难忘的一次活动2010-2015全国二卷英语作文+范文

2021年1月20日发(作者：爆炸西瓜)
2010
书面表达（满分
30
分）
假设你是李华，
你的美 国笔友
Peter
层表示希望来中国教书。
你校现在需招聘外教，请
给他写封 信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：

1.
教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英语等

2.
授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）

3.
工作量：
—
每周
12
学时，任选三门课

—
担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问
（
advisor
）

注意：

1.
字数
100
左右；

2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.
开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。


Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.































































































































































































































































Best,
Li Hua





2010
范文

Dear Peter.
I
remember
you
told
me
you
were
interested
in
teaching
in
China.
Our
school
now
is
looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come,
you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and
America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these
courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you
will
also
work
as
an
advisor
to
our
students'
English
club
or
our
school's
English
newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more
than happy to help.
Best wishes,

Li Hua







2011

书面表达（满分
30
分）

假定你是李华，你所喜爱的
Global Mirror
周报创刊五周年之际征集读者 意见。请你依据
以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：

1.
说明你是该报的忠实读者

2.
赞赏该报优点：

1)
兼顾国内外新闻

2)
介绍名人成功故事

3.
提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章

注意：

1.
词数
100
左右，开头语已为你写好；

2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of
Global Mirror
!




























































































































































































































































































































































































Sincerely yours,
Li Hua


2011
范文

【解析】

本文为书信形式的应用文写作。
信的开头和结尾都已经给出。题目中对文章结构和部分
内容做出了提示，降低了写作难度，
考生可在此基础上适当添加细 节。
根据题目，
文章的内
容分为
3
部分，
一是
“< br>介绍自己为该报的忠实读者
”
，
二是该报的优点，
三是给报刊提出建议 。
其中第二、
三点为重点。
考生添加的报刊优点和建议应当合情合理，同时原因、建议 不只一
个，
因此一定要注意写作的逻辑性，
适当运用过渡性词语，
如
besides
，
what’s more
，

finally等。为了提高文章的表达档次，可以注意使用较复杂的句式（如定语从句、原因状语从句、
目的状语 从句）。


【范文
1
】

Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of
Global Mirror
!
I am a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following
two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning
the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally
attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how
a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a student, I suggest that
Global Mirror

carry articles to
guide
us in
our English
learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

【范文
2
】

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your Weekly and it is due to its two advantages that I show
strong love for the newspaper.
②
On one hand, it is a newspaper where readers can get
the latest civil and foreign news in time.
③
On the other hand
②
, there are many stories
about how famous people succeeded, from which we can benefit a lot.
④

However, I still have a suggestion to make. If only the Weekly contained some articles
guiding
us
through
learning
English
⑤
,
it
will
be
more
than
a
newspaper
for
a
middle
school student.
⑥

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua
【范文评析】

本篇习作语言地道，覆盖了所有要点，虽只有
94
个 词，但在此中，众多的高级句式结
构却被作者运用得恰到好处，如定语从句、强调结构、宾语从句、虚拟 语气等。难能可贵的
是，作者对写作要点拿捏得很准，最后在提建议时，适当发挥，使得建议的意义更大 。

【词句积累】

①使用强调结构，使得句型富有变化。

②用
on one hand
，
on the other hand
来代替庸俗的
first(ly)
，
second(ly)
，非常好！另< br>外，还能增加字数。

③在该句中使用
where
定语从句，显示该考生的语法很强。

④ 介词后的宾语从句，
非限制性定语从句的应用，
令阅卷老师折服了。
作者的巨型布局< br>艺术，其语法的娴熟，并能得心应手地收发自如，让阅卷老师赞赏。

⑤此处使用
if only
，
谓语要用虚拟语气，
妙！
妙！
另外，
guide sb. through doing sth.
体
现该考生较强的词汇运用能力。

⑥
more than
是一个亮点表达。该句使短文的意义得到升华。



【范文
3
】

Dear Editor- in-Chief
，

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I have been a faithful reader since Global Mirror started.
①

It is the unique advantages of the newspaper that always attract my affection.
②
For
one
thing
③
,
the
newspaper
covers
news
both
at
home
and
abroad,
which
opens
a
window
for
us
to
learn
what
is
happening
in
the
world.
④
For
another
③
,
stories
about
some famous people are introduced to readers, which tell of how they succeeded in what
they did.

The newspaper
is indeed my best friend, but I think you’d better have some articles
that can guide us to learn English.
⑤
If so, it will have a larger audience of readers.

Sincerely yours
，

Li Hua
【范文评析】

本篇习作一气呵成，
滴水不漏。
运用了一些高级句式 结构如强调句型，
非限制性定语从
句等。时态把握准确到位，如
since
引 导的现在完成时，
to
learn
后的现在进行时等，使文
章增色不少。总的来说是一篇好文章。

【词句积累】

①一开始就用
since
，时态正确，先声夺人。

②使用强调句型，征服阅卷老师。

③用
for one thing
和
for another
代替平庸
first
和
second
，显示作者的词汇能力。

④非限制性定语从句的使用，
to learn
后的现在进行时态，无不让人叹服。

⑤巧妙地使用
but
，委婉，又达到提建议的目的。

【话题】兴趣与爱好

【体裁】应用文：书信

【题型】提纲式