让路作文2010+英语+高考满分作文

2021年1月20日发(作者：是美男呀)
2010
英语高考满分作文


作文题目


假设你是李华
,
你的英国笔友
Bob
将于九月到你所在城市的建新华 文学校学中
文
,
来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息
,
写信介绍住房的
情况
,
并告知住房面积为
25
平方米,
月租
500
元。


注意
:1.
词数
:100
左右
:

2.
参考词汇
:
房租—
Tent(n.).

I‘m very happy to receive your letter, and I‘m glad to hear that
you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat
for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese
School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the
Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of
which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a
bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat,
and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as
your wish, but I‘ll try my best to meet your need
s. If it is not
suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由


本文格式正确
,
意思 表述完整
,
行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句
并用
,
还使 用了以?which,‘引导的非限定性定语从句
,
从而使文章层次分明
,
富 于变
化
,
不愧为考场佳作。


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Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese
School. It is on the third floor and there‘re three rooms in it: a
bedroom, a kitc hen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and
a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is
500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take
the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one
stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I‘U be
able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由


本文格式正 确
,
内容完整
,
表述清楚
,
衔接紧密流畅
,
时态语态使用准确
,
特别是
结尾末段适度的发挥
,
既充实了内容< br>,
又符合逻辑
,
成为本文与众不同的亮点。


===========================================

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I‘m so glad to know that you‘ll come to our city to learn Chinese.
You asked me to find a place for you. Now I‘ve found one which I think
is pretty good. The place is o n Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11
bus stop. It‘s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.


There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though
it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By
the wa
y, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you‘ll like it. If not,
I‘ll try to find another place for you.


Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由


本文内在逻辑性很强
,
由远及近。由外及内
,
层次分明
,
错落有致。同时让步状
语从句运用得恰到好处
,
很出彩
,
再则结构完整
,
从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。


===========================================

作文
:

Dear Bob,

I‘m glad to hear from you.


Welcome to our city in september. I‘ve found a suitable house for
you.

The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese
School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms,
a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The
mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the
living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is
next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25
square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just
let me know. I‘ll try my best to help you.


Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由


本文内容详实
,
描述具体细腻
,
用词适当准确
,
如―suitable house‖、―not
far from‘‘等
,
另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。


=========================================

2009
年
5
月
1
日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式 启动
,
志愿者是办好世博会的一
支重要的工作力量。另外
,
志愿者或 做家教
,
教小孩子阅读、算术
,
或打扫公园与街
道
,
或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗
?
请陈述理由写一篇
100
字左 右的短
文。


One possible version

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as
follows: First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in
modern society. We all need others‘ help in case we get into trouble.
Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we
gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving
others. What‘s more, volunteering mak es us feel better about ourselves,
thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the
world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.

In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I
think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.

=========================================

不同人都有着不同的习惯
,
个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。请根据下列要求
,
写一篇
120
字的英语短文
,
开头和结尾已经写好
,
不计入总词数。


1.
介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。


2.
习惯与卫生的关系
:
习惯是卫生基础
;
不好的习惯
,会导致一些传染疾病传
播
,
如
AIDS,SARS,H1N1
流 感等。


3.
你的看法……。


One possible version

It is generally believed that different people have different
habits. Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking,
while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste
things like alcohol and cigarettes.

It goes without saying that there is close relationship between
personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as
the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good
habits, public health can‘t be guaranteed. On the other hand,
infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like
AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.

Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving
personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave
ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.

========================================

假如你是李华
,
你学校内有人得了猪流感
,
正在接受治疗
,
你校学生非常害怕
,
请你写一篇短文谈谈如何预防猪流感
?

1.
平时外出戴口罩
,
少去人群集中的公共场所
,
避免接触病人等。


2.
勤洗手
,
保证充足睡眠
,
多锻炼多运动等。


3.
词数
: 120
字左右


4.
文章的开头已给出
,
不计入总词数


参考词汇
:
猪流感
swine flu;
口罩
face mask.

Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to
protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?

One possible version

Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to
protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?

We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the
crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact
with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best
way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make
sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more
exercise so that we can build up our body.

We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as
long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.

===========================================

注意
:1.
信的开头与结尾已经给出
,
不计算在总词数内。


2.
字数要求
: 120
左右。


人口膨胀
population expansion;
过度开发
overdevelopment
。


Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over
the world.

____________________ __________________________________________
___ __________________________________________________ _________
____________________________________ __________________________
___________________ ________________________________

Yours truly

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over
the world.

With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great
noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and
overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills
have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into
rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive
destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even
poses a great threat to man‘s exist ence.


We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve
our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be
effective and bring back a healthful environment.

Yours truly

Li Hua

============================= ============================

低碳经济下的环境保护之一


―低碳经济‖是一个具有广泛社会性的经济 前沿理念
,
最早是在
2003
年英国
政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能 源的未来
:
创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济


包括低碳发 展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态
,
是指在不影响经
济发展的前提下,
通过技术创新和制度创新
,
降低能源和资源消耗
,
尽可能最大 限度
地减少温室气体和污染物的排放
,
实现减缓气候变化的目标
,
促 进人类的可持续发
展。


Protection of Environment

1.
目前环保还存在着许多问题。


2.
为了保护环境
,

3.
各国政府做了大量的工作。


4.
我的看法。


One possible version

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent
years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air,
water and soil. the polluted air does great ha rm to people‘s health.
The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation
had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done
a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution,
to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental
pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in
the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take
even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize
the importance of environmental protection through education. Second,
much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy
into practice, because more people means more people means more
pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally
should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying
environment means destroying mankind themselves.

.
应用文类


13.
外籍教师
Lynne
任教期满准备回国
,
学校答应派车送她去机场。 她在临行
前一天写了张便条提醒办公室李老师
:

1).
请检查
(check on)
明天的车是否落实
,
提醒司机
(remind sb. of sth.
提醒
某人做某事
)
。


2).
她之所以要确定一下
,
是因为太早不好叫出租车。
3).
感谢费心
,
并感谢一
年来的关心。


4).
在学校一年来
,
生活愉快、难忘
,
很可能再来。


5).
留下一些英语书给贵校图书馆
,
希望对学生有用。字数
:100
—
1 20
个词。


Hi, Mr. Li,