七一活动总结-快乐星期天
写作技巧
一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有 以下特点：
1
、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。
2
、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一 个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3
、要点齐全，不缺要点。
4
、首尾呼应，自然成一体。
5
、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。 阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。
6
、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。
7
、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8
、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。
9
、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重 复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自
然就对该作
文有好感了。
10
、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累，巧准备
要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：
1
、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课 标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2
、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢？ 这就要求我们在平时的学习过程
中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，
对于
as
soon
as
、
stop
some
body
from
doing
something
、
other
、
another
等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3
、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇 量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来？靠我们在平时学习过
程中，逐步积累起来的。比如
：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个
动
词“help”，
岂不显得你词汇贫乏？假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，
用
help
、
give
somebody
a
hand
、
give
a
hand
to somebody
、
be in need of
等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢？
像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My
name
is
Jim. I’m
Jim.
I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy
called
/named /with the name of Jim.
等等。
表达年龄的方式有：
She
is
12.
She
is
12
years
old.
She
is
aged
12.
She
is
a
girl
of
12(years
old)
. She
is a girl aged
12.
等等。
很显然，使用高级一点的更好。
4
、加强练习，积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练 习，才能提高水平。
5
、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢？首先，我们先不要看文章，自 己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词
或者句子等。然后去比较，勾
出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6
、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题，沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整 洁，影响得分。
其实，会写作文的 同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢？
审题主要要做一下事情：
1
、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什 么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不
会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本
来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想
想，那还能得高分吗？
2
、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认 真细读其要求，把必须表达的要
点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3
、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个？
4
、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些？
四、耐心修改，提炼句子
很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕，高兴地放下笔 就了事了。其实，这时候，不妨从以下方面去修改，相信会
让你受益匪浅的。
1
、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等
当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后，在写作时有 时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力，
你务必要选择高级的。例如，
就以今年中考的英语作文为例，它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达
法
，
有
old
people
和
the
old
。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理，
作文中的“病人”的表达法有
sick
people
，
patients
，
the sick
，你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢？当然是
the sick
了。
2
、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点
我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢？换为最 简单的表达法吧。例如：我市今年中考作文
题，就要求学生表达一个意思：帮助同学，可
以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”，面对这样的问题怎么办呢？
怎么不换个说法呢
？你看，
If we help our classmates with their study and other things , we can make our
friendship longer
.
不就达到目的了吗？
3
、大胆改变句型，使之生辉
例如，我们将一些句子改为感叹句，复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得 更能显示你的高水平和能力。何
乐而不为呢？
4
高度关注句与句
、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然，衔接紧凑。
5
、适当引用个别谚语或警句，来提高作文档次。
五、一丝不苟抄誊作文
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一篇好的作文，经过审题、修改之后，务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上，再认真地仔细检查一遍， 那才是大公告成
了。
一、
Great changes in my hometown
More
than
twenty
years
ago,
my
hometown
was
just
a
small,
old
and
poor
town.
Most
of
people
were
farmers.
There were
few factories. The
people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard
life.
Great
changes have taken place in the past twenty years.
The people have found a lot of ways of making
money. Now there are many tall
buildings. They are very beautiful. Roads are wide
and clean. People can
take buses or
drive their own cars to go to work. Many people
have cell phones and personal computers.
People’s
living
conditions
have
improved
a
lot.
Thanks
to
the
government’s
efforts.
My
hometown
is
becoming
more and more
beautiful.
二、
Save the earth
How to protect the
environment has become one of the biggest problems
in the world.
It’s our duty to
protect our environment. No matter where we
live, we should do something to keep our
neighborhood
clean
and
tidy.
We
can
collect
waste
paper
or
other
waste
things
for
recycling.
We
should
plant
more trees and we should
prevent those factories from pouring waste water
into rivers, lakes and fields.
We
shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in
public places. We mustn’t pick
the flowers or step on
the
grass
in
public.
If
everyone
tries
his
best
to
protect
the
environment,
the
world
will
become
much
more
beautiful and
our life will be better and better.
三、
Improve our environment
Good
environment
can
make
people
feel
happy.
To
improve
the
environment
means
to
qualify
our
life.
What
should we do to improve our
environment?
We
should
plant
more
trees.
And
we
should
prevent
those
factories
from
pouring
waste
water
into
rivers,
lakes and
fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground, we
should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin.
Don’t
spit
in
public
places.
Don’t
draw
on
public
walls.
It’s
our
duty
to
keep
our
earth
clean
and
tidy.
四、
Pollution around us
In
recent
years
our
life
is
becoming
better
and
better.
But
our
environment
is
becoming
worse
and
worse.
It’s very bad for
our life.
Now many people have air
-conditioners and cars,
they produce (give
off)
waste
gas. More and more trees are being cut
down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving
only sand). We
often see
factori
es pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in
the river
is quite dirty. We haven’t enough
clean water to drink
in cities. Now we are in danger. It’s very
necessary and important to protect the
environment
well.
I
think
if
everyone
tries
his
best
to
protect
the
environment,
the
world
will
become
much
more beautiful, and our
life will be better and better .
五、
Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is
becoming more and more important to humans. It’s
our duty to take care
of the nature
around us. Animals and plants are our best
friends, and we should share the world with them.
We
shouldn’t
kill
wild
animals,
and
we
must
protect
forests
because
they
are
animals’
home.
We
must
plant
more trees and grass, they
can make the world greener. The more beautiful the
world is, the happier lives
we will
have. Let’s do our best to make the world
beautiful.
六、
Keep our school clean
We are studying in
this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and
tidy. It is not good to spit in
public
places, such as in th
e library, in the class. We shouldn’t
leave rubbish here and there
. Don’t
draw pictures on
the wall, they influence the look of our school.
We should keep the classroom clean and
tidy.
And
we
should
do
some
cleaning
often.
If
everyone
tries
his
best
to
do
something
useful
for
our
school,
I’m sure our school will be more
beautiful.
七、
My country life
I like to live in the
countryside. I live in a small village. There is a
river near it. Lots of trees
are around
my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds.
There is
less noise.
The air here is
cleaner and
fresher.
There
are
fewer
cars.
I
read
aloud
early
in
the
morning.
When
it
is
getting
dark,
the
moon
is
bright
in
the sky. It’s very quiet. What a nice place I live
in!
八、
How to learn English well
As we know, English
has become an international language. It is
more popular
t
han any other languag
e
in China. English is
widely spoken
in the world and it is
the most useful language around the world.
But
how to learn it well?
The best way i
s to use it all the time. If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it
well. At
school, we should learn to hear, speak, read and
write carefully. We should spend enough time in
practicing English. If we keep on
working hard at English, we will be able to be
good at it one day.
九、
How I learn English
Hello,
everyone.
It
is
my
honor
to
talk
with
all
of
you
about
how
to
learn
English
well.
I
like
English
very
much.
I
always
preview
and
master
the
main
idea
of
the
lesson
before
class.
In
class,
I
listen
carefully,
speak
loudly and write carefully and take notes if
necessary. After class, I do my homework
carefully. I
watch English movies and
listen to English songs. I have booked an English
newspaper. It’s Times English
Post, I
can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of
remembering the new words because I master many
good
methods. I hope you work hard at
English and make progress every day. That’s
all.
十、
How I improved my English
When I began to learn
English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at
that time. Later I 1istened
to the
teacher attentively in class, and made notes
carefully. If I had any question, I asked my
English
teacher
or
my
classmates
for
help.
Every
morning
I
read
the
English
texts
aloud
and
listened
to
the
English
tapes. In the
evening, after finishing my homework, I always
read some English and magazines.
Now I am one of the best students at
English in my class.
十一、
The importance of English
English is the most
widely spoken in the world.
It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain,
Canada,
Australia,
and
New
Zealand.
It's
also
very
widely
used
as
a
foreign
language
in
many
other
countries
of the world. It's widely used for
business between different countries. More than
three quarters of the
information
on
the
Internet
is
in
English,
too.
It
is
really
a
bridge
to
so
much
knowledge.
English
is
used
by
travellers and business people around the world.
It's one of the world's most important languages
as
it is so widely used. That's why
more and more people in China are interested in
learning English.
English
is
so
useful
that
we
must
learn
it
well.
Now
let’s
work
hard
at
it
and
see
who
learns
it
faster
and better in our
class.
十二、
I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone,
fridges, cars, planes, computers and
many other things
are important
inventions. They
have
greatly
changed
our
life.
Many
people
have
their
ideas
and
wishes.
They
want
to
invent
some
new
things
for
the
world.
I
am
one
of
them.
I
want
to
be
an
inventor
in
the
future,
Inventions
can
bring
fun
and
happiness
to our life and make
our daily life more convenient. Our life will
become better and better. Now I am a
high school student. I will try my best
to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come
true.
十三、
I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour
guide
because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people
to
come
to
China
from
all
over
the
world.
Most
of
them
don’t
know
Chinese.
They
want
to
visit
many
interesting
places
in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make
much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now
on, I must study hard. I am going to
learn English every day. I will try my best to
make it come true.
十四、
I like the Internet
The
Internet
is
playing
an
important
part
in
our
daily
life.
It’s
very
useful.
I
often
search
the
Interne
t
for some information. I can read the
latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds
of information from
it. I can also
download the information that I need and I can
send e-mails and make telephone calls to my
friends
on
the
internet.
The
most
important
thing
is
that
I
am
able
to
study
all
my
lessons
on
the
Internet.
The
Internet
makes
my
life
more
interesting
and
colorful
and
it
has
a
wide
effect
on
my
study
and
daily
life. I like the internet very much.
How about you / Will you have a try?
十五、
The Internet
The Internet is
becoming more and more important to us
. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can
go
shopping without going out of our houses. And we
can listen to music or watch movies on the
Internet.
It
can
also
help
a
lot
with
our
study.
We
can
learn
much
knowledge
on
different
subjects,
and
get
information
as soon as possible. But now, some of
us work, study or play on the Internet for long
time,
especially
for
young
people
to
play
computer
games.
It’s
bad
for
our
eyes
and
health
.
If
we
make
good
use
of
the
Internet,
it will be our
best friends and help us a lot.
十六、
Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a
great invention in many years. It develops very
quickly. The
smallest computer is as
big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer.
Computer becomes more and more
important in many ways. It has touched
the lives of everyone, even people in faraway
villages. It helps
us to do with all
kinds of information and we get knowledge from it.
It can give us a lot fun.
十七、
The importance of water
Of
all
the
things
we
eat
and
drink,
water
is
the
most
important.
We
can
live
without
food
for
many
days,
but two or
three days without water, usually makes people
die.
However, not all of people
understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into
the rivers or lakes. Some
factories
even pour waste water into the river. As a result,
many rivers and lakes have become so dirty
that the water is no longer safe for
people to drink.
Let’s do our
best to keep the water clean to save
ourselves.
十八、
Water
Water
is very important for our life. Every day we use
water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is
necessary
for
all
plants.
They
need
water
to
grow.
People
can’t
live
without
water.
Plants
will
die
without
water.
It
is
important
to
all
living
things.
However,
many
people
pollute
lakes
and
rivers
with
waste
water,
so
we
must
stop
some
people
or
some
factories
from
wasting
water
or
polluting
water
and
help
keep
the
water
clean. At the same time we should save
as much water as possible.
十九、
I like sports
I
feel
that
taking
exercise
is
good
for
our
health.
I
often
felt
tired
when
I
was
studying
before.
From
this term I keep on running
when I get up in the morning. After class I often
go to play basketball with
my friends.
Now I feel much better than before and I never
feel tired when I am studying. And I improve
a lot in my lessons. So please take
exercise as often as possible.
二十、
Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei. I was born in Fuzhou
on December 15, 2000. I’m studying at Yucai Middle
School.
I learn Chinese, math, English,
physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like
English best. My favorite
sport is
football. My hobbies are drawing and computer. I’m
very happy to live in a happy family. There
are 3 people in my family. My father is
a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each
other very much.
二十一、
My best friend
My
best
friend
is
---
He
is
15
years
old.
We
are
both
in
the
same
class.
He
works
very
hard.
He
is
never
late for school
and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very
poor, so he often
helps me with
my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy,
so
he often helps do the housework at home. He is a
little shorter than me but he is very strong. He
likes
playing football very much at
school.
We often play football together and he plays it
pretty well.
He
gets
on well with
us.
Everyone in our class likes him.
一
假定你是李华，
最近你们班 就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，
你的美国朋友
Jack
来信向你 询问讨论情况，
请你用英语
写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论
结果：
1.
节水节电；
2.
垃圾分类；
< p>3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；
4.
步行，骑
自行车或乘坐公交车。
Dear Jack,
Thank
you
for
your
letter
asking
about
our
discussion
on
low
carbon
lifestyle.
Here
is
something
about
it.
We can do a lot
in our daily life to
achieve the goal of
living low carbon life. First, we’d better
turn off lights if possible and spend
less time watching TV or
surfing the Internet.
Saving water is also
very important. Besides, we should
sort out the rubbish
, and we might
recycle
some of them.
What’s more,
we
suggest
using
handkerchiefs
instead
of
paper
so
that
we
can
prevent
more
trees
from
being
cut
down.
More
importantly,
when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which
contributes to
a cleaner world.