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Last updated at 10:00 am on 25th December 2020
小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
My English Teacher
Miss Wang is my English teacher.
She
’
s very pretty. She is short and thin.
She has two big eyes and a small
mouth. Her hairs are long. She like
s
cats
very much. And she
like
s
singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good.
We often play
games in English class
es
. She is very kind. We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题 目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接
点题，首先介绍
了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上
课特点以及师生
情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词
组
]
，以免写出一些错句子。写作
时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My
Days of the week
I
’
m a student and I am in Grade get up at six o
’
clock every day. I have
breakfast at half past six, and go to
school at seven o
’
clock. I have classes
from Monday to Friday. I have
an
English class on Friday. I have
a
PE class on
Tuesday. I
usually go shopping and watch TV on the weekend.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题 目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写
起，叙述了自己一
周七天的所作所为
,
写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自
< p>己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite
Food
Do you know what this is
Its colour is yellow. It
’
s long and thin. It looks
like a small boat.
Guess! What is itOh, it is a banana. Do you know
what that
is Guess again! Its colour is
orange. It
’
s round. It looks like a small ball
and a small lantern. Oh, it
is an orange. I like them very much. I like
ice-
creams, too. Chocolates and candies
are yummy. I like them very much.
How
about you What
’
s your favourite food
【要领点评】
My Favourite
Food
是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每
一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另
外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I
can help do housework
I am a
girl. My name is Li Ling. I
’
m in Class Three, Grade Five. I
’
m
helpful at home. I can water the
flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor.
After meals, I can help my mother do
the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the
clothes. What about you Are you
helpful, too
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍
< p>自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文 时显得太空，因
为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时
态。
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family.
It
’
s big and nice. Look! My mother is
cooking in it. This is a microwave
and that is a stove. There is a big table
here. There are many things on it. What
are these They look yummy! Oh,
they
’
re apples. And what are
those They are grapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨 房里有微波炉和
电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。<
/p>
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所 学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西
来训练习作。
My Village
My
village is very beautiful. There are many houses
in the village. Near the
village, there
is a forest. A small river is in front of the
village. The
water is very clean. We
can see some fish in the river. Near the river,
you
can see a mountain. There are some
flowers and trees on the mountain. I like
my village. Welcome to my village!