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2020-12-22 22:22
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美丽人生观后感-

2020年12月22日发(作者:嵇汉雄)


考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子




篇一:考研英语看图作文范例点评拔苗助长


< br>中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型,个提高的方式就是看范例和


点评,针对其中的错 误进行自我修正。


拔苗助长


者改为“, which is generally”)read by (首字


母大写

) drawer aims to reveal a symbolic meaning that


parents should cultivate children according to his(


their)

aptitude,instead

of

blind

notion

of


contemporary

society,the

number

of


students who suffer from cram school(

改为

schools) and


the pressure of their parents(

句子层次混乱,建议加“,


which

” )has

increased

at

an

alarming


l

deliberation

of

this

phenomenon

has


illustrated me on why this should be so(

表达不准确,改


There

are

numerous

reasons

why

exists

this


phenomenon, and I would explore only a few of the most


important

ones

here).Fierce

competition,in

the

first


place,constitue s(

拼写错误,改为

consists) one of the


primary

ing

to

a

recent

survey

made

by


sina,there are one million students choose to pursue a


master

degree

after

ing

cram


school(

改为

schools) will lay a foundation for future


gent

thinking

existing

in

the


society

is

also

the

breeding

ground

for

this


undesirable

general

mood

of

society

will


eventually

result(

results)

in

being

devoid

of


there

is

no

compelling

interference

to


revease(

拼写错误,改为

reverse) this trend,our country


is

bound

to

be

influenced

be


specific,It(

小写

) will lack innovative talent,be short


of

the

motion

to

accelerate,(

be

short

of

the


motivation

to

promote

the

development

of

economy)and


ultimately

be

detrimental

to

building

up

a


suststainable(

sustainable)development


terms of my personal experience,It(

小写

)is


urgent and imperative to take counter one


thing,

the

public

media

should

advocate

and


propagandize

the

notion

of

divergent

thinking,which


will

be

conducive

to

one’s

personal

gr

owth

and

core


competitive another,students should foster a


desirable

life

we

can

implement

as

the


above

mentioned,the

promising

future

can

be

well


guaranteed.


总体点评


的整体思路你已经基本掌握,后面要 做的就是多积累高分佳句,


加强句子成分的分析。写完之后定要认真检查,减少失分点。


参考分数

(

满分

20< /p>

)12


和点评,希望大家有思考,有提高。


篇二:考研英语看图作文范例点评手机依赖症



中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型,个提高的方式就是看范例和


点评,针对其中的 错误进行自我修正。


手机依赖症


What

a

thought-provoking

picture.

(!)In

the

picture,


although setting(sitting) on(

改为

around

, 用

on

意为


”)

the

same

table

for

dinner,

people

are


completely

absorbed

in

their

mobile

phones,

and

they


are

communicating

with

others

through

QQ,

playing


games and purchasing in the online shop(

汉式思维,改为


shopping

online).Undoubtedly,

the

draw er(painter


drawer

”)

of

the

cartoon

reveals

a

common


phenomenon that mobile phones in our life is becoming


so

important

that

people

generate

the

increasingly


serious emotions of dependence on it. (

首先,可以直接


the cartoon reveals…;其次,

so important that

后面的


句子语法错误,语句不通。可改为

the cartoon reveals a


common

phenomenon

that

mobile

phones

are

playing

a


more

an

d

more

important

role

that

people

can’t

live


without

them.)Various

reasons

result

in

the

problem.


On

one

hand,

with

the

Price

of

cell

phones


declining(

语序错误,with the declining of cell phones’


price), the majority of people have (

the) ability


to

purchase

mobiles

phones.

For

example,

everyone

in


China possess(

单三,加

es)a phone. On the other hand,


with

the

development

of

technology,

the

function

of


mobile

phone

is

becoming

very

strong(

式思

powerful),

and

more

and

more

people

are

fascinated


with its diversion(

应为“消遣功能”,加

function) .And


above

all,

modern

people

are

always

too

boring

and


exhausted, and they need somethings(something)such as


cell

phones

to

relieve

pressure.

Ultimately,

many


people are becoming salves(slaves

salve

是“药膏”)


of

my

opinion,

mobile

phones

are

making


people in hazard(

用 在这里不合适,夸大了手机对人们造成


的影响。可改为

mobile phones are harmful to people in


some

respects).

People

always

waste

lots

of

time

on


mobile phones, which can not only impact the health of


people

but

also

make

people

ignore

the

real

reality.


Therefore, people must learn to develop the awareness


of using mobiles properly.


总体点评


章有的地方是中式思维,不够地道,如“sit on the table”,


需多背诵模仿些经典佳句,使表达更加精准。


参考分数

(

满分

20

< p>)11


和点评,希望大家有思考,有提高。


篇三:考研英语看图作文范例点评本分变“承诺”


< p>
中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型,个提高的方式就是看范例和


点评,针对其 中的错误进行自我修正。


本分变承诺


者这句话是要表达什么内容

?)Simple as the drawing is,


the symbolic meaning behind ti(

改为

it) is as deep as


ocean(

注意句末标点

)Honesty is not only necessary, but


also indepensib le(

拼写错误,改为

indispensable).As the


old Chinese proverb says:


no

country

other

than

China,

it

has

been

said

that,


the

pro blum(

拼写

problem)

of

opposite

the


pormise(

拼写错误,改为

promise) more serious(

句子逻辑


关系不明确,改为

the opposite of the original promise


is

more

serious),and

people

fail

to

attach

attention


to the


money, take porfits(

拼写错误,改为

profits) and even


obtain wealth by attend be honest can also


have

added

(

add)

benefit

of

increasing

one's


knowledge,

giving

us

a

new

perspective

of

outside


world.

According

to

a

survey

conducted

by

China


Acadmy(

拼写错误,改为

Academy)of Science(CAS),honesty


can

relieve

not

only

pressure

but

also

anxiety

and


such problums(

拼写错误,改为

problems)as depression,


stress,

isolation

and

solitude(

)All

in


all,obtain(

改为

obtaining

,句话中只能有个谓语动词

)the


promise

plays

a

key

role

in

our

daily

< br>unhonest(

dishonest


unhonest

),

in

view

of

the

complexity

of

such


issue,we

must

treat

it

socially,economically

and


(

)

a

proper

law,

an

up-to-


date solution, a right perspective and alert public,it


will be a matter of time before the problum(

拼写错误,


改为

problem) becomes things of the past.(

最后段缺乏逻


辑关系,建议重写

)


总体点评


章。


参考分数

(

满分

20

)11


和点评,希望大家有思考,有提高。


篇四:考研英语看图作文范例点评志愿者


中是大家普遍缺乏练习的种类型,个提高的方式就是看范例和


点评,针对其中的错误 进行自我修正。


志愿者


宾语 ,而

sportive

adj.

,表示“运动的 ”).Simple as it


is,the

picture

reveals

an

exciting

phenomenon

that


more and more people are willing to be volunteers. As


the society developments(

改为

< p>develops

,此处应该使用动


< p>式

),

our

material

comforts

are

considerably


enhanced, thus, we are capable of the time and energy


to help others. At the same time, with(

去掉,若使用


with

)

the

moral

climate

is

getting


better, which is under everybody's efforts,(

and

,两


连< /p>

)the

members

of

these


volunteering organizations are mostly never asking for


any

rewards

either

on

fame

or

money,so

that

the


organizations

can

survive

easily.

It

is

hopeful

that


we will enjoy a more harmon y(

改为

harmonious

more

后面


应该跟形容词,且后面的

society

为 名词,应该用形容词修饰

)


society

in

the

future,if

the

things

develope

like


ore,when

we

are

eager

to

show

our


kindness,it is really necessary to keep our mind clear.


For one thing, one should never give up once he begins


to be a volunteer. For another,volunteer work is also


a (

去掉

a

resp onsibility

为抽象名词,不能用不定冠词修

生活是多么广阔-


描写春天景色的诗句-


苍蝇王-


敬老节-


有趣的脑筋急转弯-


貌寝-


课余生活的作文300字-


实践心得体会-



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