月考之后英语作文评语怎么写

2020年12月31日发(作者：荣林)

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英语作文评语怎么

写

篇一：英语作文评语大全

英语作文激励性评语大全

一、

宏观性评价

1.

整体印象类评语

Super

！

Excellent

！

Perfect

！

Wonderful

！

Fantastic

！

Marvelous

！

采用整体印象类 评语对于起始阶段

的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一

律使用 此类评语，就会使学生无法正确

认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师的

< br>评语失去应有的作用。

2.

规范导知类评语

hand-writing.

You

’

re

careful

of

using

pronunciation.

Glad

to

see

your

improvement

in

handwriting.

I

’

m expecting clearer/more beautiful

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hand-writing from you next time. You

’

d

better pay more attention to word order.

Better

be

more

careful

of

your

spelling.

It

’

s

important

to

compose

a

graft

beforehand.

3.

情感调控类评语

I appreciate your handwriting.

You

have

a

good

knowledge

of

English proverbs.

You

are

quite

aware

of

making

meaningful sentences.

You

are

richer

than

others

in

collecting and using typical sentences and

idioms.

I

’

m expecting greater progress from

you in writing .Come on.

If you need my help,never hesitate to

come to me.

警句：

Hard work leads to success.

Not to advance is to go back.

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No one is without faults.

Keeping is harder than

it up.

二、

微观写作技能方面的评语

1.

专项点拨类评语

It

’

s

proper

to

use

the

proverb

in

quite clever.

You

are

good

at

using

attributive

clauses in your writing.

The

“struck”

sentence

is

perfectly

used.

You

’

d better use “third person” in

the

first para.

It

’

s good to use the past tense in your

writing.

2.

佳句欣赏类评语

教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的

符号

（如

E

—

Excel lent

）

或标识不同星级

等。

What

a

wonderful

sentence

using

“cover”.

It

’

s

really

clever

of

you

to

use

this

beautiful sentence.

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The inverted sentence is well wtitten.

3.

谋篇布局类评语

A good beginning.

A perfect ending.

Well-organized.

Perfectly-expanded.

The

first

para.

makes

a

good

beginning.

The last para. makes a perfect ending.

All the points have been covered.

It

’

s

clever

of

you

to

use

a

topic

sentence

at

the

beginning

of

a

para.

It

’

s

wonderful

to

use

proper

conjunctions

between sentences.

You are good at developing para.

You

have

made

great

progress

in

developing passage.

I

am

glad

to

see

the

sentence

conherence in your last para.

Better

pay

more

attention

to

the

relationship between sentences. It

’

s really

wonderful to start/end your sentences with

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adverbials.

在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为

规范的引领，重在对 学生进行词语方面

的引导；对高年级学生则应侧重对文章

的结构 、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方

面的指点和引导。

虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来

< br>说不太适合，以为他们连老师评他们什

么都看不懂，但我们平时对作文的批改

确实没做到这么仔细，有很大启发。

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篇二：英文作文批改激励性评语

英语作文激励性评语

一、宏观性评价

1.

整体印象类评语

Super!Excellent!Perfect !Wonderful

！

Fantastic

！

Marvelous

！

采用整体印象类评语对于起始阶段

的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一

律德使用此类评语，就会 使学生无法正

确认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师

的评语失去 应有的作用。

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2.

规范导知类评语

hand-writing.

You’er

careful

of

using

pronounciation.

Glad

to

see

your

improvement

in

handwriting.

I’m

expecting

clearer/more

beautiful

hand-writing from you next time.

YOu’d

better

pay

more

attention

t

o

word order.

Better

be

more

careful

of

your

spelling.

It’s

important

to

compose

a

draft

beforhand.

3.

情感调控类评语

I appreciate your handwriting.

You

have

a

good

knowledge

of

English proverbs.

You

are

quite

aware

of

making

meaningful sentences.

You

are

richer

than

others

in

collecting and using typical sentences and

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idioms.

I’m

expecting

greater

progress

from

you in writing. Come on.

If you need my help, never hesitate to

come to me.

警句：

Hard work leads to success.

Not to advance is to go back.

No one is without faults.

Keeping is harder than winning. Keep

it up.

二、微观写作技能方面的评语

1.

专项点拨类评语

It’s

proper

to

use

the

proverb

in

Quite clever.

You

are

good

at

using

attributive

clauses in your writing.

The

“struck”

sentence

is

perfectly

used.

You’d better use “third person” in the

first para.

It’s good to use the past tense in your

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writing.

2.

佳句欣赏类评语

教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的

符号（如

E-- Excellent)

或标识不同星级

等。

What

a

wonderful

sentence

using

“cover”.

It’s

really

clever

of

you

to

use

this

beautiful sentence.

The inverted sentence is well written.

3.

谋篇布局类评语

A

good

beginning.

A

perfect

ending.

The

first

para.

makes

a

good

beginning.

The last para. makes a perfect ending.

All the points have been covered.

It’s

clever

of

you

to

use

a

topic

sentence at the beginning of a para.

It’s

wonderful

to

use

proper

conjunctions between sentences.

You are good at developing a para.

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