状物作文600字高考英语作文话题四：情感世界

话题四：情感世界

Writing

1

[

上海市高三英语二模

(

徐汇

?

松江

?

金山）

]

人们常会因自己失去的而悲伤，而往

往忽略了自己拥有的。请以

“Appreciate What You Have”

为题，叙述一件自己经历的，或是

看到的，或是听说过的事，并谈谈自己 的感受。短文包括：

1.

对故事的具体描述；

2.

简述

自己的感受。

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Appreciate What You Have

It seems that people tend to shed tears for what they have lost but turn a poker face at what

they

are

still

holding

tightly

in

hand.

How

much

sorrow

would

vanish

if

people

could

learn

to

appreciate what they have!

Here is a story I heard once. A successful artist was being interviewed. Suffering from a rare

disease, the young woman had to stay in a wheelchair and wasn’t able to speak. The interview went

on smoothly until a journalist asked: “As a seriously disabled

，

·

miserable person

，

why are the

teachers cheerful?” The room fell into an embarrassed silence, but the woman didn’t seem to care.

Picking up a piece of chalk with her swollen hand

，

she started writing on the blackboard. The words

were ugly but still powerful: “I am happy to have a pair of beautiful legs.” “I feel great to wake up

with sunshine through my window.’’ “I am glad to have a healthy brain to keep thinking and working.

“Most important of all, I only care about what I have instead of what I have lost.’’ All the journalists

present were deeply moved.

Had the artist always buried herself in woe of losing, she wouldn’t have made any progress and

been respected by healthy people. Losing is usually evitable and unavoidable. So why should we

lose heart for what we can’t change? By the way, there is something that we can hardly lose, such

as a bumping heart

，

a movable hand

，

and the air around us, which we are used to turning a blind

eye to but can never live without. Learn to treasure them, and your life will be free of regrets and

misery.

Appreciate what you have. Don’t let your smile fade for anything that doesn’t belong to you.

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Appreciate What You Have

I used to be grievous due to what I’ve lost, the majority of people do, neglecting what I’ve

already possessed. However, an unexpected incident changed my point of view and taught me to

appreciate what I have

，

which I’ve benefited from.

When I was in Grade Eight, I was a member of our school choir. Confident of my sweet voice,

I was delighted to enter for the singing competition. Undoubtedly

，

I was applauded when I finished

my last high note, thus being sure to win. However, the first prize didn’t belong to me. Shocked and

grievous, I couldn’t help but weep in a small voice. I lost the first prize I’ve been dreaming of! Just

then, a handkerchief was passed in front of me. I raised my head and saw my friend Alice. “Cheer

up! You did perform well to the audience, didn’t

you? You shouldn’t stick to what

you lost but

should appreciate what you have. You got the second prize and importantly, you are gifted with a

beautiful voice with which you can succeed next time!” A warm smile and words of comfort relieved

me of my grief

，

and I was no longer in low spirits.

The incident left a deep impression on me in that it taught me the importance of appreciating

what I have. Since life is full of difficulties, I can’t stick to the grief of what I've lost. Only by

appreciating what I have can I have a positive mind with which to embrace my future life. Both the

incident and my friend’s words will be cherished for good, reminding me to become positive at my

life’s crossroads.

Writing 2

你的同学林华最近在学习上碰到了一些困难，自信不足，有些泄气。请你以王强

的名义给他写一封信，

告诉他自信的重要性，

并分析他不够自信的原因，

给出建议并让他树

立信心。

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Dear Lin Hua,

I

was

sorry

to

see

you

walking

downstairs

after

classes

yesterday?

bending

your

head

and

frustrated. I guess it was because your not-so-pleasant school report, but remember that’s all simple

past tense. Cheer up!

Don’t

give

yourself

up!

You

should

be

fully

aware

of

the

importance

of

self- confidence.

Confidence

may

bring

you

ease

and

acceptance.

Life

can

be

hard

and

discouraging

if

you

stop

believing

in

your

capability

to

create

a

brighter

future.

Confidence

contributes

to

your

own

perspective and individuality as well. You are who you are and never should you doubt the path

you’ve chosen for yourself.

As far as I am concerned, your depression may be attributed to two main reasons. For one thing

，

a series of failures in weekly tests struck you more than a bit, but perhaps you were simply not in

good condition due to the tiredness caused by rehearsals for the school art festival. On the other

hand

，

you might have been trapped by gossip about your poor performance. But this is your play

and you can’t expect everyone to understand.

Just think of some happy and successful moments and keep them in your mind when you are

in low spirits. Look into your papers and try to make up for the defects. Besides, don’t focus on

those past defeats as they’re far from life or death problems.

I hope to see that energetic and confident you soon and whatever happens, I will always be by

your side.

Yours,

Wang Qiang

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Dear Lin Hua,

I

hear

that

you

have

met

some

difficulties

in

your

study

recently

and

seemed

to

have

lost

confidence in yourself. As far as I am concerned

，

confidence is the most important factor when you

want

to

achieve

success.

Not

only

can

self- confidence

motivate

one

to

study

further

but

also

it

enables one to keep trying to solve difficult problems. Confidence is so vital in one’s work and study

that without it, one is likely to become a coward when faced with difficulties, thus giving up the

chance to make progress; so, you should rebuild your confidence.

Perhaps it is the fact that you failed in the last exam while your deskmate scored higher than

you that made you feel inferior to him and became unconfident, but only one test doesn’t mean

everything.

I

firmly

believe

that

you

will

do

better

next

time

long

as

you

regain

confidence

in

yourself and face difficulties bravely. Here, as your friend, I’d like to give you some suggestions.

First, you may as well take more physical exercise, during which you can remove your bad

mood, and build up courage. Next, you should have correct attitude towards exams, which I think