十年上海中考英语作文

十年上海中考英语作文

2011

年上海中考英语作文题：

Write at least 60

words about the topic “I’m a member of

以“我是?的一员”为题写一? 篇不少于

60

个词的短文，

标点符号不占格子。

提 示：

你

可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员，或者作 家庭，班级，社区的一员，写

出你的经

历，感受等。

Use the following points as a reference.

Are you glad to be a member of ..........

?

What do you do in it?

How do you feel as such a member?

「

J Animal

LovefS

Scienc

< br>例文

+

点评：

It has been 2 years since I became a member of the group

It has been

+

时间段

+since +

过去的时间点

Lovers

非限定性定语从句

Not only... but also

倒装句，用法请参见我其他的帖子

do we collect information about the animals in danger but we also

post the information on the internet. In addition, we often spend

逻辑词

our weekends or holidays taking photos of those beautiful animals.

It is in this way that we attract more people to love and protect

强调句

animals. I had never found my work so meaningful until I joined

this group. Never wHI I get out of it. (95w)

Never

的倒装句

2010

年上海中考英语作文题

:

I'm proud of myself

1

、

What kind of person are you?

2

、

W

hat makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)

3

、

W

hy are you proud of yourself?

要求：至少

60

字

范文：

I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running .But as we all know

，

The students of

Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment

，

I just wanted to give up .but

my parents encouraged me:

“

impossible is nothing,

”“you could challenge yourself!” so with the

encouragement of them,

，

I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the

finishing line J felt proud of myself .though I didn’t get the good mark

，

I knew J won. I created

a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!

满分作文

+

点评

:

Like those many teenagers you can see in the street, I am just a

定语从句

common student, nothing different. I am still proud of myself,

however, for I am trying to get better every day. Early to bed and

活用谚语

early to rise, I make myself full of energy all day long. I seldom

waste any minute during the classes, which helps me to be highly

非限定性定语从句

efficient while studying. Besides, I also keep myself healthy by

省略句

taking exercise every day. To sum up, I never give up improving

do A by doing B

，

通过做

B

事达到做

A

事的目的，初中英语必会语法

myself, and that is the reason why I am proud of myself. (98w)

定语从句

-

2009

年上海中考英语作文题

:I want to do something for my school

以

“T want to do something for my school

（我想为学校做一件事）”为题写一篇不

少于

60

个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

学生习作

:

I want to make school clean. You may think it is very sim

ple. But I don’t think so. Our

teacher said

，

’’School is your home

，

you should keep it clean/’But I have never done anything