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中考英语作文
——
命题作文
< p>1
、书面表达
(10
分
)
30
例
以“
My
Best
School
Trip
”为题写一篇
60
字左右的短文，介绍 你的参观情况。
________________________
_____________________________________________
____________________________________________ _________________________
______________
__________________________________________________
_____
答案
My Best
School Trip
Last
school
trip,
I
went
to
the
beach
with
my
classmates
on
the
bus.
We
had
great
fun
playing
on
the
beach,
swimming
in
the
water,
surfing,
fishing and we took
many photos there. Later we visited the Blue
Water
Aquarium.
We
saw
many
different
kinds
of
fishes
there.
There
were
sharks,
seals,
octopuses
and
so
on.
Some
were
big,
others
were
small.
In
the
afternoon,
we
went
to
the
shop
and
bought
many
gifts.
Finally, we
had a big sea food dinner. We were tired, but
really
happy. It was my best school
trip.
2
、书面表达。
(15)
学校英语社团在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用
英语以“
Learn to smile
”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。
学会对自己微笑
生活中会有不愉快的事，
如考试不及格
（请再举一个例子）；
使你自信；
击败你的人有时是你自己。
学会对他人微笑
微笑是一种语言
使人与人更亲近
人人都能懂
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-
词数
80
< p>左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
参考词汇：自信
-confidence (n.), confident (adj.);
打败
-beat (beat,
beaten) (v.);
短文须 包括所有内容要点，
不要逐句翻译，
可适当发挥，
使短文连贯、< /p>
通顺；
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Learn to smile
Smile is an
attitude (
态度
) to life.
< p>
____________________________________________ ________________
答案
Learn to smile
Smile is an attitude to life. In
our life, there may be something
unpleasant.
For
example,
you
fail
in
an
exam;
or
another
time,
you
are
misunderstood
by
your
friends.
These
unpleasant
things
may
make
you
feel
bad.
Then
what
will
you
do?
Why
not
learn
to
smile?
Smiling
to
yourself
can
bring
back
your
confidence.
Sometimes,
the
greatest
enemy is yourself;
that
’
s to say, sometimes, you are beaten by
yourself. We
should
also learn
to
smile to
others. It will
help us
to get closer to others. So, smile is
the most widely understood
language.
3
、书面表达
(
本题
15
分
)
近年来
中国中学生中出现了
“出国留学热”
，
成千上万的中学生已经去国 外
学习，
而另外的一些学生也一直在设法出国，
对此人们 有不同的看法。
请根据下
面表格的提示，以
Studyi ng Abroad
为题写一篇短文。
Advantages
与不同文化背景的人交友。
年纪小、缺乏生活经验，自理能力差。
Disadvantages
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注意：
1
、短文须包括所有要点，内容连贯；
2
、
80
词左右，开头已给出（不
计入总词数）。
Studying Abroad
In
recent
years,
studying
abroad
has
been
popular
with
Chinese
high
school
students.
__________________________________________
___________________________
____________
_____
答案
Studying Abroad
In
recent
years,
studying
abroad
has
been
popular
with
Chinese
high
school
students. Thousands of them have gone to foreign
countries
to study. Many more are
trying their best to go abroad.
There
are many advantages in studying abroad. First,
students who
study abroad can make
friends with people of different cultures.
Second, they can improve their foreign
languages more quickly.
On the other
hand, there are some disadvantages. Most of the
students are too young to live by
themselves without any living
experience.
And
the
high
cost
is
also
a
problem
for
common
families.
4
、书面表达部分
（
10
）
以
How to Keep Healthy
为题写一篇
80
词左右的短文。（
10
分）
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If
we
want
to
keep
our
bodies
healthy,
we
must
have
a
good
habit.
We
should
get
up
and
go
to
bed
early
and
sleep
at
least
eight
hours
every day. Do more
exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing
balls and so on. We should also eat
healthy food
——
more fruit
and
vegetables
and
less
meat.
If
you
don
’
t
feel
well,
you
’
d
better
see
a
doctor
at
once.
And
we
should
wash
our
hands
before
meals
and
drink
enough
boiled
water
every
day.
It
’
s
necessary
for
our
health.
We
should
not
throw
litter
about,
keep
long
fingernails
and
smoke,
etc. It
’
s also very important.
5
、
Write at least 60 words about the topic
“
I
’
m member of _____.
”
(
以”
我是
``````
的一员”
为题写一篇不少 于
60
个词的短文
,
标点符合不占格子”
)
提示
:
你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的人 员
,
或者作为家庭
,
班级
,
社区额的
一员
,
写出你的经历
,
感受等
.
Use the following
points as a reference.
Are you glad to
be a member of ``````?
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What do you
do in it?
How do you feel as such a
member?
【写作思路】
一、审题
本文要求写一篇介绍 自己作为某兴趣小组或某社团成员的文章，
要求学生写
出自己的经历以及
感受等。
二、列举写作要点
1. have been a member of singing and
dancing club for +
时间；
2.
I
’
m an actor in the this club.
3. Though I am very tired, I like to
sing and dance every day.
三、列出关键短语和句型
be a
member of , an actor, singing and dacing, feel
very happy,
答案
范文
A Possible
Version
：
I
’
m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club
Hello,
everyone! I
’
m very glad to be a member of the Singing and
Dancing Club.
I have been in this club for 2 years.
I
’
m an actor
in
the
club.
I
like
singing
and
dancing
very
much.
I
sing
and
dance
with my
classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I
like to
sing and dance every day. It
makes me feel very happy.
6
、章题目和开头已经给出，不计入总次数）
①
description (appearance, character
…
)
favorite
teacher
②
friendship
(an
event
between
you;
the
story
of becoming friends)
③
the best quality
（
kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful
…）
My favorite
teacher
My favorite teacher
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_______________________________________
____________________________
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答案
参考答案：
My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is
a 36- year-old woman. But
she is tall
and has long straight hair. And she often wears
black
pants and a white shirt. She
teaches us English. We all like
listening to her. Her classes are very
interesting and creative.
Because
she
has
different
ways
of
teaching.
But
she
is
very
strict
with
us
in
everything.
She
is
warm-hearted.
We
all
know
she
is
always
ready to help others. When we are in
trouble, she can try her best
to help
us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.
7
、随着 “创建全国文明城市”活哦的那个的开展。《贵阳中学生英语报》
正在开展校规校纪大讨
论。该报正在向各校学生征文。请你以
“
Rules of My
School
”为题，写一篇征文，谈谈你对校规的了解和认识。
要点如下：
1.
你所知道的校规（列举
3
条）；
2.
你对这些校规的认识；
3.
请你对改善校规题意见
注意：
1.
文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名；
2.
必须写在答题卡上指定的位置，词数不少于
80
词。
答案
Rules of My School
There are lots of rules in my school.
For example, we must clean
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our
classroom every morning. I think
it
’
s very necessary for us
to keep it clean. And
it
’
s good for our health. We have to wear
school uniform every day. I think
the uniforms are ugly. In my
opinion,
we should be allowed to choose our own clothes. We
can
’
t talk in the classroom. As
far as I am concerned, keeping quiet
is
good for studying.
8
、俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，
使家庭成员之间
的关系更融洽、
更和谐，
每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。
比如：必须按时回家，不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况，根据下面
的提示和要求，以“
My Family Rules
”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：
1
、家里有哪些家规；
2
、对家规的感受；
3< /p>
、对父母的建议。
要求：
1
、必须包括提示内容，可以适当发挥；
2
、词数：不少于
90< /p>
词；
3
、文中
不得出现真实的地名和人名。
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答案
My parents are very strict with me, and
they have made some basic
rules which I
must obey.
Firstly,
I
must
finish
my
homework
in
time.
Secondly,
I
cannot
play
computer
games,
even
in
my
free
time
or
on
weekends.
Thirdly,
I
have
to
do
some
housework,
such
as
making
the
bed
and
tidying
my
bedroom
and so on. If I break
one of them, I will be punished. But thanks
to these rules, I can live a healthy
and regular life.
I think the second
rule is unfair to me. I hope sometimes I could
be allowed to play computer games for a
while, it will make me
relaxed.
9
、
随着社会的发展，
网上购物成为一种新型的购物方式。
请根据下表提示，
谈谈网上
购物的利与弊。
要求：
1.< /p>
语句流畅，书写规范。
2.
包含提示内容，并可适当发挥。
3.
词数
80
左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
4.
文中不能出现人名、地名等真实信息。
Advantages
Disadvantages
方
便
（
convenient
）
；
2 4
小时营业；
看不见物品；
容易受到欺骗
（
be
cheated
）
；
不用排队
Shopping online is quite popular in our
daily life now.___________
____________
__________________________________________________
_______
_______________________________
______________________________________
不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣
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__________________________________________________
_______
_______________________________
______________________________________
__________________________________________________
___________________
___________________
__________________________________________________
_______________________________________
______________________________
________
__________________________________________________
_____
答案
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is
a new way of shopping. Many things are
offered and wait for your
choosing.
Convenience
is
the
most
important
advantage.
You
can
buy
anything
as
you
like.
You
don
’
t
have
to
queue
with
other
shoppers.
Meanwhile, it
is
often open
for
24 hours a day. However, there are
many disadvantages about
shopping online. You can
’
t actually see
the
real
products.
So
you
may
be
cheated
easily.
Also,
many
people
will
miss
the
best
opportunity
to
get
along
well
with
their
friends
and share the joy of
shopping.
In
conclusion,
we
should
make
proper
use
of
the
internet
shopping.
10
、 为配合我市举行的“
6
·
5
世界环境日”万人骑自 行车城区环游活动，
请你根据提示要求写一篇以“
Lower
Carbon
（低碳）
,
Happier
Life
”为主题的
英语短文。（以上背景内容无需表述）<
/p>
提示：
1
、在
6
月
5
日自己骑自行车上学，父母骑自行车上班；
2
、在家使用节能灯；减少洗澡淋浴时间；
3
、将用过的课本留给下届学生；
4
、请你就此话题补充
1
—
2
点个人做法。
要求：
1
、不要逐词翻译；
2
、在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名；
3
、词数
80
左右；短文标题和首尾句已给出，不计入 词数。
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energy-saving lamp
，用过的
used,
下届
lower grades
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
It
’
s our duty to save environment.
__________________________
___________________________________________
______________________________________________
_______________________
________________
____________________________________
Lower carbon, happier life.
Let
’
s take actions.
答案
Lower Carbon, Happier Life
It
’
s our duty to save the environment. On June 5th, I will go to
school
by
bike
or
on
foot
instead
of
taking
the
bus.
And
I
will
also
ask
my
parents
to
ride
bikes
to
work
that
day.
At
home,
we
will
use
energy-saving
lamps
and
spend
less
time
when
we
are
taking
a
shower.
Don
’
t
throw
away
the
used
textbooks
and
leave
them
to
the
students
of lower grades. At the same time, I
will tell my parents to take
bags
when
they
go
shopping.
I
will
turn
off
the
lights
before
leaving
the room.
Lower carbon, happier life.
Let
’
s take actions.
11
、
为了解同学们的理想，
我们在学校的
l00
名学生中进行了一次调查采访。
采访主要是围绕“
What do you want to be when you grow up?
”和“
Why?
”这
两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调
查数据写—份以“
the
dream
jobs
”为主题的
报告．并谈谈你自己的理想与原因。词数
80
个左右。
(
报告开头语已给出．不计
人作文总词数。
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The Dream Jobs
In order to
help us form good ideals (
理想
), we made a survey among 100
students in our
school. Here are the
results.
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答案
The Dream Jobs
In
order to help us form good ideals, we made a
survey among 100
students in
our
school
last
week.
Here
are
the
results.
Most
of
the
students
want to he businessmen,
because they want to be rich and buy what
they
need
in
the
future.
More
students
are
dreaming
of
being
doctors,
because they are proud
of saving the sick people . And being good
teachers is some
students
’
dream. They think it
’
s a pleasure to
make
students learn more from them.
Different students have different
ideals. As for me, I want to be
a
policeman, and make our society much safer.
12
、爱是心中的太阳，融化你我身边的冰雪 。假设你是李明，你们学校的
“
English
Canden
”正在办主题为“付出既是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己
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平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。
要求
：
1
、文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2
、
80
—
100
词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
答案
Giving is
Receiving
I
’
m
a
student
from
Green
Middle
School.
My
name
is
LI
Ming.
I
like
helping
others
because
I
think
it
makes
me
very
happy.
I
often
help
my
classmates
with
their
schoolwork.
Sometimes
I
help
clean
up
city
parks.
I
go
to
the
old
people
’
s
home
and
do
some
cleaning
for
them
once a month. So
I
’
m pretty popular there. I often visit the
children
’
s
hospital
to
cheer
the
sick
kids
up.
I
read
stories
and
sing songs for them. I am good with
children. I also give money to
charities to help people in trouble. I
think giving is receiving.
Helping
others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?
13
、同学们，运动使我们健康、快乐。今年 广西第十二届运动会将在我市举
行，请你以“
Let
’< /p>
s do sports
”为题写一篇短文。
内容提示：
1.
运动的重要性。
2.
你喜欢什么运动，
每天你做什么运动？
3.
作为一名中学生，为迎区运会你打算做些什么？
要求：
1
文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称 。，
2
可自由发挥，
词数
左右。
3
短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。
提示词
be
good
for,
feel
relaxed,
strong,
favourite,
the
12th
Games
of
Guangxi,
clean, beautiful,
friendly
答案
Let
’
s Do Sports
I think it is important for
everyone to do sports. I like sports
because
they
are
good
for
our
health.
Doing
sports
makes
us
stronger
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and
stronger.
It is also good for our study.
After sports I
usually feel
relaxed and happy.
My favourite sport is swimming.
I often go swimming with my
friends at the Weekends. I run in the
morning. I plan basketball in the
afternoon .The 12th Games of
Guangxi is
coming
,I am going to
do sports
every day. We
will do
some cleaning
to
make our city more beautiful .We will tell
everyone to be friendly
14
、给出
,
不计入总词数。
提示词语：
collect bottles
turn off
duty
make a real
difference
Good environment is important for
everyone.
答案
Good
environment
is
important
for
everyone.
To
help
with
it,
I
pick
up
the
litter
when
I
see
it
on
the
floor.
Besides,
I
always
collect
bottles
and I never forget to turn off the lights when I
leave the
classroom.
As
students, I think it
’
s our duty to protect the environment of
our school.
And even the simplest activities can make a real
difference to the environment. So I
suggest we should reuse books
as long
as possible. And it
’
s also a good idea to take part in
recycling
programs.
I hope everyone will care
about the environment. I believe we can
make our school more and more
beautiful.
解析试题分析：作文要围绕要点展开写作：具体做法，感受，建
议。要符
合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语
意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性
.
注意提示语
collect bottles
turn
off
duty
make a real difference
的运用。注意作文的升华，提出
环保的意义。
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To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on
the floor.
Besides,I always collect bottles and I never
forget to
turn off the lights when I
leave the classroom.1.
具体做法最好写
上三点
，三点之间要有过渡。过渡不要频繁使用
first
，
seco nd
，
third
。
这篇文章处理的很好
，
to help with it, Besides, and
。
2.
注意从句的
运用，比如时间状语从句，定语从句等。
15
、
寒假就要到了。
很多学生打算在假期打工锻炼自己，
可是有些家长不同
意。他们
认为打工既耽误学习，又不太安全。请你以“
Should teenagers be
allowed to have part-time
jobs?
为题写一篇
80
词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法。
Should teenagers be allowed to have
part-time jobs?
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答案
Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs?
Winter
holiday
is
coming.
Many
students
plan
to
have
part-time
jobs.
But
some
parents
disagree.
They
think
it
wastes
the
students
’
time
and
it isn
’
t safe as well.
In
my
opinion,
teenagers
should
be
allowed
to
do
some
part-time
jobs.
Firstly,
they
can
experience
different
lives
and
get
more
knowledge
outside school.
Meanwhile, after learning about the difficulty of
making
a
living,
they
will
cherish
what
they
have
now.
What
’
s
more,
teenagers should have chances to make
decisions by themselves.
Of
course,
safety
is
the
most
important.
Teenagers
should
learn
to
protect themselves when doing part-time
jobs.
解析
16
、书面表达（
20
分）
A.
在这些字母中藏着五个句子。
你能找到它们并正确书写吗？注意大小写及
标点符号。（
5
分
写在答题卷上）
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1
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2
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4
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