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开头段：
1.
Whoever in front of this
image
will be very much/highly/greatly
amused/interested/s
hocked/striked
。
How
interesting
and
enlightening
it
is!What
is
conspicuously/clearly
illustrated/presented/portrayed
in
the
drawing
above
is
that__
+
描述图
).
Odd
and
funny
as
it
seems/looks
to
be,
such/this happening/ practice/
phenomenon/ story./ case/ event are so
pervasive/ widespread that we can’t
afford to ignore them .
an
amusing and interesting painting it is! It is
indicative of
common, yet serious
social phenomenon:
描述
+
补充描述
.However ridiculous
and
farfetched,
as
the
above
image
looks/seems
to
be,
the
drawer
obviously
intends for deeper
meanings than what is shown superficially.
interesting
and
instructive
the
above
painting
it
is
so
funny
that whoever in
front of it cannot help laughing:
描述
+
补充描述，
simple
as the image seems to be, the
intended/implied
meaning goes far deeper.
What on earth does the picture
reallys aim to mirror?
第二段
：
is
no
denying
the
fact
that/Obviously,
we
can
earily
define
what the
drawer intends/aims/attempts to reflect to us, and
the strong
and dear message
suggested/communicated/presented have is
that+
主旨：
goes without
saying that +
主旨
drawing
goes far more than/beyond a simple/mere drawing.
Indeed,
it carries a thought-provoking
social implication:+
主旨
the drawing vividly presents goes far beyond a
simple drawing.
Instead, it carries
important implications:
主旨
论据
:
is alarming that similar events are available in nearly all
walks
of
life,
and
one
of
my
former
clloeages
may
serve
as
a
good
example+
例子
e
in
history has
the
issue(of+
主旨
)
been
concerned
so
much
as
in
our society.
should be observed that upsetting parallels can be
readily found
anywhere in all walks of
life.
A case in point is an
acquaintance of mine, who
+
举例
,According to a
survey(conduct
by
CCTV/china
daily
last
October,
78.6%
of
the
people
(
主
旨
)one following the tide
）
“__” says Dr
wang，中国科学院院士，“
----
“
1/2/3+Failure to realize the severity
of this grim situation will
inevitably
decrease our chances of success. And failure to
come up with
countermeasures
will
do
more
harm
to
our
ed
/If
such
stories
go
unchallenged it is hard imagine what our society
will be like years
later.
Indeed,
it
is
imperative
that
the
whole
society
be
made
aware
that
any prompt
action is of great benefit to all.
第三段：
can
be
done
what
tops
the
agenda,
I
deem,
is
to
help
people
develop
a
position
and
wholesome
outlook
on
life
as
well
as
the
world
and
to cultivate noble and worthy value and
gualities among them. Moreover,
we
should
appeal
to
the
government
to
take
nationwide
prompt
actions.
All
the society should make
sustained and concertal efforts to curb such
practices. Only in these ways can we
maintain a happy, healthy and
harmonious society as we all gh it is
easier said than done,
there are good
reasons
to expect that
such case will
be terminally ended
or at
least significantly reduced
as
an
ancient
chinese
philosophic
book
concludes,?,“All
that
is
need
ed
for the
prevalence of
a
mislead is that good
people do nothing.”
To
begin with, schools and mass media should serve as
a counterbalance
to the
upsetting/worsening/gimp trend, doing their utmost
to develop
worthy values and qualities
among people and awakening people of they
rowing
threat
of
this
phenomenon.
What
is
more/Beside,
the
administration
should play a
dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.
Fortunately,due
attention
has
been
paid
and
effective
measures
have
been
encouraged.
This
is
a
promising
start,
although
there
is
still
a
long
way
for us to go.
3To paraphrase
19
th
philosopher xx “?.” I’m strongly convinced that
the
authorities,
schools
and
mass
media
should
communiate
their
positive
and
instructive
messages
to
the
public
actively
and
forcefully,
lest
this
kind
of
grim
situdion
go
unchallenged.
If
positive
and
effective
measures
can
be
well
under
way,
it
may
not
be
long
for
us
to
get
an
easy
breath(have
a h..,h? society as
we all wish) If good people do nothing,there is a
real
possibility
that
such
trend
will
turn
into
a
dreadful
handicap,
thus
posing a
threat to the solid growth of our society.
翻译一
定要写满，
而不要在乎句子是否完整通顺。
当然别忘了标点符号，
最后别
忘了句号。
小作文顶多
120
字，要在第一页写完，不要拖到页面
2
，切忌！
页面
2
用于写大作文，
220
字左右，相当于
B5
< p>纸的一半，一定要认真练习适应！
大作文
单号版：
What a compelling and thought-provking
drawing it is! As is vividly presented in
the interesting and instructive cartoon
above,
……
（句
1
）
,in contr ast,
……
（句
2
）
。
What on earth does the drawer really
attempt to convey?
注释：
thought- provking
中间的是连字符，不能去掉，不管它是位于同一行
还
是两个不同的行。
Compelling and thought-
provking
两个
ing
押尾韵，俗称绝句
Interesting and
instructive
两个押头韵
in
contrast
路标性词汇，前后形成对比。
句<
/p>
1
一般用来简单描述漫画内容，句
2
和句
< p>1形成对比
例如：
06
< p>年的一个小男孩。。
。
。
。
。 另一个小男孩（两个矛盾方面描述）
04
年起点也是终点
穿中国服装的美国女孩。前一句写漂亮，后一句子转折写穿中国服装。
00
年世界捕鱼（以前怎么样，现在怎么样）
温室花朵（温室里面花朵怎么样，外面花朵怎么样）
On earth:
究竟
加强语气
Drawer=
作者。不能写
author
显得俗气
Really:
可去掉，但不丰满
第二段
Simple as the image is the implications
（启示）
mirrored
（反映）
are apprantly
far-
reaching
（深远的）
。
Initially such a
phenomenon as revealed in
the picture has
aroused wide-spread social
concern
（关注）
。
Nowhere in the history has the issue of
sth
（
其中
of sth
也可省略不写）
been talked about so much as in our society today
（
历
史上任何时刻都比不上我们的时代这样关注这件事情）
In the second place, the painting
reveals an upsetting story
（事情）
and similar events
happened and happening
are heared or reported in nearly all aspects of
our life.
（
27
字）
Addi tionally,the painter intends to convince us that a package of programs
（一揽
子项目，计划，方案）
should be initiated to reverse the grim stu ation----
（此处是破
折号）
lauching
（发起，
发动）
a nationwide education campaign,setting up relvant laws
and
regulations,and the list goes
on.
（
36
字）
三段
To conclude,it is
high time that much importance were attached to
such cases .And it
is imperative
（
necessary
）
actions be taken to curb
（扭转不好的趋势）
such practices
（综上所述，结论如下：早该重视这种现象了）
.There is reason to believe that as
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