-
数量用
the number of
增加
increased
轻微的的变化
a slight change of
比重用
the percentage of
减少
declined
很大的变化
a great change of
比率用
the rate of
大大增加
Greatly increased
某物的数量在不断增加
/
减少
The number of something is increasing/decreasing
Makes up
Made
up
（过去式）
ABC
是人做主语要用复数形式：
people take up
；
students make up
。
开头
1
、
According
to
the
chart
above,from
2014
to
2017
,
the
number
of
A
increased from
20
％
to50
％
. while the percentage ofB declined from 70
％
to 30
％
.with the rate
of C experiencing a slight change of
5
％
.
2
、
It
can
be
seen
graph
above
that
the
number
of
people
doing
something
rose
greatly/obviously/dramatically
from
40
％
to
80
％
.
meanwhile
the
rate
of
people
doing
sth
descended by
30
％，
whith the percentage of people doing sth staying at the same level/a similar
level
。
The graph above offers us a series of figures showing the proportion sth/people doing( sth: A
takes up
30
％
and B makes up 40
％
with C and D occupying 10
％
and11
％
respectively.
结尾
These figures
reveal a prevalent phenomenon that
+
句子（
a growing number of people are
paying
close
attention
to
the
value/important/harm
of
sth
）
，
which
is
meaningful
and
thought-provoking
。
第二段
首句
1
、
Whatare the leading factors behind the phenomenon mentioned above
。
2
、
so why did the
phenomenon
appear
？
3
、
for my part,there are two primary reasons accounting to for the phenomenon revealed
by the chart.
中间句（重要性、影响）
重要性
There is no doubt in saying that sth/doing sth can , directly or indirectly play an
indispensable role in our life
with sth , we would not achieve anything great in
方面。
影响
1
、
There
is
no
exaggeration
in
saying
that
sth
may
,
in
one
way
or
another
,
bring
a
positive
negative influence on……
。
2
、
it
is
an
undeniable
fact/truth
that
sth
.will/could
,
to
a
large
extent,
exert
a
subtle/great effect on .
尾句
1
、
For my part
，
the to reasons given above are the main factor leading to the phenomenon
/the problem/the changes mirrored by
the chart
2
、
it is high time we should take some efficientefficienturgent measuresmovessteps
to solve the problem