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英语批改网作文写好如何提交
【篇一：批改网英语作文】
directions: for this part, you are allowed 30
minutes to write a
short essay. you
should start your essay with a brief
description of the picture and then
express your views on the
lonely life
of aged people. you should write at least 120
words
but no more than 180
words.
please give the old
more concern and love
in
the picture above,an old lady is sitting in front
of the mirror
alone,saying ‘my son is
busy with his job and grandson is
taking classes,leaving me home
lonely.’
as is described in
the picture,the phenomenon can be seen
everywhere in the are more and more
empt-nest
elderly in of our parents
compose this
have been busy in
supporting our family angd contribute to the
society derseve a happy and peaceful
twilight
it is our duty to give them
more care and love. for one
thing,the
community can organize a variaty of activities to
make their life
meaningful and another,as son or grandson,we
adults should spend as much as time
accompanying our
parents,making them
delighted and conclusion,the
elderly
shouldn’t be ignored but cared of
considerately.
【篇二：英语批改网作文】
the person i love/ admire
most
要求
1. no less than 90 points by
pigai.
2. no less than 26o
words.
3. deadline nov.
3.
作文号
:357928
教师
:
邵春
字数
:260~500
满分
:100
attitude
要求
for this
part
，
you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short
essay entitled attitude
by commenting on the famous saying,
“a
man can succeed at almost anything for which he
has
unlimited enthusiasm
.” you should write at least 260 words
but no
more than 500 words.
作文号
:357929
教师
:
邵春
字数
:100~500
满分
:100
第一篇
the person i
love/ admire most
everyone
has someone in his heart that he admires most,
who may be a scientist, a writer, a
musician or a movie super
star. but,as
for me,the most admirable person of mine is
christian ronaldo, who is one of the
greatest football player in
todays
world. ronaldo was born in 1985, he was played for
the
manchester united and now plays for
real madrid, when he was
18 years old
he became a main force of portugal national team.
as for the world’s most brilliant super
football stars, he not
only has a
handsome appearance, also has a special skill and
efficient scoring ability. however,
this is not reason why i
admire him,
the really point let me be his fans is his
gratitude
feelings and persistence of
perseverance.
ronaldo is a
tender feelings man under his tough
appearance,the most important things he
teach me is that we
should gratitude
everyone who ever helped us, when he was
18,of which playing for manchester
united
，
even though he
has
unparalleled football talent
，
he was always neither well
with team
cooperation, nor handle for his applause and
criticism. at this time, the manchester
united coach sir alex
ferguson give
most patient guidance to him. latter, when
ronaldo every time honored, he always
expresses his gratitude
to alex
ferguson.“he is just like my father and
friend!”
moreover, another
point he inspired me is his persistence for
his persuit. from a youth to the leader
of the national football
team, ronaldo
is always to spare no effort to devote his time
and energy, and as for the life of
football. he is always the first
came
to the training ground, the last to leave. now, he
is nearly
thirty years old, but he
still keep the highest level on the
field.
in sum, it is my
general description about christian ronaldo
above, i learn to be an gratitude
person with strong mind from
he. no
pains, no gains. only when you work hard, you can
come true your dream. these lessons
exercise a great
influence on my life.
ronaldo, thank you so much for not only
giving interest of football to me but
also teaching me how to be
a good
person. recently, the new years golden ball
players will
reveal, ronaldo remains at
the top, all is own to his gratitude
mentality and uemitting persistence,
and i will continue to give
my greatest
respect, hala madrid!
the
person i admire most
第二篇
altitude
it is said “a man can succeed at almost anything for which he
has unlimited enthusiasm!”,we can known
how altitude play a
important role to
our success. a person who even though take
a extraordinary talent, he will hard to
get outstanding
achievement without a
good altitude to his work or study.
these are two causes why a positive
altitude is so significant
to our
career,on the one hand, we can build a strong
confidence from a good mental state
facing unpredictable
challenges,in
turn, which will unleash your
unlimited enthusiasm to push you to
devote time and energy
to your work.
beethoven, who is the greatest composer and
pianist in the history of music,who
also is a blind man at the
same
time,even if so, he was optimistic in the facing
of life,
come over all blocks we can
not image with a strong
determination
,and finally compose the many wonderful music .
on the other hand, as the saying goes,
“failure is the mother of
success”, but
i think it better to say,”failure will always
around
you without a goo
d attitude!”,there is no doubt that it is be so
difficult for us to succeed. when i was
third grade in primary
school, it was
very popular for us learning play the guitar,
before that, i have had some music
knowledge due to study for
a year, for
which , i dont have to go to learn to play guitar
with
a good altitude, of course, in the
end, those who had not
studied or
without any basis students learn better than me
under the positive and careful study.
so it is a enthusiastic
attitude that
make their life full of music and make goal has
been achieved.
in sum, which the factors of success dominated by
altitude
after all ? confidence,
optimistic, courage or all above ?
perhaps,it is not necessary for us to
discuss the answer to it,
because
someone have adjust a good altitude to facing
their
life,stress and work ,when you
are consider this question.