以温暖为话题作文中考英语作文范文赏析

中考英语作文范文赏析：

梦想与未来

【九、梦想和未来】

这是一个老话题，中考常考，难度较小。

1.

我的梦想是当一名医生（

my dream is doctor

）

I am an ordinary person, I have an ordinary dream: to be a doctor. Because doctor

may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to

get

rid

of

the

pain.

May

let

the

human

change

the

health.

At

the

same

time,

I

believed

that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. Therefore, I hoped

future I might be a doctor.

2.

以后十年内我的生活（

MY LIFE IN TEN YEARS

）

In ten years,I think I

e

I

don

like

living

alone.

And

I

can

play

with

her

inth

in ten years,I willba a good reporter.I will meet a lot of interesting and faous

people and I willgo to another places on ten years,i will have many

different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.I thin

2010

年江苏苏州中考英语作文范文

假设在英语课上老师给你们欣赏了电影《太空大灌篮》的主题曲

I Believe I Can Fl

y

。这是一首催人奋进的励志歌曲。请你根据以下要点以“I Believe I Can Fly”为题，用

英语写一篇短文，参加某英语杂志社的写作比赛。

内容要点：

1.

这首歌告诉我们自信的重要性

;

2.

自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功

;

3.

梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难

;

4.

没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功

;

5.

你的感悟

(

考生自拟，至少一点

)

。

注意：

1.

词数

90

左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数

;

2.

参考词汇：自信—

confidence(n.)

3.

短文 须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺，文中不得出

现真实的 人名、校名等相关信息

I Believe I Can Fly

I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by .

中考英语作文范文

I Believe I Can Fly

I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by . This song tells us that conf

idence is very important. When a person has confidence,he believes in himself.

He believes that he can and will succeed,and this gives him the courage to try

new things. Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of diff

iculties. No one can achieve success without them. If you believe you can fly,t

hen you can really fly someday.

I think I will nev

er give up whenever I meet any difficulties. I’ll rememb

er confidence is the promise for achieving success.

中考英语作文范文赏析：新生事物评价

【八、新生事物评价（热点）】

这是中考热点，这类文章的特点是写作难度大，因此 需要学生掌握方法，和基本句式，

以做到考试时心中不乱。

典型例句：

er is becoming more and more important

should make good use of it.

maybe get in the way of

（妨碍）

our study.

can do lots of things with

（有多种方法来应对

/

处理）

it

。

5. It makes our life more easy

ys mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middl

e school students.

例文

1

、网上购物

Doing Shopping Online

With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. Just click

your mouse to choose the article you like, and the shopping is finished. You ne

edn’t step out of the room.

It seems easy and qu

ick. But there’s always a trap（陷阱）

online. If you

are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may find the color of the art

icle is different from what you want, or the size is either too small or too bi

g. If you want to be different, you

Once you put on the clothes you bought online and go out, you will find man

y people wear the same clothes in the street.

2

、关于中学生使用手机

赞成意见：

1.

现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。

2.

应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。

3.

可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。

4.

只要 正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。

反对意见：

1.

学校已提供了公共电话，

因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，

而且花费较多。

2.

若课堂接听手机会影响上课。

3.

学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。

注意：

1 .

可适当增加细节和连接词，

使文章通顺连贯；

开头部分已给出，

不计入总词数；

2.

词数：

100

左右；

Dear Editor,

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle

school students. In my opinion, …

……

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

参考作文：

Dear Editor,

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle

school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.

As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mob

ile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobi

le phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to

（应该）

make the

best use of it. Suppose

（试设想）

there’s a sudden accident, it is more conven

ient for us to dial for help immediately. There’re also some games in the mobi

le phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we’re tired of our studi

es. In my opinion, it’s not wrong to

follow the fashion, but the most importan

t thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

3

、书面表达。（计

10

分）

假如你叫李平。

最近，

你就使用电子词典的问题调查了各方面的意见

（见下表）

现在，

请你根据表格中的信息用英语给某报社编辑写一封信。

注意：

1.

信件须包括写信原由及表格所列内容；

2.

书信格式正确；

3.

书写整洁；

4.

词数在

80

个左右。

生词提示：

electronic adj.

电子的

explanation

（

S< /p>

）

n.

解释，说明

发表意见者

对使用电子词典的不同意见

同学

有用，方便，节省查阅时间

家长

便于携带，多数家庭买得起

英语教师

对单词的解释太简单，不该使用

本人

会使我们变懒惰，不该使用

Dear Editor

，

Recently

（最近）

I made a survey

（做调查）

about the use of the electronic

classmates think that the electronic dictionary is useful

，

conven

ient and it can help to save time looking up the parents also think t

he electronic dictionary is easy to carry and most families can afford m

y English teacher does

n’t think we should use it，

because she/he thinks its ex

planations for the words are too simple.I suppose the electronic dictionary wil

l make us lazy and we shouldn’t use it.

Yours

，

Li Ping

4.

看图作文

同学们，

看到下面的四幅图片及相应 的报道后，

你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形？请简述

你担忧的理由并提出建 议或希望。

要求：⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；

⒊ 词数

80

～

100

。

参考词汇：

建议

suggest v. suggestion n.

气体

gas n.

污染

pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the world

② More and more d

iseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从 考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实

质上却属于提示性的作文。

这个作文应 该结合个人的观点，

选择的余地还是很大的。

做这个

题应 该注意几个方面：

1

、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2

-

最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述 。

3< /p>

、结合所给的提示。

提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，

考生可以这 些描述进行写作。

4

、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

范文：观点一

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollut

ion I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution,

because people can

animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or pr

oduce more waste gas. We

use more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beaut

iful.

范文：观点二

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can

there is too much noise. That

ryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars

shouldn

they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can

noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish,

one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the wast

e paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins

or paper bags.

中考英语作文范文赏析：旅游与介绍地方

【七、旅游和介绍地方篇（热点）】