我爱北京天门精选高考满分英语作文范文

2021年1月21日发(作者：超级模拟)


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1
、表达观点类



在英语课堂上，
你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，
还是英语、
汉语 兼用？某
英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your
English
classes
to
be
ta
ughtIn
English
only,or
in
both
English
and
Chinese”
这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。



授课形式一：只用英语



优点：有助于提高听说能力等



缺憾：不易听懂等



结论：



授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用



优点：易于理解等



缺憾：英语氛围不浓等



结论：



注意：
1.
词数
100~120
，短文开头已给出
(
不计词数
)
。



2.
参考词汇：
atmosphere
氛围



I prefer my English classes to be taught in...


满分文
(
一
)


I
prefer
my
English
classes
to
be
taught
in
both
English
and
Chinese,
whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher
talks
about.
The
teacher
first
teaches
the
class
in
English,
and
then
she
explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better
knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.


However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English
atmosphere not
so
strong. Some students
who
wish to be
taught in English
will be disappointed.


Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two
languages
in
classes.
It
can
make
us
more
familiar
with
the
foreign
culture.


名师点评：



审题是作文的第一要素，
本文 的审题准确无误。
无论是要点的把握还是结构
的组织都证明了这一点。
本文运用多种复 杂句式，
整体看来是不错的。
文中的一
个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。
其 他出彩短语的使用也很地道，
可以参看好
句中的分析。



背诵内容：



好词
age
n.
优点

familiar
with
，对某人熟悉
3.
atmosphere
n.
气氛



1.
I
prefer
my
English
classes
to
be
taught
in
both
English
and
Chinese,
whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher
talks about.


我更喜欢采用双语教学，其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。



1


2.
Some
students
who
wish
to
be
taught
in
English
will
be
disappointed.


满分文
(
二
)


I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it
is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a
very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign
culture,
so
I’d
like
to
be
totally
immersed
in
the
atmosphere
of
English
so that I can quickly make
progress.
That’s why I
prefer total English.
However,
since
we
are
all
En
glish
beginners,
it’s
really
hard
to
understand
all
that
the
teacher
says.
Sometimes
we
need
Chinese
explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English
but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to
understand.


名师点评：



本文写作十分成功。
语言和句式是本文最大的特点。
好词中词汇的使用，
将
作者的意思表达得完整而准确 ，
从而映衬了词汇的重要性；
其次，
本文的句式以
复杂句为主，表语、定语和 状语从句的使用都十分到位。



应背好词：
1.
immerse
v.
沉浸
2.
explanation
n.
解释
3.
make
progress
取
得进步



应背好句：
1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign
culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English
so that I can quickly make progress.


2.
So
my
viewpoint
is
that
we
are
taught
not
only
in
English
but
using
Chinese
as
a
minor
way
to
explain
things
that
are
hard
to
understand.(
表
语从句
)


因 此，
我的观点是，
用英文教授，
同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行
辅助 讲解。



练习篇目：



请根据下列内容，在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。



1
、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。



2
、< br>学生会将于
5
月
6
日中午
12
：
30
在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾
地区孩子买水的活动。



3
、
希望全校同学从我做起，
节约水资源。

参考词汇：
干旱
drought
注意：
词数不少于
60
。



From
the
news
we
know
that
there
is
a
severe
drought
in
southwest
China
now. Most places we hope that all of us can realize the


2


2
、演讲稿









假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华 。
学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比
赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将
在演讲比赛开幕时发言，
请你根据 以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
（
2009·天津）



1.
说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；



2.
说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过
5
分钟，语言流利 ，发音准确
等；



3.
预祝比赛圆满成功。



注意：
1.
词数：不少于
100
词；
2.
可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。



范文背诵：



Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,


Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to
improve
the
abilities
of
both
English
speaking
and
listening,
we
continue
to
hold
the
English
speech
competition.
I
believe
it
will
be
of
great
help
to form the good habit of reading, too.


There are some important points every speaker should be aware of.
Please listen
to
me carefully. First
of
all, the speech
must be finished
within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last,
everyone
should
pronounce
correctly.
We
expect
to
hear
the
fluent
expression and standard pronunciation.


Finally,
I’d
like
to
wish
the
competition
a
great
success
and
I
hope
every competitor can perform at your best!


Thank you!


句型背诵



①In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and
listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.


②I
believe
it
will
be
of
great
help
to
form
the
good
habit
of
reading...



③...I’d
lik
e
to
wish
the
competition
a
great
success
and
I
hope
every
competitor can perform at your best!


3


练习篇目：



假如你是李华，
美国一所友好 学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文
刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信 ，假如你是李华，美
国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，
该校格林先 生来
信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：



l
表示赞成。
l
提出你喜欢的栏目。
l
简要说明理由。



注意：
1.
词数
100
左右。
2.
新的开头和结尾已为你写好。



3.
适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
4.
参考栏目：栏目—
column


Dear Mr. Green,


I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine
together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.


Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my
cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of
the
world.
Since
people
from
different
parts
of
the
world
have
different
values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This wil
l offer a
wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for
Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last
but
not
least,
“entertainment”
is
so
cool!
The
popular
singers,
actors
and celebrities are so catchy and att
ractive that you absolutely can’t
miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.


Well,
I
can’t
list
more.
I
really
can’t
wait
to
read
that
magazine!



Yours faithfully,


Li Hua


【名师点评】



这是一篇满分作文。
仔细分析了这篇文章，
写的的确是好，
很地道 的美式英
语，
一些词语的大胆使用，
这么地道标准的英语，
可不是一朝一夕所 能写出来的。
比如说：
my
cup
of
tea,
apart
from
that,
oral
English,
last
but
not
least,
celebrities, catchy
和
trendy
的大胆运用，
list, can't wait to
简直
是
perfect!
况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。



4


（
3
）利弊分析类



假 设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论，
同学们观点有分歧，
各自
理由主要如下 表所示，请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。



注意：
1
．词数：
150
左右
2
．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。
3.
要自
拟结论。



参考词汇：故宫
the Palace Museum;
颐和园
the Summer Palace


Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt


Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be
rebuilt or not.


Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see
the
original
sight
of
the
garden,
which
reflects
the
Chinese
civilization
（文明）
.
And
it
will
be
another
place
of
interest
for
tourists.
If
partly
rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.


Those who disagree think
it more reasonable
（合情合理）
to
keep the
garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never
forget
the
history.
Other
buildings
like
Palace
Museum
and
Summer
Palace
can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessar
y to
rebuild
this
garden.
Some
also
worry
that
the
environment
will
be
destroyed
when
the
construction
goes
on
in
this
district.
Personally,
it
is
advisable
to
rebuild
Yuanmingyuan
,
which
will
add
beauty
to
the
city
.
What’s more , the new scenic spot wil
l no doubt promote the economic
development of the local.


练习篇目：



你叫李华。
最近，
你们班同学就 “地球一小时”活动展开了一场热烈盼讨论。
下表是这次讨论的结果。请你用英语给《中学英语报》主编 写一封信，介绍你们
班的讨论结果并阐明你自己的观点。
5


高考英语满分作文大全






高考英语满分作文大全
[1]
假设你叫王明，
昨天收到了笔友
Da vid
的
e-mail
，
得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。
他想了解 如何学好中文。
请你用英文给他回复
一封
e-mail
，介绍学习中文的体会






和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
Dear
David,
I'm
glad
you'll
come
to
Beijing
to
learn
Chinese.
Chinese
is
very
useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for
you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember
as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some
reading
and
writing.
You
can
watch
TV
and
listen
to
the
radio
to
practise
your
listening.
Do
your
best
to
talk
with
people
in
Chinese.
You
can
learn
Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have
any
questions,
please
ask
me.
I'm
sure
you'll
learn
Chinese
well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming
二

请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇
100
—
120
字的短文。

提纲：



(1)
家乡的地理位置；
(2)
解放前的情况；
(3)
解放后的变化；
(4)
对
家乡的感情。
My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands
beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it
was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived
a hard life. In 1949 my
hometown
was
liberated. Since then great changes
have
taken
place
there.
The
streets
have
been
widened.
Factories,
schools,
hospitals,
cinemas
and
theatres
have
sprung
up
one
after
another.
The
life
of
the
people
is
greatly
improved.
I
love
my
hometown.
All
the
more
I
love
its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more
beautiful.
三

健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要 的，
但你的父母天天忙于工
作而忽略了这个问题，
你很为他们担忧。
请你以此 为话题，
并结合提示给他们写
一封信。

提示：
1.
要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；
2.
每周至少去体育馆锻
炼一次，或打球、或游泳；
3.
饮食要健康；
4.
不要工作太晚，要早休息。

要
求 ：
1.
短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；
2.80
—
100
词左右；
3.
开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear
Dad(Mum),
You’re
so
busy
every
day
that
you
don’t
pay
much
attention
to
your
health.
I’m
worried
about
your
health
all
the
time.
I’d
like
to
give
you
some
suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your co
mpany isn’t far
from home, is itWhy not walk
to
the officeYou’d better
take exercise at
least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is
also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy
food.
Try
not
to
stay
up
too
late.
Having
enough
sleep
can
help
your
brain
work
better.
Dad,
please
accept
my
advice.
I
really
wish
you
healthy!
Your
loving
son
(daughter)
Tom
(Mary)
四

Dear
Dad(Mum),
You’re
so
busy
every
day that you don’t pay much
attention
to your health.I
am worri
ed about
you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is
not about walking there because it


can make you much strongerI’d like you to play basketball or go
swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy
food
such
as
vegetables,
meat,
eggs
and
fruits.
Though
your
work
is
hard,
I
still
hope
that
you
can
go
to
bed
early
so
that
you
can
get
enough
sleep.
I’m
looking
forward
to
receiving
your
letter.
Your
loving
son
(daughter)
Tom
(Mary)
五

随着 阳光体育运动在全国开展，
政府对中学生身体素质有所下降
这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这 样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR



A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出
现了可喜的变化， 强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下
学校开展这一活动的情况。

注意：
1.
词数
80
—
100
左右。
2.
要求文章结构合
理、内容通顺、句子连贯。

参考词汇：build up one’s body strength 强健
身体
reduce diseases
减少疾病
As the Sunny Sports is developing in our
country,
the
government
has
paid
attention
to
the
health
of
the
students
and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So
far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport
in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton
and
swim.
They
let
our
brains
relax
and
make
our
school
life
more
colorful.
We
have
become
more
energetic.
Above
all
our
study
has
all
been
improved.
Let’s take exercise every day. It c
an build up our body strength and
reduce diseases.


七



Career or Family: which is more important


When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always
respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their
career,
while
there
are
always
other
people
who
argue
that
family
should
be the number one in one’s life.



It
goes
without
any
question
that
career
plays
a
key
role
in
our
life.
In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without
career, much of our li
ving time will be certainly wasted. What’s more,
career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn
their
income
from
a
job.
On
the
other
hand,
family
is
also
an
indispensable
part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a
place
where
we
can
escape
from
troubles
in
life.
In
addition,
we
can
obtain
a sense of belonging to from
family.
Without it, anyone
will feel lonely
and desperate.


In
my
opinion,
career
and
family
are
not
in
opposition
to
each
other.
Rather,
they
can
enhance
each
other
so
that
one’s
life
can
become
better
and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but
one between ideal and practical.
中国公务网
2006-5-28 11:34:59


七



事业还是家庭
:
哪个更重要



当被问及他们认 为事业和家庭
,
人们总是有不同的反应。一些人认为它更重
要的追求自己的事业
,
虽然总是有其他的人认为家庭应该是一分之一的生命数量。



毫无任何问题
,
职业生涯中扮演着一个重要角色在我们的生活中。在非常第
一的地方
,
事业能给我们一个目标
,
生活在。没有事业
,
我们大部分 的生活肯定会
浪费时间。更重要的是
,
职业可以给我们提供一个意味着活在。大多数人 获得他
们的收入从一个工作。
另一方面
,
家庭也是一个不可或缺的生活的一部 分
,
因为很
多人会承认。家庭总是被视为一个地方我们可以逃避生活中的困难。此外< br>,
我们