经典短信息2013年考研英语二大作文评讲及参考范文

2013

年考研英语二大作文评讲及参考范文

2013

年考研英语二的大作文正如 课前预测的一样，考的是图表作文（柱状图）

。新东方

的考研班上我们说 过图表作文一共有两大类，动态图和静态图。

2010

和

2011

年考的是动态

图，

2012

年考的是静态 图。而这次又再一次重复

2012

年的静态图，而柱状图也是在前两年

2010

年和

2011

年）考到过 ，是我们上课训练的重点。

这篇文 章从审题上不难得出这样一个结论：

大一学生兼职比例小，

大四学生兼职比例高。

那么文章三段怎么布局呢？按照上课重点讲过的结构分析，以下是可以参考的文章结构：

第一段：描写图表（分别写出

4

个数字，以及最值）

第二段：分析原因（为什么年级越高打工比例高，年级低打工比例小）

第三段：自己看法（兼职很重要，我们要利用好这样的机会提升自己能力）

那么这篇文章的难点在哪里呢？

第一，

描写图表，百分比说，百分比 的最大最小值比较怎么讲，这些内容是我们上课图

表作文描写的重点内容；

第二，原因分析，比如兼职打工可以积累经验

(accumulate working experience)

，高年级

的学生自己可以安排 时间

(have autonomy over their schedule)

；而低年级的学生不知道社会经

验的重要

(lack of awar eness)

以及因为父母的保护

(parents

’

protection)

；

第三，

自己看法，这个段落上课讲过，主要是总结上文内容以及 表达愿望，比如兼职打

工确实很重要，我们要利用好这样的机会

第四，语言表达，在这篇文章里，

“ 大一”

、

“大二”

、

“大三”

、< /p>

“大四”的表达要会写，

另外

“打工兼职”

这个词会不断出现，

而学会同义词替换是得分的关键之一。

比如

d o part-time

job, work part time, be a part-timer, work in a company two or three days a week

。这些替换分别

从替换动词，替换词性和解释名词的角度来进行 ，也是我们讲课的重点内容之一。

以下为参考范文：

The

above

bar

chart

illustrates

the

proportion

of

college

students

who

get

engaged

in

part-time jobs before graduation. According to the chart, the percentage of senior students working

part-time

is

88.24%,

which

is

the

highest

for

all

the

students.

The

figure

is

followed

by

junior

students

and

sophomores,

reaching

71.93%

and

71.13%

respectively.

By

contrast,

the

lowest

percentage of part-timer is the freshman, with only 67.77% involved.

Why do students of higher grade prefer to be part-time workers while fewer freshmen take

the kind of jobs? Many senior students choose this job, arguing that they can accumulate working

experience by working as an intern in some companies such as banks, advertising agencies and

trading firms two or three days a week. In other words, part-time jobs have become incubators for

students to develop their social abilities

——

a boon for their future career. Moreover, students of

higher grade will have more autonomy over their schedule. However, as for the freshmen, they are

not

ready

to

step

into

the

society

partly

because

they

are

still

too

young

to

recognize

the

significance of social experience. Apart from their lack of awareness, their parents

’

protection

will also prevent freshmen from working part-time.

From my perspective, part-time jobs provide students with more opportunities to hone their

key skills such as communication and cooperation, which will be crucial for students to work their

way up the career ladder. Therefore, students should make use of the opportunity to develop their

skills needed for their future work.

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年考研英语二大小作文点评及范文

小作文是写一封

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，

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（

kid in need

）

，

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