汪峰中国好声音英语各种作文格式与范例

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篇章结构：文章可分两段

［文采修饰］

连接词的选用：

but, both…, and, moreover, otherwise

高级词汇的选用：

keep in touch with, as for…, use… as …, benefit from, pay attention to, altogether, in one’s

opinion.

复杂句型的选用：

what…most

引导的主语从句；

as

引导的让步状语从句；倒装语序等。

范文：

Dear editor,

I

have

recently

made

a

survey

among

30

boys

and

30

girls

in

my

class

about

their

purpose

of

getting on the Internet.

The girls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it. What the boys like to do most is playing games

and the girls also like it. Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet.

Maybe

they

think

it’s

the

most

convenient

way

to

get

information

from

keeping

in

touch

with

friends. As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of

them will use the Internet as a tool to study.

In

my

opinion,

useful

as

the

Internet

is,

the

students

had

better

make

better

and

wise

use

of

it.

Otherwise,

it’s

impossible

for

us

to

benefit

from

it.

Moreover,

I

also

hope

the

parents

will

pay

enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time.

Yours

，

Li Hua

思路点拨：

1

、体裁：比较对照类

2

、时态：一般过去时（发表评论时可用一般现在时）

3

、人称：第三人称

4

、篇章结构：分三段

范文：

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 1996 to 2006.

The table shows that a greater number of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2006. The

rate of 2006 (22%) doubled that of 1996 (11%). We are sure that the number will increase because

with their incomes rising, more people can afford the journeys abroad.

At the same time, the seaside attracted a lot of people. However, the rate slightly dropped from

38% in 1996 to 31% in 2006, the reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted.

The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away.

The year 2006 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping. The

rate in 2006 (34%) was more than three times that in 1996 (11%).

The reason is that more and

more people are eager to get close to nature.

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口头通知

（要点、格式与范例）

一、掌握口头通知特点

口头通知即以口头的形 式表达通知的内容，其特点是：用词较口语化，

句子不会太复杂，通

常只 需用一段话讲清其内容即可。另外，口头通知的开头和结尾通常都有一定的固定套语，

同 学们也应特别注意。

二、妥用口头通知呼语

口头通知的开头称呼语通常需根据听众的具体情况来确定，有时还要考虑其场合是否正式。

如在比较正式且男女听众兼有的场合，通常用

Ladies and gentlemen

来称呼听众，同时注意

该表达的词序，不要想当然 地将其倒过来，且一定要用复数。当然，若听众中只有男士，则

只用

Ge ntlemen

；或者只有女士，则只用

Ladies

。但是，如 果在非正式场合，则比较随便。

对学生用的称呼语通常是

Boys and girls

。

三、熟记口头通知套语

(1)

在用口头下达通知时，发通知者通常要将听通知人的注意力吸引过来，这类表达常见的

有：

May I have your attention, please?

Attention please, everyone. I have an announcement to make.

Be quite. There is something important I have to tell you.

I have something (important) to tell you.

I’m glad to tell you something important.

(2)

其他用于口头通知的固 定套语

(

如叫听者不要迟到、欢迎某人参加某活动等

)

Everyone is asked to be there on time.

Be sure not to be late.

Please be present on time.

Please take your notebooks with you and be sure on time.

Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.

(3)

口头通知的结束套语主要有：

That’s all. Thank you very much.

四、牢记口头通知时态

口头通知是要告诉大家即将进行的活动，因此要以一般将来时为主。如：

We will go to the Great Wall tomorrow.

We’ll have a meeting about it after the sixth class.

There will be an English film in our school tonight.

The match will be put off to next week.

We are going to hold a meeting to discuss the problem.

五、口头通知实战演练

假如你是班长，根据下面的内容和提示，写一篇

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左 右的口头通知，以便向同学们宣布。

事由：欢迎澳大利亚学生来校参观。

参观时间 ：

6

月

15

日上午

9:00-12 :00.

参观人数：约

60

人。

活动安排：

1. 8:30

在校门口。

2. 9:00

带客人到会议室开联欢会。

3.

领客人参观植物园、校办工厂。

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4. 11:00

在操场进行篮球比赛。

5.

客人

12:00

离校。

注意事项：

1.

对客人要友好。

2.

要用英语交谈。

写作示范：

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? About sixty Australian students will come to visit our school

on

June

15.

We’ll

meet

them

at

the

school

gate

at

8:30.

We’ll

take

them

to

the

meeting

-room,

where a get-

together will be held. After that, we’ll show them around our botanical garden and the

school-

run factory. At11:00 there will be a basketball match on the playground. They’ll leave our

school at 12:00.

Please be friendly to them. We must talk with them in English.

That’s all. Thank you.

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书面通知

（要点、格式与范例）

一、掌握书面通知特点

书面头通知即以书面的 形式表达通知的内容，

其特点是：

措辞较严谨，

句子结构相对口头 通

知会更复杂，

尤其会使用一些非谓语动词短语

(

如用不定式表目的等

)

和从句

(

如

if

从句、

when

从句、

so that

从句等

)

。

二、熟记书面通知格式

与口头通知不同，

书面通知在用书面形式表达出来时，

它有自己比较固定的格式：

如通知 开

头要有标题

(

通常为

Notice

或

Announcement)

，标题下面是正文，正文后通常还应有 发通知

的单位

(

通常写在右下角

)

和写发通知的日期

(

通常写在左下角

)

等 。

三、注意与口头通的区别

口头通知一般有开头称呼语

(Ladies and gentlemen, Boys and girls

等

)

，< /p>

而书面通知通常不用这

些开头称呼语；口头通知用来吸引听众注意力的句子

(

如

May I have your attention, please? /

Attention

please,

everyone.

I

have

an

announcement

to

make.

/

Be

quite.

There

is

something

important

I have to tell

you.

等

)< /p>

在书面通知中通常不可以用；口头通知的结束套语

(That’s all.

Thank you very much.)

在书面通知中也不会使用。

四、熟记书面通知套语

尽管书面通知与口头通 知有很多表达套语不一样，但有些表达

(

如叫听者不要迟到、欢迎某

人参加某活动等方面的套语

)

是可以通用的，不过有时可能在措辞方面 会有所不同

(

书面通知

措辞可能会略正式些

)

。如：

口头通知：

Everyone should be there on time.

Be sure not to be late.

Please be present on time.

书面通知：

Everyone is required to be present on time.

口头通知：

Be sure to attend it on time.

书面通知：

Everybody is expected to attend it on time.

另外，书面通知的以下套语也需注意：

All teachers and students are required to…(

全体师生务必要

……)

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Notice is hereby given that…(

兹通知

……)

Our school / The Student Union will / is going to hold…

A lecture will be given at 7:00 this evening in…

四、牢记书面语通知时态

与口头通知一样，书面通知也以一般将来时为主。如：

The students of Senior Grade One will go to Jingshan Park on May 4.

We will climb up the hill and have a picnic on the top of it.

After that we will visit the famous botanical garden nearby.

On July 22, Saturday, we will visit the following places

—

a school or a hospital.

We will be divided into four groups and each group can visit one of the places.

五、书面通知实战演练

请根据提示写一份通知。

(1)

高二

(5)

在本周五晚上要开个英语晚会。

(2)

晚饭后

6:30

在教室集合，晚 会

7:00

开始。

(3)

每个同学都要表演一个节目，内容不限。

(4)

欢迎老师和全班同学参加。

(5)

出 通知的时间是

2005

年

3

月

15

日。

NOTICE

An English evening party will be held on Friday Evening. Every one of our class is requested to

be in the classroom at 6:30 after supper. The party will begin at 7:00 P.M. Each of the students

should perform during the evening party. You may tell a story, sing a song, make a speech or read

a poem and so on. All the teachers and students are welcome to attend our English evening.

Everybody is expected to attend it on time.

Class 5, Grade Two

March 15, 2005

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日记（ 技巧与范例）

一、写作技巧

日记常用来记述自己一天生活中所发生的有意义的事情或用来抒发自己对当天某些事情的

感受以及自己将来的打算等。英文日记也是这样。

不过，

要写好英文日记，

需要注意以下几

点：

(1)

格式要正确。英文日记与中文日记写法大致相同，都是在正文之前，先依次有日期、星

< br>期几及当天的天气情况。

(2)

表达要清楚、 准确、连贯。判断的标准就是通过阅读你的日记，看你能否用简洁明了的

英语把所给的汉 语提示准确无误地表达出来，以及自己的感想等。

(3)

事或抒发自己的感情等，

所以用第一人称写，

文体也不必过分讲究，

楚即可。

二、实例与范文

根据下面内容提示，写一篇日记

4

15

日，星期天，你和几位同学步行了半小时去参观动物园。天气很好，游 客很多。你

们喜欢猴子。碰到几位外国朋友，聊了一会儿。中午回家。

要求：

(1)

文章必须包括所给的要点；

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(2)

可适当增加细节；

(3)

字数

80

—

100

。

April 15, Sunday

Fine

Today

I

visited

the

zoo

with

several

classmates.

We

went

on

foot.

It

was

half

an

hour’s

walk.

When we got there, the zoo was already full of people. There are many animals in the zoo. They

were very interesting, but we were especially interested in monkeys. They made all kinds of faces

and we also talked with some foreign guests in English. It was time for lunch when we got home. I

really had a wonderful time today.

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便 条（分析与范例）

【概说】

假条、

便条、

留言条以及借条等的英文写法都同英文的书信写法差不多，

正文的右上方写日

期，之后是称呼语、正文，最后要有签名。

【实例一】

假设你是李华

,

你的美国老师

Miss

Catherine

要求你们明天上午去听一个关于美国音乐的讲

座，你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点，写一封短信向

Miss Catherine

请假。

【分析】

内容要点：

1.

表示歉意

2.

理由：去机场接人

3.

询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座。

4.

100

左右；可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Miss Catherine,

I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American music tomorrow morning. My

uncle

is

returning

home

from

France,

and

I

have

promised

to

meet

him

at

the

airport

at

10:00

tomorrow morning.

I am very much interested in American music. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded,

and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn

what is covered in the talk.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【实例二】

假 如你叫李明，

在你父亲工作的合资企业里的美方工作人员

John Willian

夫妇对京剧

(Beijing

oper a)

很感兴趣。你送给他们两张第二天晚上在梅兰芳剧院演出的戏票，那是一场由著名演

员演出的京剧，

很值得观看。

恰巧

John Wi llian

夫妇外出。

请你写个便条，

并顺便告诉他们，

你已经读过他们送给你的两本书，很有趣。你正忙于考试，不能一起去欣赏京剧了。

注意：便条约

100

词左右；应包括以上要点，但不 要逐字翻译。

【范文】

Mr and Mrs John Willian,

I’ve come to give you two tickets for tomorrow evening’s Beijing Opera in Mei Lanfang Theater.

I learn that you are interested in Beijing Opera

，

but it’s a pity that you happened to be out. I have

to leave the tickets with this note. The opera will be put on by some famous players and it is well

worth seeing.

By the way, I’ve read the two books you gave me. They are very interesting. This week, we are

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