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小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
My
English Teacher
Miss Wang is my English
teacher.
She
’
s very pretty.
She is short and thin.
She
has
two
big
eyes
and
a
small
mouth.
Her
hairs
are
long.
She
like
s
cats
very
much.
And
she
like
s
singing
and
dancing,
too.
Her
English
is
very
good.
We
often
play
games
in English class
es
. She is very kind. We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文 。小作者开门见山，
直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特
征、喜好、英语水平、
上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，
要注意使用自己最熟悉的词
[
组
]
，
以免写出一些错句子。
写作时
要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
I
’
m
a
student
and
I
am
in
Grade
5.I
get
up
at
six
o
’
clock
every
day.
I
have
breakfast
at
half
past
six,
and
go
to
school
at
seven
o
’
clock.
I
have
classes
from
Monday to
Friday. I have
an
English class on Friday. I have
a
PE class on Tuesday.
I usually go shopping and
watch TV on the weekend.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经
历写起
，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为
,
写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，
要依据提示，
结合自己的实际 ，
写自己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is?
Its colour is yellow. It
’
s long and thin.
It
looks like a small boat. Guess! What is it?Oh, it
is a banana. Do you know what
that
is?
Guess
again!
Its
colour
is
orange.
It
’
s
round.
It
looks
like
a
small
ball
and
a
small
lantern.
Oh,
it
is
an
orange.
I
like
them
very
much.
I
like
ice-creams,
too.
Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very
much.
How about you? What
’
s your favourite food?
【要领点评】
My Favourite Food
是 一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜
欢的每一种食物，
而是有详有略地进行介绍。
整篇文章用词准确、
语言流畅、
没有 语法错误。
另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I can help do
housework
I
am
a
girl.
My
name
is
Li
Ling.
I
’
m
in
Class
Three,
Grade
Five.
I
’
m
helpful
at
home.
I
can
water
the
flowers,
empty
the
trash
and
sweep
the
floor.
After
meals,
I can help my mother do
the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes.
What about
you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是
“我可以帮助做家务”< /p>
，
作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，
介绍自己的名字，
所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历 的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太
空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。
写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family. It
’
s big and nice. Look! My mother is
cooking in it.
This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is
a big table here.
There are many things
on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh,
they
’
re apples.
And what
are those? They are grapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据 自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微
波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及
妈妈在做饭，非常真实。
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写 起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟
悉的东西来训练习作。
My Village
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near
the
village,
there
is
a
forest.
A
small
river
is
in
front
of
the
village.
The
water
is
very
clean.
We
can
see
some
fish
in
the
river.
Near
the
river,
you
can
see
a
mountain.
There are some flowers and trees on the
mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my
village!
【要领点评】
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的 风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河
流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村
庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔
细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用
本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。
小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评
My weekend
There
are
two
days
on
the
weekend,
Saturday
and
Sunday.
On
Saturday,
I
often
go to my dancing class in the morning
and do my homework in the afternoon, and I
often help my mother do some housework.
On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents
in
the
morning
and
read
books
in
the
afternoon.
After
dinner,
I
often
watch
TV
with
my parents. We often have a
good time.
【要领点评】
写法：
这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，
记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做 了
哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：
周六上午：
舞蹈课→下 午：
做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上
午：看望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上
：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可
以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主
要的活动来写，
先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了
什么事，
有什么感受。
再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，
最后抒发一下对这次活 动或这个
周末的感想。