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英语作文评语怎么
写
篇一：英语作文评语大全
英语作文激励性评语大全
一、
宏观性评价
1.
整体印象类评语
Super
！
Excellent
！
Perfect
！
Wonderful
！
Fantastic
！
Marvelous
！
采用整体印象类 评语对于起始阶段
的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一
律使用
此类评语，就会使学生无法正确
认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师的
< br>评语失去应有的作用。
2.
规范导知类评语
hand-writing.
You
’
re
careful
of
using
pronunciation.
Glad
to
see
your
improvement
in
handwriting.
I
’
m expecting clearer/more beautiful
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hand-writing from you next time.
You
’
d
better pay more
attention to word order.
Better
be
more
careful
of
your
spelling.
It
’
s
important
to
compose
a
graft
beforehand.
3.
情感调控类评语
I appreciate your handwriting.
You
have
a
good
knowledge
of
English proverbs.
You
are
quite
aware
of
making
meaningful sentences.
You
are
richer
than
others
in
collecting and using typical sentences
and
idioms.
I
’
m expecting greater progress from
you in writing .Come on.
If you need my help,never hesitate to
come to me.
警句：
Hard work leads to success.
Not to advance is to go back.
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No one is without faults.
Keeping is harder than
it up.
二、
微观写作技能方面的评语
1.
专项点拨类评语
It
’
s
proper
to
use
the
proverb
in
quite
clever.
You
are
good
at
using
attributive
clauses in your
writing.
The
“struck”
sentence
is
perfectly
used.
You
’
d better use “third person” in
the
first para.
It
’
s good to use the past tense in your
writing.
2.
佳句欣赏类评语
教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的
符号
（如
E
—
Excel lent
）
或标识不同星级
等。
What
a
wonderful
sentence
using
“cover”.
It
’
s
really
clever
of
you
to
use
this
beautiful
sentence.
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The inverted sentence is well wtitten.
3.
谋篇布局类评语
A good beginning.
A perfect ending.
Well-organized.
Perfectly-expanded.
The
first
para.
makes
a
good
beginning.
The last para. makes a perfect ending.
All the points have been covered.
It
’
s
clever
of
you
to
use
a
topic
sentence
at
the
beginning
of
a
para.
It
’
s
wonderful
to
use
proper
conjunctions
between sentences.
You are good at developing para.
You
have
made
great
progress
in
developing passage.
I
am
glad
to
see
the
sentence
conherence in your last para.
Better
pay
more
attention
to
the
relationship between sentences.
It
’
s really
wonderful to
start/end your sentences with
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adverbials.
在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为
规范的引领，重在对
学生进行词语方面
的引导；对高年级学生则应侧重对文章
的结构
、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方
面的指点和引导。
虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来
< br>说不太适合，以为他们连老师评他们什
么都看不懂，但我们平时对作文的批改
确实没做到这么仔细，有很大启发。
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篇二：英文作文批改激励性评语
英语作文激励性评语
一、宏观性评价
1.
整体印象类评语
Super!Excellent!Perfect !Wonderful
！
Fantastic
！
Marvelous
！
采用整体印象类评语对于起始阶段
的学生有较好的激励作用，但若千篇一
律德使用此类评语，就会
使学生无法正
确认识自己的写作水平，最终导致教师
的评语失去
应有的作用。
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2.
规范导知类评语
hand-writing.
You’er
careful
of
using
pronounciation.
Glad
to
see
your
improvement
in
handwriting.
I’m
expecting
clearer/more
beautiful
hand-writing from you next time.
YOu’d
better
pay
more
attention
t
o
word
order.
Better
be
more
careful
of
your
spelling.
It’s
important
to
compose
a
draft
beforhand.
3.
情感调控类评语
I appreciate your handwriting.
You
have
a
good
knowledge
of
English
proverbs.
You
are
quite
aware
of
making
meaningful sentences.
You
are
richer
than
others
in
collecting and using typical sentences
and
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idioms.
I’m
expecting
greater
progress
from
you in writing. Come on.
If you need my help, never hesitate to
come to me.
警句：
Hard work leads to success.
Not to advance is to go back.
No one is without faults.
Keeping is harder than winning. Keep
it up.
二、微观写作技能方面的评语
1.
专项点拨类评语
It’s
proper
to
use
the
proverb
in
Quite clever.
You
are
good
at
using
attributive
clauses in your writing.
The
“struck”
sentence
is
perfectly
used.
You’d better use “third person” in the
first para.
It’s good to use the past tense in your
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writing.
2.
佳句欣赏类评语
教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的
符号（如
E-- Excellent)
或标识不同星级
等。
What
a
wonderful
sentence
using
“cover”.
It’s
really
clever
of
you
to
use
this
beautiful sentence.
The inverted sentence is well written.
3.
谋篇布局类评语
A
good
beginning.
A
perfect
ending.
The
first
para.
makes
a
good
beginning.
The last para. makes a perfect ending.
All the points have been covered.
It’s
clever
of
you
to
use
a
topic
sentence at the beginning
of a para.
It’s
wonderful
to
use
proper
conjunctions between
sentences.
You are good at developing a para.
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