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2013
高考英语书面表达讲义及训练(
12
)及 参考范文:图表分析文
写作
大学生活即将开始,
你将面对学习和生活环境,
情更具下列提示用英语写 一篇短
文,谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括:
1
.确定新的学习目标
3
.学会独立生活
2.
改进学习方法
4.
参加各种课外活动
5.
处理好与同学的关系
注意:
1.
短文内容要连贯、完整
2.
词数:
100
左右
1.
开头已给出的单词不计入总词数
I’ll go to college in the near future.
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结束
纵观近几年高考 ,
英语书面表达大致分为材料作文、
图表作文和开放作文。
且材料 作文
逐渐被图表作文取代,
图表分析作文就是将数据、
图 像所包含的信息,
转化为表意的说明文
字。图表分析作文通常比较复杂,
学生不仅要弄清提示,
还要看懂所给的图表和数据。
由于
这类试题提示内容少,信息点分散,审题时一定要领会作者的出题意图,弄清主题再动笔:
1.
单纯描述解释图表信息,
按图表所示内容如实表达,
不加评 论。
2.
通过叙述图表
(
或图画
)
中的内容和数字变化来分析原因,发表议论。
(
一
)
柱状图
(BAR CHART)
人们日常生活中事物的变化情况通常可以用宽度相等的柱状图形来表示,
柱状图的高度
差别用来说明事物的动态发展趋势,同时要注意图例说明和坐标刻
度所提示的信息。
例:
< p>你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗?”
请你根据下面图表 及汉
语提示,写一篇短文,并阐述你的个人观点。
提示:
1.
增长学识,提高素养,利于择业。
2.
成功的路不只一条。
3.
学费高,就业难。
要求:
1.
词数:< /p>
100
~
120
左右。
2.
开头语已为你写好
(
不计入词数
)
。
3.
参考词汇:
tuition n.
学费
qualities n.
素养
【解题分析】
柱状 图是高中英语课本中常见的图形,
要求学生通过柱状图图中数据和提示内容写一短
文,属于比较、对照类。也可根据提示写为议论文。通常我们采取三段式写法:
第一段:描述图表,得出结论。
第二段:紧扣主题,根据图表比较分析原因,论证结论。
第三段:发表议论,提出自己的看法。
【提炼要点】
< /p>
分析柱状图数据信息。从图中可看出,黑色代表想上大学,占大多数,约
60% p>
;浅黑色
代表无所谓,占约
30%
;白色代表 不想上大学,占约
10%
。
One possible version
Is It The Only Way Out To Go To College
?
We had a discussion about whether it is the only way out for senior students
to go to vary from person to person.
The majority of us consider it very necessary to go to think it
can
widen
their
knowledge
and
improve
their
in
this
way
can
they
find
better jobs after few
students
,
that is about ten percent of the
students
,
think
it
no
use
going
university
,
because
the
tuition
is
too
high
for
their
family to 's
more
,
it's rather hard for college graduates to seek
satisfactory
percent
of
the
student s
,
however
,
believe
“
All
roads
lead
to Rome.
”
Therefore it doesn't make any difference whether they go to college or
not.
In
my
opinion
,
we
can
receive
a
better
education
at
college
so
that
we
can
serve
our motherland.
【语言亮点】
①词汇。如:
consider p>
,
widen
,
afford
,
seek
,
satisfactory
。
②句式。如:形式宾语:
The majority of us consider it very necessary to go to
college.
倒装:
Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation.
主语从句:
it's rather hard for college graduates to seek satisfactory jobs.
谚语:
All roads lead to Rome.
③过渡词。如:
that
is
about
ten
percent
of
the
students
,
what's
more p>
,
however
,
in my
opinion
。
【技巧点拨】
1.
读懂柱状图坐标刻线及图例说明与文字,比较柱状高低和颜色表示内容及数据。
2.
学会看趋势、找规律,从整体看 图表有何发展变化,找出特点、规律。
3.
引用图表包含信息,使你的文章“由图而发”,言之有据。
【常用句式】
1. As can be seen from the chart
,
...
As is shown in the chart
,
...
2. The chart shows that about 60 percent of students want to go to college...
3. From the graph/data/results/information above
,
it can be
seen/concluded/shown /estimated...
graph shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...
ed with...
,
the number of the students of...
实战演练
观察下列图表,请以“
Changes in the Ownership of House
”为主题,为校报写一篇
短文。
注意:短文应包括以下内容:
1.
根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化。
2.
分析产生这些变化的原因。
3.
说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。
要求:
1.
首句已经为你写好。
2.
词数
100
左右。
One possible version
Ownership of Houses in a Big City in China
As
can
be
seen
from
the
chart
,
ownership
of
houses
in
a
big
city
in
China
changed
in
the
past
ten
1995
,
75
percent
of
the
houses
were
stateowned.
Five
years
later
,
the rate of stateowned houses to private ones was 3 to 2. But from then on
,
the ownership of
houses changed rapidly and so far 80 percent of
houses have been
private.
What caused the changes
?
There might have been two main reasons. First
,
from
1995
up
to
now
,
the
people's
living
standards
have
been
improving.
Most
of
them
can
afford
to
buy
the
houses.
Second
,
most
people
do
not
save
a
lot
of
money
in
the
bank
for their
children as their parents did in the past. They
want to have their own
home and enjoy
life.