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2020年12月30日发(作者:闵刚侯)


一、真题小作文


2011


[

张剑 老师文章

]


Dear

Xiao

Ping,


How

are

things

with

you?

I

watched

the

fi lm

“2012”

on

DVD

yesterday

and

found

it

a


wonderful

film.

I

strongly

recommend

it

to

you.


The

film

is

about

an

ancient

prophesy

which

forecast s

the

end

of

the

wor ld

in

the

year

2012.


Several

ancient

civilizations,

such

as

Jewish

and

May an,

have

foretold

the

disa ster

and

therefore


made

< p>the

story

look

rather

be lievable

.

But

the

film

is

less

an

adaptation

of

the

prophesy

than

a


story

of

escape

from

< p>the

disaster.

The

film

e xplores

the

complicated

behavior s

of

people


confronted

with

death

and

asks

a

soul-searching

question

about

human

nature:

Is

there

al truism

or


complete

selflessn ess

when

people

face

the

final

moment

of

one’s

life?

I

find

the

film

one

of

the


best

mov ies

produced

by

Hollywood

in

recent

years.


I

wis h

you

would

not

work

too

hard

in

your

study

and

would

find

time

to

relax

and

enjoy


films

from

time

to

time.


Sincerely

yours


Li

Ming< /p>


[

语言亮点

]


ful

a.

精彩的


st/foretold

v.

预言


able

a.

可信的


A

than

B

不是

A

而 是

B


tion

n.

改编

< br>e

v.

探究


-searching

a.

令人深思的


[

思路解析

]

< p>
第一段:首先用

How

are

things

with

you?

寒暄,接着写明写信的目的:看了一部很好的电


影,推荐给对方。


第二段:本段从剧情(

1-2

句)和电影的深刻意义即对人性的拷问(

3-4

句,其中第

3

句为


过渡句)两方面入手介绍该电影值得推荐的主要理由。最后一句对 该片进行总体评价。


第三段:

以学业和休闲平衡为理由,

建议对方观看电影,

回应主题并且再次与对方进行寒暄。


[

万能模板

]


Dear

Xiao

Ping ,


I’m

writing

to

recom mend

you

a

wonderful

film< /p>


“2012”.

I

watched

this

film

yesterday

and


fo und

it

one

of

the

be st

movies

produced

by

Holl ywood

in

recent

years.


This

film

is

recommendable

< p>first

because

of

its

int eresting

plots.


It

is

about

an

ancient


prophesy

which

forecasts

the

end

< p>of

the

world

in

the

< p>year

2012.

Several

ancient

civilizations,

such


as

Je wish

and

Mayan,

have

foret old

the

disaster

and

there fore

made

the

story

look

rather


believable.

This

film

is

appealing

also

be cause

it

explores


the

complicated

behaviors

of

people< /p>


confronted

with

death

and

asks

a

soul-searching

question

about

human

nature:


Is

there

complete


sel flessness

when

people

face

the

final

moment

of

one’s

life?


I

am

sure

you

will

love

this

film.< /p>

Hope

to

discuss

it

w ith

you

later.


Sincerely

yours


Li

Ming


参考译文


亲爱的小平:


我写信向你推荐一个精彩的电影

—201 2

我昨天看了这部电影,

发现它是好莱坞这几年


出品的最好的电影之一。


这个电影值得推荐首先在于它精彩的故事情节。

它关于一个古代预言,

其预见世界将于


2012

年毁灭。一些古代文明,比如犹太和玛雅都预言了这场灾难,因此使这个故事显得非


常可 信。

这个电影吸引人还在于它探索了人们面对死亡的复杂行为,

询问了一个有关人 性的


令人深思的问题:当人们面临生命尽头时,会彻底的无私吗?


我相信你会喜欢这部电影。希望今后和你讨论它。


诚挚的,


李 明


2010


[

张剑老师文章

]< /p>


V

olunteers

for

Intern ational

Conference


The

Postg raduates’

Association

is

invitin g

applications

from

students

who

are

willing

to

be


volunteers

for

an

inter national

conference

on

globaliza tion.

A

group

of

ten

volunteers

will

be


recruite d

to

provide

secretarial

s upport

for

the

conference

organization.

They

are

required< /p>

to


work

an

average

of

8

hours

per

week

from

10

June

to

10

< p>October

2010.

Candidates

shoul d

be


second-year

graduate

students

of

this

university< /p>

and

should

speak

fairly

good

English,

preferably


with

TEM

4

certificate.

A pplications,

containing

CVs

of

the

applicants,

should

be

sent

to


Postgraduates’Associa tion,

15

University

Avenue,

< p>before

1

May

2010.


P ostgraduates’Association


[

语言亮点

]


v.

征求,邀请


te

v.

招聘


e

secretarial

support

提供秘书工作服务


requi red

to

do

被要求做……


< p>average

of

平均


[

思路解析

]


整篇启事显得比较正式,

1

句开门见山提出研究生会正在招聘国际会议志愿者;

2-3


具体介绍招聘职位相关事宜包括招聘人数、应聘者所需从事的基本工作性质和时间; 第

4


句规定应聘者的条件;第

5

句介绍如 何应聘。


[

万能模板

]


Recr uitment

Announcement


The

Pos tgraduates’

Association

is

invit ing

applications

from

students

who

are

willing

to

provide

secretarial

support

fo r

an

international

conference

on

globalization.

Ten

volunt eers

will

be


recruited

and

they

are

required

to< /p>

work

an

average

of

8

hours

per

week

from

10

June

to

10


October

2010.

Candidates

should

b e


second-year

graduate

stude nts

of

this

university

and

should


be

able

to

speak

fairly

good

English,

preferably

with

TEM

4

certificate.


Whoever

is

inte rested

should

send

his

app lication

to

Postgraduates’

Assoc iation,

15


University

Avenue ,

before

1

May

2010.


Postgraduates’

Association


参考 译文


招聘启事


研究生会正邀请愿意为全球化国际会议提供秘书工 作服务的同学进行工作申请。

我们将


招募

10

< p>名志愿者,他们将在

2010

6

10

日至

2010

10

10

日期间平均每周工作

8


小时。

申请人应该是该校研究生二年级学生,

且应该能够说流利的英语,

最好有 专业四级证


书。感兴趣的人可以将申请于

2010

5

1

日前送到大学路

15

< p>号研究生会。


研究生会


2009


[

张剑老师文章

]


Dear

editor,


The

ban

on

the

free

use

of

plastic

bags

has

come

into

effect

since

last

year,

but

I

am

afraid


the

situation

in

this

city

does

not

give

us

any

reason

for

celebration

.

We

still

face

a

lot

of

white


pollution

around

the

streets,

in

the

trees,

and

on

the

lakes.

People

< p>do

not

seem

to

care

< p>whether


their

actions

have

damaged

the

environment.


Urgent

actions

should

be

taken

to

deal

with

this

problem.

I

suggest

that

publicity


pamphlets

be

printed

and

delivered

to

h omes

in

the

city

to

raise

people’s

awareness

of

< p>the


environmental

crisis.

Laws

should

be

made

to

impose

heavier

punishment

on< /p>

supermarkets,


department

sto res

or

any

businesses

that

are

still

offering

free

plastic

bags

to

customers.< /p>

We

can


also

encourage< /p>

people

to

use

re-usable

bags,

such

as

cloth

or

paper

bags,

and

subsidise

the


manufacturers

of

these

bags.

If

these

actio ns

are

put

into

place

< p>,

I

believe

we

shall

see

enormous


changes

a

year

from

now.


Yours

sincerely


Li

Ming


[

语言亮点

]


ban

on

对……的禁令


2.

come

into

< p>effect

生效


3.

does

no t

give

us

any

reason

for

celebration

没有理由庆祝


4.

urgent

actions

立即行动


5.< /p>

publicity

pamphlets

宣传册

6.

raise

people’s

awareness

of

提高人的……意识


7.

impose

heavier

punishment

on

对……实施更 重的处罚


8.

be

put

into

place

实施


[

思路解析

]< /p>


第一段:第

1-2

句介绍限塑令不成功的客观情形:第

1

句总述情形不容乐观;第

2

句举例说


明白色污染的表现。

3

句指出限塑令不成功的主观情形 :

人们似乎不在乎其行为对环境造


成的危害。


第 二段:第

1

句总述,提出应该采取措施。第

2-4

句提出减少塑料袋使用的具体措施:第

2


句提出应该印刷、

分发传单提高人们对环境危机的意识;

3

句提出应该严肃惩罚 免费提供


塑料袋的商家;

4

句提出应该 鼓励人们使用可重复使用的袋子,

并补助生产可重复使用的


袋子的厂家。 第

5

句指出建议实施的效果。


[

万能模板

]


Dear

editor,


I’ m

writing

to

express

my

deep

concern

about

the

ineffectiveness

of


the

ban< /p>

on

the

free

use

of


plastic

bags.

Although


the

ban

has

come

into< /p>

effect

since

last

year,

serious

white

pollution

stil l


exists

around

the

st reets,

in

the

trees,

and

on

the

lakes.

What's

more

worrisome,

people

do

not


seem

to

care

wheth er

using

plastic

bags

has< /p>

damaged

the

environment.

< br>To

deal

with

this

probl em,

more

actions

should

be

taken.


Publicity

pamphlets< /p>

should

be


printed

and< /p>

delivered

to

raise

people< /p>

s

awareness

of

thi s

environment

crisis.

Laws

should

be

made


to

imp ose

heavier

punishment

on

supermarkets,

department

stores

or

any

businesses

that

are

still


offering

free

p lastic

bags

to

customers.

People

should

be

encouraged

< p>to


use

re-usable

bags,

such

as


cloth

or

pa per

bags,

and


the

manu facturers

of

these

bags

sh ould

be

subsidized.

If

the se

actions

are


put

int o

place,

a

desirable

chang e

can

be

gradually

achieve d.


Yours

sincerely


Li

Ming


参考译文


亲爱的编辑:


我写信来倾述我对限塑令没有取得相应成效的担忧。

虽然从去年开始,

限塑令开 始实施,


街道、树木、湖面上仍然存在严重的白色污染。更糟糕的是,人们似乎不在意使 用塑料袋是


否会损害环境。


解决这个问题,

应该 采取更多的行动。

应该印刷和分发宣传册以提高人们的对环境危机


的意识 。

应该制定法律对仍然向顾客提供免费塑料袋的超市、

商场和其它企业实施更重的 处


罚。

应该鼓励人们使用可重复利用的袋子,

比如布袋或 纸袋。

生产这些袋子的厂家应该有补


贴。如果这些行动能得到落实,所期 望的改变会逐渐实现。


诚挚的,


李明


2 008


[

张剑老师文章

]


Dea r

Bob,


After

a

pleasan t

journey

I

have

arrived

safely

in

Beijing.

In

my

luggage,

however,

I

discovered

with

great

surprise

the

CD

which

you

ha d

kindly

lent

me

earlier

on.

I

do

not

know


how

it

ended

up

in< /p>

my

bag,

but

it

must< /p>

be

by

a

mistake.


I

am

sincerely

sorry

for< /p>

this,

but

I

have

alr eady

put

the

CD

into

a

parcel

and

sent

it

< p>back

to


you

by

regis tered

mail.

If

everything

goes

smoothly

,

the

post

office

told

me,

you

s hall

get

the


parcel

in

a

week’s

time.


My

study

in

Canada

was

a

happy

time

and

your

w onderful

accommodation

added

muc h

to


the

pleasure

of

my

stay.

I

believe

th is

experience

will

remain

in

my

memory

the

rest

< p>of

my

life

.


If

< p>ever

you

have

a

chance

to

come

to

China,

I

shall

be

here

to

welc ome

you.


Yours

sincerely


Li

Ming


[

语言亮点

]


1.

have

arrived

safe ly

已安全抵达


2.

with

great

surprise

十分惊奇


3.

end< /p>

up

最终


4.

everything

goes

smoothly

事情进展顺利


5.< /p>

accommodation

n.

提供食宿


6.

add

much

to

the

p leasure

增加了愉悦之情


7.

remain

in

my

memory

the

rest< /p>

of

my

life

在今后的岁月里我将一直记得


[

思路解析

]


第一段:第

< p>1-2

句交代写信的原因

在抵达北京后发现借的

< p>CD

没有归还;第

3

句提出此错


误是 次意外。


第二段:第

1

句表示歉意并提出弥补措施

已经将

CD

寄回去。第

2

句补充说明邮寄的

CD


的抵达日期。


第三段:

1

句回顾在加拿大的美好时光以及对方对自己的照顾;

2

句在第

1

句的基础上

< br>提出永远不会忘记加拿大的经历;第

3

句表示期望有机会能回报对方。


[

万能模板

]


Dear

Bob,


After

a

pleasant

journey

I

have

arrived

sa fely

in

Beijing.

As

I

< p>was

unpacking

my

luggage,

< p>I


discovered

with

great

surprise

the

CD

which

you

had

kindly

lent

me.

I

am

sorry

I

have

< p>forgotten


to

return

the

CD.

To

make

up

for

my

carelessness,

I

have

already

mailed

the

CD

to< /p>

you

by


registered

mail .

If

everything

goes

smoot hly,

you

will


get

it

in

a

week’s

time.


My

study

in

Canada

was

a

happy

experience

and

your

wonderful

accommodation

ad ded


much

to

the

pleasu re

of

my

stay.

I

bel ieve

this

experience

will

remain

in

my

memory

the

rest

of


my

life

an d

hope

I

will

have

a

chance

to

repay

you

for

your

kindly

help.


Yours

sincerely


Li

Ming


参考译文


亲爱的鲍勃:


愉快的旅行之后,

我已经安全抵达北京。

当我收拾行李时,

我吃惊地发现你好心借给我


CD

抱歉,

我忘记归还< /p>

CD

了。

为了弥补我的粗心,

我已经将CD通过挂号 信寄给你了。


如果事情顺利,你会在一星期后收到它。


在加拿大 的求学是愉快的经历,

你的热情接待大大增加了我的愉悦之情。

我相信在今后


的日子里,我将一直记得这个经历,希望有机会回报你的好心帮助。


诚挚的,


李明


2007


[

张剑老师文章

]


Dear

Sir

or< /p>

Madam,


I

am

a

st udent

from

Computer

Science

< p>Department

of

this

university.

I

am

a

frequent

use r

of


the

university

li brary.

I

have

benefited

a< /p>

great

deal

from

the

books

which

I

borrow

there .


However,

I

find

that

we

do

not

have

many

new

books

on

Computer

Science.

Especially

small


is

the

collection

of

book s

from

foreign

publishers.

Therefore,

I

suggest

that

more

recent

books

on


Computer

Science

and

more

foreign

books

be

purchased

by

your

library,

so

that< /p>

students

like

me


shall

be

able

to

keep

up< /p>

with

new

developments

in

the

IT

field.


Thank

you

very

much

for

givin g

attention

to

my

letter.< /p>


Yours

sincerely


Li

Ming


[

语言亮点

]


1.< /p>

frequent

user

常客


2.

benefit

a

great

deal

f rom

受益匪浅


tion

n.

收藏品


se

v.

购买


5.

k eep

up

with

new

developmen ts

跟上……的发展


[

思路解析

]


第一段:第

1

句介绍自己的身份。第

2-3

句开始引入主题,介绍自己与图书馆的关系,第

2


句说自己是 常客,第

3

句表明自己从借书中获益良多。


第二段:

1-2

句转折指出图书馆服务的不足:

计算机科学领 域新书少以及外国出版的书更


少。

3

句 提出相应建议(购买计算机科学领域新书、购买外国书籍)以及建议的积极意


义(学生能 跟上

IT

发展)


第三段:为客套语,感 谢对方阅读自己的信。


[

万能模板

]

Dear

Sir

or

Madam,


I

am

a

student

from

< br>Computer

Science

Department

o f

this

university

and

also

a

frequent

user


of

the

university

library.

I

have

benefited

a

great

deal

from

the

books

I

borrow

there.

To

further

< p>
improve

the

service

there,

I

would

like

to

put

forward

two

suggestions.


Firstly,

I

suggest

that

< p>more

recent

books

on

Com puter

Science,

especially

foreig n

books,

be


purchased

by

your

library,

since

I

find

that

there

are

f ew

new

books

on

Computer

Science

in


library

and< /p>

rather

smaller

collection

of

books

from

foreign

publ ishers.

Secondly,

I

hope

< br>the


opening

time

of

the

library

can

be

adjust ed,

so

that

students

can

borrow

books

on

Saturday

as


well.


I

will

< p>be

appreciative,

if

those

< p>improvements

can

be

achieved.< /p>

Thank

you

very

much

for

giving


attention

to

< p>my

letter.


Yours

sincerely


Li

Ming


参考译文


亲爱的先生或女士:


我是本校计算机科学院的一名学生,

同时也是大学图 书馆的一名常客。

我从图书馆借的


图书中获益颇多。为了进一步改善图书 馆的服务,我想提两点建议。


第一,

我建议图书馆多买一些计算机科学领 域的新书,

尤其是外文图书,

因为我发现图


书馆里很少计 算机领域的新书,

外国出版的新书就更少了。

第二,

我希望图书馆 的开放时间


能做出调整,因此学生在周六也能借书。


如果实现上 述改善,我将很感激。谢谢你对来信的关注。


诚挚的,


李明


2006


[

张剑老师文章

]


Dear

Sir

or

Madam,


I

am

a

university

stud ent

from

Beijing.

I

would< /p>

like

to

offer

my

lim ited

financial

help

to


support

a

school

pupil

in

West

China.


Although

I

am

not

rich,

I

am< /p>

living

a

better

life

than

many

children

in

the

west.

I

know

some

< br>of

them

are

dropping

ou t

of

school

because

of

financial

problems

.

This

is

most

regretful

because


if

they

grow

up

wit hout

education,

they

will

have

little

chance

of

chan ging

their

life

and

will


probably

remain

in

pove rty

all

the

time.


Ther efore,

I

would

like

to

give

up

some

entertainment

and

use

the

200

Yuan

which

is

saved


each

month

to

support

a

girl

in

Sichuan

Province

to

finish

her

primary

school.

She

should

be

7

or


8

years

old

and

sh ould

be

very

keen

to

go

to

school.

Can

you

find

a

candidate

for

me ?


Your

kind

reply

will

be

deeply

appreciated.

Yours

sincerely,


Li

Ming


[

语言亮点

]


1.

f inancial

help

经济援助


2.

financial

problems

经济困难


3.

regretful

a.

惋惜


4.

< p>give

up

some

entertainment

放弃娱乐


keen

to

do

迫切想要做


[

思路解析

]


第一段:自我介绍并且说明写信的目的

愿意捐助西部小学生。


第二段:论述愿意捐助的理由。第

1

句论述理由

1

:自己自身比西部人更富裕;

2-3


论述理由

2

:一些人因为经济紧张而辍学,而他们可能因缺乏教育而永远 不能改变贫穷的命


运。


第三段:介绍资助具体细节。第

1

句介绍资助计划,提出每个月捐助

200

元,以帮助完成 小


学学业。第

2

句指明受助者的条件,提出受助者年龄要

7

8

岁并对学习非常渴望。第

3


回应写信的目的,希望对方找到合适的受助者。


第四段:为客套语,指出对对方回复的感激。


[

万能模板

]


Dear

Sir

or

Madam,< /p>


I’m

writing

to

ask

if

you

can

recommend

a< /p>

child

as

the

recipient

of


my

financial

assistanc e.


I

am

a

university

student

from


Beijing

an d

would

like

to

financiall y

support

a

girl

in

Sichuan


Province

to

finish

her

primary

school.

The

proper

candidate

should

be


7

or

8

years

old

and

should


be

very

< p>keen

to

go

to

school.


I

choose

to

help

a

girl,

because


girls

a re

more

likely

to

drop

out

of

school

because

o f

financial


stress.

Those

girls

without

education

will

have

little

chance

to

grow

out

of

poverty

tra p.

Therefore,


although

I

am

not

rich,

I

would

like

to

offer

my

help.


I

will

give

up

some

entertainment

and

use


the

200

Yuan

which

is

saved

each

month

to

pay

her

tuition.


Your

kind

reply

will

be

deeply

appreciated.


Yours

sincerel y,


Li

Ming


参考译文

亲爱的先生或女士:


我写信来询问您是否可以推荐一个孩子作为我经济援助的对象。


我是一名来自北京的大学生,

希望资助一名四川的女孩完成小学学业。< /p>

合适的人选应该


7

8

岁, 并且应该很期望上学。


我选择帮助女生,

是因为女孩更有可能因为经济压 力而退学。

没有受过教育的女生几乎


没有机会摆脱贫困。

因此,

虽然我并不富裕,

我仍然愿意提供我的帮助。

我将放弃一些 娱乐,


用每个月节省下的

200

元钱付她的学费。


如蒙回复,不胜感激。


诚挚的,


李明


2005


[

张剑老师文章

]


Dear

Mr.

Wang,


I

was

recruited

by

your

maga zine

two

months

ago.

I

have

been

working

as

an

editor

at

the


sports< /p>

department.

Every

day

I

read

and

select

the

ar ticles

which

are

to

be

used

in

the

magazine.

I


have

been

working

har d.


But

after

two

month s,

I

find

that

I

am< /p>

not

suitable

for

the

job.

I

have

tried

my

< p>best

to

do

the


job

well,

but

I

cannot.

W hile

at

university,

I

was< /p>

trained

as

a

reporter.

I

was

determined

to

be< /p>

a


journalist,

going

ar ound

the

country

to

interv iew

people

and

report

even ts.

But

at

the

magazine

I


have

no

chance

o f

realizing

my

dream

.


For

this

reason,

I

have

decided

to

quit.

I

am

sorry

for

any

troub le

which

might

arise

becau se


of

my

departure

.

I

am

sure

you

will

find

a

better

person

t o

replace

me.

I

wish

you

all

well.


Yours

s incerely,


Li

Ming


[

< p>语言亮点

]


t

v.

招聘


v.

选择


suitable< /p>

for

对……适合


trained

as

被训练成为


determined

< p>to

do

决定做


e

sb's

dream

实现梦想


ure

n.

离 开


e

v.

代替


[

思路解析

]


第一段:对自己进行简单介绍。第

1

句说明自己入职时间;第

2-4

句说明自己工作职位、

性< /p>


质和状态。


第二段:说明自己辞职的理由。第

1< /p>

句总述原因:工作不适合自己;第

2-4

句具体说明工作

< p>
哪些方面不适合自己:

2

句指出能力不足以完成工 作;

3-4

句指出自己理想职业与现实


不符。


第三段:第

1

句提出辞职。第

2< /p>

句对自己的行为表示歉意。第

3-4

句对工作单位今后的工作


做出美好的展望。


[

万能模板

]


Dear

Mr.

Wang,


I

was

recruited

by


your

magazine

two

months

ago.

< p>I

have

been

working

hard

as

an

editor

at


the

sports

department.

Every

day

I

read

and

select< /p>

the

articles

which

are

to

be

used

in

the


magazine.

I

am

grateful

for

this

opportunity

to

work

here.

However,

I

am< /p>

afraid

that

I

have

t o

quit


my

job.


Aft er

two

months,

I

still

find

that

I

am

not

< p>suitable

for

the

job.

Fi rstly,

I

have

tried

my

best

to


do

the

job< /p>

well,

but

I

cannot.

In

addition,


I

was

tra ined

as

a

reporter

at

< p>university,

but

at

the

< br>magazine

I

have

no

chan ce

of

realizing

my

dream

to

be


a

journalist,

going

around

the

country

< p>to


interview

people

and

report

events.


I

am

< p>sorry

for

any

trouble

wh ich

might

arise

because

of

my

departure.

I

am

sure

you

will

find


a

better

person

to

replace

me.

I

wish

you

all

well.


Yours

sincerely,

Li

Ming


参考译文


亲爱的王先生:


我于

2

个月前加入您的杂志社。

我在体育部一 直努力工作。

每天我阅读选择将会被用在


杂志上的文章。我很感激能有在 这工作的机会。但恐怕我不得不辞职。


两个月后,我仍然发现我不适合这份工作。首先, 我尽力做好工作,但却不能。其次,


我在大学被训练成为记者,

但在这几 乎不可能实现我成为走遍全国采访、

报道的记者的愿望。


对因我的离开而 可能有的问题我深表歉意。

我相信您能找到个更好的人选替代我。

希望

< p>
您一切顺利。


诚挚的,


李明


二、真题大作文


2011


[

张剑老师文章

]


In

the

picture

we

see

a

traditional

woode n

boat

with

a

boatman

< p>steering

it

with

a

long< /p>


wooden

pole.

In

the

boat,

two

tourists

seem

< p>to

be

enjoying

not

just< /p>

the

cruise

,

but

als o

the

food


they

bring< /p>

on

the

boat.

One

of< /p>

them

throws

the

unwanted

left-over

food

and

the

< p>wrapping

paper


into

the

lake.


These

two

men

< p>are

obviously

not

the

fi rst

to

throw

food

and

< p>packages

into

the

lake,

which


has

already

been

littered

with

a

great

dea l

of

similar

rubbish.

From

what

looks

now

on

t he

lake,

it


has

alread y

been

heavily

polluted

wi th

the

garbage

that

touris ts

left

behind,

or

what

the


picture-caption

calls

< p>“Leftovers

of

Tourism”.


Th e

picture

strikes

me

as

a

thought-provoking

criticism

< p>of

tourists’

bad

habits.

It

forces

us


to

revie w

our

behavior

and

ponder< /p>

if

we

should

only

th ink

of

our

own

pleasure

and

convenience,


and

ign ore

the

order

and

tidiness

of

the

places

we

vi sit.

It

forces

us

to

reconsider

our

relationship


with

nature

and

ponder

wh at

we

should

do

to

m ake

our

activities

friendly

< p>to

the

environment

.

I


know

from

news

reports< /p>

that,

not

just

is

su ch

bad

tourist

behavior

ta king

place

inside

our

own< /p>


country,

but

some

of

our

countrymen

are

also

taking

their

bad

habits

abroad.

In

this

sense,

th e


picture

poses

challenging< /p>

questions

on

the

relations hip

between

individual

behavior< /p>

and

public


interests,

as

well

as

on

our

ve ry

idea

of

morality.


O bviously,

many

of

our

coun trymen

need

education,

not

just

in

environmental

protectio n,

but


also

in

moral

principle

.

Everyone

should

know

that

natural

beauty< /p>

belongs

to

all

the

s ociety.

No


individual

has

the

right

to

damage

or

litter

the

beautiful

envi ronment.


[

语言亮点

]


ional

wooden

boat

传统木船


v.

驾驶


to

do

似乎做某事


n.

乘船旅行

ed

a.

不需要的


-over

n.< /p>

所剩之物

(近义:

rubbish,

garbage )


ng

paper

包装纸


e

n.

包装纸


littered

with

到处丢弃


y

pollute

严重 污染


sb

as

给某人……印象

< p>
t-provoking

a.

令人深思


our

behavior

审视自己的行为


14 .

ponder

v.

思考


15.

relationship

with

nature

与自然之 间的关系


16.

friendly

to

t he

environment

对环境友好


challenging

questions

on

提出挑战性的问 题


interests

公众利益


principle

道德规范


[

思维解析

]


第一段:以船为中心按地点顺序展开描写。第

1

句描写船夫正在撑船;第

2-3

句描写船内两


人 行为。


第二段:第

1

句将向湖里扔垃圾的两人的特殊行为 延伸到所有旅行者的普遍性行为;第

2


句揭示出湖面被旅游者扔弃的垃圾 污染了,点出图片标题旅游之“余”


第三段:第

1

句总述图片批判了旅行者的坏行为,令人深思。第

2—5

句论述图片带 给我们


的思索,

从行为→人与自然关系→道德观,

逐渐深 入:

2

句指出图片让我们思考我们是否


应该只顾自己而不顾环境;

3

句指出图片让我们重新思考与自然 的关系,

思考如何才能与


环境保持友好关系;第

4

句提出游客的不良行为不仅在国内有体现,甚至带到了国外;第

5


句在第

4

句的基础上提出,图片提出事关个人行为和公众利益的关系以及道德的 问题。


第三段:探讨如何解决问题:

1

句指出需要在保护环境,及道德规范方面教育民众

;第


2-3

< p>句从正反两个方面论述个人应该采取的行为,

2

句说每个人 应该意识到环境属于社会,


3

句说每个人都没有权利破 坏环境。


[

万能模板

]


In

the

picture

we

see

a

traditional

wooden

boat

< p>with

a

boatman

steering

it

with

a

long

wooden

< p>
pole.

In

the

boat,

t wo

tourists

seem

to

be

enjoying

not

just

the

c ruise,

but

also

the

food

they

bring


on

the

boat.

One

of

them

throws< /p>

the

unwanted

left-over

foo d

and

the

wrapping

paper

into

the

lake.


These

two

men

are

obviously

not

the

first

to


throw

food

and

packages

into

the

lake,

since

the

la ke


has

already

been

li ttered

with

a

great

deal

of

similar

rubbish.

It

< p>is

sad

that


the

lake

has

already


been

heav ily

polluted

with

the

garb age

that

tourists

left

beh ind,

or

what

the

picture-c aption

calls


“Leftovers

of

Tourism”.


The

picture

s trikes

me

as

a

thought-pro voking

criticism

of


some

tourists’

bad

habits.

Those


immoral

tourists

only

t hink

of

their

own

pleasure

and

convenience,

and

igno re

the

order

and


tidin ess

of

scenic

spots.

This< /p>

picture

forces

us

to

review

our

own

behavior,

reconsider

our


relationship

with

nature

and

figure

out

what

we

should

do

t o

make

our

activities

frie ndly

to

the


environment.

In

addition,

this

picture

reminds

me

of

news

repo rts

that,

not

just

is

< p>such

bad

tourist


behavior< /p>

taking

place

inside

our

own

country,

but

some

of

our

countrymen

are

also

taking

their


bad

habi ts

abroad.

In

this

sense,< /p>

the

picture

poses

challeng ing

questions

on


the

r elationship


between

individual

behavior

and

public

interests ,

as

well

as

on


our

very

idea

of

morality.


How

can

we

alleviate< /p>

the

problem

revealed

in

the

above

picture?

Obviously ,

education


should

be

given

to

many

of

our

countrymen,

not

just

in

e nvironmental

protection,

but

als o

in


moral

principle.

Everyone

should

be

aware

< br>that

natural

beauty

belongs

to

all

the

society.

N o


individual

has

the

r ight

to

damage

or

litter

the

beautiful

environment.


参考译文


从这幅图中,我们看到一个传统木船,船上有个船夫用长木棍撑船。在 船里,两个游客


似乎不仅在享受乘船旅行,

还在享受他们带上船的食物。

其中一个把不要的剩余食物和包装


纸扔进湖里。

这两个人 显然不是第一个将食物和包装袋扔进湖里的人,

因为湖面已经布满了


同样 的垃圾。很遗憾,湖面已经被游客扔的垃圾或者如图中文字说的旅游之“余”严重污染


了 。


这幅图片给我的印象是它发人深省地批判了一些旅客的不良行为。

这些 不道德的旅客只


考虑到自己的快乐和方便,而忽视景点的秩序和整洁。这幅图强迫我们审 视自己的行为,


新思考我们与自然的关系,并且弄明白我们应该怎么做 使我们的行为与自然友好。另外,


幅图让我想起了新闻报道:

这样的不好的游客行为不仅发生在中国,

一些国人还把他们的不


良 行为带到了国外。

从这方面来说,

这幅图就个人行为与公众利益关系以及我们的道 德观提


出了具有挑战性的问题。


我们怎样才能减轻图中反映的问 题呢?显然,

应该在环境保护方面和道德规范方面教育


大部分国人。

每个人都应该意识到自然的美丽属于整个社会。

每个人都没有权利破坏或污染


美丽的环境。


2010


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In

the

picture

we

see

a

hotpot

which

is

cooking

a

mixture

< p>of

cultural

ingredients

:

< p>
Shakespeare,

Enlightenment,

Conf ucius,

Einstein,

postmodern,

dec onstruction,

martial

arts,


P eking

opera,

etc.

The

word s

under

the

picture

say,

“Cultural

Hotpot,

Delicious

and

Nutritious

”.


The

picture

shows

a

strange

p henomenon

in

our

postmodern

< p>society.

As

globalization


makes

the

world

a

small

village

and

as

the

Int ernet

gathers

an

immense

p ool

of

information,


communic ation

between

different

cultures

has

become

possible

and

frequent.

Individuals

are

< br>likely

to

absorb

knowledge

from

a

wide

range

of

sources

.

In

people’s

minds,

the

East

and

the


West

coexist

and

the

ancient

mix

with

the

m odern.

We

are

learning

Eng lish

language

and

culture,


but

the

people

of

the

world

are

learning

our

language

and

culture.

This

cultural

exchange

will


accordingly

create

a

cultural

mosaic

which

pieces

together

all

kinds

of

cultural

fragments

.


But

facing

such

a

hotpot

of

knowl edge,

people

may

feel

conf used

as

to

the

compatibili ty

of


its

diverse

elem ents.

There

is

also

the

danger

of

indigestion

< p>”

after

having

consumed

such

a

vast


variety

of

knowledge.

If

people

cann ot

coordinate

the

diverse

,

or

sometimes

contradictory

,


systems

of

thought

< p>in

their

minds,

it

may

well

cause

disorientation

,

leading

even

to

conflicts


between

cultures.


There fore,

there

is

urgent

need

for

a

spirit

of

coe xistence

and

tolerance

between

cultures.


There

is

also

urgent

need

for

a

s pirit

of

equality

and

harm ony

.

On

one

hand,

w e

should

show


respect

for

other

cultures,

and

on

the

other

hand

we

m ust

be

duly

proud

of

our

own

cultural


heritage

.

We

should

be

aware< /p>

of

our

own

identity

as

Chinese

and

from

this

point

of

view

adjust


our

relationship

with

people s

of

the

world.

If

a ll

people

do

the

same,

we

shall

have

a

happy

and


peaceful

world.


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