大学生核心价值观六级作文基本要素

A

．范文

1

As the chart shows

．

more and more people in city X have traveled

abroad in the last decade ln 1995

，

only about 10

，

000 people in this city

went overseas. However ,the number of drastically increased to more than

120000 in 2005 which his three times that of the year 2000

There are three main reasons for this phenomenon First, along with

social and economy progress

，

the living standard of the Chinese people has

greatly elevated So they have enough money all time to go traveling

．

Second, more and more people want to broaden their vision by

experiencing exotic cultures Third some people just want to relax

themselves

，

enjoying beautiful scenery and visiting places of historical

interest

People’s traveling abroad

has an effect on both themselves and the

society

．

It can boost social economy and enhance cultural interaction,

making our society prosperous and active At the same time, the citizens

will also become open- minded

．

It's good for our nation's progress

出题出处：

china daily

，

21thcentury

e

技术：

30

个经典的词

duals,characters, folks

替换

(people ,persons)

2:

positive,

favorable,

rosy

(

美好的

)

，

promising(

有希望的

)

，

per fect,

pleasurable

,

excellent,

outstanding, superior

替换

good

3:dreadful,

unfavorable,

poor,

adverse,

ill

(

有害的

)

替换

bad,

如果

做表语，可以有

be

less

impressive

替换

army

of

college

students

indulge

themselves

in

playing

games,

enjoying

romance

with

girls/boys or killing time passively

in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result,

they records are less impressive.

4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)

替换

many.

注：用

many, if not most

一定要小心，

many

后一定要有词。

Eg. Many individuals, if not most, hold the idea that….

同理

用

if not all ,

替换

most.

5: a slice of, quiet a few , several

替换

some

6:harbor

the

idea

that,

take

the

attitude

that,hold

the

view

that,

it

is

widely

shared

that,it

is

universally acknowledged that)

替

think(

因为是书 面语，所以要加

that)

7:affair ,business ,matter

替换

thing

8: shared

代

common

huge fruits

替换

get many benefits )

10:for my part ,from my own perspective

替换

in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing

替换

more and more(

注意没有

g rowingly

这种形式。

所以当修饰名

词时用

increasing/growing.

修饰形容词，副词用

incr easingly.

has gained growing popularity.

popular with the advancement of sth.

if anything,

或

little or nothing

替换

hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding

替换

helpful,

r,client,consumer,purchaser,

替换

customer

ingly,extremely, intensely

替换

very

necessary, hardly inevitable ...

替换

unnecessary, avoidable

appeals

to

sb,

sth

exerts

a

tremendous

fascination

on

sb

替换

sb

take

interest

in

/ sb.

be

interested in

e one's attention

替换

attract one's attention.

,demension,sphere

代

aspect

indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of

代

indicate, suggest ,fear

rise to, lead to, result in, trigger

替换

cause.

22. There are several reasons behind sth

替换

..reasons for sth

替换

want.

attention into

替换

pay attention to

in mind that

替换

remember

26. enjoy, possess

替换

have(

注意

是过程的意思

)

27. interaction

替换

communication

on sth

替换

be against , disagree with sth

name only a few, as an example

替换

for example, for instance

30. next to / virtually impossible,

替换

nearly / almost impossible

C.

亮点词

一

.

增强语气的词

1 most

和

more than

When

we

talk

about

whether

college

students

are

diligent

or

not,

we

will

be

most

surprising to find the present situation is so complicated.

when it comes to

the diligence

,

翻译练习：

E g. 2000

年

6

月

Is a Test of Spoken English

Necessary?

我很高兴能参加这

样一个英语口语的能力测试。

I

am most happy to attend such a test of oral English ability

.

more than

也可以放在形容词前面，达到非常强烈的效果。

Eg. 98

年

1

月

My view on Fake commodities

After careful consideration, I am more than angry about fake commodities.

在问题解决类中，强调解决办法的有效。例如：

翻译：

在这种条件下，

对这个问题的办法看上去已经非常清楚明确了。

in this situation /case, under these circumstances

On this occasion ,the solutions to this problem seem more than clear.

2

．

undoubtedly

, unquestionably ,undeniably

和

beyond doubt ,out of question

Eg. My View on college Students’ Taking Part time Jobs

第一段的第二句叙述了对立的两个观点：

Some people argue that it is

unquestionably

beneficial to the students in that

it

can

enlarge their

horizon and enrich their

experience,

while others

firmly

hold

that

part-

time

jobs

of

all

kinds

are

harmful

so

as

to

hinder

the

students‘

normal

college study