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初一写人英语满分作文
【篇一:中考英语写人作文】
写作练习:(人物篇)
写人作文是中考的热门题材之一,
写这类作文时要注意以下几点:
1.
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描写人物时,不能面面俱到,泛泛而写,要重点突出其鲜明特征,
以表现与其
他人物的不同之处。
2.
叙述与人物有挂的事情时,要分
清主次,前后照应,选取典型事例来刻画人物。
3.
描写人物时,一 p>
般在结尾处要对人物进行评价,抒发自己对人物的情感。
基本框架
人物
part 1
外貌
性格
时间
part 2
过程
事件
结果
part 3
感受
写作评分标准及进步方向:
内容要点
应用词汇
:
高级词汇的合理使用(
energetic, intelligence
)、同义
词的变化使用
(
以
li kebeautiful
为例
)
、短语的恰当使用
(come up
with)
<
/p>
语法结构的准确性:适当运用较复杂的语法,固定句式(感叹句、
强调句、
倒装句等)、定语从句、状语从句、现在分词短语、动词
不定式等。
taps must be turned off after being used.
上下文的连
贯性:
连接词、非谓语动词等结构。
first of all , in a word
等
连接词汇总:
1.
表示目的:
for this purpose
,
for this reason
,
so that
,
in
order that
,
so as to
,
in order to… 2.
表示对照:
< p>but,
however
,
yet<
/p>
,
on the other hand
,
on the contrary… 3.
表示结果:
so
,
thus
,
therefore
,
as a result
4.
表示因果:
because
,
since
,
a s, for
,
because of …, owing
to 5.
表示强调:
indeed
,
in fact
,
as a matter of fact 6.
表示并列
观点:
firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, first of all, also
,
and
,
in
addition
,
besides
,
what ’s more
,
moreover…, last but not
least, what’s worse
7.
表示解释和说明:
for example
,
for instance…
8.
表示比较:
like
,
just like
,
just as
,
in the same way
,
similarly… 9.
表示总结:
finally
,
at last
,
in short
,
in a word
10.
表示让步:
although
,
though
,
even though
,
no matter
wh
—
建议记诵的话题词汇和短语:
11.
关系:
father, parents ,
grandfather ,uncle ,aunt ,schoolmate, m
onitor
等,
cousin
比较
加分
哦
12.
职业:
teacher, doctor, nurse, dentist, cook, artist, scientist,
soldier,
manager, businessman,
journalist
等
13.
外貌性格:
pretty , good-looking, short , tall, lovely,
adorable, naughty, smart
, wise, diligent, lazy, humorous,
attractive, funny, outgoing, serious,
quiet. warm-hearted,
patient
,
strong-minded, hard-working
等
(
介绍外貌时候可用上定
< p>语从句,开篇就亮点
)
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专业品质
帝豪校区:
2042800
厦门思明
区帝豪大厦
2403
吕厝校区:
2042900
锦绣广场二楼
思北校区:
2042700
银行家园二楼
瑞景校区:
2042400
洪莲路
21
号
5
楼
(加州广场旁)
14.
年龄:
a twenty-year-old man, as a boy of 15, at the age of
10, during his
childhood, middle-aged , in his forties
等
15.
兴趣
爱好:
enjoy doing, like to do /doing, be fond of, be crazy about,
be interested in , prefer
to do/doing
16.
评价:
be popular with , be respected by, be honored as,
be considered ad, be
famous for, be regarded as, set a good
example
等。
句子:
1.
he shows great enthusiasm in pursuing knowledge.
2. she
is a ordinary-looking girl with
short hair. 3. not only does she ..
but
also… 4. he sets us a good example.
5. i’ll never forget the day when…
6. i’m so proud that i have such a good friend.
7. he is considered as an honest,
humorous teacher and he is
respected
and loved by the students and other teachers. 8.
owing to his patient guide and my
effort , i learned quite well at
the
end. 9. without his help, i would have…
10. it was because of their help and
encouragement that i
could get the best
result. 11. she has a great sense of
humorous.
12. she always comforts me when i get into trouble. 13. i’m
very grateful to him
for all that he has done for me.
14. during the process of my growth,
there are lots of people i
want to
thank, but the person i want to thank most is… 15.
i
want to thank sb. from the bottom of
my heart.
满分作文评析:
(1)
时光匆匆,不知不觉中,同学们的初 中生活即将结束,你们有一个
懵懂的孩童成长为有知识有理想的少年。在你们成长的历程
中,渗
透了父母的心血,充满了师长的关爱,得到了朋友的帮助,请以
< br>my_______________
为题,写一篇短文,描述你心中最重要的人或
最令你难忘的人。要求:
1.
把题目补充完整。
2.
文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3.
词数在
60 - 80
之间。
4.
内
容要齐全,包括以下几点:
who is the person in your
heart?
why is the person so
important in your heart?what will you
learn from the person in the
future?
参考范文:
my father is a
hero in my heart. although he has been away for
many years, he still lives in my heart
now.
as a father of the
five children, he knew his duty. when i was a
little girl, i thought my father never
knew tired. he always
worked and
worked. he was a man of great strength both
physically and in the mind.
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教育贵族教育
专业品质
帝豪校区:
2042800
厦门思明
区帝豪大厦
2403
吕厝校区:
2042900
锦绣广场二楼
思北校区:
2042700
银行家园二楼
瑞景校区:
2042400
洪莲路
21
号
5
楼
(加州广场旁)
a few years has
passed, but i think my father never left me. he
always smiles at me and lives in my
heart. i know i have my
fathers love.
it gives me courage to do anything, to face any
difficulties in my him, i will learn
to stand up straightly,
to be proud of
who i am!
2. a real
friend
提示:朋友,是思想上值得依 赖,情感上可以依托,学习上能得到
帮助,生活上给予关照的人。请写一、两件事情来讲
述你和朋友之
间真挚的友情。
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要求:
1
、请根据所给题目,用英语写一篇短文,词数不少于
60
个;
2
、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3
、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
4
、短 文必
须写在答题卡上,如在本卷作答,一律不得分。
参考范文:
a real friend
everyone needs
friends. friendship plays an important role in
our lives. friends can encourage us to
be better and share our
hopes and
dreams. amy is a real friend like this.
when i became a middle school student,
i dont do well in
english or math. i
fell behind others. i was worried and upset.
at that time, amy often lent me her
notebooks and came to my
house to help
me after school. when i wanted to give up, she
always encouraged me to hold on, thanks
to amy, a month
later i caught up with
others. now both of us are in grade 9, we
have the same dreams - to be a student
in a good university. i
think we can
achieve our dreams.a friend in need is a friend
indeed. amy is such a good
friend.
记诵词组
1. suffer from
遭受
,
忍受
2. thanks to
多亏了
3.
get/be used to sth./doing sth.
习惯于
4. be absorbed
in
专心于,全神贯注于
5. concentrate on sth.
专
注于
6.
share your happiness and sadness with sb.
和某人
分享你的快乐和痛苦
7. pursue knowledge
追求知识
8. be in
trouble
处于困境中,遇到麻烦
9. depend on sb. to do
sth.
依靠某人做某事
10. to be honest
老实说
11.
encourage sb. to do sth.
鼓励某人做某事
12. be popular
with sb.
受到某人的欢迎
13.
strengthen our friendship
增进我们的友谊
promote our
friendship
14. benefit a lot from sth.
从
……
中受益良多
15. speak highly of
sb.
对某人评价高
16. get along well with sb.
和某人相处得好
17.
put one’s heart into sth.
用心对待某事
18. make
progress
取得进步
19.
have trouble in doing sth.
做某事有困难
20. come true
实现
21. realize/achieve one’s dream
实现某人的梦想
22. enjoy doing
sth.
like to do
sth. / like doing sth. be fond of sth. / doing
sth.
be crazy about sth. /
doing sth.
prefer doing
sth. to doing sth.
23. is
of great help for sb.
对某人有很大的帮助
= very helpful
24. lose one’s temper
发脾
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专业品质
帝豪校区:
2042800
厦门思明
区帝豪大厦
2403
吕厝校区:
2042900
锦绣广场二楼
思北校区:
2042700
银行家园二楼
瑞景校区:
2042400
洪莲路
21
号
5
楼
(加州广场旁)
内部教材,请勿外传。
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未经允许,请勿外传。
第
4
页
vip
教育贵族教育
专业品质
帝豪校区:
2042800
厦门思明
区帝豪大厦
2403
吕厝校区:
2042900
锦绣广场二楼
思北校区:
2042700
银行家园二楼
瑞景校区:
2042400
洪莲路
2
1
号
5
楼(加州广场旁)
博物馆校区:
2042008
厦门思明南路海洋花园一楼
【篇二:中学生英语满分作文十字诀】
中学生英语满分作文十字诀
60
个高频句型!
英语作文分为四等:
一等文:
13-15
分
;二等文:
9-12
分;
三等文:
5-8
分;
四等文:
0-4
分。
教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮孩子拿到一等文。
结构
要
点
逻辑
语法
亮点
1
结构三段式
中考最流行的 结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师
的喜爱。为什么呢
?
因为这种结构十分清晰,
“
观点
——
要点
——
总
结
”
让人一 目了然。
三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门 见山,不超过
2
句话,如,我们
想表达小强很强壮,第一
段直接说
xq is extremely strong.
观点明
确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分
2-3
点说为什么他强壮。
1.
每天吃
10
顿饭,
he
has
ten
meals
everyday!
详举吃的是什么。
2.
每天运动
2
小时,
he does exercise 2 hours a day!
详举做了什
么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全
照抄第
一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。
如,
how strong and robust xq is! i hope to be him one day! 2
要点全,围绕中心
实际上中考英语
写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般
会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有
所体现。
文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会 扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的
第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
3
逻辑逻辑词
这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折 p>
的,因果的,总结的逻辑词等。
递进:
除了
first, second, third, finally
等还可以使用高级点的,如
first
of
all(
首先
)
,
in addition, whats more, moreover(
都是另外的意思
)
,
in a word, all in
all(
表示总结的
)
。
转折:
but,
yet, however
等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连
接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
因果:
because, because
of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due
to
(由于)
so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then,so…that...,
such…that...
总结:
in a word(
总之,简言之
), in general, in
short(
总之
), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up,
finally, in conclusion, at last, in
summary
4
语法硬性要求
其它几点都不是硬性的要求,
不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,
但是语法却是硬性的,用不对就是错,如,单词的
使用,时态等。
5
亮点高级点的词汇词组句型
当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。
要想得到一等文,
最后两个字,亮点至关重要。
大家设想如果 我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面
前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都
很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都
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