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2010
学年作文范文
1.
静安区
Write a short passage of at
least 60 words about the topic “Where there is a
will, there is a way.
”
(
请以
“
有
志者事竟成
”
为题写话。词数不少于
60
个。要求内容连贯， 表达清楚。标点符号不占格。
)
（注意：短文中不得
出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use
the following points as a guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
??
What do you think of this famous saying?
??
Give example(s) to support your idea(s).
??
Do you have any suggestions to others?
Possible version
1:
I think the key to success
is not so much money as a strong will. I used to
be poor at Physics.
So I made a
will to learn it better. I worked hard and tried
my best on it. Finally, I made progress.
I think it is quite obvious that there
is nothing difficult in the world. As long as you
make up your mind
to do it, you will
certainly fulfill your dream.
Possible version 2:
I disagree with this old saying because
I think when there is a will; there should be an
opportunity or a suitable
surrounding
to enable the man get success. Mao zedong and his
army failed in the first revolution
war because they don't
have good
weapon supports.
But in 1947, they are
not only well supported but also get the help and
hope from all the Chinese people. So they
succeeded. That shows when there is a
will, there may not be a way. However, we should
try to find it, and realize the
will in a proper time.
2.
长宁区
Write at least 60 words about the topic
“Traffic in our city”.
（以
“
我们城市的交通
”
为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
??
What do you think of the traffic in our city?
??
Why do you think so? (Give at least two reasons)
??
What is /are your suggestion(s) to improve the traffic in the city?
Possible version 1:
In my opinion, the traffic in our city
is heavy and terrible. Every Friday, I see the
underground station full of
people.
It’s quite hard to get on the train, as well as to get off. On the ground, the traffic is also terrible as traffic
accidents are reported almost
every day. The main reason is that there are too
many private cars and people are
violating the traffic
rules
all the
time. I suggest that more public transport vehicles should be put into work to
improve the heavy traffic.
Possible version 2:
Nowadays, traffic in our city becomes
better and better. There are more and more cars on
the roads. The number of both taxis and buses are
increasing. In addition, the
underground system in shanghai seems to be very
convenient. In every corner of
our city, an underground station can be found
easily. However, there
’
re still some
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problems. For example, there’re
to
o many private cars on the roads. Since the public transportation system is so
modern, I suggest private car owners
drive less and go to work by bus or underground
more often.
3.
浦东区
Write at least 60 words
about the topic
“
The subject I dislike most
”
.
(
以
< p>“我最不喜欢的学科科目
”
为题
< p>
写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a
guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
??
Which subject do you dislike most?
??
Why do you
dislike this subject? (You’d better give two reasons.)
??
How can you improve this subject in future?
Possible version 1:
I dislike painting lessons most.
Frankly speaking, I haven’t any talent in painting
at all. The colors, shapes
and
shadows are nightmare for me. Actually, I often
draw pictures in a dreadful mess. Although
painting is difficult for me, I like enjoying
myself
in a museum. Gazing at
masterpieces is not bad. After all, I can’t draw a
good one but I can improve this subject by
enjoying
those masterpieces.
Possible version 2:
My favorite subject is Math and I
dislike Physics most. I dislike it because it is
so hard and complex that I
never get a satisfying score. I will
work hard and try my best on it. I might say that
success is won by three things:
first, effort; second, more effort;
third, still more effort. I think It is quite
obvious that there is nothing difficult in
the world. As long as I make up my mind
to do it, I will certainly make progress. And
Physics won’t be the subject
I
dislike most any longer.
4.
虹口区
Write at least 60 words about the topic
“Homework in our study”. (
以
“
我 们学习中的家庭作业
”
为题写一
篇至少
60
字的短文，标点符号不占格
)
。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a
guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
??
What do you think of homework in your study?
??
Why do you do your homework every day?(At least two reasons)
??
Is there too much homework in your daily life?
??
What do you want to say to your teacher or your parents?
Possible version 1:
Every day, we are busy with our
studies. Our teachers often give us a lot of
homework to do. After a day's
hard work, we all feel tired. We want
very much to have a rest. But when we get home, we
still have to do a lot of
homework. It is really a hard job. Most
of the students in our class become short-sighted.
If teachers would give us less
homework, we can enjoy our life more and be more
willingly to go back to
school
to study.
Possible version 2:
I do all my homework every day
because I think it’s
a students’ duty to do so. However, sometimes I
feel
doing homework is a
waste of time since it both boring and useless. In
my opinion, truly useful homework acts as
a wonderful tutor. It summarizes the
key points in our study. I would be more familiar
with what I have learnt and
thus be good at them. I hope teachers
would only give us homework like his and omit
anything unnecessary.
Therefore, we can study more
efficiently.
5.
黄浦（嘉定）
Write at least 60 words about the topic
“My Dream Life of Senior High School”.
（以
“
我向往的高中生活
”
为题，写一篇不少于
60
个词 的短文，标点符号不占格。首句已给，不记入
60
个词。）
2
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的
姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the
following points as a guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
??
What senior high school life do you like?
??
What do you hope to do in the senior high school?
??
What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have?
（
You may begin your passage with:
）
My dream senior
high school life is …
Possible
version 1:
I am looking forward to entering a senior high school. I like a modern and active school. There I can enjoy
myself very much. I hope to take a lot
of lessons which I am interested in. I also want
to do a lot of experiments.
Don’t
you think it’s interesting? Of course, teachers
and friends are important as well. I expect to meet kind
teachers and helpful
friends. The life in senior high school will be
totally new. I can’t wait to try it.
Possible version 2:
My life of senior high school will
certainly be busy, but I hope it will be a
pleasant and colorful one. Of course,
first of all, I want to get more
knowledge, especially on Math and English.
Secondly, I’d like to join a club or a
society. Classmates and I will take
part in many interesting activities. However,
teachers and friends are also an
important part in my study life. Good
teachers may affect my study a lot. And I also
expect to make a friend that I
could talk with him heart by heart. I’m
looking forward to my life of senior high school.
6.
青浦区
Write at least 60 words on the topic
“The Important Things in My Life”.
（以
”
我生命中重要的事
”
为题写
< br>一篇不少于
60
词的短文
,
标点符号不占格。
)
（注意：短文中
不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use
the following points as a guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
??
What are the important things in your life?
??
Which one do you think is the most important thing?
??
Why do you think so?
（
give at least two reasons
至少给出两个理由）
Possible
version 1:
There are many
important things in my life, such as school marks,
friendship, relaxation and so on. No doubt
the most important thing to me is
friendship. I have a lot of good friends. We play
together and we share happiness
and laughter. When I am in trouble, my
close friends always give me a hand. I think a
friend in need is a friend
indeed.
Possible version 2:
Everyone has his or her own important
things. As for a student, knowledge is important.
Time is also
important because
if it goes, it will not be back. But I think
health is the most important thing of all. If you
are
sick, how can you run or
jump or live a happy life? There is also an old
saying, wealth is nothing without health.
Health is the most precious thing in my
life. So I will do a lot of exercise to keep
healthy.
7.
卢湾区
Write at least 60 words
on the topic “My Secrets of Happiness”. (
以
“
我的快乐秘诀
”
为题写一篇不 少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
)
< br>（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Everyone has his or her own secrets of
happiness, so do I. …
Use the following points as a guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
?
Tell your secrets of happiness.
?
Give the supporting details.
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Possible
version 1:
Everyone has his or
her own secrets of happiness. So do I. My secrets
of happiness are drawing and listening to music.
When I feel tired, I draw a
picture or listen to some music. These
can not only make me become more patient but also
let me feel relaxed and happy.
As soon as I start drawing or
listening to
music, I forget all the sadness. They are my
secrets of happiness and they’re really useful!
Possible version 2:
Everyone has his or her own secrets of
happiness. So do I. As we all know happiness plays
an important part in our daily life, so I try to
be happy at
any time. When I meet
difficulties, I listen to pop music. Listening to
music makes me relaxed and happy.
What’
s more, I think not everything in our life
makes us pleased. so I just
remember that no matter what happens, just try to
smile. A wide smile keeps sadness away. They are
my secrets of happiness.
8.
闵行区
Write at least 60 words about the topic
“An interesting lesson”.
（以
“
一堂有趣的课
”
为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a
guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
??
When did you have an interesting lesson? What lesson was it?
??
What did you do during the lesson?
??
Why was it interesting?
(Give one or two reasons)
Possible version 1:
The most interesting lesson I have ever
had is an art and craft lesson. In that lesson, we
didn’t draw pictures
as usual.
We were told to design clothes by ourselves
instead! The teacher showed us some pictures of
fashions
first. Then we began
drawing. We all showed great interest in
designing. It was such an interesting lesson that
I
will never forget it.
Possible version 2:
Last week, we had a chemistry
lesson and we did some experiments in it. It was
so interesting that I still
remember it clearly. We did the
experiments in the lab. Our teacher told us that
it might be dangerous and we must
be
very careful. When we saw the interesting chemical
change, we all felt excited. I think it is
interesting to learn
chemistry
and I will work hard at it.
9.
崇明区
Write a passage of a
t least 60 words on the topic “Things I want to do during this summer holiday ”. (
以
< /p>
“
今年暑假我想做的事
”
为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a guide.
（短文须包含下列要点）
??
What are the things you want to do during this summer holiday?
??
What do you like to do most? Why?
Possible version 1:
During the summer holiday, I
will have more free time to do some
thing interesting. I’d like to
read some
interesting story books to relax
myself. I’m so busy with my lessons now that I
don’t have any time reading for
fun. Travelling abroad is the thing I
want to do most. The cultures of different
countries attract me a lot. Maybe I
will go to Italy during the summer
holiday.
Possible version 2:
This summer I want to do many things.
For example, I’d like to travel with my parents to
Hongkong. I also
want to play
some computer game
s. I like to travel to Hongkong most for it’s enjoyable to go sightseeing in such
an attractive city. I’m
looking forward to visiting Disneyland Amusement
Park. I’m eager to see the amazing night
views of the modern city.
I’m sure it will be a wonderful
summer holiday.
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