大阅兵观后感考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子汇总之考研英语看图作文范例点评拔苗助长等10个话题(含中文对照)

考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子

篇一：考研英语看图作文范例点评拔苗助长

< br>中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型，个提高的方式就是看范例和

点评，针对其中的错 误进行自我修正。

拔苗助长

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母大写

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parents should cultivate children according to his(

改

为

their)

aptitude,instead

of

blind

notion

of

contemporary

society,the

number

of

students who suffer from cram school(

改为

schools) and

the pressure of their parents(

句子层次混乱，建议加“,

which

改

为

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从

句

” )has

increased

at

an

alarming

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deliberation

of

this

phenomenon

has

illustrated me on why this should be so(

表达不准确，改

为

There

are

numerous

reasons

why

exists

this

phenomenon, and I would explore only a few of the most

important

ones

here).Fierce

competition,in

the

first

place,constitue s(

拼写错误，改为

consists) one of the

primary

ing

to

a

recent

survey

made

by

sina,there are one million students choose to pursue a

master

degree

after

ing

cram

school(

改为

schools) will lay a foundation for future

gent

thinking

existing

in

the

society

is

also

the

breeding

ground

for

this

undesirable

general

mood

of

society

will

eventually

result(

改

为

results)

in

being

devoid

of

there

is

no

compelling

interference

to

revease(

拼写错误，改为

reverse) this trend,our country

is

bound

to

be

influenced

be

specific,It(

小写

) will lack innovative talent,be short

of

the

motion

to

accelerate,(

改

为

be

short

of

the

motivation

to

promote

the

development

of

economy)and

ultimately

be

detrimental

to

building

up

a

suststainable(

拼

写

错

误

，

改

为

sustainable)development

terms of my personal experience,It(

小写

)is

urgent and imperative to take counter one

thing,

the

public

media

should

advocate

and

propagandize

the

notion

of

divergent

thinking,which

will

be

conducive

to

one’s

personal

gr

owth

and

core

competitive another,students should foster a

desirable

life

we

can

implement

as

the

above

mentioned,the

promising

future

can

be

well

guaranteed.

总体点评

的整体思路你已经基本掌握，后面要 做的就是多积累高分佳句，

加强句子成分的分析。写完之后定要认真检查，减少失分点。

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和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。

篇二：考研英语看图作文范例点评手机依赖症

中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型，个提高的方式就是看范例和

点评，针对其中的 错误进行自我修正。

手机依赖症

What

a

thought-provoking

picture.

(!)In

the

picture,

although setting(sitting) on(

改为

around

， 用

on

意为

“

坐

在

桌

子

”)

the

same

table

for

dinner,

people

are

completely

absorbed

in

their

mobile

phones,

and

they

are

communicating

with

others

through

QQ,

playing

games and purchasing in the online shop(

汉式思维，改为

shopping

online).Undoubtedly,

the

draw er(painter

，

drawer

是

“

抽

屉

”)

of

the

cartoon

reveals

a

common

phenomenon that mobile phones in our life is becoming

so

important

that

people

generate

the

increasingly

serious emotions of dependence on it. (

首先，可以直接

用

the cartoon reveals…;其次，

so important that

后面的

句子语法错误，语句不通。可改为

the cartoon reveals a

common

phenomenon

that

mobile

phones

are

playing

a

more

an

d

more

important

role

that

people

can’t

live

without

them.)Various

reasons

result

in

the

problem.

On

one

hand,

with

the

Price

of

cell

phones

declining(

语序错误，with the declining of cell phones’

price), the majority of people have (

加

the) ability

to

purchase

mobiles

phones.

For

example,

everyone

in

China possess(

单三，加

es)a phone. On the other hand,

with

the

development

of

technology,

the

function

of

mobile

phone

is

becoming

very

strong(

中

式思

维

，

改

为

powerful),

and

more

and

more

people

are

fascinated

with its diversion(

应为“消遣功能”，加

function) .And

above

all,

modern

people

are

always

too

boring

and

exhausted, and they need somethings(something)such as

cell

phones

to

relieve

pressure.

Ultimately,

many

people are becoming salves(slaves

，

salve

是“药膏”)

of

my

opinion,

mobile

phones

are

making

people in hazard(

用 在这里不合适，夸大了手机对人们造成

的影响。可改为

mobile phones are harmful to people in

some

respects).

People

always

waste

lots

of

time

on

mobile phones, which can not only impact the health of

people

but

also

make

people

ignore

the

real

reality.

Therefore, people must learn to develop the awareness

of using mobiles properly.

总体点评

章有的地方是中式思维，不够地道，如“sit on the table”，

需多背诵模仿些经典佳句，使表达更加精准。