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六级作文新题型模版
第一段
I assume that you
are familiar with the words of
sb.
, who once said,
“
谚语
.
”
Definitely,
对谚语的解释
.
It is obvious
that
……
中心句
.
第二段
Simple as
sb
’
s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the
significance of
X
(the ability of solving problems).
why does
X
play an indispensable role in our life ?
X
enables us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly
（看情况修改其中的措辞）
.
……
（自己扩展一句）
Quite a few examples can be given to
prove the importance of
X
, however, I can think of no
better illustration
than the following one: how could
例子人物
do
…
if he failed to do
X
?
（反问句，如果谁不
做
sth
他就不可能成功之类的）
第三段
From my
perspective, at no time should we ignore the
importance of
sth
.
Accordingly
，
we should
……
and always bear in mind that
sth
can
……
（我们应该怎么 样并且
记住
sth
可以怎么样）
“
自己编个谚语
.
”
A famous philosopher also once said.
1.
2.
3.
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
1.
2.
3.
下面五篇为范文，仔细品味
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Unity breeds
success by
commenting on Albert Einstein
’
s famous remark,
“
A snowflake is one of God
’
s most
fragile
creations, but look what they can do when they
stick together!
”
You should write at least
150 words but no more than 200
words.
Unity breeds
success
1.
I assume that you are familiar with the words of
Einstein,
who once said
,
“
A snowflake is
one of God
’
s most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together!
”
2.
Definitely
, a snowflake is easy to melt when it lands on the soil. However, when falling on the
ground together, they
can create a snow-wrapped world with splendid
scene.
3.
It is obvious that
unity transforms
snowflake
’
s vulnerability into strength.
1.
Simple as Einstein
’
s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs
us of the
significance of
unity
.
2.
Why does unity play an indispensable role in our life?
3.
Unity
enables us to achieve our
objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams
more rapidly.
4.
In
such
a competitive world of today, it is not personal
strength that the achievement of any course
depends on; it condenses the energies
of a group.
5.
To further demonstrate the importance of
unity, I
would like to take Chinese Communist Party as a
case in point, how could she achieve the
victory of Anti-Japanese War if she
failed to unite Chinese people of all ethnic
groups ?
1.
From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of unity.
2.
Accordingly, we should foster the
consciousness of unity and always bear in mind
that unity can
create miracles no
matter what obstacles we meet.
3.
“
Many hands make light work.
”
John
Heywood also
once said. (234 words)
我觉你应该对爱因斯坦说过的一句话非常熟悉，
叫做
< p>“一片雪花是上帝最脆弱的创造物
之一，但他们抱在一起的时候却令人刮目相看。<
/p>
”确实，一片雪花，降落在地，极易融化消
失。然而，当很多雪花一起飘落
人间，他们足以创造出片银装素裹的美景。很明显，正是团
结，将雪花从脆弱变得强大。
尽管爱因斯坦的话听起来很简单，
但却包含了丰富的人生哲理，
并告诉我们团结很重要。
为
什么团结会在我们的生活当中扮演重要的角色呢？团结可以使我们更顺利地达成目标、
更
快速地实现梦想。
在竞争如此激烈的当今世界，
任何事情的成功都 无法仅仅依靠一个人的力
量，而需要凝结整个团队的力量。为了进一步证明团结的重要性
，我想以中国共产党为例，
如果中国共产党没有团结各族人民的力量，她怎么可能去的抗
日战争的胜利呢？
在我看来，我们 任何时候都不能忽视团结的重要性。因此，我们应该培养团结的意识，
并且永远铭记在心
，只要团结，不管遇到什么样的困难，我们都能够创造奇迹。约翰
.
伍德
也曾经说过“众人拾柴火焰高。
”
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled
Actions Speak
Louder Than Words by
commenting on William Penn
’
s famous remark
“
A man, like a watch, is
to be valued by this manner of
going
”
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200
words.
Actions Speak Louder
Than Words
“
A man, like a watch, is to be valued by this manner of going .
”
I assume that you are
familiar with William
Penn
’
s remark. The watch is crucial for every individual, because it tells the
time by moving constantly. It is
obvious that a man is of little value if he fail
to act like a watch.
William Penn
’
s remark aims at informing us of the significance of taking actions. We can not
emphasize the
importance of actions too much. Action will enable
us to achieve our objectives
more
smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly.
The more action we take, the more likely
we
are
to
accumulate
experience,
master
skills
and
get
close
to
our
destination.
To
further
demonstrate the
importance of A, I would like to take a famous
Chinese fable story as a case in
point.
How could the
“
foolish old man
”
who dreamed of removing the mountain in front of his
gate
finally achieve his dream without taking constant
actions ?
From
my perspective
,
at
no
time
should
we
ignore
the value
of
actions.
Accordingly,
not
only
should
us
posses
a
great
dream,
but
we
also
should
take
actions
to
make
it
come
true.
“
actions speak louder than words.
”
A philosopher also once said. (205 words)
威廉
.
佩恩（英国海军上将）曾说：
“一个人的价值，就好比手表 ，是由他不断的行动来
决定的。
”
手表对于每个人都很重 要，
因为它通过一刻不停的移动来告诉人们时间。
很明显，
一个人如果不想手表那样的行动，也就价值甚微了。
威廉
.
佩恩的话目的在于告诉我们采取行动的重 要性。我们再怎么强调行动的重要性也
不为过。行动能使我们更顺利地实现目标、更快速
地实现梦想。我们采取的行动越多，
我们
就越能积累经验、
掌握技巧并且接近目标。
为了进一步证明行动的重要性，
我想以一个著名
的中国寓言故事做为例子：
梦想移走门前大山的愚公，
如果不采 取持续的行动，
怎么能实现
他这个巨大的梦想呢？
在我们看来，任何时候我们都不应该忽视行动的价值 。因此，我们不仅应该拥有梦想，
还需要采取行动去实现。一位哲学家也曾经说过“行胜
于言”
。
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