延安精神论文英语作文2--记叙文

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用强调句型构成排比句式增强描述性，以突出人物特征。

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When asked who impresses me/I love/respect most, I will respond without any hesitation

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< br>如果被问及给我印象最深

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我最热爱

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最尊 敬的人是谁，我会毫不犹豫地回答．

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I admire him for his positive outlook towards life.

我敬佩他对人生的积极态度。

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It seems that nothing is impossible for him.

对他来说，似乎没什么是不能做到的。

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As a man of enthusiasm, he has a power to fan the sparks of wisdom in us.

他热情四射，并有一种能够激发我们智慧火花的力量。

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He really has a great influence on me.

他的确对我有很大的影响。

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I love

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because

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我爱．

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．因为．

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He has set a good example for us.

他给我们树立了—个良好的榜样。

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Whenever I meet with difficulties, he gives me courage and determination to overcome them.

每当我碰到困难，他总是给我战胜困难的勇气和决心。

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He practises what he preaches.

他总是身体力行。

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His deeds inspire me to make continuous efforts to fulfill my dream.

他的事迹激励我不断努力去实现梦想。

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The reason why I admire him is that

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我之所以敬佩他是因为．

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He is really a man worthy of our respect.

他的确是一个值得我们尊敬的人。

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He is held in high esteem because

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他受人尊敬是因为．

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He is a hardworking person who has been devoted to

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heart and soul. < /p>

他工作勤奋，全心全意地投入到．

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It is you who enlighten my mind

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it is you who tap my potential in

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; and it is you who lead

me to

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是你启迪了 我的智慧，是你发掘了我．

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．方面的潜力，是你指引我走向．

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．全国高考学生习作点评

(2008

年湖南卷

)

请从下列人物中选择你最喜欢的一位，用英语写一篇

120

词左右的短 文。

要求根据所给信息作适当发挥，且需包括以下三部分内容：

(1)

对该人物的简单介绍；

(2)

喜欢该人物的理由；

(3)

从该人物身上得到的启示。

Thomas Edison

inventor;

creative; diligent;

full of wisdom

“

Genius is one percent

inspiration and ninety-nine

percent perspiration.

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Helen Keller

ordinary but great woman;

disabled; optimistic;

eager to learn

“

…

if I had the power of sight

for three days.

”

William Shakespeare

writer;

talented; imaginative;

man of all ages

“

Life is a stage

…”

范文

My favourite person among the three is Helen Keller, an ordinary but great woman. She lost

her sight when she was three in an accident. But she overcame a lot of unimaginable difficulties to

learn languages, and eventually she mastered 8 different languages and finished her book

Three

Days

to

See

.

I

like

Helen

Keller

for

her

optimism

and

perseverance.

Disabled

as

she

was,

she

didn't lose hope for life. Instead, she was eager to learn. Despite all the difficulties, she didn't give

up halfway. The book she wrote is the best proof of her unrelenting efforts. The story of Helen

Keller has a great influence on me. Whenever I want to quit because of the failure or frustration,

the image of Helen Keller will flash into my mind. I seem to hear her saying,

and you will achieve your goal.

saying

D

．实战演练

以

“

People I Love Most

”

为题，写一篇不少于

120

字的记叙文。

If asked who I love most, I will tell you without a moment's delay that my parents are dearest

to me.

I

love

my

parents

most,

for

it

is

my

parents

who

create

a

sweet

home

for

me.

It

is

not

as

magnificent as a palace, but it is bright, clean and tidy.

Mother and father think more of others

than themselves. In our home, not a single complaint can you hear. It is full of love, warmth and

harmony, which is the source of all my confidence, wisdom and strength.

I love my parents, for it is my parents who teach me to take the first step. With their help, I

learnt to walk and speak and stepped into the gate of knowledge. With their enlightenment, I look

at the world with great curiosity and develop my interest in history, music and sports. They stick to

the principle that example is better than precept and they practise what they preach. They tell me

that we are important when we are lending our helping hands. Under their influence, I know what

makes

an

all-round

person

and

I

know

the

importance

of

honesty,

generosity,

enthusiasm

and

perseverance.

I love my parents, for they encourage me to steer my ship with hope, leaving fears behind.

When I make progress, they give me warm praise; when I meet with difficulties, they offer

me

courage and determination? Without their love and encouragement, how can I grow healthily?

I am very lucky to have my parents. I owe all my success to them and I want to tell them how

much I love them and how much I am grateful to them.

语言亮点

Useful phrases

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an all- round person

全面发展的人

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steer my ship with hope

怀揣希望，乘风破浪

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owe all my success to them

把我所有的成功归功于他们

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In our home, not a single complaint can you hear. It is full of love, warmth and harmony, which

is the source of all my confidence, wisdom and strength.

在我家里，听不到任何 抱怨。它充

满了爱、温馨与和谐，这些是我自信、智慧和力量的源泉。

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With

their

enlightenment,

I

look

at

the

world

with

great

curiosity

and

develop

interesting

a

variety of things

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在他们的启迪之下，我带着好奇的眼睛看世界，并形成了各种各样的爱好。

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They stick to the principle that example is better than precept and they practice what they

preach.

他们信守“榜样的力量是无穷的”这个原则并凡事以身作则。

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二、记叙文

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．叙事

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．写作结构指导

叙事型作文要牢记六要素，即人物、时间、地点、事件、过程 及结果。事件过程的叙述

要有情节性，要娓娓道来，要通过多种句式使叙述生动。

B

．常用句型

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I still clearly remember the day when

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我仍然清晰地记得那天．

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Vivid memories come flooding back to the day when

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．的生动记忆如潮水般涌来。

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Never will I forget

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我永远也不会忘记．

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I will cherish the memories and make them rooted in my heart

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我会珍藏这些记忆，让它们永留心间。

C

．全国高考学生习作点评

(2008

年江西卷

)

学校计划举行英语作文竞赛，主题为

。

请根据下列要求写一篇作文：

你遇到了困难或 问题，不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈，后来问题得到了解决。

要求写清楚下面三点：

(1)

当时面临的困难或问题是什么

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(2)

你获得的指教是什么

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(3 )

结果如何

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注意：作文总词数为

100

左右

范文

There are times when you meet with difficulties or find it hard to make a choice. It is the time

when the advice of the older generations is of great value.

Take my own experience as an example. At the end of Senior Two, I had to make a decision

whether to major in arts or science. Being good at science subjects, I intended to choose physics as

my major. However, my best friend Lily chose geography, saying there would be more chances for

us to be admitted into a key university because of relatively fewer examinees in this subject. Then

I was at a loss which to choose.

Seeing

I

was

hesitant,

my

father

had

a

talk

with

me.

He

suggested

that

I

should

choose

according to my own interest and ability, regardless of others' thoughts. He told me my interest

will inspire me to tap my potential fully and my ability will give me more confidence to overcome

difficulties.

With my father's help, I firmly chose physics and Lily, finally understood me and respected

my choice. From this experience, I realize that older generations, having rich experience, can help

us young men make sensible decisions.

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．实战演练

以“

An Unforgettable Traditional Festi val

”为题，写一篇不少于

120

词的作文。

范文

As

soon

as

I

see

the

title,

it

produces

an

extraordinary

sequence

of

mental

images.

Vivid

memories come flooding back to the Spring Festival ten years ago?

Everyone was fully occupied to welcome the most important festival in China. My mother

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shuttled

between

markets,

buying

food,

fruits,

gifts

and

so

on.

Tired

as

she

was,

she

neither

complained, nor asked us for help. It seemed that she had inexhaustible energy. Father, a man who

seldom stepped into the kitchen, should claim he would cook delicious fish for us! To fulfill his

promise, he practised cooking secretly at night when we fell asleep. My brother and I didn't want

to sit still. We spent a whole afternoon cleaning the house thoroughly. Not a single dirty corner

escaped our eyes. When Mum came back, she was surprised and satisfied, saying that we children

had grown up and were considerate to parents. On New Year's Eve, the whole family sat around

the table, making dumplings. It was the first time for us children to make dumplings, so we did not

have enough experience to be good at it. All the good humour reawoke in my mind as I recalled

the funny arguments we had that night about who made genuine dumplings.

Time flies! Ten years has already passed before I know it, but the warmth and good feelings

remain in my heart and will be there forever?

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．语言亮点

Useful phrases

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welcome the most important festival

迎接最重要的节日

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shuttle between

穿梭在??之间

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inexhaustible energy

无限的精力

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be surprised and satisfied

感到惊喜和满足

Useful phrases

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As soon as I see the title, it produces an extraordinary sequence of mental images. Vivid

memories come flooding back to the Spring Festival ten years ago.

一看到这个作文题目，我的脑海里就浮现出了一连串的图像。记忆如潮水般回到十年前的

春节。

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Tired as she was, she neither complained, nor asked us for help.

虽然很疲劳，但她并不抱怨，也不要求我们帮助她。

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All the good humour reawoke in my mind as I recalled the funny arguments we had that night

about who made genuine dumplings

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当我回忆起我 们那晚就谁包的饺子最正宗进行有趣的争诊时，

所有令人发笑的场景在我脑

海里重现。

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Time flies! Ten years has already passed before I know it, but the warmth and good feelings

remain in my heart and will be there forever

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时光飞逝

!

不知不觉十年过去了，但美好温馨的回忆依然没有消逝并将永远留在心间。

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二、记叙文

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．叙事言情

A

．写作结构指导

第一段：引出记叙的主体事件。

第二段：

事件和故事的叙述要有情节性，

要通过多种句式使叙述生动。

千万不要 用说明或议

论的套路，比如

first, second, last but not least

等表示层次的连接词就不适合在叙述

中出现。

第三段：用一到两句话总结此事给自己留下的深刻印象或对自己产生的影响。

B

．常用句型

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The unforgettable experience makes me convinced that

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．这次难忘的经历使我深信??

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I really benefit a lot from the experience, which inspires me to

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这次经历的确使我受益匪浅，它激励我??

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I think it is my duty to be actively involved in it and do my part

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我认为我有责任积极参与，尽自己的一份力。

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I cannot look on, doing nothing

．我不能袖手旁观，什么也不做。

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To ensure its success, we made a detailed plan

．为确保成功，我们制定了一个详细的计划。

C.

全国高考学生习作点评

(2009

年北京卷

)

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，

为响应绿化祖国

的号召，你班

4

月

12

日去郊区 植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂

志的“绿色行 动”专栏写一篇以

Action

in

Our

Class

为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于

600

提示词：郊区

suburbs

范文

April 12 is unforgettable because our class carried out a meaningful activity on that day.

In

the

morning,

we

bicycled

to

the

suburbs

to

plant

trees

as

arranged,

talking

and

laughing

all

the

way.

Despite the cold wind, nobody let out a complaint. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Everyone was

actively involved in it, with some carrying and planting young trees, some digging and some watering trees. In no

time, lines of trees came into view. After getting the work done, we put up a board which said

Trees

reminding

people

to

do

their

part

for

the

protection

of

the

environment.

Before

leaving,

we

took

some

photos so as to cherish the good memories.

Seeing the lines of trees, we felt relieved and we all had a sense of achievement. We strongly felt if everyone

contributed a little to beautifying the environment, we would have a better city and better life.

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