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小学五年级上册英语作文
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小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点
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小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点
评
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小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
my english
teacher
miss tang is my english teacher. she’s very pretty. she is tall
and thin. she has
two big eyes and a small mouth. her hair is
long. she likes cats very much. and she
likes singing and
dancing, too. her
english is very good. we often play games in
english classes. she is very kind to
us. we all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题 目是
“
我的英语老师
”
，是一篇介绍人物的作文。 小作
者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介
< br>绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词
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组
]
，以免写出一
些错句子。写作时要注意
意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清
晰、规范等。
my days of the week
i’m a student and
i am in grade 5.i get up at six o’clock every
day. i have breakfast at half
past six, and go to school at seven
o’clock. i have classes from monday to
saturday. i have an
english class on
friday and i have a pe class on tuesday. i
don’t have to go to scho
ol on school, and i like to go
swimming on
that day.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题 目是
“
我的一周
”
，小作者没有说一些空话，而是 从自
己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调
< br>了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结
合自己的实际，写自己
身边熟悉的事情。
my favourite
food
do you know what this
is? guess! its colour is
yellow. it’s long and thin. it looks like a small boat and
crescent. oh, it is a
banana. do you know what that is? guess
again! its colour is orange. it’s
round. it looks
like a small
ball and a small lantern. oh, it is an orange. i
like
then a lot. i like ice-creams. i
like to chew gum. chocolates and
candies are yummy. i like them very
much.
how about you? what’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】
my favourite
food
是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举
出自己最喜欢
的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章
用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误
。另外，文章中出现了一些生
词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
i can help do housework
i am a girl. my name is li ling. i’m in class three, grade five.
i’mhelpful at home. i can water the
flowers, empty the trash
and sweep the
floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the
dishes. on sunday, i can wash the
clothes. what about you?
are you
helpful, too?
【要领点评】
本篇 作文的题目是
“
我可以帮助做家务
”
，作者主要叙 述自己在家帮
助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详
细，到位。
小朋友们在写作 时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在
作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做
的事情印象才会特别深刻。
写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
in the kitchen
this is the kitchen of my family. it’s big and nice. look! my
mother is cooking in
it. this is a microwave and that is a stove.
there is a big table here. there are
many things on it. what are
these? they
look yummy! oh, they’re strawberries. and what
are those? they are grapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是
“
在厨房
”
里， 作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍
厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品
等，以及妈
妈在做饭，非常真实。
小
朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，
描述身边熟悉的东西来训
练习作。
my village
my village is very beautiful. there
are many houses in the
village. near
the village, there is a forest. a small river is
in
front of the village. the water in
it is very clean. we can see
some fish
in the river. near the river, you can see a
mountain.
some flowers and grass are on
the mountain. i like my village.
welcome to my village!
【要领点评】
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本文以
“
我的村庄
”
为题描述了自己 家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、
森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到<
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“
我的村庄
”
的
美丽。小朋
友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的
特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词
或短语进行叙述。
【篇二：五年级英语上册小作文范文】
五年级上册小作文
1
简单介绍一下自己和自己平时周末所做的事情。
hello! i’ m li
xiaoming. i’m
10.
i have big eyes . i’m tall and thin. i like english.
i often read books on the weekend. i
can clean my room every
day. my
favourite food is ice cream. it’s
sweet.
2
用自己学过的句型来介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师
. ms liu is my
chinese teacher. she is short and fat.
she has long hair. she is
very kind . i
like ms liu.
3
假如你是
liuxing
，
给你的朋友
qingyun
写封信，
介绍自己平日
里的饮食习惯
. dear qingyun,
my favourite food is ice cream. it’s sweet. i don’t like beef.i’d
like some milk and
noodles for breakfast.i’d like some chicken
and rice for lunch. i like salad very
much. what about you?
yours
liuxing
五年级上册小作文
1
简单介绍一下自己和自己平时周末所做的事情。
hello! i’ m li
xiaoming. i’m 10.
i have big eyes . i’m tall and thin. i like english.
i
often read books on the weekend. i can clean my
room every
day. my favourite food is
ice cream. it’s sweet.
2
用自己学过的句型来介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师
. ms liu is my
chinese teacher. she is short and fat.
she has long hair. she is
very kind . i
like ms liu.