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江苏高考英语作文常考题型模板
我省高考书面表达阅卷方式(网上阅卷)
,采用两人判分取其平均值的方法,这样更能
客观地反映出考生的实际英语写作水平。但是阅卷速度很快,一般
50
秒至
65
秒即可阅读
完一篇文章。对
于非常好而且字迹又非常漂亮的作文。阅卷老师会给高分。
一、答题应试技巧
牢记“一式、两头、三写、四关”的应试要诀。一式,是关注文章体裁,写对格式;两
头,
即写好文章的开头和结尾;三写,是大小写、拼写和书写无误;四关,也就是过好内容
要点关、行文逻辑关、
语法规则关和习惯表达关。具体如下:
1.
注重审题,对写的内容做到心中有数。首先,应通过审题明确文章的体裁。其次,应注
重时
态及语态,认真琢磨其内容的英语表达方式,避免汉式英语。最后着手写时要注意 分段。
2.
内容要点是否齐全;句子语法(包括:时态、语态、用词、句法和结构格式等)是否正
确;词汇是否准
确多样;句式结构是否丰富多彩;逻辑关系词使用是否到位;是否合理
使用连接词和过渡性词语;标点
符号、英语字母大小写是否规范。
3.
在表达清晰明了的前提下适当使用有把握的复杂结构和高级词汇。
4.
注重英语习惯,使所写句子准确地道,注意表达时的切换,避免汉式英语。
5.
注重开头和结尾的技巧。
6.
新标准对写作的要求增加了情感因素,所以发挥自己的观点时注重思想性,力图提高文 章思想内涵。
7.
注重书写,追求卷面美观。书面表达属于主观性试题,阅卷老师的主观印象直接关系到
考生的得分高低。
8.
通读全文,检查疏漏。
忌:书写潦草、 单词模糊不清、
左右明显不齐、 随意涂改、 缺乏分段、 字数太多或太少。
二、考生要想“取悦”于阅卷老师应注意以下几个要点
1.
外在美:字(字迹、字数、字体、字距) ;版面(整洁,忌超格、污迹、涂黑) 。
2.
结构美:分段(最好三段)一篇好的文章应有合理的段落层次,让人感觉条理清晰。每
一段应有一个主
题句和几个支撑句。写好首段是关键(开头写得好是获得高分
的基础);深化充实中间拓展
段(要紧紧围绕主题展开,不能涉及无关内容。 把
好结尾关(好的结尾能起画龙点睛作用。
结尾段写法很多:可以对前文观点发
表看法,明确表明自己的立场和态度;也可以回到文章
的开头段提出的中心论
点上,达到再次肯定和强调的效果。应从多个角度谈) 。
3.
词汇美:亮点(使用优美语句,但不是偏词、怪词,而是生动、集体形象的词语,并且 要运用得正确、
得当。 如:“
The job is very difficult
”如果表达成: “
The job is very challenging
”
更能显示出考生的功底)
4.
句式美:每段使用一至两个较高级句型来表达可使全文增色,但不宜过多,以免出错。 常用的句式:
what
从句;同位语从句;倒装句;
with
结构;插入语等。句子长
短相间,精彩句式的合理
使用会使文章可读性更强;忌低级错误(主谓、时态
不一致、单词拼写错误等)
5.
衔接美:“有效地使用语句的链接成分,
使全文结构紧凑” 是高考书面表达重要的评分依
据。段落之
间要使用适当的过渡句;句子间要使用逻辑性合理的衔接词,这样
文章结构紧凑、自然流
畅,给人以上下贯通、一气呵成的感觉。
三、概括写作类
2014
年江苏英语高考首次采用新题型,读写任务型。该写作分为两部分:
第一部分要求用约
30
个词
概括所给短文的要点, 文体主要以记叙文,
议论文或说明文为主。 第二部分以约
120
个词就短文某一主
题谈论自己的经历并发表看法。
首先,
概括部分考查了学生的概括能力, 学生在概括的时候要注意语言的精炼, 要点要
齐全。其次,阐述的理由或论据要简洁明了,层次分明。最后,对自己的观点要作出总结。
写作时要注意尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式, 同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使
文章显得更有
档次。
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【常规模版】
第一段:概括文章要点,语言要精炼,概括要全面,行文连贯,表达准确。概括时常用的 句式
有 :
1
、记叙文类常用模版:
①
The author tells us
a story about a _____ thatwho _______ .
②
The passage is a story about a _____ thatwho
________ .
e.g. The author tells us a story
about a kind man who cut a cocoon open in order to
lessen the pain
of a butterfly when he saw it
struggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it
could never fly because
of his help.
2
、议论文类常用模版:
①
The passage
highlights the importance of sth.
②
The
essaypassageauthor outlines _____ .
③
________________________________
The article
gives the VieW that
_______________________________ ShOUldshouldn'
_____
(主题) ________ (补充论据)
.
e.g. The
passage highlights the importance of encouragement
for students.
The essaypassageauthor outlines
the harmful effects of smoking.
3
、说明文类常用模板:
①
ThiS article
showstells US that _____ .
②
ThiS article
not only describes ______ but also SUggeStS ______
.
③
ThiS article POintS out the common
PhenOmenOn
(主题),
WhiCh ______
(补充解释)
e.g. The article tells us that habits are
formed when we are young and we should try to
develop
good habits, for they benefit us in
our daily life and help us shape our character.
第二段:写完概括后,用恰当的过渡语引出下文;并根据要求进行分析或举例或说明自己 的看法。
一)
过渡语
1
、记叙文的过渡语
(1) I have a
similar exPerience.
(2) I also went through
such an exPerience.
(3) This story reminds me
of another story that haPPened to...
(4) This
story reminds me of a similar exPerience of...
2
、议论文的过渡语
(1) I agree with the
statement that...
(2) I doquite agree with the
author...
(3) I
'
m for the writer
'
s idea that...
(4) I fully suPPort
the statement...
(5) I can
'
t agree
more w..
表示不赞同
(1) I don
'
t agree
with what the writer saidthewriter.
2
(2) I
'
m strongly against
the writer
'
s idea.
(3) This opinion
sounds rightreasonable, but is hardly practical.
3
、说明文的过渡语
(1)After reading the
passage, I had a better understanding of...
二)根据要求进行分析或举例
①
This is common
inamong... Let
'
s take... for example.
②
As for me, I benefit a lot from...
③
The story sets me thinking.
④
I can
'
t agree more withthe author.
三)说明自己的观点:
①
As far as I am concerned,
...
②
From my point of view, ...
③
In my opinion, ...
第三段:根据要求或启示,提出看法或如何解决该问题。常用的结论性词语有:
1. In
conclusion, ...
2. To sum up, ...
3. In a
word, ...
附范文:
1
请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇
150
词左右的文章。
Once upon a time in a land
far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved
every- thing. Animals, spiders, insects...
One
day while walking through the woods the nice old
man found a cocoon ( 茧) of a butterfly. He took it
home.
A few days later, a small opening
appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for
several hours as it struggled to force its body
through that little hole. Then it
seemed to
stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had
gotten as far as it could and it could go no
farther.
Then the man decided to help the
butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut
off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly
then came out easily.
BUt it had a swollen
body and small, ShriVeled(萎缩的)wings. The man
ContinUed to WatCh the butterfly because he
expected that, at any moment, the wings
would
enlarge and expand to be able to support the body.
Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the
rest of its life crawling around with a swollen
body and
shriveled wings. It never was able to
fly.
What the man in his kindness and haste
did not understand was that the restricting cocoon
and the struggle required for the butterfly to get
through the tiny
opening were Nature's way of
forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into
its wings so that it would be ready for flight
once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.
Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need
in our life. If we were allowed to go through our
life without any obstacles, it would cripple us.
We would not be
as strong as what we could
have been. And we could never fly.
【写作内容】
1.以约 30 词概括短文内容要点;
2.以约 120
词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺 ”这一话题发表你的看法,并包含以下要点:
(1)
你读了这个故事后的感受;
(2) 叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果;
(3) 假如你是父母一方,你会如何磨砺自己的孩子? 【写作要求】
1.可以使用实例或
其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中句子。
2.文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
The author tells us a
story about a kind man who cut a cocoon open in
order to lessen the pain of a butterfly when
he saw it struggling out of the cocoon, only
to find that it could never fly because of his
help.
The story sets me thinking. Our life is
more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or
obstacles in our life are a must
for our
growth. It is these struggles or obstacles that
increase our willpower and contribute to our
success. Without these
trials, we could never
achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in
the story.
Nowadays, with only one child in
most families
,
parents do whatever they
can to satisfy the child s
'
needs and
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even do for him what should
be done by himself. Consequently, the child is
unable to look after himself without his
parents' presence. Too much care from parents
deprives children of chances to grow strong by
conquering obstacles.
Just as a saying goes,
“
Flowers from a greenhouse can never
withstand a storm
”
If I were a parent, I
would first keep him well informed that life is
never easy and that he should be ready to face any
difficulties. Besides, I would expose him to
the hardships in life instead of protecting him
from difficulties, providing them
with chances
to fight for his bright future by conquering
challenges.
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“When should I begin to
acquire good habits?
“How old are you? ” asked
the teacher.
“Eight years old, sir. answere”d
the boy.
“Then you have just lost eight years,
the teacher ”replied.
There is no doubt that
habits are formed at a very early age. When one is
young, it is easy to acquire good habits.
Good
habits are practices that help us in our daily
life. The habit of brushing one 's teeth in
thepmsorning, for instance, kee
”a young boy
asked his teacher.
one'tseeth clean and
prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to
others. Bad habits such as sticking one'tsongue
out, biting one's fingernails and picking one 's
nose, are undesirable ways of behaving in
front of others. If we want people to enjoy beinhg
uwsit, we
should try to develop habits that
are pleasant.
It is said, “We sow an act; we
reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a
character. ” The habitsawpe formed at an early age
sh
OUr CharaCter. HabitS are Iike
tributaries(支流)WhiCh flow into a river. The river
is made UP Of all its tributaries; a
made up
of all the habits that he or she has acquired over
the years.
【写作内容】
1. 以约 30个词概括本文内容;
2.
以约 120个词谈谈你对好习惯养成的看法,并包括以下要点:
(1)你认为好习惯重要吗,为什么?
(2)你身上有哪些好习惯,它们对你的学习或生活有什么影响?
(3)怎样才能养成良好的习惯?
【写作要求】
1.
作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文的句子。
2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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is
The aUthor tells Us that habits are formed
when we are yoUng and we shoUld try to develoP
good habits, for they
benefit Us in oUr daily
life and helP Us shaPe oUr CharaCter.
I Can
'
t agree more with the aUthor. CUltivating
a good habit Can not only shaPe oUr CharaCter,
increase our
inner beauty but also influence
those people around us. Therefore, I think it is
of great significance to form a good habit.
As
for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like
getting up early to speak English aloud, reviewing
and
previewing lessons before going to bed
every day. In the past, I didn to speak English
before others because of my poor
pronunciation
and I also did badly in my English tests. Thanks
to my good habits, however, I have been making
progress
in my English study. Now I am proud
of my speaking and writing in English.
Then
how can we form a good habit? First of all, you
should be determined to fight against your
laziness. Once
you make up your mind to do
something, never give up easily. Then, you have to
be confident, believing that you can
become a
better person. Last but not least, keep pushing
yourself. It may take a long period for you to
form a good habit
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but
remember it is perseverance that makes you
successful!
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Time to give thanks
When it comes to
Thanksgiving, turkey may be the first thing that
comes to mind. It ' S the right picture, but it '
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CeIebrated on the fourth
ThUrSday in NOVember every year, ThankSgiVing Day
is a time for thanksgiving and feasts. It ' about
expressing your gratitude to the important
people and all the good things in your life.
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AmeriCanS CeIebrate
ThankSgiVing With much Warmth and keep many
traditional customs. Here We introduce two Of the
rules
AmeriCanS typically follow on this day.
1. Time for PrayerS and Paying back
ThankSgiVing Day has been associated With
PrayerS in ChUrCh and in homes for centuries.
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the
first SteP of many CeIebratOrS on
ThankSgiVing Day. The ChUrCheS PrOVide WOrShiP (
礼拜)SerViCeS and OrganiZe SPeCiaI events for the
OCCaSion.
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families gather together and read PrayerS to thank
God for his kindness and the gifts he has bestowed
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them in the form of friends and
family.
Some people also do voluntary
COmmUnity work on this day, as a Way of Paying
back.
2. Family reunions and ShOWing gratitude
Like China ' SPring FeStiVal, PreParing a big
meal and bringing the family together at home is a
long-standing tradition of Thanksgiving. DiStanCeS
don ' t really matter as relatives return home
to be With their family, no matter how far away.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要;
2.
用约120个单词谈谈你对感恩的想法,内容包括:
(1) 你认为我们中国人有没有必要过
感恩节”为什么?
(2) 以你自己的经历或者身边的人为例,阐述重视感恩的必要性;
(3) 总结你的观点。
【写作要求】
1.
可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;
2.
阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;
3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
ThiS PaSSage is mainly about the CUStOm of a
WeSter n traditi Onal festival, Than ksgivi ng
Day,
WhiCh mainly inCIUdeS the two rules that
AmeriCans usually abide by during the festival.
After reading the passage, I had a better
Understanding Qf Thanksgiving Day. In my opinion,
Since the
festival has a lovely and healthy
theme, Why not do as the AmeriCans do? Don
'
t you think givi ng tha nks to
things and
PeQPIe around US is Very n ecessary. We Can good
Cha nce to SPread kindn ess and COn
Siderati
on.
Take myself for example. BeCaUSe I am busy
in StUdying On weekdays, I have little time to Io
Qk after my
Pare nts, WhiCh makes me guilty
.In Order to reward them and make them relaxed On
the Weeke nd, I get UP
early in the morning
and PrePare breakfast for them willi ngly, WhiCh
makes them delighted.
SQ it is vital for US to
have a grateful heart and ShQW QUr tha nks to
anything good and any PerS On that
is nice.
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voice as the only ruler, The
VOiCe of China
quickly became popular around ChineSe mainland and
topped a IeagUe of all shows broadcast by the
COUntry ' S local TV StatiO rtte
popularity
also drew record advertising, the final episode
(集) attracting an ad SPend of 500,000 yuan Per
second. Plus, the episodes of If You Are the
On(非诚勿扰),both hot and controversial, became an
instant hit, PrOVing that dating shows Can be
entertaining and mainstream at the Same time.
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AnOther
TV show Where Are We Going, Dad? PrOdUCed by HUnan
Satellite TeIeVision, has been WOWing (使 叫好)
audiences across the nation,
filling the
Internet With heated discussions about the
father's
figure .
【写作内容】
1.用约 30
个英语单词写出上文概要;
2.用约 120 个英语单词就各类
“秀”节目谈谈你的看法,内容包括:
(1)探究节目受到追捧的原因;
(2)分析节目存在的潜在问题;
(3)请你对改进节目提出至少两点建议。
【写作要求】 1.作文应涵盖写作内容所有要点,可以适度发挥;
2.可以参考阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
3.不得提及有关考生个人
身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
【参考词汇】
1.选秀节目 talent show
2 .真人秀 reality show
Nowadays numerous TV shows have become
extremely popular among Chinese audiences. Those
programs, ranging from talent or dating shows
to reality shows, have received both commercial
success and public
concern.
Their massive
popularity is mainly based on simple facts. First,
they care about social concerns. Second, they
promote pursuit of dreams at grassroots level.
Third, without exception, they explore a perfect
balance between
international form and Chinese
expression.
Despite apparent highlights, much
room is left for improvement. Above all,
commercial interest often
overweighs
educational purposes, causing much complaints
about unbearable advertisements. In addition, some
sharp remarks, though eye-catching and
overwhelming, may have misleading effect on the
youth.
In my opinion, such shows should
shoulder more responsibility instead of merely
entertaining the public. As is
expected, these
programs should be both humanistic and positive in
their form and function. Meanwhile, the media
should also safeguard the core value of our
society.
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A young man was slapped in the
face until he bled because hedidn
'
o
t
ffer his seat to a woman with a
baby on a bus in downtown Hangzhou. Later
he
was proved to be a disabled person.
In a
series of cases nationwide, we see people being
beaten for refusing to give up their seats on
public transport, which seems to be a moral
problem about correct behavior and self-
sacrifice.
People without morals (who don
'
g
t
ive up their seats to deserving
people) can be condemned, but theydon
'
d
t
eserve to be treated with
violence
because they offend moral values and
not laws. In comparison, the attackers behave
worse.
The attackers regard relying on
violence as their only choice if people ignore
their appeals to give up their seats. It seems
they start a shout or a fight
for the sake of
justice, but can they still think of their
personal intention when they call violent justice?
This “violent justice”can confuse many people
and encouragethem to do the same, especially when
we are overpowered by illogical mood.
If cruel
and rude acts are rooted in children
h
'
e
s
arts, society will never step
into civilization. The practice violates common
values, neither solving
problems nor
safeguarding civilized society.
[ 写作内容 ]
1. 以约 30个词概括短文的要点。
2. 以约120个词谈谈你对这一事件的看法
,内容包括 :
(1) 读完这则新闻 ,你有什么感受 ?
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(2) 假如你是车上的一名乘客 ,你会怎样做 ?
(3)
就如何创建和谐社会提出你的建议。 [写作要求 ]
1.
你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点 ,也可以参照阅读材料的内容 ,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
The news is about a
young disabled man who was slapped on a bus for
not offering his seat
to a woman with a baby,
which leads to a debate about who is right and who
is wrong.
I
'
m so upset that in our
society the woman with a baby should be so
impolite. It was wrong
of her to get her
justice with violence, which really will do great
harm to our society.
Today in our society,
many other people would take it for granted that
they should be offered a seat on the
crowded
bus, as the morality requires. However, if I were
a passenger on the crowded bus, I would stand out
to tell
her that the young man is also in need
of help because of his disability. So it is still
a long way for us to build up a
harmonious
society.
In my opinion, we should fight
against the violent justice and try every means to
stop it
from happening so as to solve such
kind of problems and safeguard our civilized
society.
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1.The ministry of Education is
considering new measures to test the physical
quality of students across the country each year ,
Beijing News
reported. According to the
measures ,every student in a school is required to
participate in the annual test and the results
should be reported to the
Ministry,which will
select a specified number of students from each
province each year to test their suppleness and
endurance. The Ministry will select 4
pilot
provinces this year and the measures are expected
to expand across the whole country next year.
2.In Guangdong province it is reported that
the students in Junior 3 are required to take 100
-meter swimming test and the results will be part
in the
total grade in 2014. Also there is a
growing voice in society that NCEE (National
College Entrance Examination) should include PE
tests.
【写作内容】
1、以约 30个词概括两篇报道的内容: 2、然后以约
120个词,就以上新闻话题发表你的看法,包括如下要点 (1)体育成绩纳入总分的重要性;
(2)简述你所在学校加强学生体育锻炼的做法; (3)你所喜欢的体育项目对你的影响。
【写作要求】 1、在作文中可以使用自已亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不
得直接引用原文中的句子。 2、作文中,不能出现真实
姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
According to
the two reports, new measures about physical
assessment among students are being
considered
in Beijing and Guangdong. Besides, the society
calls for more attention to students
ph
'
ysical quality.
With more attention
being paid t o students ac
'
ademic
achievements, people gradually ignore the positive
influence of physical exercise on students. It
brings about an increasing number of
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students who are weak in body. As
the saying goes, health is pre
-
condition
of all work. In order to strengthen
students
health
'
and make them qualified to
undertake the responsibility to build up our
country, our government and
schools should
consider students ta
'
king PE tests when
they graduate and the results should be part in
the total grade.
In our school, we have two PE
classes each week, in which our PE teachers often
teach us to do proper exercise
to relax
ourselves. Besides, there is a
“
bigbreak
”
for us, which lasts thirty minutes every
day after the third period in
the afternoon.
When the music for
“
big break
”
,
starts
we will hurry to the playground to do
exercise and then do some running. The greatest
sports event in our school is the
annual
sports meeting. It pushes everyone's enthusiasm
about physical exercise to the fullest.
As far
as I
'
m concerned, I
'
m fond of
jogging. On one hand, it s
'
not a rough
sport and convenient to do every day,
from
which I relax myself a lot and refresh my mind. On
the other hand, it strengthens my suppleness,
endurance and
perseverance to deal with the
difficulties in my study.
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(
2014
江苏高考作文)
请阅读下面短文 ,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。
When we read newspapers, we often come across
such English words as “AIDS ”and “PK.”When we
watch TV , we frequently hear words like
“NBA
”or “PM2.5. ”When we speak, we automatically use
words like “OUT”or “Bye-bye.”English words and
expressions like these are getting popular.
They have already become part of our daily
language. And 239 English words have been included
in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.
The inclusion has started a heated discussion.
A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint
over the inclusion of these English words, which,
they think,
goes against Chinese language
policies. They not only worry that Chinese is
borrowing an increasing number of English words
but are also concerned that the
inclusion may
hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However,
others are in favor of the inclusion because it is
hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese
language. They believe the selection is mostly
a result of their function and use in daily life.
[写作内容 ]
1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要
2. 用约 120
个单词发表你的观点 ,内容包括 : (1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇
(2)用 2-
3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。
[写作要求 ]
1. 可以支持文中任一观点
,但必须提供理由或论据
2. 阐述观点或提供论据时 ,不能直接引用原文语句
3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称
4. 不必写标题。
[评分标准
] 内容完整 ,语言规范 ,语篇连贯 ,词数适当。
Today, more and more
English words find their way into the Chinese
language. Even the
Dictionary of Contemporary
Chinese includes 239 English words. Some people
support it while others do not.
Generally, I
am in favour of the inclusion. As the number of
English learners is on the rise, it
'
snot
difficult for them
to understand these words
in Chinese contexts. Besides, it is, on some
occasions, more convenient to use English
words. Most people nowadays use
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“
IT
”
instead of its
translation
“
xinxi jishu
.
”
In our global village, we can see that
it
'
snot uncommon for one language
to
borrow words from other languages. In English,
there are many words borrowed from Latin, French,
or even Chinese.
In fact, Chinese has never
stopped taking words from other languages,
((
■ ” “ ? I I
say,
“
ganbu
”
or
“
minzhu
”
from Japanese.
r
So, it
'
s safe to conclude that
it is reasonable to include English which
facilitates daily
communication.
反对
:
With English words getting popular in both
media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has
included 239 of them,
leaving the public
divided into two opposing groups:
“
For
”
and
“
Against.
”
I tend to take the
“
Against
”
side for two reasons. Firstly, this
inclusion has actually polluted
our mother
tongue. Sooner or later, many English accents will
rise and fall with the four Chinese tones. And,
rules don
'
t
tell us how to pronounce
such English-turned Chinese words as
“
wifi
”
and
“
Out
”
in a Chinese
way! Secondly, such an inclusion may give rise to
prejudices of the educated
against those with
little knowledge of English. Just for one
illustration, while college students take
“
Bye-bye
”
for
granted when
parting from each other, it may unconsciously hurt
the feelings of
■ ? I
someone who is used
to
“
zaijian .
”
t ?
???
??
In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned
Chinese, it may also bring about distance between
the Chinese
people.
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(
2015
江苏高考作文)
请阅读下面文字及图表 ,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章
.
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1. The Other day
1
a
πetizen
(网民}
Shared a
PhOtO On Sina
Weibo. It WaS about 3∩ Old Iady
Standing in
front Of a Car that WaS On a bicycle Iane
l
and insisting that it IeaVe the track. The
PhOtO drew
about 7
h
000 comments On the
SOCiaI media
PlatfOrm- DeSPite the
th
∪
mbs-up(A?) given to
the Olel
Iady
I
SOme argued that attention should be
Paiel to OUr heavy road traffic. Λ?
SJeQZqEnN
2. Some riders Of e-bikes and
bicycles COme and go in all
directions.
ignoriπg traffic IightS and
Other vehicles.
SUCh rυde
ridingcontributes to the disorder Of
traffic ThUS the avoidable
road accidents
become
UnaVOidabIe
3. FrOm 2005 tα
2014
j
the total
number Of PriVate CarS
in China
rose SharPly from 32 million to
154 million Currently, China had
40
15% Of the WOrId
P
S total vehicles.
O
2005 2006 2011 2014
[写作内容]
1.
用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容
;
2.
结合上述信息
,
简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因
;
3.
和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示
(
不少于两点
)
。
根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)
[写作要求]
1.
写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句
;
2.
作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称
;
3. 不必写标题。
J?
e
≥
-
l
d
4
0
O
=
^E
U
I
6Q
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1
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The traffic
issue is a hard nut to crack. It not Only affects
our everyday life, but may also threaten people
'
S lives.
The three SeIeCtions
PreSented above are typical examples.
QUite a few things give rise to the traffic
problem. In SPite of the Iarge-SCaIe ConStrUCtion
of roads and highways,
there is still
much room for improvement, because of the ever
inCreaSing number of CarS these years. What
'
S
worse, some drivers, CyCIiStS
and PedeStrians do not think it
vital to
obey traffic rules.
In fact, traffic
rules are Part of the rules and regulati OnS
closely related to PUbIiC order. WithOUt them,
people could
not enjoy harmOny Or the
CoUntry would be in chaos. BUt rules alone don
'
t
SeCUre an Orderly
society. It is the peopl e who obey the rules that
matter. It is everybody
'
S duty to
ObSerVe them to keep our SOCiety in Order and
going On the right track.
10
(
2016
江苏高考作文)
请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150词左右的文章。
In recent years, internet Vating has become
increasingly PaPUIar in China. PeaPIe not only
CaSt Qn-Iine VateS themselves, but also
Urge QtherS to Vate for CamPetitianS like the
MaSt BeaUtifUI TeaCher” and the “Cutest Baby”.
the PUbIiC have a better UnderStanding Of
PaIiCe reacHeaiStdeePJtyies.
Li Jiang, a high
SChaaI student, is invited to Vate in the “Best
PaIiCe OffiCer ” CamPetitian, QrganiZed by the
local government to let
officers daily work.
Li Jiang ViSitS the WebSite and
-
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moved by their glorious
deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a
policeman himself in the future.
Su Hua is
invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the
“Future Singer ”competition. He has already
received three similar
invitations this week.
His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the
competition, the family will win an overseas tour
for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but
he
finds other singers perform even better. To
vote, or not to vote? This is a question that
troubles him very much.
【写作内容】
1.
2.
用约 30个单词写出上文概要;
用约 120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法,并用 2
~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。 【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
Possible version one:
On-line voting becomes increasingly popular,
and many competitions get people involved in it.
It is beneficial to some
people, while it puts
others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.
In my opinion, on-line voting is an
inseparable part of modern life and should be
welcomed, since it is no more than a
way to
participate in public life. It makes no difference
from ordinary voting events, in which candidates
go around to seek
supports. In addition, the
Internet makes surveying and voting easy and
convenient, regardless of time and space.
Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes
instant feedback possible.
To be honest,
voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they
hate voting, but because they are divided between
emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the
better if we can work out some participation rules
for people to obey.
Therefore, I hold a
positive attitude towards on- line voting. (150
words) Possible version two:
Internet voting
is quite popular nowadays. Many people are
somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the
voting,
although some are quite happy with it,
and active in doing it.
In my opinion,
internet voting has begun to show its negative
impacts on people and society.
Firstly, people
may feel forced when asked to do things that they
don
'
t want to. Secondly, votin of this
kind does not
depend on the strong points of
the competitors, but rather on how many social-
networking resources they have. Thirdly,
the
voters or even the competitors in many cases are
possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for
commercial
purposes.
In short, internet
voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral,
and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be
worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in
our society should help those in need, but it is
more important to be sincere
and earnest.
(150 words)
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(
2017
江苏高考作文)
请认真阅读下面有关我国电影票房收入 (box-office
inCome)的柱状图及相关文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章
。
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入?乞兀》
SatUrday aShopp ing Cen ter.
Li Jia
ng:Hi,Su movie shall We see?
SU Hua:
'
er got so many ChKUeg FU Yoga,
JoUrney to
the WeSt .Each SoUndS great!
Li Jia ng:Yeah!A
nd some movie StarS are fan tastic.
SU Hua:And
the high-tech!...
Li Jiang:PerfeCt!Let
left.
SU Hua:No Cinema is on the Same
floor.
'
S get ome food Only have 20 mi
IUteS
One Day in 2016. At Home.
Son:M
um,shall We go and See a film to ni ght?
MOther:Why bother?We Can Stay at home and
WatCh films
new and faster n etwork
Son:BUt it feels good in a Cin ema.
MOther:And the price..We have to Pay 50 yuan a
ticket
Son:Only 10 yua n more tha n IaSt year.
MOther:BUt still We Cannot get the money
'
S films are just boring
'
S
ConVenient
with our
【写作内容】
1.
用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容;
2.
(上述对话仅供参考,原因不少于两点)
3. 谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法,并简要说明理由。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
我国电影票房收入变化的原因有哪些,简要谈谈你的看法
;
POSSibIe
VerSion one:
The box-office in come of Chin
ese movies Wit nessed a Con Sta nt in CreaSe from
about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to
over 40
billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed
down in 2016.
The reasOnS behind this are
various. The fast economic development before 2016
WaS PrObabIy the most
POWerfUI engine drivi ng
the Con Sta nt growth in the box-office in come.
The applicati On Of new tech no IogieS and the
Wide appeal of movie StarS could also acco Unt
for the in crease. However, China SaW a decli ne
in its econo mic growth
rate last year. And
the internet in CreaSed opti OnS for movie lovers.
Con SeqUe ntly, some VieWerS bega n to turn away
from Cin emas, Ieading to a slower growth.
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China
'
s
economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in
the coming years, so an increase is possible in
the
investment in the movie industry and the
number of quality movies. Therefore, its box-
office income will probably enjoy a
slight
increase.(150 words)
Possible version two:
As is indicated in the graph, the box-office
income of Chinese films increased constantly from
2012 to 2015, but its
growth, for one reason
or another, slowed down in 2016.
The increase
in the box-office income can be attributed to a
number of factors. The quality of life has
improved and
watching films is regarded as a
good means of entertainment. Besides, filming
technology has advanced and more quality
films
are on offer. Moreover, the internet plays an
important part. On the internet, people can seek
information about their
favorite stars and buy
tickets at a discount as well, which is both time-
saving and economical.
the internet and
cellphones, and the ticket price is on the
increase. Therefore, the film industry should make
greater efforts
to attract more viewers.
However, the film market may witness a
slowdown in the near future. Cinemas have
gradually given way to the rise of
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