-
翻译一定要写满,而不要在乎句子是否完整
通顺。当然别忘了标点符号,最后别忘了句号。
小作文顶多
120
字,要在第一页写完,不要拖到页面
2 p>
,切忌!
页面
2
用于写大作文,
220
字左右,相当于
B5
纸的一半,一定要认真练习适应!
大作文
单号版:
What
a
compelling
and
thought-provking
drawing
it
is!
As
is
vividly
presented
in
the
interesting and instructive
cartoon above,
……
(句
1
)
,in contr ast,
……
(句
2
)
。
What on earth does
the drawer really
attempt to convey?
注释:
thought- provking
中间的是连字符,不能去掉,不管它是位于同一行还是两个不
同的行。
Compelling and thought-
provking
两个
ing
押尾韵,俗称绝句
Interesting and
instructive
两个押头韵
in
contrast
路标性词汇,前后形成对比。
句<
/p>
1
一般用来简单描述漫画内容,句
2
和句
< p>1形成对比
例如:
06
< p>年的一个小男孩。。
。
。
。
。 另一个小男孩(两个矛盾方面描述)
04
年起点也是终点
穿中国服装的美国女孩。前一句写漂亮,后一句子转折写穿中国服装。
00
年世界捕鱼(以前怎么样,现在怎么样)
温室花朵(温室里面花朵怎么样,外面花朵怎么样)
On earth:
究竟
加强语气
Drawer=
作者。不能写
author
显得俗气
Really:
可去掉,但不丰满
第二段
Simple as the image is the implications
(启示)
mirrored
(反映)
are apprantly far- reaching
(深远的)
。
Initially such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused wide-spread social
concern
。
Nowhere in the history has the issue of sth
(其中
of sth
也可省略不写)
been
talked
about so much as in our society today
(历史上任何 时刻都比不上我们的时代这样关注这
件事情)
In the second place, the painting
reveals an upsetting
story
(
事情)
and similar events happened and
happening are heared or
reported in nearly all aspects of our life.
(
27
字)
Additionally,the painter
intends to convince us that a package
of programs
(一揽子项目,
计划,
方案)
< p>should be initiated
to reverse the
grim stuation----
(此处是破折号)
lauching
(发起,发动)
a nationwide education
campaign,setting up relvant laws and
regulations,and the list goes
on.
(
36
字)
三段
To conclude,it is
high time that much importance were attached to
such cases .And it is imperative
(
necessary
)
actions be taken to curb
(扭转不好的趋势)
such practi ces
(综上所述,
结论如下:
早该重视这种现象了)<
/p>
.There is reason to believe that as long as all the society ,the authorites and
the
mass media and every one involved ,make concerted
effort to strive hard,such upsetting stories
will ultimately be ended or at least
reduced.
注释:
All the society,the authorites and the
mass media and every one involved
是用来扩充用的,如 果
自己觉得空间不够,可以省略
1
,
2< /p>
个不写
“
There is reason to believe that
”可以删除,句子意思不变
第一段双号版
What on earth can we derive
from
(从什么中获得)
this interesting and instructive drawing?It goes
without
saying that (=There is no denying the fact that
毋庸置疑
)what the painter virtually aims
to convey is profound. Primarily ,we
can learn that such cases are far from being
(=not) rare and
upsetting
(
令人心痛的
)
parallels
(
类似的事情
)
can
be
found
any
there
from
our
neighborhood
and
around the world. What
’
s more,there has been a growing (=more and more) society would be
like
years
later
if
this
pervasive
trend
(
肆虐
的趋势
)
goes
unchallenged
(
放 p>
任下去
)
。
Additionally
,to reverse (
扭转
) the grim situation,effective measures should be entailed
(定制)
by
al
parties
concerned .Enhancing
people
’
s
awareness
of
such
practices
(
行为
)
and
setting
up
relevant rules
and regulations ought to be top priorities
(
首要任务
) of the agenda. (
议事日程
)
注释:在第二
段中几乎没写东西(指考生完全用的板子,没添加任何东西就可以用)
,希望
考生能够自己根据能力修改,删除,增加一些东西。
第三段
Judging
(
非谓语动词
) from all argument offered above ,we may safely arrive at the conclusive
that it is high time that such stories
were terminated or at least
reduced.I
’
m strongly convinced
that
only
when
such
happenings
(
事情
)
come
to
an
end,can
we
maintain
a
happy
,healthy
and
harmonious society (
和谐社会
) as well wish.
呵呵。
。
。
。
。
。好了,我们现在已经有个大致的骨架了,剩下的所有东西我们都是在这个基础
上
建立起来的(站在巨人的肩膀上)
强调两点哦:
p>
首先把,部分考生担心射门雷同卷,这个担心是多余的,没必要哦。因为一般人多多
少少都是会修改的。
其次,物以稀为贵,东西多了就不
值钱了。所以呢各位牛人高手可以在这个基础上采
取各种方法对其进行修改(替换词语,
换句型,被动,主动,强调句,定语从句如此种种,
添加一些自己的宝贝)
。
下面单刀直入,切入正题吧。
讲述可能出现的一些新情况:
3
个万一:
万一大作文漫画是
2
幅而不是
1
幅
万一作文时非讽刺类的呢
万一作文时“图表类
”呢(如
97
,
99
)柱状,曲线,饼状
下面我们针对单双号分别展开
单号
1.
双漫画
所有的单数改复数,当然有一些地方时不能修改的哦
2.
讽刺
“
Additionally
到末尾”删除,我们将其修改为举例(例下)
Let
’
s come to an example concerning .an acquaintance of mine ,which serves well as a good
example to the
point
……
第三段句子中的
cur b
修改为
ensure
第三段最后一句“
such upsetting
。< /p>
。
。
。
。
。
”全删, 修改为
We can maintain a happy ,a
healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.
双号
非讽刺修改
1.
< p>第二段中
primarily
句中删除
upsetting
2.
第二段中
what
’
s more
一句删除,
“
worsening
”
3.
It
’
s hard
……
if we fail to guasp such cases and can
’
t put them into pratices
4.
把
Additionally p>
——段尾换成“举例“
To make the
point even clearer,let
’
s come to an example regarding
An acquaintance of
mine
That it is high time
all parties concerned took effective and efficient
measure to practice .
The authorites
the mass media ,aswell as each invidual are
involved And I
’
m strongly
convinced
that
we
’
ll
properly
ensure
such
practices,thus
maintaining
a
happy,
heathy
society as we all wish.
3.
万一表格,则仅仅修改第一段
As is
vividly presented in the
******above,
……
in contrast,
……
what on earth does the,
……
What
’
s apprantly illustuated in the
——
is that
……
in contrast 2
后面接上一两个描述性句子用下
< br>2
、
3
段落都不用修改除非要求分析原因等等(重点是漫画 ,讽刺)
一般作文的三个部分是
1
,
describe 2
,
imply 3
,
comment suggest
小作文
Dear sir
or madam,
Thank
you
in
advance
for
your
attention
to
this
letter
and
I
’
mwriting
to
present
my
complaint/inqu
iry/application/apology/
推荐
concerning
sth
that
……
(引述事实或理由
例
concerning computer
that I
’
ve bought in your shop last weekend
)
There
’
re an array of factors contributing to (
同
result in
同一个意思
)this.
第一第二第三
(同
大作文一样)
。
For one thing
…
,For another
…
。
There are ahost of aspects I
’
ll offer here
……
I
’
d
be
most
grateful
if
you
can
reply
me
at
your
earlist
convenience
and
any
favorable