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2013

年考研英语二作文真题

【篇一：

2013

考研英语二大作文】

the bar chart illustrates that changes in percentage of having

part-time jobs among university students from freshman to

senior. overall,the tend of this phenomenon is rising over a

period of 4 years.

the proportion of students have part- time jobs,accounting for

67.77% at begining of college. this proportion slightly

increases by around 3% and 4% between sophomore and

junior,which takes up 71.13% and 71.93% respectively.

however,the figure for pupils who have part-time positions

reaches a peak in the rest of period,at 88.24%. it means that

the numbers of students of having part- time jobs in senior is

much more than ever related to other time.

in conclusion,students are growing numbers to realize that

importance of part-time jobs so that there is obvious growth in

having part-time positions with age. on the other hand,i have a

belief that students should give a priority to study rather than

earning money by this way because study is major task in

colleges. for that reason,i believe that if pupils can finish their

academic assignment easily,may be they could take use of free

time appropriately to do something meaningful such as part-

time jobs.

解析：

1

、开头段直击主题，图标的

main idea

是什么就写什么 ，本文的主

题是

“

大学生找兼职的比例

”

，那么改写一下题目（尽可能不要照抄

原题，因为这也检测你词汇量和语 法手段的一点，领悟什么叫做

paraphrase

）

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2

、

overall

是全局 概况的意思，如果想写这一句最好从整体趋势的

角度写，比如本文的数据

整体呈上升趋势，那描述就好了。（本句可有可无，自如不够的情

3

、 图表题讲究严谨，图标是比例的，就应该用

percentage

或者

，注意其后面的介词必须为

of

（本文中也用了

figure for

的结构，是为了避免词汇重复，

figure

意为

“

数据

”

，属于万能词汇）

4

、第二段我就直接描述图表了，这一段最体现作文功底。

新手应该注意以下几点：

①

数据的选取。数据多时要学会抓重 点，省去不必要的数据，或者

归并数据，如本文中的第二组和第三组数据我就并在一起写 了，这

样的好处是文章简洁明了（此处显功力，如果没有把握能把数据很

好的合并描述，宁可分开写）。

②

动词、介词、句型的选用要十分慎重。图表类讲究严谨！图表 类

讲究严谨！图表讲究严谨！（重要的事说三遍）因此，词汇的选择

是十分严格的，本文中的介词大多不可轻易替换，因为大多为固定

用法。