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2020年12月23日发(作者:汪金祥)


2003

年高考英语满分作文(十篇)


作文题目


假设你是李华,

你的英国笔 友

Bob

将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学


校学中文,

来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。

请根据图画提供的信息,

写 信


介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为

25

平方米,月租

500

元。




注意:

1

.词数:

< p>100

左右:


2

.参考词汇:房租—

Tent(n.).


满分作文(一)


Dear

Bob,


I

m

very

happy

to

receive

your

letter,

and

I

m

g


lad

to

hear

that

you

will

go

to

China

to

learn

Chinese

he


re.

I

have

already

found

a

fiat

for

you.

It

is

on

Fangc


ao

Street,

which

is

not

far

from

Jianxin

Chinese

Schoo


l.

Bus

No.11

can

take

you

there,

and

it

is

one

stop

b


efore

the

Chinese

School.

The

flat

is

on

the

third

floor

w


ith

3

rooms,

one

of

which

is

bedroom,

the

other

two

are

b


athroom

and

kitchen.

There

are

a

bed,

a

sofa,

a

desk

an


d

some

chairs

in

this

25

square-metres

small

fiat,

and

th


e

rent

is

500

yuan

per

month.

Maybe

this

fiat

is

not

a


s

good

as

your

wish,

but

I

ll

try

my

best

to

meet

your

n


eeds.

If

it

is

not

suitable

enough,

write

to

me

an


d

I

will

look

for

another

better

place.


Hope

you

will

come

here

soon!


All

the

best!



Yours,



Li

Hua


满分理由



本文格式正确,

意思表述完整,

行文流畅自然。

作者在写作过程中注意


长短句并用,还使用了以‘

which

,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层


次分 明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。


满分作文(二)


Dear

Bob,


Welcome

to

China!

You

wrote

to

me

to

find

a

pla


ce

for

you.


I

have

found

an

apartment

on

Fangcao

Street

near

J


ianxin

Chinese

School.

It

is

on

the

third

floor

and

there

r


e

three

rooms

in

it:

a

bedroom,

a

kitchen,

and

a

bathroo


m.

There

is

a

bed,

a

sofa,

a

desk

and

a

chair

in

the

be


droom.

The

house

is

25

square

metres

and

the

rent

is

50


0

yuan

per

month.


Also

from

this

house

you

can

get

to

your

schoo


l

easily.

Just

take

the

No.11

bus

at

the

bus-stop

in

fron


t

of

the

building.

It

is

only

one

stop.

At

last,

will

yo


u

please

tell

me

the

time

you

arrive?

Then

I

U

be

abl


e

to

meet

you

at

the

airport,

see

you.


Best

wishes

!




Yours,



Li

Hua



满分理由



本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语 态使用准


确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不


同的亮点。


满分作文(三)


Dear

Bob,


How

are

you

these

days?


I

m

so

glad

to

know

that

you

ll

come

to

our

cit


y

to

learn

Chinese.

You

asked

me

to

find

a

place

for

yo


u.

Now

I

ve

found

one

which

I

think

is

pretty

good.

The


place

is

on

Fang

Cao

Street

which

is

near

the

No.11

bus

s


top.

It

s

just

one

stop

away

from

Jianxin

Chinese

School.


There

are

three

rooms,

a

kitchen,

a

bathroom

an


d

a

bedroom.

Though

it

is

not

very

big,

only

25

squar


e

metres,

I

think

it

is

suitable.

By

the

way,

the

re


nt

is

500

yuan

per

month.

I

hope

you

ll

like

it.

If

no


t,

I

ll

try

to

find

another

place

for

you.



You


rs,



Li

Hua


满分理由



本文内在逻辑性 很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同


时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,

很出彩,

再则结构完整,

从开头的问候语到结

尾都很完备。


满分作文(四)


Dear

Bob,


I

m

so

glad

that

you

are

coming

to

learn

Chines


e

here.

I

ve

already

found

you

a

house

near

our

school.

I


d

like

to

tell

you

something

about

it.


You

may

get

on

bus

at

Fang

Cao

Street

an


d

the

next

stop

is

just

Jian

Xin

Chinese

School.

The

hou


se

is

near

the

school.

It

is

about

25

square

metres.

I


n

the

bedroom,

there

is

a

bed,

a

sofa

standing

against

th


e

wall

and

a

table

near

the

window.

You

may

find

a

ligh


t

on

the

table

and

a

chair

next

to

it.

There

are

two

o


ther

rooms

connecting

the

bedroom.

The

left

one

is

a

bath


room

and

the

right

one

is

a

kitchen.

So

you

may

cook

b


y

yourself.

The

rent

for

the

house

is

500

yuan

per

month.


Hope

you

ll

enjoy

staying

here!



Yours,



Li

Hua


满分理由



本文内容具体, 详略得当,表述方式很有创造力和新意,长短句并用,


语言结构富于变化,

错落有致,

顺畅圆润,

尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到,

< br>为文章增色不少。


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