文学作品读后感2010上海英语高考作文

2010上海英语高考作文


【篇一：2006-2015十年上海高考英语作文范文】

十年上海高考英语作文例文（2006-2015）

2015年上海卷高考英语作文范文

学校即将举办 “读书节”, 目前正广泛征集 “读书节” 宣传册图片。 假
设你是该校学生潘阳, 你已找到以下三幅图片, 决定给读书节组委会
写一封信, 推荐其中一幅,。你的信须包括以下内容：

1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;

2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传 “读书节” 的理由。

dear sir madam,

since the reading festival is around the corner, i’m writing to
recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to
remind the students of the pleasure of reading.

sphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not
only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the
pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers,
which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book.
to sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple
and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating,
can be full of participation and common interest. i sincerely
hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and
i’m looking forward to your early reply.

yours sincerely,

pan yang

2014年上海卷高考英语作文范文

学校英语报正在 酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文
化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划 、读者反馈）
中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封
电子邮件，表达 你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：

1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；

2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。

dear sir madam,

when it comes to the selection of the columns for the school
english newspaper, opinions vary from one to another. as far
as i am concerned, the columns preserved will definitely make
a feature of students’ interest and exert (运用；发挥） positive

effects on their study and atively speaking, i
maintain insist that the value of the columns concerning
health and culture far outweighs （比……更重要；更有价值）
that of the entertainment. the immediate factor is nothing is
more valuable than keeping healthy in that loss of health
indicates kissing goodbye to life. that’s why more knowledge
of how to keep fit, more effectively one can improve his quality
of life.

the second point to be mentioned is that progress in the
acquisition of cultures contributes to broadening one’s
horizons, which in turn promotes one’s study and the
establishment of philosophy of life.

as for the addition, the career planning constitutes a top
priority. for one thing, it concerns one’s career development a
great deal while for another, it makes a great difference to
one’s career success in the future.

i am pretty convinced that a wise choice makes perfect. i am
writing the e-mail in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant
touch to the improved version of our school english
newspaper.

yours sincerely,

cheng fei

2013年上海卷高考英语作文范文

上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆 还是社区图
书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达
你的想法。你的信 必须满足以下要求：

1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；

2. 说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）

to whom it may concern:

i’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re
collecting suggestions on its location. i’m writing this letter to
share with you my opinions.

in my opinion, it is more advisable(适当的) to hold the art
exhibition in shanghai museum than in community libraries(社
区图书馆). my reasons are as follows.

on one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to
shanghai museum which is located in the center of the city.
and the museum is much more spacious（宽敞的） than

community libraries, which provides visitors with a more
comfortable environment for appreciating art.

on the other hand, as a well-known museum, shanghai
museum is more professional and experienced in holding art
exhibitions.

its professional security guards and advanced facilities can
better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or
stolen.

therefore, i suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.

wang min

2012年上海卷高考英语作文范文

上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩amy所在班级的两堂绘画课
（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一 篇日记，内容包括：

● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述；

● 你从中获得的启发。

date: june 8, 2012

last week, i sat in on two painting classes at a primary school.
in one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a
painting out of footprints. by contrast, the same student used a
brush to make a breath-taking landscape painting—so vivid
that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the
chirping birds.

though standing in stark contrast, the two paintings both
intrigued me. in fact, they reminded me of what facebook
founder mark zuckerberg said, “keep your eyes on the stars
and your feet on the ground.” it’s this maxim on success that
lends insight into the two paintings. the first painting
represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of
being carried away with temporary success. a kite stays afloat
because it’s attached to a reel; otherwise it will instantly lose
its balance before eventually crashing into the ground. so it is
with us.

however, success requires more than being simply down- to-
earth, with a lofty ideal being another crucial factor. so grand
was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it
embodied the reach of our dreams. instead of ignoring the
gleam of light, the spark of wisdom that flashes

across our mind and worshipping the luster of the sky of
geniuses, we’d be better off trusting that the gleam and the

spark will one day shine as brightly as a search light if we have
faith in ourselves.

the paintings taught me to dream big and act small. and i
believe, by doing so, the warm light of success will cascade
into my life.

2011年上海卷高考英语作文范文

话题：向一个基金会申请2000元做个项目来支持贫困学生，需要
包含以下的一些要点1.介绍自己 2.项目具体实施方案 3.2000元如何
利用

dear foundation organizers:

my name is jerry lu, a student currently studying at shanghai
xx high school. i am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to
apply for the 2000 yuan worth of fund in a bid to initiate a
program aimed at helping those students who are financially
disadvantaged.

being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting
food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate
peers. on this account, we would appreciate it if you could
sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. the following is how we
would go about using the money. we would spend 1500 yuan
purchasing some stationery for the needy students at our
school. it is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up
the school supplies themselves instead of us “doling out” the
supplies so that we wouldn’t embarrass those who we want to
help. the remainder of the fund would be used to invite a
motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself
out of poverty by making right academic and professional
decisions.

modest as our efforts may sound, we believe they will warm
some hearts. much obliged if you could reply at your earliest
convenience.

yours sincerely,

jerry lu

2010年上海高考作文及范例

下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况，作出 比较并
谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：

●描述图片里学生上课的场景

●比较你同时期的上课情况

●简单谈谈你的感受

as is described in the picture, a group of foreign students are
raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful
and active way. the purpose of the picture is to show us how
active the class performance is in the foreign country.

compared with the class performance in local china, the
difference is quite obvious. we chinese students stay quiet in
class, keep taking notes and listen to what teacher is talking in
a careful way.

i ask myself what causes lead to the phenomenon? why class
performance of chinese students is quite different from that of
foreign students? possible reasons can be listed as follows.
most important of all, education system in china is the key
reason. the first day we become the primary student, our
teachers tell us to obey the rules in class. we put our hands
back and stay quiet in class. lecture-model teaching is the
traditional way in chinese class. teacher is the leading actor or
actress and student is always the supporting roles. gradually
we get into the habit of staying quiet in class and lose the
ability to raise questions and give the answers.

the second point to be mentioned is that chinese students
hold different attitudes toward study. in our minds, we always
think what we should learn instead of how we should learn
knowledge in a smart way. we behave us as a passive listener,
but foreign student act as a active learner.

as a saying goes, it is better to teach to fish rather than give a
fish. taking what has been discussed above into account, there
is no doubt that we need to think it over whether we are
supposed to be a leaner or a quiet listener.

【篇二：2010上海高考英语作文(课堂一角)】


directions: write an english composition in 120 – 150 words
according to the instructions given below in chinese.

下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况 ，作出比较并
谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：

●描述图片里学生上课的场景

●比较你同时期的上课情况

●简单谈谈你的感受

范文1： , the children in the picture raise their hands as high
as they can for the opportunity to answer the question put

forward by the teacher. apparently, all of them, whether boys
or girls, sociable or shy are totally fascinated and inspired, and
are always full of ingenious ideas. . , we pupils at that time all
felt exceedingly motivated to answer the questions asked by
our teacher. more often than not, we raised our little hands
almost at the same moment as our teacher put forward a
question, all desperate to grab the chance to answer questions
holding appeal to us. judging from the excitement on our faces,
the teachers all in various respects and our substantial
curiosity. moreover, savoring the pleasure of acquiring
knowledge

with obvious relish, we found that quite honestly, i interpret my
unvarying curiosity and yearnings to have played an
indispensable role in my ongoing study in the following twelve
years.

【篇三：2010年上海市高考作文专题】


2010年上海市高考作文专题

真题回放

根据以下材料， 选取一个角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的
文章（不要写成诗歌，70分）。

丹麦人去钓鱼会随身带一把尺子，钓到鱼，常常用尺子量一量，将
不够尺寸的小鱼放回河里。 他们说：让小鱼长大不更好吗？两千多
年前，我国孟子曾说过：数罟不入洿池，鱼鳖不可胜食也。意思是 ，
不要用细密的渔网在池塘里捕捞小鱼，这样才会有更多的鱼。实际
上，其中的道理也贯穿在我 们现实生活中的许多方面。

考题透视

2010年上海卷高考作文题 承续了去年材料作文的格局，体现了稳中
求变的命题思路与导向，给人耳目一新之感。既让押题者无路可 走，
又让有真功夫的考生能够大显身手，可以淋漓尽致地发挥才情，独
占鳌头，这样的作文题真 正体现了能力立意的课改理念。

（一）命题看点

命题者将中外经典故 事与圣人名言无缝对接，在二者之间很自然地
找到了交集，它们互为补充，有机关联，相得益彰，都在倡 导同样
的思想意旨和价值取向：对于自然界的生灵，人类不应该为了自己
大快朵颐而一网打尽、 斩尽杀绝，而应该给予它们生长发育的自由
空间，只有这样，人类才能够收获更大、更多、更好的成果。 如果

杀鸡取卵，没有长远计划，目光短浅，为一己之私或是眼前微小的
收益而断 送今后更丰厚的回报，那当然是鼠目寸光的表现，也是得
不偿失的愚蠢做法，是非常错误而不该的行为。

（二）写作管窥

通过对本则材料的分析，考生可以选取的写作视角是多种多样的：

立意为等待的智慧，可以通过古今中外正反事例的列举，来说明等
待与抓住时机的必要性。

立意为人类应有可持续发展的眼光，以身边与媒体报道的事件为依
据，来阐述追求可持续发展 是人类生存的必然选择的见解。

立意为成就他人，其实也是在为自己留下后路，以此来阐明 助人等
于利己的思想。立意为凡事应该立规矩、有标准，也就是亮出没有
规矩不成方圆的主张。

立意为急功近利要不得，可以联系社会实际现象，表达本是同根生，
相煎何太急、 人与自然和谐一体的主题等。

总之，2010年上海卷高考作文题目不失为一个有很高品位 ，有一定
的思想深度，让学生有话想说，有话能说，集考查写作水平、人文
教育、独立见解于一 体的好文题。

评分细则

议论类文章评分细则

1 ．在切合题意的前提下，凡说理表达基本过关、观点基本突出、材
料基本充实的议论类文章，可以按48 ～52分档次赋分。

2．凡在三基本的某一方面达到较好级别的，赋分可以提高一个档次，
依次类推。

3．对于借助随笔、杂感甚至杂文表达思想阐发主张的议论类文章，
要反复审读，谨慎赋分。凡那些能够 做到思想深刻、议论风生、纵
横捭阖的特别优秀的文章，要敢于打高分，直至满分；凡那些只会
借助随笔或杂文的写作形式，而思想苍白、议论平淡、缺乏层次的
文章，不能误判高分，而只能按一般议 论类的文章标准去如实赋分。

4．考虑到议论类文章的立意，多为阐释提示语（材料）的文 章，因
此，凡能采取比较新颖的角度切入材料，解说提示语的内涵与精神，
便可视为有亮点，提 高两个档次向上给分。

5．由于多数议论类文章偏于简单举例且用例较多，因此，凡有如下< br>情况即可视为有亮点，可以在62分向上判：选取比较新颖、生动、
有个性的材料作论据，而不是 尽人皆知的通常事例；所用事例材料

能够有论证层次，并不平面展开，不机械重复，每一 例都能显示一
个小论点或层层递进的。

记叙类文章评分细则

1．在切合题意的前提下，凡叙述表达基本过关、主题基本突出、情
节基本完整的记叙类文章，可以按4 8～52分档次赋分。

2．凡在表达或主题或故事情节等某一个方面达到较好级别的，赋分
可以提高一个档次，依次类推。凡在某个方面达到优秀级别的，或
者构思精巧，或者形象丰满， 或者意境深远，或者很有个性，或者
语言很见功力，可以按63分向上赋分，最优秀的可以达到70分。

3．凡在三基本水准向下的文章，也应该依据其表达、主题、情节某
一个或几个方 面属于较差的级别，依次向下浮动。凡在某一个方面
属于很差级别的，则应该在42分向下浮动。凡语言 表达、记叙能力
在低幼层次的文章，最高赋分不能超过35分。

4．通篇记叙人事 或编述故事，视为不着边际的跑题文章处理，赋分
在24分以下，如果无法判定，可提交组长或专家组处 理。

5．考虑到多数记叙类文章故事情节简单、缺少内涵，应将考查重点
放在如下 方面：有机智的构思，有生动的人物，有引人注目的故事，
有比较浓郁的生活气息，有令人思考的余味。 这样的优秀文章，可
以从63分向上给分。

佳作精选

罣罟难无损，远虑必有益

上海一考生

数罟不入洿池，鱼鳖不可胜食也 。孟子这极富哲理的话，跨越千年
放在今日也依然适用，可今日的人们真的明白这其中的道理吗？

亚圣的话从表面来看是说：不要用细密的渔网在池塘里捕捞小鱼，
这样才会有更多的鱼。 他讲的虽只是捕鱼这一件事，却不难看出其
中对人与自然关系的诠释。人们总喜欢口口声声地说人与自然 和平
共处，但实际上呢？对大森林的砍伐，对野生动物的捕杀，人们总
是为了一些眼前的利益， 损害了自己的未来。美国洛杉矶的光化学
烟雾事件，日本的水俣病事件等等，这些例子无一不是工业经济 只
追求快节奏发展却忽视自然生态平衡所带来的深刻教训。另外，我
还从孟子的话中读出了做事 应有耐心、不可急功近利的意蕴。若是
在池塘捕鱼大小通吃、一网打尽，看似战果累累，可到了下次再要
捕鱼时便会发现收获甚微了。正如古语云：今鱼方别孕，不教鱼长，
又行网罟，贪无艺也。这里 的贪，就是一种急功近利的态度。米卢

是世界杯历史上唯一一个曾率领包括墨西哥、哥斯 达黎加、美国、
尼日利亚和中国在内的5支不同国家队征战过世界杯决赛圈的神奇
教练。由于带 领中国队打进了日韩世界杯，米卢曾被很多中国球迷
奉若神明。而他却也直言：中国足球的问题在于足协 根本不关注青
少年足球人才的培养，足协过于急功近利。

是的，这样急功近利而浮 躁地求发展一直是我国社会发展中的大问
题。我们的国家一度处于困顿之中，由于外界的压力，不得已以 牺
牲我们的环境和资源为代价来谋求发展和世界地位。如果我们不发
展就无法在世界立足，无法 获得其他国家的尊重，政府所做的一切
都是为了保护这个国家以及全国的人民。可是，现在的情况发生了
很大变化，如果继续这样急功近利谋求发展，举国上下普遍浮躁，
这是否真的有利于一个国家的 长远发展呢？

自然，这种求富图强的心理是可以理解的，但是从三年跃进、大炼
钢 铁，直到今天的楼市热潮、应试教育，我们是否应当将目光放远
一些，而不是只求一个成功的名号呢？和 谐社会，不应只是体现在
技术与经济的发达，而同时应当体现出人类文明和思想进入更高的
境界 。

如是，我们发展的空间就会更大些。

简评：

文 章取材广泛而精当，包括美国、日本、中国以及米卢等素材，并
且是整体与个体材料有机结合，正反事例 对比映衬，这就使文章的
主论点凸现出来。文题以对仗的形式概要地揭示了文章的中心论点，
一 目了然；通过具有代表性的事例与古语名言，充分地论述了要力
求可持续发展，不要急功近利的明确、积 极的主旨。语言上整散句
结合，富有韵律美；立意上站位较高，给读者以有益的启迪和思考。
美 中不足的是，有的句子意义表达过于绝对。