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2003
年高考英语满分作文(十篇)
作文题目
假设你是李华,
你的英国笔 友
Bob
将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学
校学中文,
来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。
请根据图画提供的信息,
写 信
介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为
25
平方米,月租
500
元。
注意:
1
.词数:
< p>100左右:
2
.参考词汇:房租—
Tent(n.).
满分作文(一)
Dear
Bob,
I
’
m
very
happy
to
receive
your
letter,
and
I
’
m
g
lad
to
hear
that
you
will
go
to
China
to
learn
Chinese
he
re.
I
have
already
found
a
fiat
for
you.
It
is
on
Fangc
ao
Street,
which
is
not
far
from
Jianxin
Chinese
Schoo
l.
Bus
No.11
can
take
you
there,
and
it
is
one
stop
b
efore
the
Chinese
School.
The
flat
is
on
the
third
floor
w
ith
3
rooms,
one
of
which
is
bedroom,
the
other
two
are
b
athroom
and
kitchen.
There
are
a
bed,
a
sofa,
a
desk
an
d
some
chairs
in
this
25
square-metres
small
fiat,
and
th
e
rent
is
500
yuan
per
month.
Maybe
this
fiat
is
not
a
s
good
as
your
wish,
but
I
’
ll
try
my
best
to
meet
your
n
eeds.
If
it
is
not
suitable
enough,
write
to
me
an
d
I
will
look
for
another
better
place.
Hope
you
will
come
here
soon!
All
the
best!
Yours,
Li
Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,
意思表述完整,
行文流畅自然。
作者在写作过程中注意
长短句并用,还使用了以‘
p>
which
,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层
次分
明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
满分作文(二)
Dear
Bob,
Welcome
to
China!
You
wrote
to
me
to
find
a
pla
ce
for
you.
I
have
found
an
apartment
on
Fangcao
Street
near
J
ianxin
Chinese
School.
It
is
on
the
third
floor
and
there
’
r
e
three
rooms
in
it:
a
bedroom,
a
kitchen,
and
a
bathroo
m.
There
is
a
bed,
a
sofa,
a
desk
and
a
chair
in
the
be
droom.
The
house
is
25
square
metres
and
the
rent
is
50
0
yuan
per
month.
Also
from
this
house
you
can
get
to
your
schoo
l
easily.
Just
take
the
No.11
bus
at
the
bus-stop
in
fron
t
of
the
building.
It
is
only
one
stop.
At
last,
will
yo
u
please
tell
me
the
time
you
arrive?
Then
I
’
U
be
abl
e
to
meet
you
at
the
airport,
see
you.
Best
wishes
!
Yours,
Li
Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语 态使用准
确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不
同的亮点。
满分作文(三)
Dear
Bob,
How
are
you
these
days?
I
’
m
so
glad
to
know
that
you
’
ll
come
to
our
cit
y
to
learn
Chinese.
You
asked
me
to
find
a
place
for
yo
u.
Now
I
’
ve
found
one
which
I
think
is
pretty
good.
The
place
is
on
Fang
Cao
Street
which
is
near
the
No.11
bus
s
top.
It
’
s
just
one
stop
away
from
Jianxin
Chinese
School.
There
are
three
rooms,
a
kitchen,
a
bathroom
an
d
a
bedroom.
Though
it
is
not
very
big,
only
25
squar
e
metres,
I
think
it
is
suitable.
By
the
way,
the
re
nt
is
500
yuan
per
month.
I
hope
you
’
ll
like
it.
If
no
t,
I
’
ll
try
to
find
another
place
for
you.
You
rs,
Li
Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性 很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同
时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,
很出彩,
再则结构完整,
从开头的问候语到结
尾都很完备。
满分作文(四)
Dear
Bob,
I
’
m
so
glad
that
you
are
coming
to
learn
Chines
e
here.
I
’
ve
already
found
you
a
house
near
our
school.
I
’
d
like
to
tell
you
something
about
it.
You
may
get
on
bus
at
Fang
Cao
Street
an
d
the
next
stop
is
just
Jian
Xin
Chinese
School.
The
hou
se
is
near
the
school.
It
is
about
25
square
metres.
I
n
the
bedroom,
there
is
a
bed,
a
sofa
standing
against
th
e
wall
and
a
table
near
the
window.
You
may
find
a
ligh
t
on
the
table
and
a
chair
next
to
it.
There
are
two
o
ther
rooms
connecting
the
bedroom.
The
left
one
is
a
bath
room
and
the
right
one
is
a
kitchen.
So
you
may
cook
b
y
yourself.
The
rent
for
the
house
is
500
yuan
per
month.
Hope
you
’
ll
enjoy
staying
here!
Yours,
Li
Hua
满分理由
本文内容具体, 详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,
语言结构富于变化,
错落有致,
顺畅圆润,
尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,
< br>为文章增色不少。
满分作文(五)