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图画型
第一段:套话
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图片描述
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套话
What the drawing is trying to express
is symbolic and philosophic !
(并列押韵,可以说是
有用的废话)
Featured in the above image
are two men who , each of them having only one leg ,
are
running
forward
together
.
(妙在
featured< /p>
和
who
,插入的独立主格结构。这句话是得
分重点,
需要自己组织一个简单的切题的句子。
)
Howeve r ridiculous and humorous
(押韵)
it
may seem at first glimpse
,this cartoon does carry rather significant
implications .
(可以认为是
有用的废话
.
)
第二段:主题句
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深入阐述
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分条阐述
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分条阐述
1
、
Evidently , the
purpose
of
the illustration is to mirror the fact that
teamwork
(中心
词)
is essential to achieving success .
(第一句,这是揭示主题的句子,大家的句型百变不离
其宗。也是得分重点
.
)
2
、
Indeed, a great deal of attention is being paid today to
(这个句型是
某年阅读理解
的第一句)
cooperation
, which has profound implications for both individual and
whole society .
(第二句,
这是一个长 句子,
同时也是一个概括句,
改卷老师看到你思路清晰。
)
3
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First and foremost ,in this world of change and complexity, the need for
teamwork
is of the
greatest importance , if one want to
realize dreams .
(
第三句,
分述
< p>)4
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In addition , our country as
a
whole
also
could
not
afford
to
part
with
(这个句型是我从某年阅读理解里借用过来的)
teamwork spirit
,
if we are ever
(这个单词可以不要,不过我看到真题里有这个用法,单词
简
单,但是用法深奥,应该是比较地道的英语。我想改卷老师一定很喜欢。
)
goi ng
to
move
forward in
terms of politics , economy , culture and society
.
(第四句,分述)
第三段:评论
Teamwork spirit
,in my view , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the
whole society
.
(此句是插入
+
并列)
Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched
so as to enhance
people’s awareness of the importance of
teamwork spirit
.
(转折句,是我从徐
绽的作文书里总结归纳的。
)
Only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and
harmonious world , as we
all wish , in the long run !
(强调句,高联的辅导班讲过这 个句型,
强调
+
并列
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插 入)
原题回放
阅读下面的材料,根据要求写作。
“民生在勤,
勤则不匮”
,
劳动是财富的源泉,< /p>
也是幸福的源泉。
“夙兴夜寐,
洒扫庭内”
,
热爱劳动是中华民族的优秀传统,绵延至今。可是现实生活中,也有一些同学不理解劳动,
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不愿意劳动。有的说:
“我们学习这么忙,劳动太占时间了!
”有的说:
“科技进步这么快,
劳动的事,
以后可以交给 人工智能啊!
”
也有的说:
“劳动这么苦,
这么累 ,
干吗非得自己干?
花点钱让别人去做好了!
”此外,我 们身边也还有着一些不尊重劳动的现象。
这引起了人们的深思。
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