能因为经济压 力而退学。
没有受过教育的女生几乎
没有机会摆脱贫困。
因此,
虽然我并不富裕,
我仍然愿意提供我的帮助。
我将放弃一些 娱乐,
用每个月节省下的
200
元钱付她的学费。
如蒙回复,不胜感激。
诚挚的,
李明
2005
[
张剑老师文章
]
Dear
Mr.
Wang,
I
was
recruited
by
your
maga zine
two
months
ago.
I
have
been
working
as
an
editor
at
the
sports<
/p>
department.
Every
day
I
read
and
select
the
ar ticles
which
are
to
be
used
in
the
magazine.
I
have
been
working
har d.
But
after
two
month s,
I
find
that
I
am< /p>
not
suitable
for
the
job.
I
have
tried
my
< p>bestto
do
the
job
p>
well,
but
I
cannot.
W hile
at
university,
I
was< /p>
trained
as
a
reporter.
I
was
determined
to
be< /p>
a
journalist,
going
ar ound
the
country
to
interv iew
people
and
report
even ts.
But
at
the
magazine
I
have
no
chance
o f
realizing
my
dream
.
For
this
reason,
I
have
decided
to
quit.
I
am
sorry
for
any
troub le
which
might
arise
becau se
of
my
departure
. p>
I
am
sure
you
will
find
a
better
person
t o
replace
me.
I
wish
you
all
well.
Yours
s incerely,
Li
Ming
[
]
t
v.
招聘
v.
选择
suitable< /p>
for
对……适合
trained
as
被训练成为
determined
< p>todo
决定做
e
sb's
dream
实现梦想
ure
n.
离 开
e
v.
代替
[
思路解析
]
第一段:对自己进行简单介绍。第
1
句说明自己入职时间;第
2-4
句说明自己工作职位、
性< /p>
质和状态。
第二段:说明自己辞职的理由。第
1< /p>
句总述原因:工作不适合自己;第
2-4
句具体说明工作
< p>哪些方面不适合自己:
第
2
句指出能力不足以完成工 作;
第
3-4
句指出自己理想职业与现实
不符。
第三段:第
1
句提出辞职。第
2< /p>
句对自己的行为表示歉意。第
3-4
句对工作单位今后的工作
做出美好的展望。
[
万能模板
]
Dear
Mr.
Wang,
I
was
recruited
by
your
magazine
two
months
ago.
< p>Ihave
been
working
hard
as
an
editor
at
the
sports
department.
Every
day
I
read
and
select< /p>
the
articles
which
are
to
be
used
in
the
magazine.
I
am
grateful
for
this
opportunity
to
work
here.
However,
I
am< /p>
afraid
that
I
have
t o
quit
my
job.
Aft
er
two
months,
I
still
find
that
I
am
not
< p>suitablefor
the
job.
Fi rstly,
I
have
tried
my
best
to
do
the
job< /p>
well,
but
I
cannot.
In
addition,
I
was
tra ined
as
a
reporter
at
< p>university,but
at
the
< br>magazine
I
have
no
chan ce
of
realizing
my
dream p>
to
be
a
journalist,
going
around
the
country
< p>to
interview
people
and
report
events.
I
am
< p>sorryfor
any
trouble
wh ich
might
arise
because
of
my
departure.
I
am
sure
you
will
find
a
p>
better
person
to
replace
me.
I
wish
you
all
well.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Ming
参考译文
亲爱的王先生:
p>
我于
2
个月前加入您的杂志社。
我在体育部一 直努力工作。
每天我阅读选择将会被用在
杂志上的文章。我很感激能有在
这工作的机会。但恐怕我不得不辞职。
两个月后,我仍然发现我不适合这份工作。首先,
我尽力做好工作,但却不能。其次,
我在大学被训练成为记者,
但在这几 乎不可能实现我成为走遍全国采访、
报道的记者的愿望。
对因我的离开而
可能有的问题我深表歉意。
我相信您能找到个更好的人选替代我。
希望
< p>您一切顺利。
诚挚的,
李明
二、真题大作文
2011
[
张剑老师文章 p>
]
In
the
picture
we
see
a
traditional
woode n
boat
with
a
boatman
< p>steeringit
with
a
long< /p>
wooden
pole.
In
the
boat,
two
tourists
seem
< p>tobe
enjoying
not
just< /p>
the
cruise
,
but
als o
the
food
they
bring< /p>
on
the
boat.
One
of< /p>
them
throws
the
unwanted p>
left-over
food
and
the
< p>wrappingpaper
into
the
lake.
These
two
men
< p>areobviously
not
the
fi rst
to
throw
food
and
< p>packagesinto
the
lake,
which
has
already
been
littered
with
a
great
dea l
of
similar
rubbish.
From
what
looks
now
on
t he
lake,
it
has
alread y
been
heavily
polluted
wi th
the
garbage
that
touris ts
left
behind,
or
what
the
picture-caption
calls
< p>“Leftoversof
Tourism”.
Th
e
picture
strikes
me
as
a
thought-provoking
criticism
< p>oftourists’
bad
habits.
It
forces
us
to
revie w
our
behavior
and
ponder< /p>
if
we
should
only
th ink
of
our
own
pleasure
and
convenience,
and
ign ore
the
order
and
tidiness
of
the
places
we
vi sit.
It
forces
us
to
reconsider
our
relationship
with
nature
and
ponder
wh at
we
should
do
to
m ake
our
activities
friendly
< p>tothe
environment
.
I p>
know
from
news
reports< /p>
that,
not
just
is
su ch
bad
tourist
behavior
ta king
place
inside
our
own< /p>
country,
but
some
of p>
our
countrymen
are
also
taking
their
bad
habits
abroad.
In
this
sense,
th e
picture
poses
challenging< /p>
questions
on
the
relations hip
between
individual
behavior< /p>
and
public
interests,
as
well
as
on
our
ve ry
idea
of
morality.
O
bviously,
many
of
our
coun trymen
need
education,
not
just
in
environmental
protectio n,
but
also
in
moral p>
principle
.
Everyone
should
know
that
natural
beauty< /p>
belongs
to
all
the
s ociety.
No
individual
has
the
right
to
damage
or
litter
the
beautiful
envi ronment.
[
语言亮点
]
ional
wooden
boat
传统木船
v.
驾驶
to
do p>
似乎做某事
n.
乘船旅行
ed
a.
不需要的
-over
n.< /p>
所剩之物
(近义:
rubbish,
garbage )
ng
paper
包装纸
e
p>
n.
包装纸
littered
with
到处丢弃
y
pollute
严重 污染
sb
as
给某人……印象
< p>t-provoking
a.
令人深思
p>
our
behavior
审视自己的行为
14
.
ponder
v.
思考
15.
relationship
with
nature
与自然之 间的关系
16.
friendly
to
t he
environment
对环境友好
challenging
questions
on
提出挑战性的问 题
interests
公众利益
principle
道德规范
[
思维解析
]
第一段:以船为中心按地点顺序展开描写。第
1
句描写船夫正在撑船;第
2-3
句描写船内两
人
行为。
第二段:第
1
句将向湖里扔垃圾的两人的特殊行为 延伸到所有旅行者的普遍性行为;第
2
句揭示出湖面被旅游者扔弃的垃圾
污染了,点出图片标题旅游之“余”
。
第三段:第
1 p>
句总述图片批判了旅行者的坏行为,令人深思。第
2—5
句论述图片带 给我们
的思索,
从行为→人与自然关系→道德观,
逐渐深 入:
第
2
句指出图片让我们思考我们是否
应该只顾自己而不顾环境;
第
3
句指出图片让我们重新思考与自然 的关系,
思考如何才能与
环境保持友好关系;第
4
句提出游客的不良行为不仅在国内有体现,甚至带到了国外;第
5
句在第
4
句的基础上提出,图片提出事关个人行为和公众利益的关系以及道德的 问题。
第三段:探讨如何解决问题:
第
1
句指出需要在保护环境,及道德规范方面教育民众
;第
2-3
第
2
句说每个人 应该意识到环境属于社会,
第
3
句说每个人都没有权利破 坏环境。
[
万能模板
]
In
p>
the
picture
we
see
a
traditional
wooden
boat
< p>witha
boatman
steering
it
with
a
long
wooden
< p>pole.
In
the
boat,
t wo
tourists
seem
to
be
enjoying
not
just
the
c ruise,
but
also
the
food p>
they
bring
on
the
boat.
One
of
them
throws< /p>
the
unwanted
left-over
foo d
and
the
wrapping
paper p>
into
the
lake.
These
two
men
are
obviously
not
the
first
to
throw
food
and
packages
into
the
lake,
since
the
la ke
has
already
been
li ttered
with
a
great
deal p>
of
similar
rubbish.
It
< p>issad
that
the
lake
has
already
been
heav ily
polluted
with
the
garb age
that
tourists
left
beh ind,
or
what
the
picture-c aption
calls
“Leftovers
of p>
Tourism”.
The
picture
s trikes
me
as
a
thought-pro voking
criticism
of
some
tourists’
bad
habits.
Those p>
immoral
tourists
only
t hink
of
their
own
pleasure
and
convenience,
and
igno re
the
order
and
tidin
ess
of
scenic
spots.
This< /p>
picture
forces
us
to
review
our
own
behavior,
reconsider
our
relationship
with
nature
and
figure
out
what
we
should
do
t o
make
our
activities
frie ndly
to
the
environment.
In
addition,
this
picture
reminds
me
of
news
repo rts
that,
not
just
is
< p>suchbad
tourist
behavior<
/p>
taking
place
inside
our
own
country,
but
some
of
our
countrymen
are
also
taking
their
bad
habi ts
abroad.
In
this
sense,< /p>
the
picture
poses
challeng ing
questions
on
the
r elationship
between
individual
behavior
and
public
interests ,
as
well
as
on
our
very
idea
of
morality.
How
can
we
alleviate< /p>
the
problem
revealed
in
the
above
picture?
Obviously ,
education
should
be
given
to
many
of
our
countrymen,
not
just
in
e nvironmental
protection,
but
als o
in
moral
principle.
Everyone
should
be
aware
< br>that
natural
beauty
belongs p>
to
all
the
society.
N o
individual
has
the
r ight
to
damage
or
litter p>
the
beautiful
environment.
参考译文
从这幅图中,我们看到一个传统木船,船上有个船夫用长木棍撑船。在
船里,两个游客
似乎不仅在享受乘船旅行,
还在享受他们带上船的食物。
其中一个把不要的剩余食物和包装
纸扔进湖里。
这两个人 显然不是第一个将食物和包装袋扔进湖里的人,
因为湖面已经布满了
同样
的垃圾。很遗憾,湖面已经被游客扔的垃圾或者如图中文字说的旅游之“余”严重污染
了
。
这幅图片给我的印象是它发人深省地批判了一些旅客的不良行为。
这些 不道德的旅客只
考虑到自己的快乐和方便,而忽视景点的秩序和整洁。这幅图强迫我们审
视自己的行为,
重
新思考我们与自然的关系,并且弄明白我们应该怎么做
使我们的行为与自然友好。另外,
这
幅图让我想起了新闻报道:
这样的不好的游客行为不仅发生在中国,
一些国人还把他们的不
良
行为带到了国外。
从这方面来说,
这幅图就个人行为与公众利益关系以及我们的道 德观提
出了具有挑战性的问题。
我们怎样才能减轻图中反映的问
题呢?显然,
应该在环境保护方面和道德规范方面教育
大部分国人。
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每个人都应该意识到自然的美丽属于整个社会。
每个人都没有权利破坏或污染
美丽的环境。
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张剑老 师文章
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In
the
picture p>
we
see
a
hotpot
which
is
cooking
a
mixture
< p>ofcultural
ingredients
:
< p>Shakespeare,
Enlightenment,
Conf ucius,
Einstein,
postmodern,
dec onstruction,
martial
arts,
P
eking
opera,
etc.
The
word s
under
the
picture
say, p>
“Cultural
Hotpot,
Delicious
and
Nutritious
”.
The
picture
shows
a
strange
p henomenon
in
our
postmodern
< p>society.As
globalization
makes
the
world
a
small
village
and
as
the
Int ernet
gathers
an
immense
p ool
of
information,
communic
ation
between
different
cultures
has
become
possible
and p>
frequent.
Individuals
are
< br>likely
to
absorb
knowledge
from
a
wide
range
of p>
sources
.
In
people’s
minds,
the
East
and
the p>
West
coexist
and
the
ancient
mix
with
the
m odern.
We
are
learning
Eng lish
language
and
culture,
but
the
people
of
the
world
are
learning
our
language
and
culture.
This p>
cultural
exchange
will
accordingly
create
a
cultural
mosaic
which
pieces
together
all
kinds
of
cultural
fragments
.
But
facing
such
a
hotpot
of
knowl edge,
people
may
feel
conf used
as
to
the
compatibili ty
of
its
diverse
elem ents.
There
is
also
the
danger
of
“
indigestion
< p>”after
having
consumed
such
a
vast
variety
of
knowledge.
If
people
cann ot
coordinate
the
diverse
,
or
sometimes
contradictory
,
systems
of
thought
< p>intheir
minds,
it
may p>
well
cause
disorientation
,
leading
even
to
conflicts
between
cultures.
There
fore,
there
is
urgent
need
for
a
spirit
of
coe xistence
and
tolerance
between p>
cultures.
There
is
also
urgent
need
for
a
s pirit
of
equality
and
harm ony
.
On
one
hand,
w e
should
show
respect
for
other
cultures,
and
on
the
other
hand
we
m ust
be
duly
proud
of
our
own
cultural
heritage
p>
.
We
should
be
aware< /p>
of
our
own
identity
as
Chinese
and
from
this p>
point
of
view
adjust
our
relationship
with
people s
of
the
world.
If
a ll
people
do
the
same,
we
shall
have
a
happy p>
and
peaceful
world.
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